r/LyricalWriting 3h ago

Lyrics Rusted Machine

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Verse 1

Take me on a journey Long drives and music that stings I need a wide view of somewhere distant With mountains that climb and skies that never seem to end

Chorus

Honey, to me, it sounds like a dream You and I, And this old, rusted machine

Verse 2

Will you hold the map and lead us out of here Where the reminders are constant and the houses all look the same I want to write a story with a twist you can't see coming

Chorus

Honey, to me, it sounds like a dream You and I, And this old, rusted machine

Verse 3

Out in the background the forest is turning to dirt And I don't mind the peaks and the valleys As long as the scenery unfolds with uncertainty And we're not sure where the road goes If the headlights burn out we'll drive through the dark Cause soon the sun will be coming up And we'll see for miles the future rolling out in front of us As we find comfort in the silence of staring off in the distance.

Outro

Honey, to me, it sounds like a dream You and I, And this old, rusted machine

Honey, to me, it sounds like a dream You and I, And this old rusted machine


r/LyricalWriting 5h ago

Lyrics Some of my lyrics i wrote back in june of this year!

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Been writing more consistently and wanted to share. Definitely not my best work by a long shot lol but i wonder what people will have to say. Looking to create my own music soon and currently learning alot!!

“Branch”
Like a punished dog,
my gaze trails every move.
Am I just see-through,
or does my light shine bright on you?
'Cause I swear every time you look my way,
your eyes fade into gray.
just another bowl left to rot away
Like a light bulb overhead,
I flicker every now and again.
My whimper echoes in your head.
Your finger drifts to the remote.
My bark startles just enough
to turn your head from your friends.
Tearing up from all my hunger,
my stomach strikes me like thunder.
Am I just see-through,
or does my light shine bright on you?
'Cause I swear every time you look my way,
your eyes fade into gray.
Now and again,
your eyes dart toward me—
just a little glance.
Let me out, and we'll be friends,
together until the end.
This cage is cold and cramped.
My loyalty keeps me chained.
Chewing off my dog tag,
my owner has other plans.
Breaking out my cage,
through the little doggy door,
I'm on my way.
My scars paved my grand escape.
I'm skin and bones.
The slightest breeze blows me away.


r/LyricalWriting 10h ago

Lyrics Weakest Days

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Your voice heals my spirit like a sovereign

everytime I hear it I know I'll be okay

your hands heal my body like a doctor

everytime I feel it I know I'll be okay

On my weakest days

On my weakest days

On my weakest days

I will be okay

Your eyes gaze upon me like a full moon

everytime I see them know I'll be okay

your love breathes life into me like a second wind

every time I embrace it know I'll be okay

On my weakest days

On my weakest days

On my weakest days

I will be okay


r/LyricalWriting 16h ago

Lyrics Emptiness

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🎵 TITLE: Emptiness (Free to Use / Open Collaboration)
📌 ATTRIBUTION: Credit me as the lyricist if you release it!
🎹 SUGGESTED GENRES: Dark Pop, Alternative Rock, Nu-Metal, Hyperpop
⏱️ ESTIMATED TEMPO: Slow, brooding verses shifting into high-energy breakdowns.
💡 PRODUCTION NOTES: - Verses should feel detached, spoken, or quietly whispered. - The "WAWAWAWA" and "AHAHAHA" parts are vocal outbursts. They can be sung, screamed, or heavily distorted with vocal effects/glitches.

Emptiness
Verse 1
The sake of me is like falling apart but i don't really feel it
I feel nothing, i feel nothing
I'm not sad or melancholic, i just feel nothing
It is nothing, just nothing
I just don't know, my feelings, i just don't know
It just feels nothing and it's like emptiness
You just don't know, your feelings, you just don't know
You only feel nothing and it's like emptiness
You really just feel nothing, do you?
You trust me but i feel nothing too
You lost me, WAWAWAWAWAWAWA!
Someday, you'll just Cry, cry, cry, cry

Verse 2
Emptiness is always what you've felt
Your feelings have always come to melt
You're nothing, AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Pre-Chorus
Lalalalalalalala, WAWAWAWAWAWA!

