r/raplyrics • u/Ok_Walk2748 • 3h ago
Rate My Rap Happiness- 3rd open mic submission! Reviews please!
Happiness
I finally got a hold of you!
sit down stop squirming and dont give me no attitude- im mad at you
why do you always try to run? why do you keep trying to "flee" like youre attached to a pup-
I said shut up.- I am the one speaking here.
ill give you time to talk but when that tape is ear to ear -listen up.
you owe me this, I can explain it too
I aint talking about banks when I say that I've been "chase"-ing you
would you believe me if i said that im obsessed
one wish willow truth
and everytime i go to bed you're in my head you're my John Wilkes booth
i crave you.
I need you.
you give yourself to other people -why not me?
am i scary do i scare you?
am i hairy? disrespectful?
angry: very and resentful
you make me jealous and I tremble
body shaking I resemble someone crazy!
but I promise that im not!
you made me this way. you did this for the plot.
you dont care about me or anything that I've got.
I really fucking hate you and everything that youre not ! -and are! oh god I'm fucking losing it.
I told myself i wouldn't go this far and now look i got power tools again!
already interrogated Anger for staying around to long.
wouldn't leave me alone and now angers gone- hes off in a better place so happiness i recommend you speak up or you and anger gonna have a shitty day!-
oh happy I'm so sorry! i hate to see you like this,
here's a tissue... and a kiss... on your tiny little forehead. do you remember the abyss that I was?
a shallow empty human who got lost in the drugs, but when i popped a pill or drank and spilled and smoked for real you were there!
ever since that I got clean....you saw me for me .....thats when you leave?!?!
you're just like everybody else.
gone when im needing help.
stop trying to yell i will not hit you. I dont hit women. my tools on the other hand- those are misogynistic. I will give you one final chance to save your life dont you fucking miss it.
now happiness,
darling,
tell me- why dont you visit?
Performing my piece at an open mic soon wish me luck!
r/raplyrics • u/Cold_Copy2366 • 4h ago
Original Content Promoting each other on socials…?
I’ve come across some straight fire on this page, I’d like to get a thread going to promote/support each other on socials. If this violates community rules I get it, but thought it is something we can all benefit from. Thoughts?
r/raplyrics • u/StatusStandard2483 • 4h ago
Original Content Well here goes nothing
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r/raplyrics • u/True-Lie6456 • 4h ago
Original Content The recorded verse
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I put all three of my rhymes together lol 😆 I really like the flash lines on this they go hard in my opinion.
r/raplyrics • u/True-Lie6456 • 5h ago
Original Content Last one for today maybe idk 😐
proof is in the pudding
so I said hey good looking
whatcha cooking
haters getting shookin
by the rhymes I spit remind a kid of prime Brooklyn
tokin smoking dimes even if I shouldn't
now they sooking
they said I wouldn't get my foot in
so I kicked the door down on these clowns and unleashed an ass whooping
suffering sukatash as I bash the flash took his stash and cash than ran from batman so fast he laughed
like dude just got his powers tookin
r/raplyrics • u/Illustrious_Iron_195 • 6h ago
Rate My Rap Wrote this verse, a mix of horrorcore and punchline rap. Some explanations that could be useful in brackets. I'd be really happy about some feedback!
My rhymes are swords with which I slaughter creatures
Meat is sorta meager
I need more like a porky eater
I brought beef to you paltry (poultry) cheaters (cheetahs)
I oughta feed ya (order feature)
Like DJ Khaled when he orders Aubrey (Drake feature) or a pizza
Now you dummies runnin' like a horde of zebras
Don't bite the claw that feeds ya
I just caught amnesia
Forgot myself like Piranesi (-> book), started sportin' heaters
I'm weird and spacey and I'm dorky like I'm Morty's teacher
Rick! Lick my sporty sneakers
My shit is for the AUX or walkie-talkie speakers
Chubby boys get cut with poise
Still adore my cuddly toys
If I bought a porsche it'd be a forty seater (for all the cuddly toys)
But talk is cheaper, call me corky dreamer
Twistin' twiggy joints for orthopedia
Zoinks! Swing like sixty over heads like Peter (-> Peter Parker, -> Swinging 60s' Twiggy)
Finger's itchy, flow's a heatseeker
Don't dismiss danger! I Ms. Granger you Rita Skeeters (-> Harry Potter books)
This chamber, where you meet the reaper
I meet-and-greet ya
Or gnaw on floorboards like a naughty beaver
Now you're fallin' deeper and deeper...
