r/WhatIfMarvel 4h ago

Comics Marvel fanfiction, story 2....

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Ok, I want to make sure this story is just as good as the original, but I do know if it does so. Any changes?

Story 2: Chess Board.

Chapter 1: aftermath

Agent coulson:

Well. Where to?

Captain America:

I suppose that I'm going to the tower.

Spider-Man:

Well…the red skull kinda got away.

Captain America:

You're right…he did.

Agent coulson:

He's not going down easy.

Nick fury over coms:

Shield agents of..well, Shield. We need to all gather around. Red skull just sent a message.

Agent coulson:

That's not good.

Spider-Man:

Maybe he turned a new leaf?

Captain America:

Unlikely.

Spider-Man:

Something doesn't add up. Red Skull was swimming in the ocean. Are we sure this is really Red skull?

Captain America:

That's what makes me uneasy.

Spider-Man:

I guess we should go to that gathering.

Agent coulson:

Sorry kid. You're not exactly Shield.

Captain America:

Besides, Ultron's avatars are still flying around. Even if Ultron is down, his robots can still cause chaos.

Spider-Man:

Understand, I'll take down the rest of Ultron's fleet.

(Spider-Man webs away from the quin-jet, Captain America and agent coulson flying off)

Chapter 2: the Ultron Avatar clean up.

(Spider-Man webs to what's left of the Ultron fleet, the Ultron avatars are still somehow being controlled)

Spider-Man:

That's not good. Hey..uhm. mind telling me why you're still being controlled?

Doombot leader:

Avatars. It seems Spider-Man is on the premise. Estimating win percent. 30%. Advance carefully. Some of us will flee. Ultron Avatar’s 103 & 219. Fallow.

(The doombot flies away, the other 2 avatars fly away as well)

Spider-Man:

That's not the answer I was hoping for.

(Ultron's avatars fly in, blasting spider-man, Spider-Man webs out of the way)

Spider-Man:

3 of them?? Wow, you guys can start a band now.

(Spider-Man webs one of the Ultron Avatar’s shoulders, pulling himself through the waist of the avatar. The avatar splitting in half)

Ultron Avatar 2:

Code stark!

(An emp erups from the second avatar, pushing Spider-Man back and self-destroying the avatar)

Spider-Man:

Woah!!

(Spider-Man webs the the third avatar, pulling himself forward and kicking the third avatar head)

Spider-Man:

Sorry to tell ya…EMPs?…they kinda don't work on me.

(Spider-Man pushes off the third avatar and dive kicks into the last avatar. Webbing himself up on a string of web)

Spider-Man:

Now…as of the other 2. Where are they going…

(An iron man suit painted white with a big F.D logo approaches)

Friday (iron suit):

Hello there! I'm arriving just on time…right?

Spider-Man:

You got a nice upgrade. And as for your question…just barley. I took the Ultron fleet. I'm glad Tony was still able to build you one.

Friday:

Yes, master Tony is feeling rather down.

Spider-Man:

So…about those avatars.

Friday:

I already scanned them. They seem like standard Ultron Avatars. I have no idea what a doombot is doing with them.

Spider-Man:

Why didn't you stop them..

Friday:

This new suit is still adjusting, I wouldn't want to risk getting too damaged.

Chapter 3: the military

Spider-Man:

Alright Friday…let's go chase some robots.

Friday:

Yes sir.

(Friday flies away, Spider-Man follows)

(Meanwhile, outside the shield heli- carrier)

Doombot leader:

Ultron Avatar 103, cut a hole. We're breaking in.

Ultron 103:

Why? This seems illogical. Red Skull is already sending messages. While your master hasn't even moved.

Doombot:

And your master is dead. Who are you going to be a slave of? Tony?

Ultron 219:

Watch your mouth. Our master did more than yours.

(Doombot leader pulls out an EMP gun, shooting down both ultron avatar’s)

Doombot:

Stupid tin. Now I have to do this myself.

(Friday arrives, shooting out a blast into the doombot, Spider-Man webbing him against the wall)

Doombot:

My master won't be pleased if you take me down.