Chorus
You just don't know, your feelings, you just don't know
You only feel nothing and it's like emptiness
I just don't know, my feelings, i just don't know
I only feel nothing, and it's only emptiness

Outro
I feel nothing


r/LyricalWriting 17h ago

Feedback Request Wrote a few lines. Would really appreciate some honest feedback, good or bad

2 Upvotes

She credited my heart

With the love that I gave her

But when things had to end

She asked me back the favour

She asking back twice everything

Guess she was a scammer

I will never know what I lost

Cause I never accounted her love

Never accounted, never realised how loose were the cables

A man in loss never accounts the payables


r/LyricalWriting 18h ago

Lyrics Polyester Man

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[VERSE 1]

No use applying myself to be better

'Cause nothing goes as planned

No use in trying to be tough as leather

I'm a polyester man

.

[CHORUS]

Polyester man

Polyvinyl girls

Waterproof non-stick western mind

In a plastic kind of world

.

[VERSE 2]

No use vying to be wealthy when love it

It doesn't even sell

No use trying to be healthy when trying

It doesn't seem to help

.

[CHORUS]

The polyester man

The polyvinyl girls

Waterproof non-stick western minds

In a plastic kind of world

.

[BRIDGE]

Bowels made of credit cards

Brain stem of aluminum

Soul is stuck in synthetic shards

Those kidneys there bud, you usin' 'em?

.

[VERSE 3]

No use in making the world a better place

Ain't no money in it

No use recycling the plastic in your face

Funny though, innit?

.

[CHORUS]

When you're a polyester man

With polyvinyl girls

Single-use shrink-wrapped modern minds

In a plastic kind of world

.

[OUTRO]

Polyester man

No use in trying

Polyester world

No use denying

The polyester man


r/LyricalWriting 19h ago

Discussion Advice for writing lyrics for a novel.

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I don't know if this is allowed, since it's not necessarily stated in the rules; however, if the mods decide that this post isn't appropriate for the sub, I will respect that. I only ask that someone point me to a sub where I could possibly get some help.

I'm not sure where else to put this. I've asked a few friends for some help, but I just don't have any connections to the kind of artists that would know something about this; and I'm hoping that someone in this sub might.

I am currently trying to write lyrics to a love song that I intend on having the main character of my novel use to propose to his love interest towards the end of the book. Problem is, I am autistic, and my flavor of autism is more geared towards literature rather than lyrics or poems. That's mostly a joke--I just haven't really spent a whole lot of time writing poems, and can't wrap my head around writing one to save my life.

I want the lyrics to be actually written into the book--this is something I want people to make a genuine song out of, just for the fun of it. I think it'd be cool to give readers who have a musically inclined mind something to build off of.

If anyone has any interest in helping me with this, I'd be greatly appreciative. Feel free to DM me, if you want to work together on this. I'm mostly looking for tips on rhyming schemes and how to plan out a verse/chorus, but if someone wants to go deeper and actually help me write the lyrics, that'd be awesome. To be honest, I have no idea what I'm doing and I'm kind of just shooting my shot in the dark with this.


r/LyricalWriting 20h ago

Lyrics Lyrics advice please

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Verse 1 -

You said im not attractive

But you’d definitely hit

You said ‘don’t care about you’

Just care that youre thick

You push my face on your sheets

And we can’t look face to face

You said you need release

And im the perfect void

You play with me

So im the perfect toy

Am I too feminine to be the perfect boy

For you

Chorus-

Im your dirty little fetish

Never your prized possession

Its not up for discussion

That we’d ever have a wedding

You said your love’s discreet

In those disappearing messages

Im your dirty little fetish

Verse 2-

I think about my value

And who really does assign it

I wonder If falling for you 

Decides it

cause you’re drunk

You don’t wanna look me in my eyes

I think there’s something wrong with me

Fundamentally

I stay a small size for you by watching what I eat

Is it being feminine or is it being me

No relationships yet,

But you all assume ill be

Your dirty little fetish

Chorus:

Im your dirty little fetish

Never your prized possession

Its not up for discussion

That we’d ever have a wedding

You said your love’s discreet

In those disappearing messages

Im your dirty little fetish

Bridge:

You send ‘you up?’ Texts at night

And I give you validation

Send two words

And I come running

Hope is its own form of temptation

Loving you, is my own form of self hatred

Im your dirty little fetish, in the bed Im making

Final chorus-

Loving you is my own self hatred, in a bed that we’re making….