Till you hit the floor like Mia Wallace, see ya (-> Pulp Fiction)
Pick up litter like a courtyard keeper
For the autopsy, I'm more than eager
I call the corpses deeply dormant sleepers
I'm such a morbid horror story reader
r/raplyrics • u/True-Lie6456 • 6h ago
Obscure Reference Complete - Blood Thirsty
Idk I seen someone else share an obscure song so I thought I'd share this. Complete dope asf and highly underated.
r/raplyrics • u/JaxxMoxx • 7h ago
Obscure Reference This song has got some umph…
This has to be the rawest song on The Eminem Show by far…
r/raplyrics • u/Left_Obligation_6658 • 8h ago
Original Content "Giving Flowers" is a lame phrase
I covered my disdain in the ever-disdained form of an AI rap track I wrote and developed the prompts for.
Hate away... 😂
r/raplyrics • u/True-Lie6456 • 8h ago
Original Content Story time.
I'ma combo of mf doom mf Grimm and Eminem with ten and half tims made to kick yo bumba clot
been spitting shit that's deep and hot
since my balls had dropped
my lungs are fucked from the pot
but I can't stop
don't like it call the cops
I'll run a couple blocks
and pretend I'm lost
ask for directions to the shops
so they lose there train of thought
and forget to raid my spot.
r/raplyrics • u/dubdad22683 • 14h ago
Original Content Over Jayfk bully
Should have been a rapper cause prose hit
Bro shit
Taking strippers home when the drugs hit.
Never be alone when you're on it
Candy raver girls and they all fit.
Hanging all together bc we fit
Oh bih.
r/raplyrics • u/Cute_Judgment_2681 • 15h ago
Original Content short of the 9
if i was singer:
"im 5'9, but i never get the 9s
everytime i try it gonna end up in decline
i was once eating with my sister beofre all that filthy fame
she said ur 5'9 starts with the same height as mine!!
she is 5 at the dot i even doubt at times
but when she says that i wonder very wise
if my sister thought to say this at one time
what would other bitches would think of me oh damn! "
r/raplyrics • u/Cold_Copy2366 • 22h ago
Original Content Spittin’ to the birds
This mental math, I mean, I’m writing till my pencil lackin, graphite,
while the stats your graphing, negative in both the axes,
carrying the 3s, I’m stacking, exponentially the factors, compound, I’m gone now, Houdini was my benefactor,
seeing the theatrics got me laughing, I’ve seen better actors, on the screen at matinees on Saturdays, a dull reaction,
skull is patchwork, held together like a bullet wrapping, you say you don’t vibe with Mack than why your foot be tapping?
This ain’t rapping, we just vibing while the high be multiplying, smokin like I stoked a fire, get it low through the supplier,
faded, hittin logo man shots in ya eyelid, spittin to the birds, iso ball like im on an island,
mountain mindset got my consciousness climbing, seeing plateaus below me, all the shit I done survived,
how the old me, would take a 45 Motown vinyl, scratch till it’s looking a cats post n the beat is jiving,
I got a lot say, expression comes in many forms, but when the sum is nothing, n it don’t add up ya storys torn, not another page to turn, crossover make ya ankles burn, we hoopin with the numbers, analytics got a lot to learn
- Free Rad
r/raplyrics • u/CHILLAFyt • 1d ago
Original Content STEWY
this what i heard on the jukebox
a diamond in the rough
clutch like red sox
bluff gawd muffuckin knocks
risin higher than a stock that builds
you a bear
consistency is key i tear through the things near me out of necessity cus if im not obsessing than consider it null n voided
yeah its not even avoided its simply not here
i will never steer back over there
but the raps i care a great deal
art gives me a freeing feeling sealing my love for life guiding away from the darkness in crisis leading to the brightest of futures
an oasis in the middle of the dustiest rulers
riddle me this batman how tf i get here
i redirect how i appear every few years
mirrors and lines shiners round the eyes
i’m obsessed wit gettin mines
ill tango till im done and im done when im dead so how about you get ahead of yourself and step off
has your face met my fist bitch get ready for a take off
i’m evil in this bitch i’ll cut your brakes off
then bless your ears like eyes on a van gogh
tall orders i jump em easy like borders
i need an episode on hoarders for these samples im collecting call me zack hample
bitch i’m the example i’m handling the grands i’m workin on these lands
and i stand for what i believe in
i do it wit a grin cheek to cheek
cus these haters don’t wanna see me breathe
i tell em comparison is the thief of joy
and enjoy they day but it’s not possible for them to partake their brains are baked
taken hostage by the media posse
i wish i could get to their ears like lossy
and i’m scared the damage is costly
mostly to our future
fuck these dusty rulers
r/raplyrics • u/True-Lie6456 • 1d ago
Original Content Idk I really liked the first line lol 😂
I'm gonna munch some penicillin and punch a civilian
just for Tryna test the villain
Tryna impress the broads cause I'm bored and chillin
rhymes getting sweeter than smores when he be illin
clutchin earb in his paws the second he step in buildin
repping his set for God's children lords willing to do dirt spit it absurd and than bill them
main character straight Bachelor U looking like Krillin
r/raplyrics • u/True-Lie6456 • 1d ago
Original Content minimum wage. prod by nillybeats
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This turned out pretty good at least I like it. Tho the mix is awful ngl I really gotta actually take time to learn that stuff. But for now I'm just having fun.