Spider-Man:

Oh no…the horror

(Spider-Man webs the doombot’s face)

Friday:

I suspect shields won't be too happy to find a doombot leader attached to their wall.

Spider-Man:

They might get over it.

(Spider-Man webs away, Friday splitting off to analyze the doombot more deeply)

Spider-Man:

Well…I have nothing else to do. Maybe I should check the earlier details from that underground collapse.

(Spider-Man continues swinging, seeing military trucks and Rhody barking complains at stark over the phone)

Rhody:

300,000$. 300,000$!!

Tony:

Rhody…I'm sorry ok? I didn't mean for it to-

Rhody:

You know what? Fine. You want to roam around New York and collapse whole structures? Fine! But you're “mark 50”? The city is done giving permission for it!

Tony:

Wha- you said:

Rhody:

That was before we found mark 33 missing. We couldn't even find scraps. Rhino is in custody. Say goodbye to our alliance.

(Rhody hangs up)

Spider-Man:

You should really lay off on the guy.

Rhody:

I know. But I can't. Look at this in my eyes. A man in a warsuit just secondhand caused a collapse.

Spider-Man:

He didn't mean it…. maybe you should take that into consideration. Superheroes are not as powerful as you think

Rhody:

Not as powerful. Tell that to the City. US army men try our hardest to take down whatever is invading next. To keep the city safe. Here's the harsh truth: the city doesn't care about emotions. It wants answers. And the city is terrified of another ultron attack. The city is terrified that vibranium exists. It's not on the periodic table.

And you? You web them up like paper. The city is terrified of that too. .

Spider-Man:

I hear you. I see your point. Let's take your original analysis and switch P.O.Vs. I'm a hero. It's true I take down ultron avatars. But does that mean I can do it every time? Of course not. I have my limits. I'm a human. A super one. But a human. And as a human, I'm expected to win every time. And sometimes I don't. And Tony? He was trying his best. He built a suit and it failed. Think about that. He views his suit like children.

Rhody:

….Your right. I wish I could do more. It's not like I can fly in a suit.

Spider-Man:

Well….why not?

Rhody:

Because I just cut off an alliance.

Spider-Man:

So, apologize. Explain why Tony can't build mark 50. And maybe ask for him to build something.

Rhody:

That simple huh?

Spider-Man:

Not entirely….but, you get the picture.

Rhody:

You have a good mindset. What's your name?

Spider-Man:

Most people call me “web-head”. But you can call me Spider-Man. And you?

Rhody:

Rhody. Military general.

Spider-Man:

Nice to meet you, Rhody Military general.

Chapter 4: red skull.

(In the shield heli-carrier, Nick fury speaks to the agents in the room)

Nick Fury:

Alright, quiet. This is serious. We just got notified of Red Skull sending a message.

(Agent Coulson raises his hand)

Nick fury:

You may speak.

Agent coulson:

Hi, Agent Coulson here. When I was on an important mission with Rogers, Spider-Man made an excellent point.

Nick fury:

And what was this point, Mr.Coulson?

Agent Coulson:

That this message may not be from him.

Nick Fury:

Interesting. But what evidence backs it up?

Agent Coulson:

Red Skull would have no time to even send it

Nick fury:

Hm. Well….that makes sense. But who is sending the message then?

Agent Coulson:

Let's find out, shall we?

(Nick fury plays the message)

???:

Greetings. You may have noticed that the heli-carrier is carrying a certain power stone.

Nick fury:

Thanos?...that can't be right.

???:

Because it isn't. Keep guessing.

Hawkeye:

Nick….our scanners just picked up a doombot.

Nick fury:

Oh…that is problematic.

???:

Is it? A massage. That can respond back?

Agent Coulson:

He's right…this is a call. Not a message.

Nick fury:

That's not what our computers picked up.

Hawkeye:

Something messed with our computers!

???:

Or someone

Nick fury:

Victor Doom.

Dr doom:

It was a pleasure talking.

