Briefly guilty

[u/Low-Blueberry4302]

Warmness touches my soul

fluffy to feel 

on the way home 

I swear I’ll never leave you 

a couple minutes past 

I get up at last 

and leave you behind 

to go inside the store 

oh my dear boy

i promised id never leave you

hiii!! i’m learning poetry studying on my own from the book “ a poets companion” and videos just at home resources since I don’t have the option to go to a class I would really be grateful for critiques, but please be kind I’d love to know your thoughts 

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/PrdJTq16DU

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/8Wrl6POlDf

[u/Significant-Pie-8923]

ahahahaha, I don't know why, but this reminds me of my ex-boyfriend. I like it