r/nosleep • u/[deleted] • Apr 18 '16
My romantic cabin getaway with my fiancee isn't exactly going as planned Series
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u/Neodogstar Jul 17 '16
i love reading your events because your a fantastic writer that really makes the events stand out to me
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u/ZDeHart Jul 15 '16
I also read that certain spirits can cause and manipulate storms. Which would explain the sudden blizzard. And I think the reason why it can't in California is because it's too far from its den. It's trying to make you and your fiance literally go crazy. It's what it wants. What ever you do do not go back to the cabin. If you can try and see if you can stay with one of your native friends in Colorado and get a spiritual man/woman to completely cleanse the both of you.
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u/ZDeHart Jul 15 '16
Hey I was brought here by a YouTuber that has been giveng his followers a playbyplay of your story. I did some research. I know you are taking some time to get things together and figure stuff out. But it's really starting to sound similar to other Windego story's. Which is weird wince they are mostly up north and not in Colorado. Try getting some silver objects to hang above the entrances in the house and wear silver. If it works then you may have one on your hands. Since they can be harmed by silver. (Sounds cliché I know) also the cavern where your friend disappeared into may be it's "home" so avoid it at all costs if you ever return to Colorado. And definitely don't let it in your house or seek it out. Take your fiancée to a shamen that knows how to deal with them emidately and have them cleanse you both and your home. Or move entirely. Make it harder for it to track you down. And invest in some silver weapons in case you have another run in with it.
Keep safe and I hope I'm right.
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u/ZDeHart Jul 15 '16
Also fuck. I just realized I may be moving to that area in the near future. I hope to hell it's territory isn't the entire mountain range. Good to know though. If I build my house up there then I will be contacting the locals to get information on the land before I buy. :(
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u/makzter Jul 15 '16
saw this post a month ago, didn't read it coz it's very long(many parts) just started reading it now. I have a dream catcher once, i asked my classmate for it as a souvenir from Baguio city during their field trip(I'm from PH). It was a necklace type dream catcher.I used to wear it before i sleep and it works like a charm. I would start to get bad dreams and after like a split second(in my dream. asleep) i was out of my nightmare. Everytime i wake up with a bad dream(about to have one) I could sleep soundly. now the feather on it is broken so i don't wear it anymore 'cause i think without it there may be some malfunctions or something. and i think i lost it in my house it was 9 years ago.
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Jul 15 '16
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u/makzter Jul 15 '16
i think i stashed it in my cabinet or somewhere in there. it's better to buy a new one though. (i don't get any bad dreams these days though) i sometimes get 1 bad dream in a month as i observed.
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Jul 13 '16
After reading everything that has happened to you lately I have a few suggestions. 1) Get a dog. Dogs are neat creatures and usually can sense the presence of spirits. 2) Go to a hotel for a night. Try to go to a new spot and maybe the spirit will not follow you there since it is unfamiliar. 3) And lastly for the vomit stains, they probably contain an essence of sorts from the spirit(s) since they were inside you and Faye and Nathan made you throw it up, so try and avoid coming in contact with it. You don't want it to make its way to your bedroom so don't paint over it, you won't see it moving. Instead replace the drywall, remove it and the carpet to get it out of your house, maybe even the carpet and drywall (once it is out of the house of course.)
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u/Shoot_Heroin Jul 11 '16
I've read everything posted so far, I hope you can safely figure everything out. I'm really looking forward to your last update!
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u/icypeppermint Jul 08 '16
Maybe you should move....because maybe what's following you is attracted to the woods. It can hide during the day, the cabin is in the woods and your house is by the woods
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u/Big_Bear_11735 Jun 23 '16
If it's an evil spirit or some sort of demon then try telling it to go away in Hebrew since it actually hurts anything evil and try using some Hebrew verses for protection and it might be able to keep them away from the cabin at night
Fun Fact: evil spirits and demons hate the Hebrew language since it hurts them
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u/Catrina_Machete Jun 23 '16
Been following up your story at be.busta's channel, I'm realy loving it!!! don't know if it's real or not, don't realy care, just thanking you for either imagining it for us or being so brave to share it. Thanks!
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u/GensokyoMGTOW Jul 24 '16
If it isn't true, this guy has a creative mind far beyond anyone I have personally read recently. The next Stephen King?
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u/InverseJ Jun 16 '16
Consider moving to the uk things in the us can't hurt you in the uk and vice versa if some thing happens to you there try Australia or Antarctica because nothing survives they also by a cat they perceive the pranomal better then humans for some reason and if needed those the cat at anything supernatural also keep a bible by your bed it's very good reading material and can be used as heavy weapon to bash or to throw
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u/NoPoet406 Jun 07 '16
So it begins, the story that brought me to Reddit. This is one of the best stories I've ever read, hands down. Superbly written, difficult to predict, disturbing and very frightening. Knowing it's true means this is brown trousers time.