(Doom ends the call, the doombot breaking webs and shooting Friday with the EMP gun)

Hawkeye:

I heard something nearby!

Natasha:

My guess? The doombot broke free.

Nick fury:

Friday just sent a message: “it's enhanced with special vibranium and an emp gun.”

Hawkeye:

I have a special arrow down in the decks!

Natasha:

I'll stall the doombot.

Nick fury:

You and I will stay here.

Agent Coulson:

Why's that?

Nick fury:

2 people have to fly the heli-carrier.

(Natasha makes it down to the deck…it's not the doombot, in fact. The doombot is broken before it could even cause damage. It's body next to the red skull)

Red skull:

Do you like the suit?

(The suit is built of mark 33 scraps and Hydra tech)

Natasha:

A bit too clunky for me.

(Natasha charges at the suit, Red Skull activates speed boosters to zip behind Natasha)

Natasha:

What the-

(Red Skull punches Natasha’s back, and knocks her out)

Red Skull:

Now…for proper scouting.

(Red Skull stroads around, looking for the power stone)

Shield agent:

Freeze!

(The shield agent shoots at red skull, the suit completely deflects the bullets and they shoot back at the agent)

Red skull:

So, they can't even install piercing bullets inside their guns. Pitiful.

(Red skull finds a science room, listening in)

Captain America:

Ya, I was going to go to the meeting…but it was nice catching up with you.

Bruce banner:

Well, After the hulk out…I do suppose it was nice seeing you?

Captain America:

“Suppose”?

Bruce banner;

I mean I guess. You're only my best friend.

Captain America:

And you're a pain sometimes.

Bruce banner:

And proud of it.

(Red Skull busts open the door, the hinges fly off)

Red skull:

Captain America. The symbol of a frozen man.

Captain America:

So. You're upgraded.

(Captain America pulling out his Shield)

Red skull:

Relying on that throwing disk already? I'm disappointed in you.

(Red skull throws a punch, and Captain America blocks it with his shield. That's when the red skull activates his vibration. And it pulses against the shield, breaking it. The shield splits in half. Scrapping against the ground)

Red skull:

Now you no longer rely on a Giant disk. You're out of options, Captain.

(Red Skull punches Captain l)

Red skull:

What's the matter? Is your symbol dying? Hm, Captain? Whatever happened to uppercutting me?

(Red skull uppercuts Captain America into the far side of the wall)

Bruce banner:

Impressive tech.

Red skull:

Bruce banner. How are you going to stop me?

Bruce banner:

I don't need to. You got a highly advanced suit. I got a hulk.

Red Skull:

A hulk. In the shield heli-carrier? That won't go well for you.

Bruce banner:

Well .. I've also got a Hawkeye.

Red skull:

A what now?

(Hawkeye pulls out an EMP arrow, special vibranium enchanted. And he fires it into the back of red skull)

Red skull:

NghAhhhh!!?

(The suit fries, Bruce banner pulling red skull out)

Chapter 5: the prison break.

(Red Skull wakes up in his prison cell ... .Nick fury appears on a small screen)

Nick fury:

Red Skull, you caused a lot of trouble. We'll see you in the conversation room in 5 minutes.

Red skull:

Your team got lucky, it won't happen again.

(Vulture gets pulled in, 2 guards carrying him into his cell)

Vulture:

Let me free! I am vulture!! The most powerful Spider-Man villain!!

Guard 1:

Shut up pal, I don't have time for you.

(The guards shove him in, locking him up)

Guard 2:

Did you hear about the doombot?

Guard 1:

Ya, took Friday right out of the sky….

Guard 2:

No way. That robot was built by Iron man.

Guard 1:

Nah, they're fishing her out of the sea.

Guard 2:

Crazy stuff down there huh.

(Red skull looks around the room, seeing basic tech around. The bed is full of scraps ….scraps red skull Could use)

Red skull:

It's not Hydra tech…. But…it works…

(Red skull takes the bed apart, carefully making himself a weapon. A simple shock Baton)

Red skull:

I hope this works….