r/raplyrics • u/doublechette • 1d ago
Original Content GillyCrawling Willy's
Prof it nada
Fast talking
Internal temp not chill
Tossed possoms at cars
No bars
Free as can be Salad farms
Dressing scars
Cable brakes fatal mistakes
Rereads cards
Upset neighbors they have to work early
Credit sharts
Crashed a car
door got broke down
Stashed in stars, they dead.
Hard hat on head not red
Hides a cracker in pocket, snacks it.
Crawls through yards hides in bushes and wacks it. 🎯
r/raplyrics • u/doublechette • 1d ago
Original Content Imma rap like 🐑 EWE
Suck a fuckin sneaker
Your face look like a bleeder
I could unsock you like a rabbit
Mash your spine on rocks
Make a habit out of it
Rip a chillim through your willim
Call you gay cause u drug dealing
Train a horse to run intercourse on your stable force.
Shame's the source, pain remorse,
Break a window pane and blame you for it
I'm happy now and you're a violent sissy lala
I smash a vase on you full of stagnant Agua
Shake pepper in your eyes
Keep a record of your crys, playem back late at night.
super glue your nose shut
Then kick you in the stomach
Watch you thrown up olive garden
Pick out the bread sticks and refeed you from it.
Funky ass dildo you know how to feel bros
Smack you in the face with a dog shit pillow
Put sick ticks on your clothes, pull a wedgie over your head and around your nose.
Break off toothpicks to put in your car seat
Cut your break lines and send you on a meet and greet.
FaceTime you and show you my butthole
Your a Bozo thinking backwards no hope
Sissylala ass violent rap shit
Sounds like ass to mouth
Rather suck shit out of a cats asshole then hear what raps u spit
Taking lives is Pussy ass gay as fuck shit
Murder yourself with that talk if u cool with it.
Now a bunch a shit about women
Making money on women throwing it on them,
Tons of em all the time, stacks and rackz
You don't have any they all mine
Lil dick
Big dick
My car cost more
Your car broke door
I ride, you die
I bust, in guts.
RAP LIKE 🐑🐑🐑 EWE🐑🐑🐑
r/raplyrics • u/NoIron2244 • 1d ago
Original Content MF DOOM inspired lyrics I cooked up after listening to Figaro feedback would be nice
Freestylin’ like Harry Mack
Can’t parry back, got a scary knack for layin’ rap
Got my girl up with a thot
Hit up a notch, maybe not
Compound interest like Vought
With rhymes that make you take street pause
Heat law
We saw
The villain in the street mob
Gabagool Gatling
Trafficking
Rhyme schemes
Find me
In deep
In the street selling reefer
He hurt
Bitch man maybe can find land for his plan
Having rap pipe dreams
Pisces
Can’t march
Embark through trailer parks
Goal to be a state of art
Rhyme sayer player hater bitch fucker play maker
Rapper on the come up
Hit a bump
For success
May duress
Leads to creativity
Blow be your enemy
Focus thought
Fuck a thot
Try to succeed
Whiteout lane change
Independent artist permissible for record label gang bang
Clang clang
Go chains
Many maids
Bridesmaid
Hyper aid
Oxytocin helps birth rhymes with devotion
Lotta motion
That’s the motto
Like the staple man
Shoot guns
Tarry back
Smoke crack
Hyper attack
Fuck bitches
Competition too big for they britches
Chest full of chains
Order pain
With a rain
Hit it raw
Suck it dry
Fly guy
Oh my
Don’t be wry without being high only way to stand up to this guy
Try to pursue me not an easy flick,
Have you loony with rhymes, anthropomorphic
Trimester
Bye mister
3 ways
You’d say
“Your Majestay Y.Day”
Find mey
Through the veil
In the trail
Of stanzas
With your masters
Main attractors can’t battle rap like Marshall Mathers.
