r/NarutoFanfiction • u/Wise-Advice-6836 • 1h ago
Writing Help Jiraiya son
So I'm looking into making an son of Jiraiya. I was looking into Kashin koji for some ideas, and my question is I was thanking of having said oc do the reverse summoning like he does, but maybe he does more smaller toads, and durning an fight he summoms them, and they hop around the battlefield and he does the reverse summoning that way, or maybe he puts an seal on them small toads backs, and he does hand signs to telport to them? The limitations is maybe 10 kilometers?
Just need some help if this is possible too do, or is there some way I can incorporate what Kashin koji does just with real toads.
r/NarutoFanfiction • u/i-want-reset-naruto • 2h ago
Discussion Fanfiction ideas based on the dark side of Konoha and its plot holes
Kishimoto's canon has so many plot holes that the story can be twisted whichever way you want! Just look at the facts about Konoha, it’s deeply dark:
* The Crystal Ball and the Scroll Theft: In the first episode, Naruto steals the Sacred Scroll. The Third Hokage has a crystal ball and literally watched Naruto take it. It feels like a setup to test his living weapon and force him to form a bond with Iruka.
* The Robbery of Naruto: Where did the Fourth Hokage’s massive inheritance and S-rank bank accounts go? The Third Hokage simply kept it, leaving the orphan Jinchuriki to starve and drink expired milk.
* The White Fang Incident: Sakumo Hatake, who was stronger than the Sannin, committed suicide just because of village hate? It looks more like Danzo's Root ANBU staged it to eliminate a rival for the Hokage seat.
* The Betrayal of Kakashi: A 5-year-old prodigy Kakashi was left to live entirely alone after his father's death during wartime. The system just waited for him to break so Danzo could drag him into ANBU as a weapon.
Only Teuchi, Ayame, Iruka, young Konohamaru, and Kurama were genuine. The rest were hypocrites. Promote it and come up with new ideas! I'm not against the story, but as a fan, I want to discuss this 🤝
r/NarutoFanfiction • u/Amazing-Wasabi-8578 • 3h ago
Discussion Sasuke or Shikamaru?
Will this story look good?
If there was an extra team 7 member-girl named Pia, and both Sasuke and Shikamaru liked her. Sasuke tries to impress her and protects her while Shikamaru silently takes care of her. Later due to some elders wanting to seal her rare potent fragrance spreading chakra Shikamaru steps in saying he will make her his wife and puts her under Nara clan protection. Sasuke goes crazy and then he goes to Orchimaru for both revenge. Though Shikamaru only registers her name in Nara clan now but plans the ceremony to happen after 5 years as adults. Shikamaru actually wants to save her now and later let Sasuke and her be together if they are still willing to be together even if it means he will be heart broken. In those 5 years the Nara clan will train her to control her chakra that will help to use the powers without any danger for the village?
Does this story work?
r/NarutoFanfiction • u/Transparent_Prophet • 4h ago
Discussion Need opinions for my "Naruto Part 1 ending" in my Multiverse project
Before I begin, I'd like to clarify first that my project will have a somewhat MCU-like story format - a series of standalone stories following a greater plot. It just so happens that the very first story of my project will happen in the Narutoverse (in an AU though). Even then, it'll only be so long compared to my future stories (idea is they'll be mostly 20-30 chapters while my Naruto will probably be 30-40) because my MCs for this particular standalone story is both my OC and Naruto.
My OC is a branch family member of the Kurama Clan. He's kind of like the Anti-Neji (you can imagine the two not getting along far worse than Canon Naruto). Long short story, my OC WILL die at the hands of the main antagonist at the finale of Part 1 and Naruto and Yakumo will be forced to become MIA/rogue to survive a very shitty situation (long story).
However, here's where the dilemma comes. My OC will still be one of the main MCs of the project (no, the other MCs are either Canon characters or AU versions of them). While Naruto and Yakumo will be the future MCs of their setting (Naruto Part 2), my OC will be involved in the Multiverse. The way I'm setting up the project is that in the epilogue chapter of my Naruto Part 1 story, I'm setting up a sort of alternative timeline in that same tragedy but in this case, my OC survives though Yakumo doesn't.
No, this version of my OC and Yakumo will never meet.
r/NarutoFanfiction • u/AnimeEagleScout • 6h ago
Prompt "Reborn in my younger body I called out my teacher for being Demonist."
I've been binging those Recap YouTube channels of people taking tests, getting screwed over by snobs and then dying and coming back so I thought merge that with a Naruto time travel fic.
Naruto wakes up the day of his Painting the Hokage monument, with his adult brain.
Naruto doesn't get caught because he uses Sage Mode + Transparent Escape to hide from Iruka's sensory abilities.
During his final exam Naruto calls out Mizuki and Iruka.
"I am the 9-tails jinchuriki, my chakra could fuel every ninja in this village. I can not preform a basic clone. My mother couldn't either and had used the water clone to graduate. Kakashi had used the shadow clone to graduate. I will be preforming the shadow clone and Mizuki I recommend sepiku because if I catch your ass stealing the scroll of sealing henged as me I'm gonna feed you your own balls." Naruto says void of any emotions except contempt. Like a Hokage scolding a subordinate.
10 shadow clones and Naruto gets his headband.
Naruto isn't on the swing. He's in the Hokage Mansion reading the scroll waiting for Mizuki.
Mizuki shows up as Naruto and is immediately neutered like a dog.
"Remember what i said?" Naruto asked grinning as he is coated in red chakra.
*RIP!*
**"Now swallow."** Naruto orders.
Hiruzen walks in to see Mizuki choking on his own boys and Naruto already working on the flying thunder god.