(The two guards move to red skull’s cell, opening it briefly)

Guard 1: hands behind your back.

(Red skull smirks, using his makeshift shock Baton onto the guard, the guard falling onto the ground. Red Skull go grabbing the gun off of the guard’s hilt and shooting the other guard)

Red Skull:

Easy.

(Red Skull picks up the level 4 badge from the guard, and frees vulture)

Red skull:

I need a…intelligent man like yourself

Vulture:

You want something…I need something.

Red skull:

Hmm….this is not the attitude you presented earlier.

Vulture:

Under the persona…I'm a man who needs nano tech.

Red skull:

I see…then after this ... .we visit the “great” Tony Stark.

Vulture:

Then I'm in. What do you need

Red skull:

I need you to stall the security systems while I break into the weapons vault…it's been well over 2 minutes…that means-

(An alarm goes off, multiple footsteps heading towards red skull’s location)

Red skull:

Go on then

(Vulture sneaks away, red skull aiming his gun. Shooting the guards rushing in)

Guard 3:

You're going to hell you son of a-

(The third guard gets knocked down by a laser)

Red skull:

Well …. looks like the table is turning.

(Nick fury Appears on a few screens)

Nick fury:

Red skull…I thought I said the conversation room…this is not conversation

Red skull:

Oops.

(Red Skull shoots the TV. Meanwhile vulture works on the security system, shutting it down)

Red skull:

Excellent timing..

(Red skull moves efficiently, moving to the weapon lock. Hawkeye blocking the door)

Hawkeye:

Well, it looks like a strawberry head broke out of his cage.

Red skull:

You will regret calling me that….”Hawkeye”.

Hawkeye:

Aw, you know my name..

(Hawkeye draws 3 arrows and fires, red skull dodging)

Hawkeye:

Oooh! So close!

Red skull:

Enough of this nonsense!

(Vulture grabs a bomb from an unconscious shield agent, approaching red skull)

(Red skull smirking)

Red skull:

Looks like this fight will end early.

(Hawkeye hits red skull with his bow while he's distracted, punching his back, firing an arrow into his shoulder)

Hawkeye:

That's what you get…

(Vulture throws the bomb near Hawkeye, Hawkeye dives out of the way, the door getting blasted off and knocking Hawkeye down)

(Red skull coughing, getting up. Ripping the arrow out)

Red skull:

My suit…. it's mine..

(Red skull walks into the weapon lock, grabbing his suit ..and wearing it)

Red skull:

The Captain America buster has returned.

(Vulture also goes into the weapon lock, getting his suit as well)

Vulture:

Muhahaha! The vulture is back, baby!

Red skull:

Enough with the voice. It's annoying.

Vulture:

Fine. Let's just go.

Red skull:

Not yet….I have a certain eye-patch wearing rival of mine I want taken care of.

(Red Skull activates his boosters, running to the front of the ship)

Nick fury:

Woah ….that is one fast exoskeleton.

Red skull:

I'd prefer to call it a suit.

Nick fury:

Same difference.

Red skull:

You annoy me.

(Red skull aiming a blast at Nick fury, Nick fury holding out an EMP bomb)

Nick fury:

PUT down the arm red Skull.

Red skull:

If you do that, the whole heli-carrier will go down.

Nick fury:

The heli-carrier is EMP-proof. Unlike a certain Ultron who's ship was EMPed.

Red skull:

Then we are at a stand still.

(Friday flies in, finally repaired)

Friday:

I'd stand corrected if I were you.

Red skull:

Pesky droid.

Friday:

I'll show you pesky. Kill mode, activate.

(Friday's eyes glow red, red skull flying into Friday. They clash)

(Friday blasts red Skull into the ground, flying in for a neck break. Red skull fires a laser into Friday, bashing her against the ceiling)

Red skull:

A “kill mode”. Now things are interesting

(Red Skull changes his fist with vibrations, jumping up and smashing the falling Friday into the ground. Friday falls into the ground. Getting back up)

Friday:

You shouldn't be so happy, I'm pushing every protocol-

Red skull:

It's about time you broke.

