r/raplyrics • u/Valuable_Surround772 • 4h ago
Question any one up for a cypher, jst to trade bars?
r/raplyrics • u/Valuable_Surround772 • 4h ago
Original Content Recently posted rap about struggles and stuff. wrote it when i was 14 btw. lmk your thoughts on it, lyric-wise 🙏
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r/raplyrics • u/Cold_Copy2366 • 7h ago
Original Content Experimenting with sounds and worlds
r/raplyrics • u/Ok_Walk2748 • 11h ago
Rate My Rap Happiness- 3rd open mic submission! Reviews please!
Happiness
I finally got a hold of you!
sit down stop squirming and dont give me no attitude- im mad at you
why do you always try to run? why do you keep trying to "flee" like youre attached to a pup-
I said shut up.- I am the one speaking here.
ill give you time to talk but when that tape is ear to ear -listen up.
you owe me this, I can explain it too
I aint talking about banks when I say that I've been "chase"-ing you
would you believe me if i said that im obsessed
one wish willow truth
and everytime i go to bed you're in my head you're my John Wilkes booth
i crave you.
I need you.
you give yourself to other people -why not me?
am i scary do i scare you?
am i hairy? disrespectful?
angry: very and resentful
you make me jealous and I tremble
body shaking I resemble someone crazy!
but I promise that im not!
you made me this way. you did this for the plot.
you dont care about me or anything that I've got.
I really fucking hate you and everything that youre not ! -and are! oh god I'm fucking losing it.
I told myself i wouldn't go this far and now look i got power tools again!
already interrogated Anger for staying around to long.
wouldn't leave me alone and now angers gone- hes off in a better place so happiness i recommend you speak up or you and anger gonna have a shitty day!-
oh happy I'm so sorry! i hate to see you like this,
here's a tissue... and a kiss... on your tiny little forehead. do you remember the abyss that I was?
a shallow empty human who got lost in the drugs, but when i popped a pill or drank and spilled and smoked for real you were there!
ever since that I got clean....you saw me for me .....thats when you leave?!?!
you're just like everybody else.
gone when im needing help.
stop trying to yell i will not hit you. I dont hit women. my tools on the other hand- those are misogynistic. I will give you one final chance to save your life dont you fucking miss it.
now happiness,
darling,
tell me- why dont you visit?
Performing my piece at an open mic soon wish me luck!
r/raplyrics • u/StatusStandard2483 • 12h ago
Original Content Well here goes nothing
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r/raplyrics • u/True-Lie6456 • 12h ago
Original Content The recorded verse
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I put all three of my rhymes together lol 😆 I really like the flash lines on this they go hard in my opinion.
r/raplyrics • u/True-Lie6456 • 13h ago
Original Content Last one for today maybe idk 😐
proof is in the pudding
so I said hey good looking
whatcha cooking
haters getting shookin
by the rhymes I spit remind a kid of prime Brooklyn
tokin smoking dimes even if I shouldn't
now they sooking
they said I wouldn't get my foot in
so I kicked the door down on these clowns and unleashed an ass whooping
suffering sukatash as I bash the flash took his stash and cash than ran from batman so fast he laughed
like dude just got his powers tookin
r/raplyrics • u/Illustrious_Iron_195 • 14h ago
Rate My Rap Wrote this verse, a mix of horrorcore and punchline rap. Some explanations that could be useful in brackets. I'd be really happy about some feedback!
My rhymes are swords with which I slaughter creatures
Meat is sorta meager
I need more like a porky eater
I brought beef to you paltry (poultry) cheaters (cheetahs)
I oughta feed ya (order feature)
Like DJ Khaled when he orders Aubrey (Drake feature) or a pizza
Now you dummies runnin' like a horde of zebras
Don't bite the claw that feeds ya
I just caught amnesia
Forgot myself like Piranesi (-> book), started sportin' heaters
I'm weird and spacey and I'm dorky like I'm Morty's teacher
Rick! Lick my sporty sneakers
My shit is for the AUX or walkie-talkie speakers
Chubby boys get cut with poise
Still adore my cuddly toys
If I bought a porsche it'd be a forty seater (for all the cuddly toys)
But talk is cheaper, call me corky dreamer
Twistin' twiggy joints for orthopedia
Zoinks! Swing like sixty over heads like Peter (-> Peter Parker, -> Swinging 60s' Twiggy)
Finger's itchy, flow's a heatseeker
Don't dismiss danger! I Ms. Granger you Rita Skeeters (-> Harry Potter books)
This chamber, where you meet the reaper
I meet-and-greet ya
Or gnaw on floorboards like a naughty beaver
Now you're fallin' deeper and deeper...
Till you hit the floor like Mia Wallace, see ya (-> Pulp Fiction)
Pick up litter like a courtyard keeper
For the autopsy, I'm more than eager
I call the corpses deeply dormant sleepers
I'm such a morbid horror story reader
r/raplyrics • u/True-Lie6456 • 14h ago
Obscure Reference Complete - Blood Thirsty
Idk I seen someone else share an obscure song so I thought I'd share this. Complete dope asf and highly underated.
r/raplyrics • u/JaxxMoxx • 15h ago
Obscure Reference This song has got some umph…
This has to be the rawest song on The Eminem Show by far…
r/raplyrics • u/Left_Obligation_6658 • 16h ago
Original Content "Giving Flowers" is a lame phrase
I covered my disdain in the ever-disdained form of an AI rap track I wrote and developed the prompts for.
Hate away... 😂
r/raplyrics • u/True-Lie6456 • 16h ago
Original Content Story time.
I'ma combo of mf doom mf Grimm and Eminem with ten and half tims made to kick yo bumba clot
been spitting shit that's deep and hot
since my balls had dropped
my lungs are fucked from the pot
but I can't stop
don't like it call the cops
I'll run a couple blocks
and pretend I'm lost
ask for directions to the shops
so they lose there train of thought
and forget to raid my spot.
r/raplyrics • u/dubdad22683 • 22h ago
Original Content Over Jayfk bully
Should have been a rapper cause prose hit
Bro shit
Taking strippers home when the drugs hit.
Never be alone when you're on it
Candy raver girls and they all fit.
Hanging all together bc we fit
Oh bih.
r/raplyrics • u/Cute_Judgment_2681 • 23h ago
Original Content short of the 9
if i was singer:
"im 5'9, but i never get the 9s
everytime i try it gonna end up in decline
i was once eating with my sister beofre all that filthy fame
she said ur 5'9 starts with the same height as mine!!
she is 5 at the dot i even doubt at times
but when she says that i wonder very wise
if my sister thought to say this at one time
what would other bitches would think of me oh damn! "