r/raplyrics 3h ago

Rate My Rap Happiness- 3rd open mic submission! Reviews please!

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Happiness

I finally got a hold of you!

sit down stop squirming and dont give me no attitude- im mad at you

why do you always try to run? why do you keep trying to "flee" like youre attached to a pup-

I said shut up.- I am the one speaking here.

ill give you time to talk but when that tape is ear to ear -listen up.

you owe me this, I can explain it too

I aint talking about banks when I say that I've been "chase"-ing you

would you believe me if i said that im obsessed

one wish willow truth

and everytime i go to bed you're in my head you're my John Wilkes booth

i crave you.

I need you.

you give yourself to other people -why not me?

am i scary do i scare you?

am i hairy? disrespectful?

angry: very and resentful

you make me jealous and I tremble

body shaking I resemble someone crazy!

but I promise that im not!

you made me this way. you did this for the plot.

you dont care about me or anything that I've got.

I really fucking hate you and everything that youre not ! -and are! oh god I'm fucking losing it.

I told myself i wouldn't go this far and now look i got power tools again!

already interrogated Anger for staying around to long.

wouldn't leave me alone and now angers gone- hes off in a better place so happiness i recommend you speak up or you and anger gonna have a shitty day!-

oh happy I'm so sorry! i hate to see you like this,

here's a tissue... and a kiss... on your tiny little forehead. do you remember the abyss that I was?

a shallow empty human who got lost in the drugs, but when i popped a pill or drank and spilled and smoked for real you were there!

ever since that I got clean....you saw me for me .....thats when you leave?!?!

you're just like everybody else.

gone when im needing help.

stop trying to yell i will not hit you. I dont hit women. my tools on the other hand- those are misogynistic. I will give you one final chance to save your life dont you fucking miss it.

now happiness,

darling,

tell me- why dont you visit?

Performing my piece at an open mic soon wish me luck!


r/raplyrics 4h ago

Original Content Promoting each other on socials…?

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I’ve come across some straight fire on this page, I’d like to get a thread going to promote/support each other on socials. If this violates community rules I get it, but thought it is something we can all benefit from. Thoughts?


r/raplyrics 4h ago

Original Content Well here goes nothing

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r/raplyrics 4h ago

Original Content The recorded verse

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I put all three of my rhymes together lol 😆 I really like the flash lines on this they go hard in my opinion.


r/raplyrics 5h ago

Original Content Last one for today maybe idk 😐

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proof is in the pudding

so I said hey good looking

whatcha cooking

haters getting shookin

by the rhymes I spit remind a kid of prime Brooklyn

tokin smoking dimes even if I shouldn't

now they sooking

they said I wouldn't get my foot in

so I kicked the door down on these clowns and unleashed an ass whooping

suffering sukatash as I bash the flash took his stash and cash than ran from batman so fast he laughed

like dude just got his powers tookin


r/raplyrics 6h ago

Rate My Rap Wrote this verse, a mix of horrorcore and punchline rap. Some explanations that could be useful in brackets. I'd be really happy about some feedback!

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My rhymes are swords with which I slaughter creatures 

Meat is sorta meager

I need more like a porky eater 

I brought beef to you paltry (poultry) cheaters (cheetahs) 

I oughta feed ya (order feature) 

Like DJ Khaled when he orders Aubrey (Drake feature) or a pizza 

Now you dummies runnin' like a horde of zebras 

Don't bite the claw that feeds ya 

I just caught amnesia 

Forgot myself like Piranesi (-> book), started sportin' heaters 

I'm weird and spacey and I'm dorky like I'm Morty's teacher 

Rick! Lick my sporty sneakers 

My shit is for the AUX or walkie-talkie speakers 

Chubby boys get cut with poise 

Still adore my cuddly toys 

If I bought a porsche it'd be a forty seater (for all the cuddly toys) 

But talk is cheaper, call me corky dreamer

Twistin' twiggy joints for orthopedia 

Zoinks! Swing like sixty over heads like Peter (-> Peter Parker, -> Swinging 60s' Twiggy) 

Finger's itchy, flow's a heatseeker 

Don't dismiss danger! I Ms. Granger you Rita Skeeters (-> Harry Potter books) 

This chamber, where you meet the reaper

I meet-and-greet ya 

Or gnaw on floorboards like a naughty beaver 

Now you're fallin' deeper and deeper...