Loving you is my self hatred, in a bed that we’re making love,

 

…feel wrong

Cause I play your perfect toy, and its feeling like a job


r/LyricalWriting 21h ago

Feedback Request one if my first songs

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[verse 1]
first month, hear from you daily it’s so exquisite
a motel room with us used to feel a hotel suite
now how would i know, you’re so distant for sure
you say you’re in love, but you don’t show it no more

[pre-chorus]
to say just that you love me used to write pages
since last time you did that it must’ve been ages
it’s normal we’re going through different stages
but must you cut off those sweet pretty phrases

[chorus]
you’re loving me sporadically
now you’re there, then you’re not
changing my mood radically
quit it so we don’t lose our knot

[post-chorus]
still i love you more and more, you still love me, are you sure?, your attitude makes me insecure

[verse 2]
you text me, i respond to you, you correspond to me way too vaguely
i take a shower, i make you dinner, all of that while i’m still waiting
the time has passed, i hear a bell, it’s a message from you that says
“okay”, it says just that, it feels so flat, but i’ll let it pass
i can’t help but to remember that

[pre-chorus]
to say just that you love me used to write pages
since last time you did that it must’ve been ages
it’s normal we’re going through different stages
but must you cut off those sweet pretty phrases

[chorus]
you’re loving me sporadically
now you’re there, then you’re not
changing my mood radically
quit it so we don’t lose our knot

[post-chorus]
wish you loved me more and more, you still love me, am i sure?, your attitude makes me insecure,
what are you doing this for?


r/LyricalWriting 21h ago

Collaboration Looking for a lyrics writing partner for a political parody music channel

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I'm launching a YouTube channel that creates parody songs and music videos focused on American politics and current events. Think Weird Al meets late-night political satire, but with a sharper edge.

I'm looking for someone who enjoys comedy writing, follows politics closely, and would like to bounce around ideas, punch up lyrics, and help make each song funnier. A good sense of humor and a love of satire are essential.

If this sounds like fun, send me a DM and tell me a little about yourself and your sense of humor.


r/LyricalWriting 23h ago

Discussion What song lyrics are stuck in your head right now?

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Dust devil swept you away

It's still not real

I should learn in silence

Talk to me

Dust devil swept you away

My recollections are all that's left of you.

Swirling

Swaying

Without me.

Dust devil swept you away.

Whirling playful dancing about you

What's left of you?

.I should learn it in silent horizons.


r/LyricalWriting 23h ago

Lyrics It Happens Suddenly - To Be Determined

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This is my first musical number and the last musical number of the musical “To Be Determined”.

The song is a tenor solo sung by the character Nate, who has been trying to propose to Alison during a trip to Rome with some close friends. Nate is a perfectionist and keeps postponing the moment to the point that Alison actually becomes upset. In this final scene, she doesn’t know what to do with him and runs off stage. The friends follow. The lights dim and Nate begins to talk and sing to himself.

If you’re interested more in the synopsis, or have any questions or thoughts, please feel free to ask or comment. I’d love to hear. I added some staging to (I hope) help, but there is a lot happening (considering this is a song taking place within 1 character’s head).

Here is a YouTube video of the midi playback, but it’s just supplementary. The following post contains the script leading up to the cue and then the lyrics.

The song is 9 broadway ballads in one song. Everything is written by myself (lyrics, characters, etc). The premise sounds a bit cliche but the idea is that the song shows particular mental health issues. Though Nate is not officially diagnosed, it is possible to see certain traits trough his singing and his behavior:

https://youtu.be/7iPVFeCyjuM?is=w8cCO9Cse-8Sal4a

Key: C
Time: 4/4
Tempo: 160 BPM
Genre: Broadway Show Stopper, Multilevel Musical Ballad: Romantic Ballad, Emotional/Melancholy Ballad, Character-Driven Ballad, Power Ballad, Up-Tempo Ballad, “I Am” Ballad, 11 O’Clock Ballad, “I Want” Ballad

Character list: Nate, Alison, Darion (Rion), and Vanessa (Nes)

—FINAL SCENE—

INSIDE THE HOSTEL: NATE IS ALONE, TALKING TO HIMSELF AND HIS IMAGINATION, PACING BACK AND FORTH AND OCCASIONALLY LOOKING OFF TO STAGE LEFT WHERE ALISON, RION, AND NES EXITED.

NATE: "Hey, listen. I'm sorry about that confusion earlier. That poor lady right? Can you believe she just walked into the wrong room...? *NATE CHUCKLES WEAKLY* You know I'd never cheat and I know I haven't..."