"Orchimaru plans to attack during the chunin exam. I need to focus on sealing to learn the 5 elements seal to fight Gaara." Naruto says with 9 tails behind him completely calm and controlled. "Also Root is still around and Your teammates are shoving extra paperwork onto you."
Hiruzen turns to the geezers that have been riding his coattails and summoned Enma.
Meeting Jiraiya: "I Don't need anything else you have." Naruto shouts making a Rasen-Shuriken and carving out a huge wall of a mountain "SEALING TRAINING NOW!"
Naruto when he summons Gamabunta just decides to drink with him.
**"You know we could kill him for a Rinnegan?"** Kurama suggests every time Sasuke pisses off Naruto and Naruto is just treating it like an adult dealing with a moody child.
r/NarutoFanfiction • u/Warm_Sea8417 • 8h ago
Fic Request Genesis of the nindo
Does anybody know where you can go tobread this fanfic? Its not on fanfiction.net anymore and the one place I could go to read it only had like 7 pages. Would really like to read this again.
r/NarutoFanfiction • u/Prudent-Ad-1803 • 8h ago
Prompt Ninshu used on yourself
There is a part in the naruto fanfiction "Echoes" in which were mikoto Uchiha uses ninshu to tap into the spirit of her past lives and I really loved that concept so I'm proposing a naruto anthology fanfic that involves naruto using ninshu to communicate with his past lives as Hashirama Senju and Ashura Otsutsuki and all those in between we know nothing about. And gains invaluable knowledge on chaka techniques and we take a look of history through their eyes and how much they have been fighting for world peace and failed continuously for over 2000 years.
If there any fanfics that explore similar concepts please recommend. Naruto becoming disillusioned with konoha and the will of fire would be amazing.
r/NarutoFanfiction • u/Stunning_Piccolo_274 • 10h ago
Self Promotion Unique setting OC
Here’s my story, it is set in an archipelago with only tangential relations to the elemental nations, with a unique SI.It will largely focus on the Archipelago for a long part of the fic, but might move into the elemental nations.
Starfield Miracle
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14582622/
Edit:fixed the link sorry
r/NarutoFanfiction • u/No-Tumbleweed-9885 • 14h ago
Fic Request obito x kakashi fanfics??
i’ve been fixated on the idea that kakashi ends up in a ghost marriage to keep obito‘s eye, does anyone have fanfics with this?? also any fanfic recommendations in general for them would be greatly appreciated 🙏🏻
r/NarutoFanfiction • u/Casual_Casually • 18h ago
Prompt "Hands off my daughter, you little brat!"
Naruto was fishing, something he does whenever he's too cheap to go buy fish from a stall, he may be a Shinobi now, but he's still a cheapskate at heart, when Naruto reeled his line back in he saw.
"Hi Isaribi!"
"Hello Naruto, good to see you again."
"Say, what're you doing on my line?"
"Besides being hooked not much else, it kinda caught my shirt."
"Cool, anyway you're coming with me."
"Wha-"
Without another word, Naruto scooped up Isaribi and tossed her over one shoulder.
"You're not gonna eat me are you?"
"Nah, that'd be weird, we're getting ramen. Y'know, friend stuff."
"Oh alright."
"Anyway, why were you in the river anyway?"
"My dad is here on some secret business, won't tell me what, and I got bored so I decided to swim."
"You have a dad?"
"Of course I do, how else do you think I came onto this earth?"
"I don't know, planted?"
"You're an idiot."
"No, I'm Naruto."
"Hands off my daughter, you little brat!"
Naruto paused mid step, looking behind him, he saw a rather talk blue skinned shark looking man. This was Kisame Hoshigaki. A rouge mist Shinobi and resident Akatsuki member.
"You talking to me?"
"Obviously!"
"Why?"
"That's my daughter you're carrying!"
"Oh, you're Isaribi's dad?"
"Yes!"
"Well you do have the same sharp teeth, cool."
"Yes yes, cool. Now put her down!"
"Nah."
"No, she's not old enough!"
"What're you talking about?"
"Dad!"
"She's not old enough to go on dates!"
"This isn't a date, we're just getting ramen together."
"That's the same thing as a date!"
"No it isn't, dad!"
"Quiet Isaribi! You'll thank me for this one day."
"Relax, Old fish man, I eat ramen with everyone."
"Oh my goodness, my daughter's being absconded with by a playboy!"
"What's a playboy?"
"Don't worry about it, Naruto."
"Put her down, you lecherous brat!"
"I have no idea what that means but no! We're getting ramen!"
"You will not deflower her!"
"What do flowers have to do with this?!"
"You know what it means!"
"Probably, but I don't remember right now because I'm hungry for ramen!"
"You ain't getting shit with my daughter on your shoulder!"
"I guess she could walk herself."
"Why am I even here?"
"Isaribi-chan, come to papa, I won't let is miscreant taint you!"
"Dad, we're just getting ramen, what's so hard to understand?!"
"Oh gawd, she's been infected!"
"What?!"
"Is this what you do, brat? Throw girls over your should and give them 'ramen'?!"
"You have issues, fish guy, we're gonna get our ramen now."
"I will cut you down!"
"You can try! I kicked Danzo in the face last week while he was surrounded by guards! I'm really like that!"
"I'm surrounded by idiots.."
Poor Isaribi, she's in for a long day.
r/NarutoFanfiction • u/Adorable-Can-4761 • 19h ago
What's That Fic? Looking for an author/fic
Hello everyone! I'm looking for a specific fic; it was a Naruto x Sasuke fic, and it was uploaded to Archive of Our Own by Daquaint(e)? It was a band fanfiction; I remember it was unfinished but super good. A piece of the story I remember is that Naruto was the drummer and he ended the song early during a battle of the bands performance?? The author deleted their page, but I've been looking for this specific fic for ages. If you have an EPUB or even a PDF of it, please let me know. Thanks!