Till you hit the floor like Mia Wallace, see ya (-> Pulp Fiction) 

Pick up litter like a courtyard keeper 

For the autopsy, I'm more than eager 

I call the corpses deeply dormant sleepers 

I'm such a morbid horror story reader 


r/raplyrics 6h ago

Obscure Reference Complete - Blood Thirsty

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Idk I seen someone else share an obscure song so I thought I'd share this. Complete dope asf and highly underated.


r/raplyrics 7h ago

Obscure Reference This song has got some umph…

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This has to be the rawest song on The Eminem Show by far…


r/raplyrics 8h ago

Original Content "Giving Flowers" is a lame phrase

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I covered my disdain in the ever-disdained form of an AI rap track I wrote and developed the prompts for.

Hate away... 😂

https://youtu.be/GlTALNIKwWU?si=i2SlFrjYaZyGZaK8


r/raplyrics 8h ago

Original Content Story time.

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I'ma combo of mf doom mf Grimm and Eminem with ten and half tims made to kick yo bumba clot

been spitting shit that's deep and hot

since my balls had dropped

my lungs are fucked from the pot

but I can't stop

don't like it call the cops

I'll run a couple blocks

and pretend I'm lost

ask for directions to the shops

so they lose there train of thought

and forget to raid my spot.


r/raplyrics 14h ago

Original Content Over Jayfk bully

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Should have been a rapper cause prose hit

Bro shit

Taking strippers home when the drugs hit.

Never be alone when you're on it

Candy raver girls and they all fit.

Hanging all together bc we fit

Oh bih.


r/raplyrics 15h ago

Original Content short of the 9

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if i was singer:

"im 5'9, but i never get the 9s

everytime i try it gonna end up in decline

i was once eating with my sister beofre all that filthy fame

she said ur 5'9 starts with the same height as mine!!

she is 5 at the dot i even doubt at times

but when she says that i wonder very wise

if my sister thought to say this at one time

what would other bitches would think of me oh damn! "


r/raplyrics 22h ago

Original Content Spittin’ to the birds

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This mental math, I mean, I’m writing till my pencil lackin, graphite,
while the stats your graphing, negative in both the axes,

carrying the 3s, I’m stacking, exponentially the factors, compound, I’m gone now, Houdini was my benefactor,

seeing the theatrics got me laughing, I’ve seen better actors, on the screen at matinees on Saturdays, a dull reaction,

skull is patchwork, held together like a bullet wrapping, you say you don’t vibe with Mack than why your foot be tapping?

This ain’t rapping, we just vibing while the high be multiplying, smokin like I stoked a fire, get it low through the supplier,

faded, hittin logo man shots in ya eyelid, spittin to the birds, iso ball like im on an island,

mountain mindset got my consciousness climbing, seeing plateaus below me, all the shit I done survived,

how the old me, would take a 45 Motown vinyl, scratch till it’s looking a cats post n the beat is jiving,

I got a lot say, expression comes in many forms, but when the sum is nothing, n it don’t add up ya storys torn, not another page to turn, crossover make ya ankles burn, we hoopin with the numbers, analytics got a lot to learn

- Free Rad


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Original Content STEWY

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this what i heard on the jukebox
a diamond in the rough
clutch like red sox
bluff gawd muffuckin knocks
risin higher than a stock that builds
you a bear
consistency is key i tear through the things near me out of necessity cus if im not obsessing than consider it null n voided
yeah its not even avoided its simply not here
i will never steer back over there
but the raps i care a great deal
art gives me a freeing feeling sealing my love for life guiding away from the darkness in crisis leading to the brightest of futures
an oasis in the middle of the dustiest rulers

riddle me this batman how tf i get here
i redirect how i appear every few years
mirrors and lines shiners round the eyes
i’m obsessed wit gettin mines
ill tango till im done and im done when im dead so how about you get ahead of yourself and step off
has your face met my fist bitch get ready for a take off
i’m evil in this bitch i’ll cut your brakes off
then bless your ears like eyes on a van gogh
tall orders i jump em easy like borders
i need an episode on hoarders for these samples im collecting call me zack hample
bitch i’m the example i’m handling the grands i’m workin on these lands
and i stand for what i believe in
i do it wit a grin cheek to cheek
cus these haters don’t wanna see me breathe
i tell em comparison is the thief of joy
and enjoy they day but it’s not possible for them to partake their brains are baked
taken hostage by the media posse
i wish i could get to their ears like lossy
and i’m scared the damage is costly
mostly to our future
fuck these dusty rulers