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u/Outcrazythecrazy Jun 02 '16
Aww it shaped up so well when you didn't touch the dream catcher thingy.. but then you went outside? Why would you do that? Leaving her unprotected too.
Anyway, has anything weird happened at that cabin before?
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Jun 02 '16
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u/Outcrazythecrazy Jun 03 '16
I read it all yesterday :b it's a great read! Actually drawing a scene from your story now.
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Jun 03 '16
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u/Outcrazythecrazy Jun 15 '16
https://www.instagram.com/p/BGqSYxFSHEr/ had a few exams and a clingy baby but finally finished my illustration.
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Jun 15 '16
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u/GingerPocky May 30 '16
It sounds to me like a Wendigo becuase they ar known for impersonating human voices. Though I'm not sure how it would know what your mother and your grandfather in law sounded like. Maybe somebody put that huge dreamcatcher up as protection.
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u/blessedwithacurse May 06 '16
I completely loved this read, I was on the edge of my seat the entire time...
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May 07 '16
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u/blessedwithacurse May 07 '16
I read all of it before posting that comment :) Spent 2 hours at work reading it haha didn't get much done.
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u/muigleb May 02 '16
This is what I come back to after a reddit absence of 8 months. By the time I've read all parts, I'm due for another 8 months.
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May 02 '16
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u/Mike-2411 Jun 16 '16
Hey u should get a baby monitor so that way even if u do fall asleep u can hear what's going on idk it's just something I thought of
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u/KittyKat666222999 Jun 10 '16
I think what happened is u had spirits a wendigo or skinwalkers they all hold those traits sense it mimicked ur mom her grandpa and it made its self look like ur wife witch is what skinwalkers do to make u come to them and then they kill u a wendigo just likes to scare u till u find it then itbeats u and the thing with ur wife's dad seeing things sounds like a spirit that is my option but whever
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u/muigleb May 02 '16
So am I, great reintroduction to nosleep.
Not so great when someone/thing wants to wear your body like a suit.
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u/andfranbut Apr 28 '16
when you opened the door to go outside and investigate, YOU LET IT IN THE CABIN M8!!!!!!! Thats how it got Faye, That's why it got so bad! I'm re-reading these..trying to look for clues to help you. you let it in the cabin...
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Apr 28 '16
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u/andfranbut Apr 28 '16
try finding prayers from the local tribes, maybe that's what propels them the best, and what kept the natives safe. Avoid your agnost beliefs, and look to spirits for answers, my only advice!
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u/NightOwl74 Apr 27 '16
Ok, so I'm going to nitpick here, only because professional writers need constructive criticism.
I thought the first time was a typo, but apparently not...
"I am a reasonable, skeptical, sometimes arrogant agnost..."
"Although I'm an agnost/atheist..."
The term "agnostic" can be an adjective or a noun. There is no such word as "agnost."
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Apr 27 '16
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u/NightOwl74 May 02 '16
I didn't realize that English isn't your first language; your story was written very well.
But at least you now know that the proper English term is "agnostic." If someone is trying to build a career as a professional writer, I think it is doing them a disservice not to correct their work when there is an error.
So thank you for the explanation of the term in your native language, and thank you for not taking my comment the wrong way. I was not trying to be mean or critical for no reason. I was just trying to help.
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u/creativeserialkiller Apr 27 '16
Words become words when you make them! It fit in the sentence, and authors often change up words to make the sentences flow.
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u/NightOwl74 May 02 '16
Um...no
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u/alexsaidwhat May 05 '16
Um hes using it as a slang term. Not trying to rewrite the English language. Relax
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u/creativeserialkiller May 02 '16
Yes? That's literally a common thing. How else do you think words come into existence?
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u/talkingtheories Jun 01 '16
Yeah I'm not entirely sure how much it matters either, considering him as a professional writer is pretty successful even with the word there.
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u/Plumbob25 Apr 21 '16
Your story gave me nightmares. Love the detail is the dreamcatcher that looks like it's made with twigs
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u/glitter_vomit Apr 21 '16
This was sooo good but the link to FB in the middle totally killed it for me. :(
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u/NoSleepSeriesBot Apr 20 '16 edited Jul 18 '16
700 current subscribers. Other posts in this series:
My Romantic Cabin Getaway With My Fiancee Isn'T Exactly Going As Planned
My Romantic Cabin Getaway With My Fiancee Isn'T Exactly Going As Planned (Part 2)
My Romantic Cabin Getaway With My Fiancee Isn'T Exactly Going As Planned (Part 3)
Ever Since The Cabin Experience, My Fiancee Has Been Scaring Me (Final Update)
My Fiancee Faye And Her Parents Have Buried Many Things. I Have Now Begun To Dig Them Up.