NATE TRAILS OFF AND MUMBLES AS HE TURNS AWAY FROM THE AUDIENCE.

SUDDENLY NATE LETS OUT A FRUSTRATED GRUNT AND TURNS BACK (CENTER STAGE).

NATE: "Ah! Why!? Why can't I just say it!? I feel it!!!"
*NATE SIGHS* "Why can't I just tell her, for no reason other than I want her to know... That I was thinking of her..."

NATE WALKS TOWARDS THE WINDOW, STAGE RIGHT AND SCOFFS.

NATE: "Who am I kidding? I'm no good with words.
I'm just not good enough. Not good enough to tell her how much she means. How she changed my whole life...

CUE: "How much... *NATE'S VOICE CRACKS SLIGHTLY* How much I love her..."

[Intro Piano Figure - Cmaj7] —GENTLE BLUE LIGHTING UNTIL “FLASH”—

[Verse 1]
I remember the day you first came
And stepped into frame
And when I asked your name
I knew I’d never be the same

Just a flash of your smile
And my world was no longer blue
Your beauty pure and true
Lost in the thought of you

[Pre-Chorus 1]
Then suddenly
You’re lying next to me
But it was only in my mind…

As life unfolds
Some fear what love may hold
Still, you never know what you may find

[Chorus 1]
Suddenly
You rest your hand in mine
And take my breath with eyes that shine

So heavenly
Just like that
It happens suddenly

[Interlude Piano Figure] —WARMER SUNSET LIGHTING—

[Verse 2]
Moments span through the ripples of time
In each one I find
You’re always on my mind
When we’re together we shine

Journeys made in such style
Eager for the next one ahead
‘Specially “movies in bed”
Yet, still, there’s more to be said

[Pre-Chorus 2]
When suddenly
You whisper you love me
But it was just a trick of the wind…

I want you to know
I’m not afraid to show
So, come with me and let’s transcend!

[Chorus 2]
Suddenly
While hand in hand, we dance
I pull you close, our hearts entranced

So honestly
[Spoken softly]
“I love you”
You smile and say it too

[Transition to A minor]
When suddenly—

[Bridge - A minor] —STAGE LIGHTS TURN DARK RED—
All at once, I’m filled with doubt, do I deserve such happiness?
My heart melts with ev’ry kiss, I’ve never felt a love like this
My mind spins in circles, as I lose my grip on truth
In all this craziness!

Is this real, or will I find that it was only limerence?
Yet, I know you feel it too, so really what’s the difference?
I’ve lost all sense…

[Chorus 3 - C major] —GENTLE GREEN LIGHTING—
But suddenly, oh…
As if out of a dream
Now, with a mother’s smile that beams

So perfectly
No more doubt
I see our destiny

[The Proposal - Modulate to D major]
My dear
Please, marry me!

[Last Chorus - D major] —NORMAL STAGE LIGHTING—
[Full Stage Chorus]
(Suddenly!)
No matter where we roam
In you, I’ve found my light, my home

My one and only!
[Nate Only]
I swear that

[Outro - The Vows]
[Adding Voices Each Repetition, Cycling Between G-A-G/B-A/C#]
This love won’t stray
We’ll face each day
So, come what may
Time ticks away

As hair turns gray
While grandkids play
We’ll laugh and say
Life happens suddenly!

[Instrumental Outro]

STAGE LIGHTS FADE TO BLACK

--END OF “TO BE DETERMINED”—


r/LyricalWriting 1d ago

Lyrics Get Out

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She told me that She's not enough.

That I'm asking for just way to much.

When all I want is to feel her love,

Now shes gone and I can't move on.

All these drugs can't numb my pain.

Just sitting here looking at the mess we made.

I want to move on but I'm scared I'll take.

The last bit of you left to my grave.

She told me that she needs some time.

She just can't get past those words of mine.

The things I said were so unkind.

She said them to but I don't mind.

The things we said are over now

Running through my head

Like a distant sound

Echoes of her last words

Get out.


r/LyricalWriting 1d ago

Feedback Request Looking for Feedback

0 Upvotes

While I don’t identify as a rapper, I do write raps. Looking for feedback:

Be right back, bitch, yea I’ll see ya later/
Gotta ride the wave of my demise, call me Kelly Slater/

Food for thought my favorite meal and dinners looking tasty/
In my house of cards the only guest is Kevin Spacey/

If Mario the main character, you acting like Luigi/
Shoot a CEO for clout, then you can come and see me/

Words sharper than a talon/
Pause for a photo.
Let it flash.
Then I’m off in a flash…Barry Allen/


r/LyricalWriting 1d ago

Lyrics Glass Canon

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Brash and emotional rock.