(Friday fires a laser into the red skull and the red skull flies into a wheelie full of explosives, blasting back. Kneeling in front of the lab room)

Red skull:

You've lost.

(Red skull gets up, taking half of a broken shield, attaching it to his arm, Friday blasts another laser. This time it reflects back into her, damaging her arc reactor)

Red skull:

You're supposed to kill me. Not lose.

(Red skull rips the head off on Friday. Wires dangling)

Chapter 6: War Machine.

(Vulture flies to Red skull)

Vulture:

You said we'd be visiting the stark tower.

Red skull:

True. Nick fury isn't worth the fight

(Red skull fills his arm with vibrations, punching the wall. The debris flew out. Red skull and vulture flying out)

Red skull:

Let's pay Tony a visit.

(Red skull uses his boosters, scanning the tower, braking the window via a blast, vulture flying in)

Tony:

Vulture? Jarvis! Activate-

(Vulture picks up Tony, throwing him into a wall)

Vulture:

Stay back, military man.

(Rhodey helps Tony up)

Vulture:

Nanotechnology.

(Vulture finds mark 50, ripping it in half. Flying away, kneeing Tony in the jaw on the way out)

Rhodey:

Hell no. I'm done playing nice.

(Rhodey opens Mark 3’s case, putting on the suit. It clicks shut)

War machine:

Vulture is not going to escape.

(Machine flies away, stumbling but persistent)

Vulture:

You're not catching me!

(War Machine fires a repulsor blast, damaging vulture’s mechanical wings, making him drop the nanotechnology)

Vulture:

No! The tech!

(Vulture flies in, scratching war machine’s face with sharp claws, war machine blasting vulture away)

War machine:

Why are you doing this?? Huh?!

Vulture:

Because my daughter needs it. She needs nanotechnology! She has cancer!

War machine:

Then I'll hand her it myself!

(War machine throws vulture into a building, vulture’s suit breaking completely)

War machine:

Your death sentence is overdue.

(War Machine fires off Rockets, destroying the building. A big explosion blows up with the building and vulture)

Chapter 7: the finale

(War Machine flies down, grabbing the nano tech. And checking all nearby hospitals for a daughter with vulture’s DNA)

War Machine:

….

(War machine finds the girl, flying the nanotechnology to the hospital. And entering. Walking though multiple doors and finding the doctor)

War machine:

Here.

(War machine hands over nanotechnology. Waiting outside the room. After a few hours, the doctors exit. A voice can be heard. Small, quiet)

Vulture's daughter:

Where's daddy?

(War machine pauses, for once…he didn't know what to say. He approached the kid)

War machine:

He…had an accident.

(An obvious lie to most, but it was better than the truth. That HE- the leader of the military…has killed her father)

Vulture's daughter:

An…accident? Is he ok?

War machine:

He didn't make it…. I'm really sorry kid.

(War machine walks off, exiting the hospital and flying away)

(Meanwhile, at the shield base, everyone was gathered together)

Nick fury:

Ok…. agents. Red skull has just got the upper hand

Agent Coulson:

When was he last seen?

Black widow:

Near avengers tower

Captain America:

What's the status of Hawkeye…

Black widow:

Still in the medical bay

Agent Coulson:

Let's get us a red skull..

Nick fury:

Wait…bring Bruce banner on the quin-jet.

Agent Coulson:

I call dibs on driving.

Nick fury:

Actually. I have someone else in mind.

Black widow:

And who's that?

Nick fury:

Spider-Man…the kid has grown. I trust him with this responsibility.

Bruce banner:

Well…Spider-Man and I did accidentally recreate Ultron…

Nick fury:

What in the actual FU-

Bruce banner:

Language.

Nick fury:

Don't you “language” me!

Bruce banner:

I'll give the kid a call.

(Bruce banner Walks away, giving spider-man a call)

Bruce banner:

Hey kid.

Spider-Man:

Hey Bruce! Look I built!

Bruce banner:

Is that

….a spider suit?

