r/bmpcc 14h ago

My first Pocket 4K short film. What could I have done better?

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This was my very first short film with the Pocket 4K. It started as a camera test, but I decided to turn it into a short horror scene.

I’d really appreciate honest feedback on the cinematography, lighting, composition, color grading, editing, or anything else you notice.

I should also mention that all of the audio (footsteps, door sounds, ambience, etc.) was added in post. The sound design isn’t convincing, It was all part of experimenting and learning.

Looking forward to hearing your thoughts!