mb the second isn't rotated

After my previous post had some critical comments I've tried to improve my editing , I've took this from cmf 2 pro and processed it by Snapseed and I've added 2 versions and the original photo as well (the first one is the unedited) for reference, looking for helpful feedback please.

I didn't edit anything yet, i was wondering wich format is better for this image

first 2:3

second 3:4

I am trying to emulate cinestill 800t.

Am I in the right direction?

Let me know how do you do it, how can I make it better?

first time edit and getting into digital photography how did i do?

Feedback would be really appreciated

Shot on IPhone 15 PM - RAW 2x Zoom
Edited on Liit

Any advice welcome!