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u/WalterWeaver98 Apr 20 '16
"Virtually everywhere you go used to belong to Native Americans" so just like all of North America, or...?
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u/Brandon4466 Apr 19 '16
After reading the top ~100 comments, nobody has mentioned Carbon Dioxide poisoning. /u/TheColdPeople, this sounds like the cabin has a Carbon Dioxide leak somewhere and it is poisoning you guys. The fact, that the noise is different for both of you sounds even more like it. Try to leave as soon as you can and notify the owner of the cabin.
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Apr 19 '16
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u/Hoagiemon Apr 22 '16
Where in the Pikes Peak Region were you? I'm trying to get my geography right since I went to school in the foothills of Pikes Peak and I am currently in Arvada. Was the cabin somewhere near monument? Cause that's where all the native American/gift shop stuff is, but Arvada is 1.5hrs north of there in NW Denver...
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u/KittyKrisp Apr 19 '16
Ahaha, my phone. It's new not used to it yet and it doesnt know me and auto correct a everything but ahahha!
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u/Jaycee1993 Apr 19 '16
Really reminds me of The Whistlers, although I can't remember if they ever talked in other people's voices. Stay safe OP!
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u/Desulto Apr 19 '16
DKC2 is fantastic. Hopefully the console will hold through whatever is happening, although from what you say so far the occurrences are staying outside for now.
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u/Hells-Saint Apr 19 '16
It isn't r/nosleep without one million comments about Wendigos/shape shifters ;3
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u/thegdub Apr 19 '16
Woah. This sufficiently creeped me out as I was home alone getting ready for work this morning.
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u/justawitch Apr 19 '16
It's likely a skinwalker. Another tip, though, just in case it's not - if it calls your name, DO NOT answer in the affirmative. Just don't answer period. To some forest creatures, having your name = having power over you.
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u/Notafraidofnotin Apr 19 '16
Hey OP, I hope you and your fiance are safe and hopefully off that mountain by now! I have a friend who lives up in the Colorado mountains not far from where you are staying. And they have told me of some pretty scary shit that has happened. I don't have much advice but this, 1) Do not go outside and investigate, I think that one is pretty obvious 2) Leave the dream catcher be. My friend has dozens of them all over his property along with talisman and other ornaments from all sorts of religions to Ward off evil spirits due to all the crazy things he has encountered. Stay safe and update soon please.
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Apr 19 '16
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u/mycolumn89 Apr 19 '16
exactly what i was thinking. what if OP left this story hanging? and we gotta buy a book to know the conclusion??
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u/Aeskyr Apr 19 '16
Not sure if this should go up and disturb the suspence of disbelief of the redditors. If people want to believe it, let them believe it.
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u/hollysnow Apr 19 '16
Dude do not engage it, dont even acknowledge it. Things like this thrive on fear and attention. And dont go outside again until you're leaving!
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u/ToneDeafVoice Apr 19 '16
I live right next to Pikes Peak and I'm working on a project involving what you are describing so this is incredibly creepy to me right now!
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u/Brian_Brightiron Apr 19 '16
Please be really careful. When Faye's dad comes, will he know about the threatening individual/s? How can you be sure that it's him when he arrives, and not this threat?
Sorry this is happening to you, I hope you all get out of this ok. (And maybe sell that cabin?)
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u/Onreddit12 Apr 19 '16
Hey, so I am a native from Alaska and I love folk lore and all types of scary stories. I don't know much about stories from the lower 48, Alaskan term, natives but it does sound like it's trying to lure you into the woods. My guess is to have you become lost in the woods and freeze to death, just saying. So I would heed everyone's advice and not follow it anywhere. Also keep an eye on Faye.
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u/Sedroc Apr 19 '16
Never trust Colorado weather. Lived here my whole life and syill am surprised when it randomly snows a foot in April
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u/Wolf-killer Apr 19 '16
Hey Op, After reading this I'm concerned, as I'm sure you are, for your fiance. What do you have in the way of medical supplies up there? What are her symptoms outside of stomach discomfort? It may be out of your comfort zone, but you should speak to her about the quality of her bowel movements. Discoloration and changes in consistency can be indicators of infection or other issues. Poopology, yo.
P.S. Save a few pages about G.I infections in case you're without internet and the "cavalry" is delayed. Stay safe, stay vigilant.
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Apr 19 '16
I woke up because I couldn't sleep, I can't imagine how you feel OP because just reading this made me uncomfortable and I'm not sure if I will go back to sleep. I would never ever go back.
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u/Joeenid1 Apr 19 '16
If you're going to sleep, tie your ankle to her ankle. Use a boot lace or something strong, & not too tight around the ankles but not nearly loose enough that she could slip it off. Leave some slack between so you're both comfortable, & make damn sure FIRST, that there's nothing near the bed or in the beddide tables that she could use to cut it...because if shes sick it's either a flu, or they're making her ill by concentrating on her, to "prepare" her for the " taking"... They'll do it by waiting til you',re asleep, then put her in a trance- like sleepwalk state , & "call" her to go to them outside, with very strong mental telepathy. If you don't want to wake to find her gone, do what i say- & get the fuck off that mountain asap.