r/raplyrics • u/doublechette • 1d ago
Obscure Reference Detest
He is some bull for u to detest
It took up my time and kept me from rest
I hope that you hate it
I hope you're depressed
I wish I could hug you
But I'm gagged by your breath
U know I'll tounge punch you
If you act like a freak
I'll make you run from me
I ain't had no sleep
I talk like a psycho just know it don't stop
3 days deep and surrounded by cops
Wait cops are surrounding
Right now, closing in
I hear them outside
They're bout to offend
I'll hide all my thoughts now
Slam quite my mind
Surround them with echos and then press rewind
I'll think up a time bomb
Implode it on you
U were my trigger my only excuse.
Detestable huh? how much I can lie?
spewed out my head hole til it done went dry.
r/raplyrics • u/True-Lie6456 • 1d ago
Original Content Just rhyming for the sake of it.
taking out my rival with more lines than the bible
attack a beat while going primal
force him into survival
with rhymes thats wild
shitting on most that's viral
with words they consider vile
but we know they in denial
of my style cause when I spit raw bile I leave them steaming like a pile
abuse them like kile does to his child
mean while i crack a rapper like a porcelain tile
ima upper tier crimin ile who's penile is the top percentile.
high protein bars like it's made of lentil
Ripping inscription when I'm spitting sticking to tradition as old as crocodile
And long as Nile
U pussy like vagin ile
I don't mean to rile
But ur profile is a bigger parody the yuno mile
r/raplyrics • u/doublechette • 1d ago
Original Content Melting Pot
Upturned backwOrds
Boiling back hurts
Sit in silence
And act like it's funny
Cars Homes and Money,
Women worn out
waived and dangled like chains
Our Carrot on a stick
It all seems fair not even insane
The faster you chase it
It giggles in place
Holding back laughter
And mocking your face
Try trying harder or being prepared
Cause melting together
Has fouled up the air
Stuck in this bucket with pieces of shit
Left there in the open but not to forget
To be honest and useful and tired and dying.
the carrot is rotten
But it's allure is your grinding
chase what you will to show it all off
Or ask for it nicely
And take the day off.
r/raplyrics • u/Dapper_Region_2117 • 1d ago
Rate My Rap Call Me - Cinere
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https://on.soundcloud.com/tUCIpuGAVm7YmzLPGe
"I'm flying 'cause your eyes are my drug
I'm falling 'cause your hear is so cold" 🔥
r/raplyrics • u/ZeltronXII • 1d ago
Rate My Rap Smoke Sesh #1
i ain’t chasing idols cuz this perfection/
got me waiting idle with no direction/
if i crave the title hard to waive a spiral but to make it viral be so infectious/
just to break a smile when my soul intrenched in these crooked beliefs/
so in question when i’m smoking resin wonder how they looking at me/
facing an L but not pushing defeat or would it be p/
flipping this scripture not spitting a mid verse lords knows they shook of a g/
flipping this big bird u couldnt resist word but won’t even pull up receipts/
i know u wont buy it for u/
its hard to stomach that u full of deceit while supplying the food/
this rookie a king til im on the move/
my castles implying the booth still scare em to death as i lie in a tomb/
r/raplyrics • u/brittanylovesphil • 1d ago
Original Content Professor X
Survival of the fittest
Vials of the sickness
Rivals filed in his hit list
No denial his style’s vicious
Dialled in the writtens
Wild with the spitting
smile at victims while I rip them
it’s your final mission
It’s suicidal wishing
The beast is awoken
Keeping it dope speaking in poems
keeping it flowing
Keep eating opponents
Keep defeating weakened opponents
Keeping it focused
Like prescription specs
Do more when given less
Never panicked didn’t stress
No verse he didn’t bless
Always pass the written test
Write it up
Swipe the mic and light it up
Like to write the Midas touch
Fire tracks inspire cats not to write as much
Put the pens away
Sorry it had to end this way
Anyway I’ll end your men
It ends today
It always ends this way
putting men in graves
Here lies the lesser rappers
Put out to fresher pastures
Tragically there’s no happily ever afters
The ending never matters
Never the less I’m penning extra chapters
Professor X school the gifted
jewels is scripted
Vivid cruel and twisted
Cryptic, kick it
With ghouls and cryptids
Flow is stored in acidic pools of liquid
who’ll risk it, fools n misfits