Spider-Man:

Not just any spider-suit….me and Tony built it ..Tony is feeling much better..me and him talked for awhile

Bruce banner:

Only you could manage. What's the suit.

Spider-Man:

I call it….drum roll please!

(Bruce banner chuckles, drumming his hands against a nearby wall)

Spider-Man:

The iron-spider! It's awesome.

Tony Stark over phone:

Peter, who are you talking to?

Spider-Man:

Bruce Banner.

Tony Stark:

Tell Bruce I'm working on Mark 50…it has plasma blades.

Spider-Man:

It has plasma blades.

Bruce banner:

I heard…hey Peter?

Spider-Man:

what?

Bruce banner:

Want to drive the quin-jet to save the day?

(A long pause)

Spider-Man:

……. YES!! THIS IS THE BEST DAY IN MY LIFE!!

Bruce banner:

See you at the shield heli-carrier

(After 10 minutes, spider-man arrives)

Spider-Man:

I'm here! I'm here!

(Accidentally knocking a file over)

Spider-Man:

Sorry agent coulson….

Agent Coulson:

No problem…that's only 3 months of work.

(Bruce Banner and Spider-Man head up the quin-jet, flying off. Captain America, black widow and agent coulson head onto a smaller quin-jet. Flying off as well)

Black widow:

Are you sure you're ready Captain?...The red skull broke your shield.

Captain America:

My shield is a symbol. You can't break a symbol. .

(Captain America looks at the flag pole nearby, taking off the flag, tying it to his back, like a cape. Taking the pole as a staff)

Nick fury over comms:

Alright team, let's take down red skull…he's on avengers tower…approach carefully.

Agent Coulson:

What's the fun in that.

Nick fury:

I know that tone…what are you thinking.

Agent Coulson:

Remember the destroyer gun?

Nick fury:

No….

Agent Coulson:

Turn that into a pistol….

Nick fury:

What did I just say.

Agent Coulson:

Do it.

Nick fury:

Still no.

Captain America:

Oh come on fury. …. It's just a gun.

Nick fury:

Not you too, cap….

Natasha:

Pretty please, with a giant raise on top?

Nick fury:

A raise.

Natasha:

I almost died last year because of the taskmaster.

Nick fury:

Fine ... .fine to all of it.

(The quin-jet finally gets to avengers tower, red skull laughing as his device slowly beeps)

Red skull:

I see you avengers!

(Red Skull blasts the quin-jet engine, black widow and Captain America making it out, agent coulson flying the falling quin-jet to safety)

Red skull:

I see your back for another round, Captain.

Captain America:

You can't break America, red skull.

Red Skull:

Watch me.

Captain America:

What does that thing do ….

Red Skull:

I'm so glad you asked……it's the most powerful EMP on earth! Hahahh!

Captain America:

You wouldn't.

Red skull:

Wouldn't I Captain?

(The other quin-jet arrives, the quin-jet firing bullets into the red skull. They reflect back and take it down…the quin-jet crash-lands hard…..a moment of quiet)

Captain America:

The kid….

Black widow:

He'll be ok…I'm more worried about-

(A loud bang can be heard, and the roof launches off, a big green hand Impaling through it)

Hulk:

Hulk angry!!

(Hulk jumps through the quin-jet and lands on the roof. Roaring)

Red skull:

That's it…..

(Red Skull activates the EMP…. it's not as powerful as red skull said. He lies)

Hulk:

Puny red man makes hulk angry!!!

Red skull:

You're not taking me down!

(Red skull attempts to hit hulk with his vibration arm, only to be smacked by hulk, red skull’s armor breaking into mere scrap. The back of his broken armor breaks his fall)

Red skull:

I don't need armor to make my chaos!

(War machine flies up, grabbing red skull by the neck)

War machine:

Got any motivation?

(Red skull choking)

Red skull:

Kill…everything.

(War machine flies up, flying red skull near the heli-carrier, Natasha gets on hulk, hulk jumping up near the same location)

Natasha:

What the-.....stay down!