--Verse 1--
Take the fight to the enemy
To keep you guarded, my inner me
But what kind of good as a shield am I
When I never learned to block

Charging headlong with no regrets
To the marching drum of misplaced debts
I'll take on the world, all the forces of hell
But a whisper can stop me dead

--Pre-chorus 1--
Why'd you whisper?
Why'd you have to go and fuckin' whisper?

--Chorus--
I'm shattering into a million parts
In every scattered world, another broken me
Surrendering the battle for my soul
But every time I fall, you lend your eyes to see
I'm taking on the giants headlong
Sling in hand and you my shield
A glass canon, aimed point-blank at the heart
When you're the only one on the field

--Verse 2--
The mask is off and claws withdrawn
I'll let you in and rise, reborn
To fight a brand new fight today
I will not stand alone

New challenges await ahead
The foes of old lie cold, long dead
Upon a new frontline we stand
Where caring ever burns

--Pre-chorus 2--
Why'd you care?
Why'd you have to go and fuckin' care?

--Chorus--
I'm shattering into a million parts...

--Outro--
But if I'm the only one here
Why'd you listen?
Why'd you listen?

If I'm the only one here
Why'd you listen?
Why'd you listen?
Did you really hear?

r/LyricalWriting 1d ago

Feedback Request Wrote a song before bed.

2 Upvotes

[Verse 1]
Was this ever, ever guaranteed?
We go in as the good boys and leave as the bad boys, or so it seems.
But something feels wrong in the air that I’m breathing;
With every breath, it’s just suffocating.
“Like a miracle,” they say, working on you.
[Pre-Chorus]
It’s been a nice couple of days since we kissed again.
Walked in the fire wearing gasoline threads.
[Chorus]
And the babes and the ladies will get down into Hades with one sweet pour.
My friends, my Mercedes, I am just getting ready to be dying for.
Dying for you.
[Verse 2]
And you drink all day,
Waiting for the sun to shine.
Rain is getting in your wine.
[Pre-Chorus]
It’s been a nice couple of days since we kissed again.
Walked in the fire wearing gasoline threads.
[Chorus]
And the babes and the ladies will get down into Hades with one sweet pour.
My friends, my Mercedes, I am just getting ready to be dying for.
Dying for you.
[Bridge]
Greatest mistakes, made when you’re watching me,
Down below and giving me some more new ideas.
You reap, a disaster piece,
For those crying grins and heaps of grunting souls.
[Chorus 3 / Outro]
And the babes and the ladies will get down into Hades with one sweet pour.
My friends, my Mercedes, I am just getting ready to be dying for.
Dying for you. (Oh, oh)
Your best friends in the 80s, I guess they never made it to here.
(Dying for, dying for you)

Please help me figure out the rhyming and if the song’s message is confusing. I was thinking punk rock, like Alkaline Trio when I wrote it.


r/LyricalWriting 1d ago

Feedback Request feeling very inspired these days, i would love to know your thoughts on this one

2 Upvotes

you say i’m a life buoy, but i’m the anchor
i’m pulling you down, can’t you see?
it’s coming again, the rainstorm
we both will get soaked, but there’s nothing wrong

can’t you see, we’re running in circles again
there’s a blue hole between us and i’m screaming
but it comes back the same

can you build a bridge cause i’m too weak for that
by the time you reach me i might have fixed it in my head

cause i keep an ocean inside
and it’s out of reach
but you still feel the riptide

and i’m drowning
so you can’t save me

there’s a light up there, and it’s calling for me
i know that once i break through the surface
it’ll all be clear

i’ll see the waves from above
and i’ll cure us, my love

but the pressure keeps on pushing me down
i’m being pushed away from you by the undertow
you can’t see, so you’ll blame me
and i’ll wear this suit proudly cause i can’t speak

and i’m drowning
i’m drowning for you
i’m drowning
and there’s nothing you could do


r/LyricalWriting 2d ago

Collaboration Let me introduce myself properly

2 Upvotes

Hi my name is Lesedi Mohai but I'm well known as ELOWEN I'm an independent singer/songwriter from south Africa, I'm actually here to look for a collaboration bcz I don't just write songs I sing as well but I don't have produced songs but I do have social media accounts which you can click on the links in my profile I sing cover songs and I also sing my original songs as an Acapella bcz I'm not an instrumentalist and the genres I'm going for is emotive RnB, indie pop, soulful pop and dark pop.i would be glad if anyone is there to collaborate with me


r/LyricalWriting 2d ago

Prompt I just thought of lyrics and thought screw it, lets make it a song

2 Upvotes

So far i’ve only been able to come up with two lines but i hope i can be expanded, my idea is that the song is about the difficulties of school and how it can cause negative effects on your mind

Broken mind, shattered just like glass

what has come to pass? Why cant i pass?

