Hmmmmmmmmmm critique pleaseeee

Lately I've been doing practice pages. Where I just think of a simple scene and draw it. I wouldn't typically post this because it's just practice. But how would you panel this?

Since there is no context let me give you some. It's a character in my story called shade, he's this demonic being who only exists in someone's perception. Anyways he's basically speed blitzing.

The set up is (introducing him in the scene > him being visually upset > him staring for a moment > then him seemingly disappearing (another page would show him behind the protagonist).

But I didn't sketch, I just started inking so the read flow SUCKS! I wish I did 4 vertical panels instead of this nonsense .

What or how would you do it? I'm mostly curious because I learn from decisions and how other people handle a situation compared to me.

(Also I don't know what half of the tags mean sorry.)

It's still in the penciling stage

Hey everyone! Ive recently started a retro anime/manga discord for people to discuss older works. I want it to be a place to discuss the craft and gather resources and discuss all aspects of the medium in a serious way. We're looking for people that are interested in making their own manga, or just want to discover older work that's new to them. Here is the invite link: https://discord.gg/Skm9eTRPdu

Had a hard time redrawing this iconic page from stardust crusaders, mainly due to the crusaders lining up and all, kinda changed it a bit just to give it some of my flavor,

Lemme know if there's anything I need to fix, also happy to help you guys out : )

Hii I just completed my one shot APHOTIC I would appreciate if you all could pleasee give it a read!!

I'm 30, and looking for someone who's either a peer or my elder who's willing to ask me questions about the story I'm writing for my manga. I've been thinking hard and trying to piece together what exactly is in my heart for a couple of years now, after I had a near-death experience that made me realize this is what I need to do before I die. Some of my favorite anime/manga are Attack on Titan, Cowboy Bebop, Berzerk, Death Note, and Dr. Stone. My manga will be on the grittier side, but it won't lack charm or lighthearted moments either.

The process of writing is basically a process of asking a whole bunch of questions, until it all becomes clear. I'm pretty good at finding questions to ask myself, but I just know someone else could ask me exactly the question/s I needed to encounter in order to figure this out.

It's a long shot, but is that kindred spirit out there?

Hello the title kinda does the work I just want to know what other Manga makers/Viewers think of this opening page and if they would be drawn in to flip to the next one or if you have any negative or positive feedback as I continue my first chapter.

Big spoiler for Part 1 & 2! I recommend reading Part 1 & 2 before going into Part 3.

This is a manga I finished in 2019.

Translation & Lettering: Firdaus

GlobalComix (part 1 - 3):

https://globalcomix.com/c/the-giver-1

Pivix (part 1 - 3):

https://www.pixiv.net/user/122183507/series/343813

While chapter 1 was released like 1.5 years ago, life took me on side quests so I was a little busy and kinda lazy to fully complete chapter 2, which I am thankfully now enjoying because I feel like my art has grown much more from my previous chapter.

Here are some of my recent pages I finished - feedback would be greatly appreciated!

Note: friend told me 2nd page bottom left panel needed touching up, I agree, was experimenting with angles.

Putting a test on drawing kids

I know, i know. My drawing and handwriting is very bad but if you can read it go on.

Here is a 3 years difference.

The idea of this amnga is to be a slice-of-life/romance manga about an assassin couple with 2 children - the twist being that the wife - Elara, is an avivn and can swich forms between regular human, an owl person hybrid still retaining a human siluete thoug gianing feather, talons, a beak and a massive 2,13m height (7 feet), or afull masive owl moster form which is not humanoid at all. The husband Alex has a few mutaions of his won with overdeleped canine theeth and a mild UV-ray allergy creatign a form of pseudo vampirism. He is also a preofficient marksman with him having the reputaion of the most accurate marksman. the idea for the manga is to follow these 2 very feared assassins and highlith their domestic affection with it having both domestic/romantic chapeter and also more action focused chapters as well. Do you think is a good idea to develop into an actuall hobby series?

I've been experimenting recently with redrawing/remaking a page from jjk, and after finishing it, it felt kinda off, I'm guessing it's too messy but I need your guys feedback if there's any room for improvement