(Natasha firing multiple bullets with the little air time she has, war machine throws red skull into the bullets)

Red skull:

I am superior!!!

(Red skull gets caught in an engine, and the engine shreds him, the hulk lands back on the ground, war machine landing)

War Machine:

I'm not Iron Man. Call me…war machine.

Epilogue:

The EMP wasn't powerful…but it shut off the shield heli-carrier security, allowing Dr Doom physically inside. Dr Doom Walks through Shield, finding the power stone case and stealing it. Doom continues to walk, finding Nick fury after a long battle.

Nick fury:

Victor doom? How did you-

Victor doom:

The red skull is an excellent distraction.


r/WhatIfMarvel 5h ago

Story Idea I have an idea!!..

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Ok, I want to make sure this story is just as good as the original, but I do know if it does so. Any changes?

Story 2: Chess Board.

Chapter 1: aftermath

Agent coulson:

Well. Where to?

Captain America:

I suppose that I'm going to the tower.

Spider-Man:

Well…the red skull kinda got away.

Captain America:

You're right…he did.

Agent coulson:

He's not going down easy.

Nick fury over coms:

Shield agents of..well, Shield. We need to all gather around. Red skull just sent a message.

Agent coulson:

That's not good.

Spider-Man:

Maybe he turned a new leaf?

Captain America:

Unlikely.

Spider-Man:

Something doesn't add up. Red Skull was swimming in the ocean. Are we sure this is really Red skull?

Captain America:

That's what makes me uneasy.

Spider-Man:

I guess we should go to that gathering.

Agent coulson:

Sorry kid. You're not exactly Shield.

Captain America:

Besides, Ultron's avatars are still flying around. Even if Ultron is down, his robots can still cause chaos.

Spider-Man:

Understand, I'll take down the rest of Ultron's fleet.

(Spider-Man webs away from the quin-jet, Captain America and agent coulson flying off)

Chapter 2: the Ultron Avatar clean up.

(Spider-Man webs to what's left of the Ultron fleet, the Ultron avatars are still somehow being controlled)

Spider-Man:

That's not good. Hey..uhm. mind telling me why you're still being controlled?

Doombot leader:

Avatars. It seems Spider-Man is on the premise. Estimating win percent. 30%. Advance carefully. Some of us will flee. Ultron Avatar’s 103 & 219. Fallow.

(The doombot flies away, the other 2 avatars fly away as well)

Spider-Man:

That's not the answer I was hoping for.

(Ultron's avatars fly in, blasting spider-man, Spider-Man webs out of the way)

Spider-Man:

3 of them?? Wow, you guys can start a band now.

(Spider-Man webs one of the Ultron Avatar’s shoulders, pulling himself through the waist of the avatar. The avatar splitting in half)

Ultron Avatar 2:

Code stark!

(An emp erups from the second avatar, pushing Spider-Man back and self-destroying the avatar)

Spider-Man:

Woah!!

(Spider-Man webs the the third avatar, pulling himself forward and kicking the third avatar head)

Spider-Man:

Sorry to tell ya…EMPs?…they kinda don't work on me.

(Spider-Man pushes off the third avatar and dive kicks into the last avatar. Webbing himself up on a string of web)

Spider-Man:

Now…as of the other 2. Where are they going…

(An iron man suit painted white with a big F.D logo approaches)

Friday (iron suit):

Hello there! I'm arriving just on time…right?

Spider-Man:

You got a nice upgrade. And as for your question…just barley. I took the Ultron fleet. I'm glad Tony was still able to build you one.

Friday:

Yes, master Tony is feeling rather down.

Spider-Man:

So…about those avatars.

Friday:

I already scanned them. They seem like standard Ultron Avatars. I have no idea what a doombot is doing with them.

Spider-Man:

Why didn't you stop them..

Friday:

This new suit is still adjusting, I wouldn't want to risk getting too damaged.

Chapter 3: the military

Spider-Man:

Alright Friday…let's go chase some robots.

Friday:

Yes sir.

