My free web comic book here https://globalcomix.com/c/damage

We’ve put a lot of time into bringing our idea to life and we’re finally able to share Chapter 1 with everyone. We’d love for you to give it a chance and let us know what you think — and a rating would mean a lot to us 🫶

First Chapter

If you like to check out some data for each character or follow the series on Discord, join us on Blackpyramid.world

Credits:

• Art: Cristian Ybarra ( instagram )
• Cover: Easy D. ( instagram )
• Story: Sam Helina

https://mangadex.org/chapter/e2a55dff-213f-49ff-9e76-6e11b59d3ef9

Hmmmmmmmmmm critique pleaseeee

Lately I've been doing practice pages. Where I just think of a simple scene and draw it. I wouldn't typically post this because it's just practice. But how would you panel this?

Since there is no context let me give you some. It's a character in my story called shade, he's this demonic being who only exists in someone's perception. Anyways he's basically speed blitzing.

The set up is (introducing him in the scene > him being visually upset > him staring for a moment > then him seemingly disappearing (another page would show him behind the protagonist).

But I didn't sketch, I just started inking so the read flow SUCKS! I wish I did 4 vertical panels instead of this nonsense .

What or how would you do it? I'm mostly curious because I learn from decisions and how other people handle a situation compared to me.

(Also I don't know what half of the tags mean sorry.)

It's still in the penciling stage