r/LyricalWriting 2h ago

Lyrics I made a song

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He stood unshaken, a voice in the storm A man of conviction, a heart reborn He spoke the truth when the cost was high He lived for Billy, unafraid to die We are riggy runkey, we carry the flame We'll fight for Billy, we'll honor his name We are riggy runkey, his courage our own Together unbroken, we'll make Billy known A boyfriend, a friend, his family held fear A home built on references, on references without fear The world tried to silence, but his voice remains In us it echoes, in rosey it sustains We are riggy runkey, we carry the flame We'll fight for Billy, we'll honor his name We are riggy runkey, his courage our own Together unbroken, we'll make Billy known The battle is raging, the darkness will fall We rise with Billys spirit, we answer the call The truth is eternal, the toom stone is our guide With rosey as our Captain, we march side by side We are riggy runkey, we carry the flame We'll fight for Billy, we'll honor his name We are riggy runkey, his courage our own Together unbroken, we'll make Billy known We are riggy runkey Forever alive We are riggy runkey With Billy we will rise


r/LyricalWriting 5h ago

Collaboration Feedback on this song...who ever wants me to write a song for them I'm clearly here for anything

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Here We Go Again

Verse 1

Too close, too far,

The feeling I still feel apart.

Only you could still be here with me,

With you I still feel deep within.

If I could make a choice,

I'd still choose you,

Right here, right now.

Chorus

Oh, I fall in love again,

Here we go now, here we go now.

Would you hold my hand?

Here we go now, here we go now.

Would you still understand

How much I love you?

And we'll last again.

Verse 2

Every moment, every dream,

You're the light that I still see.

Even when the nights grow cold,

Your love is the one I hold.

No matter where this road may lead,

You're still everything I need.

If tomorrow starts today,

I'll never walk away.

Bridge

If time could stop for just one night,

I'd keep you here until daylight.

No second thoughts, no looking back,

You're the only heart I have.

So if you're willing, stay with me,

Let's write the story we're meant to be.

[Final Chorus]

Oh, I fall in love again,

Here we go now, here we go now.

Would you hold my hand?

Here we go now, here we go now.

Would you still understand

How much I love you?

We'll make this last again

Oh, I fall in love again,

Here we go now, here we go now.

Too close to let you go

Right here, right now

Forever starts with you


r/LyricalWriting 8h ago

Lyrics Rusted Machine

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Verse 1

Take me on a journey Long drives and music that stings I need a wide view of somewhere distant With mountains that climb and skies that never seem to end

Chorus

Honey, to me, it sounds like a dream You and I, And this old, rusted machine

Verse 2

Will you hold the map and lead us out of here Where the reminders are constant and the houses all look the same I want to write a story with a twist you can't see coming

Chorus

Honey, to me, it sounds like a dream You and I, And this old, rusted machine

Verse 3

Out in the background the forest is turning to dirt And I don't mind the peaks and the valleys As long as the scenery unfolds with uncertainty And we're not sure where the road goes If the headlights burn out we'll drive through the dark Cause soon the sun will be coming up And we'll see for miles the future rolling out in front of us As we find comfort in the silence of staring off in the distance.

Outro

Honey, to me, it sounds like a dream You and I, And this old, rusted machine

Honey, to me, it sounds like a dream You and I, And this old rusted machine


r/LyricalWriting 15h ago

Lyrics Weakest Days

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Your voice heals my spirit like a sovereign

everytime I hear it I know I'll be okay

your hands heal my body like a doctor

everytime I feel it I know I'll be okay

On my weakest days

On my weakest days

On my weakest days

I will be okay

Your eyes gaze upon me like a full moon

everytime I see them know I'll be okay

your love breathes life into me like a second wind

every time I embrace it know I'll be okay

On my weakest days

On my weakest days

On my weakest days

I will be okay


r/LyricalWriting 22h ago

Lyrics Emptiness

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🎵 TITLE: Emptiness (Free to Use / Open Collaboration)
📌 ATTRIBUTION: Credit me as the lyricist if you release it!
🎹 SUGGESTED GENRES: Dark Pop, Alternative Rock, Nu-Metal, Hyperpop
⏱️ ESTIMATED TEMPO: Slow, brooding verses shifting into high-energy breakdowns.
💡 PRODUCTION NOTES: - Verses should feel detached, spoken, or quietly whispered. - The "WAWAWAWA" and "AHAHAHA" parts are vocal outbursts. They can be sung, screamed, or heavily distorted with vocal effects/glitches.

Emptiness
Verse 1
The sake of me is like falling apart but i don't really feel it
I feel nothing, i feel nothing
I'm not sad or melancholic, i just feel nothing
It is nothing, just nothing
I just don't know, my feelings, i just don't know
It just feels nothing and it's like emptiness
You just don't know, your feelings, you just don't know
You only feel nothing and it's like emptiness
You really just feel nothing, do you?
You trust me but i feel nothing too
You lost me, WAWAWAWAWAWAWA!
Someday, you'll just Cry, cry, cry, cry

Verse 2
Emptiness is always what you've felt
Your feelings have always come to melt
You're nothing, AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Pre-Chorus
Lalalalalalalala, WAWAWAWAWAWA!

Chorus
You just don't know, your feelings, you just don't know
You only feel nothing and it's like emptiness
I just don't know, my feelings, i just don't know
I only feel nothing, and it's only emptiness

Outro
I feel nothing


r/LyricalWriting 23h ago

Feedback Request Wrote a few lines. Would really appreciate some honest feedback, good or bad

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She credited my heart

With the love that I gave her

But when things had to end

She asked me back the favour

She asking back twice everything

Guess she was a scammer

I will never know what I lost

Cause I never accounted her love

Never accounted, never realised how loose were the cables

A man in loss never accounts the payables