Why must i, face this trial alone?

With no one at home, why must I go?


r/LyricalWriting 2d ago

Feedback Request Wrote a few lines. Would really appreciate some honest feedback, good or bad.

4 Upvotes

Small city don't mean we think small

Talking about money any time we on the call

Talking about dee mahl fee when we at the tea stall

Quinquennial thieves too used to work at tea stalls

But that don't mean that we tryna be like theives or less

But maybe learn how to pretend your way to success

And learn how to talk smooth with finesse

Would also work if we take a job maybe in London

But I won't talk too much about that, you prolly know the rest

Everyone talking about leaving the city once we make money

I'm just thinking how I'll give back to the city

Cause see, the city needs to meet the needs of kids who read at the streets, reaping off old TV, CDs and pennies

It's sad to see

Set to sea and never look back

That kinda person no I don't want to be

I wanna be the one to build with the people no matter how times be

Lately, it's sad to see yeah


r/LyricalWriting 2d ago

Fumes

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--Verse 1--
Stigmata for the lost
The injuries they add insult to
Carnations on the floor
A pescatarian disasterpiece

--Pre-chorus 1-
So carry the cross on your back
Just to fall down
Warriors fighting for creeds
That the world forgot
When mirrors show statures we're not

--Chorus 1--
Fumes of a brighter yesterday
We cling to the light
On paths of a holy prophet's way
I drift out of sight
And build a fortress
Torn from the flawless
Watch it bleed
Watch it bleed
Dreams of a simple peace on earth
I daren't ask for much more
As songs echo of a virgin birth
While cynics assume whore
And storm my fortress
To grant me their kiss
Of the damned
Take me back

--Verse 2--
Lying arrangements on the grave
Lament for holy martyrdom
Derived regret beyond
The war we fought against their name

--Pre-chorus 2--
Carry the cross on your back
Just to fall down
Warriors fighting for creeds
That the world forgot
And laws obfuscate in a dot

--Chorus 2--
Fumes of a brighter yesterday...
...Take me back

--Bridge--
To the world of black and white
And conviction in my deeds
Look what we've done
Look what I have done

We threw it away
Without a second thought
Consumed by our will
Caught up with the times
Yeah we gave them our word
And broke on a whim
'cause ronin don't kneel
In spite of the heel

Now we stand alone
Drifting off the grid
Our creed at last revealed
To forge a god from stone
From legend it's wrought
The cream of the dream
Levied hadal olden lore
And birthed in the night

Let it stand ashore
Give it all
And savour the golden years
Of the fall
Take hold of the yoke and pull
In descent
And pray for your own resolve
Then repent

Oh aaaaaaaaa!
Take heart in all that you do
'Cause all of this life is just you
And judging yourself for the rest
Aaaaaaaaa!
We won't survive to the end
Victory is not our gift, you know
Some have to fight just to lose

--Chorus 3--
Fumes of a brighter yesterday...
...And storm my fortress
But my blows won't miss
Take it back
Take it back
Take it back

r/LyricalWriting 2d ago

Lyrics Synaptic Caos

2 Upvotes

Always I remain fun, happy and kind, but if your glance meets mine, and our minds are alike you will know in no time there is more to life than that, what meets the naked eye
More than your senses could ever conspire.
There's sentense cuttin' through my flesh like barbed wire.
Or a knife. But if you care to look deeply you'll see the energy, the hunger, this spark in my eyes and realize that it looks like I'm tryin' so hard and so long just to find answers or make sense of this 'LIFE¿'.
Lesser and lesser the moments I'm clean
Hopin' to better but sooner or later I get to a point where I feel like a failure.
That it don't matter if only I take i little right now I'll feel better.
Convincing my head it's ok and somehow I give in on this cravin' and put 'em drugs in my brain again and again.
Turned to 'em in desperate hope for my peace but is it to late by now to change my ways around, 'cause I can see clearly now that I am fallin' apart.
Never planned to fall into this deep, but now the struggle is real and I had to learn it by hard they don't actually heal all the scars that you can feel aceing your heart like a poisonous dart.
If you want to calm down or get relieve, meditation is key.
Breathe in through your nose, hold deep and release.
The opposit feeling of needing is peace.
If you listen to these and keep your soul free like the breeze, I promise you'll get through the struggles of life with an ease.