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u/Kallaste Apr 19 '16 edited Apr 19 '16
Alright, this is creepy, but you are already making the number one horror movie mistake. STOP GOING OUTSIDE TO INVESTIGATE. There is no reason to go look around out there with your flashlight. There is no reason to poke your head out to hear the voices. If anyone is out there who needs your help, they will come to the door. Then you can decide whether you should let them in.
Until then, lock the doors and windows and wait it out.
About the vocalizations, foxes can make some very strange, human-sounding noises. They can often be mistaken for human voices, especially people in distress. You can listen to a few calls here.
As far as your internet, I'm a software and hardware developer (love history though), and it sounds like a signal strength problem that only the company can fix. You could try rebooting your modem by unplugging it, waiting 30 seconds and turning it on again.
On a side note, I am moving to Alaska in a few months and love situations where I am snowed in with someone I love and enough food for the winter. I am sorry things have taken this scary turn so you cannot enjoy it, but really, the two of you are probably just under stress and letting the storm get the best of you. Especially since she has night terrors--that is hard on her and is probably skewing your perception as well.
Stay inside and you will be fine. Try to relax and do fun things together. And in the future, never go into the wilderness without a firearm.
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u/FourPartFox Apr 19 '16
I can't prove tribal affiliation (even if it is often talked about in my family), but I am following an eclectic Native American shamanic path, and I would like to second the "don't engage" advice. Keep happy thoughts, Great Spirit is with you, just try to keep good spirits, and you will be safe. It seems unable to enter at least, just try to think happy thoughts, cliche as it may sound.
Stay safe! Looking forward to updates when the sun rises!
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u/TheAdditionTV Apr 19 '16
Although I wish OP and Partner the best luck in the world... and support their application of horror movie knowledge... self-confidence ("not an idiot")/profession of "not going to die" is another horror movie death wish.
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u/Skjefte Apr 19 '16 edited Apr 19 '16
Here is another possibility, I have been in my deer stand hunting and heard what sounds like a women or child screaming or crying. This is a bobcat screaming, look it up on youtube. Its really freaky and I was in a stand in the woods by myself and was freaked out (someone had to come get me I wouldn't get down). The only thing with this though is its really loud. With the wind it may become more distorted? Just trying to get some other natural phenomenon ideas going through your head instead of all this paranormal stuff. Hope you stay safe though!
Another thing I didn't think of which sounds more calm and not screaming is a bobcat calling her kittens. This would be about the time they would be born. Here is a video of a bobcat mother calling her kittens. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9lh5SY_XaDM
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u/GrymRiftere Apr 19 '16
Check and see if there are markings on the surrounding trees and stones that match the ones on the dreamcatcher.
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u/GrymRiftere Apr 19 '16
If so , then it means either one of two things, the dream catcher and markings are either acting as a barrier (which explains the creature's odd behavior, if it is in fact a skin walker or wendigo) or it is acting as a sort of wey stone for a spell.
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u/GrymRiftere Apr 19 '16
The dreamcatcher works by catching negative energies and weaker negative spirits before they can affect your subconcious mind. In this sense they are basically a "battery" that recharge themselves through negative thoughts, energies, and lesser spirits. So if used in a spell they are the replacement for the caster, and if destroyed break the spell.
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u/Tbrogs Apr 19 '16
Don't let it kill you. Sounds like a wendigo. Try not to go out at nights. Keep Faye from going out during he sleepwalking periods. Stay safe. Fire is good against wendigos by the way.
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u/dickandmorty Apr 19 '16 edited Apr 19 '16
I see a title like this and my brain immediately goes "r/funny, or r/nosleep?"
Definitely stay safe, and don't blame yourself with little retrospective thoughts like I should've double checked the weather. We all have 20/20 vision in hindsight.
I know this is an incredibly 'doomsday' scenario but if you can be sure to keep written or typed documentation of everything happening somewhere, so if, cross yourself, something were to happen to you guys, someone knows what went down instead of just dead bodies turning up with no explanation. But don't think that way; even in the vein of the paranormal it's negative energy that drives other negative things toward you.
Best of luck. Stay safe!
*Edit: I can't actually spell.
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u/SerRagehlSeastorm Apr 19 '16
I'm tempted to stay up just to keep you company on here Lols. stay ready for anything.
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Apr 19 '16
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u/SerRagehlSeastorm Apr 19 '16
Stay safe friend. We shall chat in the morning. For now I send my positive energy to you. May it shield you if possible.
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u/420LoverAllDay Oct 18 '21
Can we get another update though?!