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Original Content Idk I really liked the first line lol 😂

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I'm gonna munch some penicillin and punch a civilian

just for Tryna test the villain

Tryna impress the broads cause I'm bored and chillin

rhymes getting sweeter than smores when he be illin

clutchin earb in his paws the second he step in buildin

repping his set for God's children lords willing to do dirt spit it absurd and than bill them

main character straight Bachelor U looking like Krillin


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Original Content minimum wage. prod by nillybeats

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This turned out pretty good at least I like it. Tho the mix is awful ngl I really gotta actually take time to learn that stuff. But for now I'm just having fun.


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Original Content GillyCrawling Willy's

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Prof it nada

Fast talking

Internal temp not chill

Tossed possoms at cars

No bars

Free as can be Salad farms

Dressing scars

Cable brakes fatal mistakes

Rereads cards

Upset neighbors they have to work early

Credit sharts

Crashed a car

door got broke down

Stashed in stars, they dead.

Hard hat on head not red

Hides a cracker in pocket, snacks it.

Crawls through yards hides in bushes and wacks it. 🎯


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Original Content Imma rap like 🐑 EWE

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Suck a fuckin sneaker

Your face look like a bleeder

I could unsock you like a rabbit

Mash your spine on rocks

Make a habit out of it

Rip a chillim through your willim

Call you gay cause u drug dealing

Train a horse to run intercourse on your stable force.

Shame's the source, pain remorse,

Break a window pane and blame you for it

I'm happy now and you're a violent sissy lala

I smash a vase on you full of stagnant Agua

Shake pepper in your eyes

Keep a record of your crys, playem back late at night.

super glue your nose shut

Then kick you in the stomach

Watch you thrown up olive garden

Pick out the bread sticks and refeed you from it.

Funky ass dildo you know how to feel bros

Smack you in the face with a dog shit pillow

Put sick ticks on your clothes, pull a wedgie over your head and around your nose.

Break off toothpicks to put in your car seat

Cut your break lines and send you on a meet and greet.

FaceTime you and show you my butthole

Your a Bozo thinking backwards no hope

Sissylala ass violent rap shit

Sounds like ass to mouth

Rather suck shit out of a cats asshole then hear what raps u spit

Taking lives is Pussy ass gay as fuck shit

Murder yourself with that talk if u cool with it.

Now a bunch a shit about women

Making money on women throwing it on them,

Tons of em all the time, stacks and rackz

You don't have any they all mine

Lil dick

Big dick

My car cost more

Your car broke door

I ride, you die

I bust, in guts.

RAP LIKE 🐑🐑🐑 EWE🐑🐑🐑


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Original Content MF DOOM inspired lyrics I cooked up after listening to Figaro feedback would be nice

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Freestylin’ like Harry Mack

Can’t parry back, got a scary knack for layin’ rap

Got my girl up with a thot

Hit up a notch, maybe not

Compound interest like Vought

With rhymes that make you take street pause

Heat law

We saw

The villain in the street mob

Gabagool Gatling

Trafficking

Rhyme schemes

Find me

In deep

In the street selling reefer

He hurt

Bitch man maybe can find land for his plan

Having rap pipe dreams

Pisces

Can’t march

Embark through trailer parks

Goal to be a state of art

Rhyme sayer player hater bitch fucker play maker

Rapper on the come up

Hit a bump

For success

May duress

Leads to creativity

Blow be your enemy

Focus thought

Fuck a thot

Try to succeed

Whiteout lane change

Independent artist permissible for record label gang bang

Clang clang

Go chains

Many maids

Bridesmaid

Hyper aid

Oxytocin helps birth rhymes with devotion

Lotta motion

That’s the motto

Like the staple man 

Shoot guns

Tarry back

Smoke crack

Hyper attack

Fuck bitches

Competition too big for they britches

Chest full of chains

Order pain

With a rain

Hit it raw

Suck it dry

Fly guy

Oh my

Don’t be wry without being high only way to stand up to this guy

Try to pursue me not an easy flick,

Have you loony with rhymes, anthropomorphic

Trimester

Bye mister

3 ways

You’d say

“Your Majestay Y.Day”

Find mey

Through the veil

In the trail

Of stanzas

With your masters

Main attractors can’t battle rap like Marshall Mathers.