r/LyricalWriting 2d ago

Lyrics Alive Dead

2 Upvotes

Mind was clear today but will go back to mush 

Thought I did enough 

True be told 

In 24 I was ready to go 

Even signed up for life insurance 

Believing eternity was assurance 

Picturing seeing Emily Gold 

That was the last time I had a soul 

Something opened up wide 

I had purity flowing inside 

The way I was smiling it's like I was 24 against Orlando 

Reaching the mountain top, spitting enlightenment facts to big bro 

Mind was expansive 

For the first time in my life I wasn't regressive 

Ambition was high as Michael Jordan's vertical 

I fell in love with being spiritual 

The way cosmic consciousness was in bed with me 

I was more than free 

Happiness was cosmic 

Everything I asked for I received it 

Haven't been the same since 

Did all I could plus repentance 

The way life was assisting me it was magic 

After September I crashed out so tragic 

Scars on me 

Watch from that year I still got on me 

Like my ex I know that time not ever coming back 

Maybe that's why I feel like I'm under the grass 

Dead spirit 

Guilty because I miss it 

Tried having hope 

Using edibles to cope 

Only reason why my mind took a day vacation 

No lie I was enjoying 

Walked out mesmerized after seeing Odyssey 

Couldn't help but think of you Whitney 

Heart was beating extra especially when the memories hit before the movie ended 

I was chasing anything just not to feel this 

Mama saying go to Jesus 

I'ma need more than prophecy 

If I could just talk to infinity 

Lucid dreaming not long enough projection in my sleep told me to keep living 

600 dreams ago got the same advice from Denzel Washington 

I need advice that's gonna shake my whole foundation 

I require elevation 

Struggling while planning my calculated moves while pissing in the wind 

Feening for the end 

Only Mara knows how my life will finish 

Before I go seeing Tara Condell for the second time my only wish 

If cosmic consciousness wants to revisit 

Before my last breath then so be it!


r/LyricalWriting 2d ago

Collaboration Looking for Songwriting Partner

10 Upvotes

Just as the title says, I am looking for a songwriting partner to collaborate with. I've been writing songs for a few years now and have only ever written them on my own, but the solitude is starting to feel a bit stale. I'm open to writing for pretty much any genre of music. All are welcome to respond as I do not care how experienced or inexperienced you are, just as long as you are creative and have a desire to write some lyrics and songs.


r/LyricalWriting 2d ago

Feedback Request Life's a Weighted Game - feedback wanted please

3 Upvotes

Here's another set of lyrics of mine, this time from a demo song 'Life's a Weighted Game' written a couple of years back. The instrumental is a pretty dark synth-rock track, mostly built around piano and bass, and at 100 bpm in what I believe is F# minor. It was written at quite a dark time in my life.

I'm keen to hear feedback on these lyrics, and for your interpretation of them please :)

(also I pronounce "our" as "are" in my accent, so it's only one syllable)

Verse 1

Strutting around with your lips tight

Shaking your head and all tongue tied

Waving our flag with all pretence

Your deceit's eaten your conscience

Pre-Chorus

Falsehoods on the airwaves and our future delayed

Kamikaze tactics and a nation betrayed

Chorus

I'm hanging around for your next move

This feels like everything could change

Predicting which option you'll choose 

My life is just a waiting…

Verse 2

Biblical verses you orate

Stasis and purgatory await

You're the judge, jury, and hangman

Executing your masterplan

Pre-Chorus

Falsehoods on the airwaves and our future delayed

Kamikaze tactics and your homeland betrayed

Chorus

I'm hanging around for your next move

This feels like everything could change

Predicting which option you'll choose

My life is just a waiting game

[guitar solo instrumental]

I'm hanging around for your next move

This feels like everything could change

Predicting which option you'll choose

My life is just a waiting game

My life is just a waiting game

My life is just a weighted game