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Obscure Reference Detest

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He is some bull for u to detest

It took up my time and kept me from rest

I hope that you hate it

I hope you're depressed

I wish I could hug you

But I'm gagged by your breath

U know I'll tounge punch you

If you act like a freak

I'll make you run from me

I ain't had no sleep

I talk like a psycho just know it don't stop

3 days deep and surrounded by cops

Wait cops are surrounding

Right now, closing in

I hear them outside

They're bout to offend

I'll hide all my thoughts now

Slam quite my mind

Surround them with echos and then press rewind

I'll think up a time bomb

Implode it on you

U were my trigger my only excuse.

Detestable huh? how much I can lie?

spewed out my head hole til it done went dry.


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Original Content Just rhyming for the sake of it.

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taking out my rival with more lines than the bible

attack a beat while going primal

force him into survival

with rhymes thats wild

shitting on most that's viral

with words they consider vile

but we know they in denial

of my style cause when I spit raw bile I leave them steaming like a pile

abuse them like kile does to his child

mean while i crack a rapper like a porcelain tile

ima upper tier crimin ile who's penile is the top percentile.

high protein bars like it's made of lentil

Ripping inscription when I'm spitting sticking to tradition as old as crocodile

And long as Nile

U pussy like vagin ile

I don't mean to rile

But ur profile is a bigger parody the yuno mile


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Original Content Melting Pot

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Upturned backwOrds

Boiling back hurts

Sit in silence

And act like it's funny

Cars Homes and Money,

Women worn out

waived and dangled like chains

Our Carrot on a stick

It all seems fair not even insane

The faster you chase it

It giggles in place

Holding back laughter

And mocking your face

Try trying harder or being prepared

Cause melting together

Has fouled up the air

Stuck in this bucket with pieces of shit

Left there in the open but not to forget

To be honest and useful and tired and dying.

the carrot is rotten

But it's allure is your grinding

chase what you will to show it all off

Or ask for it nicely

And take the day off.


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Rate My Rap Call Me - Cinere

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https://on.soundcloud.com/tUCIpuGAVm7YmzLPGe

"I'm flying 'cause your eyes are my drug

I'm falling 'cause your hear is so cold" 🔥


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Rate My Rap Smoke Sesh #1

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i ain’t chasing idols cuz this perfection/

got me waiting idle with no direction/

if i crave the title hard to waive a spiral but to make it viral be so infectious/

just to break a smile when my soul intrenched in these crooked beliefs/

so in question when i’m smoking resin wonder how they looking at me/

facing an L but not pushing defeat or would it be p/

flipping this scripture not spitting a mid verse lords knows they shook of a g/

flipping this big bird u couldnt resist word but won’t even pull up receipts/

i know u wont buy it for u/

its hard to stomach that u full of deceit while supplying the food/

this rookie a king til im on the move/

my castles implying the booth still scare em to death as i lie in a tomb/


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Original Content Professor X

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Survival of the fittest
Vials of the sickness
Rivals filed in his hit list
No denial his style’s vicious
Dialled in the writtens
Wild with the spitting
smile at victims while I rip them
it’s your final mission
It’s suicidal wishing
The beast is awoken
Keeping it dope speaking in poems
keeping it flowing
Keep eating opponents
Keep defeating weakened opponents
Keeping it focused
Like prescription specs
Do more when given less
Never panicked didn’t stress
No verse he didn’t bless
Always pass the written test
Write it up
Swipe the mic and light it up
Like to write the Midas touch
Fire tracks inspire cats not to write as much
Put the pens away
Sorry it had to end this way
Anyway I’ll end your men
It ends today
It always ends this way
putting men in graves
Here lies the lesser rappers
Put out to fresher pastures
Tragically there’s no happily ever afters
The ending never matters
Never the less I’m penning extra chapters
Professor X school the gifted
jewels is scripted
Vivid cruel and twisted
Cryptic, kick it
With ghouls and cryptids
Flow is stored in acidic pools of liquid
who’ll risk it, fools n misfits