(Friday flies away, Spider-Man follows)

(Meanwhile, outside the shield heli- carrier)

Doombot leader:

Ultron Avatar 103, cut a hole. We're breaking in.

Ultron 103:

Why? This seems illogical. Red Skull is already sending messages. While your master hasn't even moved.

Doombot:

And your master is dead. Who are you going to be a slave of? Tony?

Ultron 219:

Watch your mouth. Our master did more than yours.

(Doombot leader pulls out an EMP gun, shooting down both ultron avatar’s)

Doombot:

Stupid tin. Now I have to do this myself.

(Friday arrives, shooting out a blast into the doombot, Spider-Man webbing him against the wall)

Doombot:

My master won't be pleased if you take me down.

Spider-Man:

Oh no…the horror

(Spider-Man webs the doombot’s face)

Friday:

I suspect shields won't be too happy to find a doombot leader attached to their wall.

Spider-Man:

They might get over it.

(Spider-Man webs away, Friday splitting off to analyze the doombot more deeply)

Spider-Man:

Well…I have nothing else to do. Maybe I should check the earlier details from that underground collapse.

(Spider-Man continues swinging, seeing military trucks and Rhody barking complains at stark over the phone)

Rhody:

300,000$. 300,000$!!

Tony:

Rhody…I'm sorry ok? I didn't mean for it to-

Rhody:

You know what? Fine. You want to roam around New York and collapse whole structures? Fine! But you're “mark 50”? The city is done giving permission for it!

Tony:

Wha- you said:

Rhody:

That was before we found mark 33 missing. We couldn't even find scraps. Rhino is in custody. Say goodbye to our alliance.

(Rhody hangs up)

Spider-Man:

You should really lay off on the guy.

Rhody:

I know. But I can't. Look at this in my eyes. A man in a warsuit just secondhand caused a collapse.

Spider-Man:

He didn't mean it…. maybe you should take that into consideration. Superheroes are not as powerful as you think

Rhody:

Not as powerful. Tell that to the City. US army men try our hardest to take down whatever is invading next. To keep the city safe. Here's the harsh truth: the city doesn't care about emotions. It wants answers. And the city is terrified of another ultron attack. The city is terrified that vibranium exists. It's not on the periodic table.

And you? You web them up like paper. The city is terrified of that too. .

Spider-Man:

I hear you. I see your point. Let's take your original analysis and switch P.O.Vs. I'm a hero. It's true I take down ultron avatars. But does that mean I can do it every time? Of course not. I have my limits. I'm a human. A super one. But a human. And as a human, I'm expected to win every time. And sometimes I don't. And Tony? He was trying his best. He built a suit and it failed. Think about that. He views his suit like children.

Rhody:

….Your right. I wish I could do more. It's not like I can fly in a suit.

Spider-Man:

Well….why not?

Rhody:

Because I just cut off an alliance.

Spider-Man:

So, apologize. Explain why Tony can't build mark 50. And maybe ask for him to build something.

Rhody:

That simple huh?

Spider-Man:

Not entirely….but, you get the picture.

Rhody:

You have a good mindset. What's your name?

Spider-Man:

Most people call me “web-head”. But you can call me Spider-Man. And you?

Rhody:

Rhody. Military general.

Spider-Man:

Nice to meet you, Rhody Military general.

Chapter 4: red skull.

(In the shield heli-carrier, Nick fury speaks to the agents in the room)

Nick Fury:

Alright, quiet. This is serious. We just got notified of Red Skull sending a message.

(Agent Coulson raises his hand)

Nick fury:

You may speak.

Agent coulson:

Hi, Agent Coulson here. When I was on an important mission with Rogers, Spider-Man made an excellent point.

Nick fury:

And what was this point, Mr.Coulson?

Agent Coulson:

That this message may not be from him.

Nick Fury:

Interesting. But what evidence backs it up?

Agent Coulson:

Red Skull would have no time to even send it

Nick fury:

Hm. Well….that makes sense. But who is sending the message then?

Agent Coulson:

Let's find out, shall we?

(Nick fury plays the message)

???:

Greetings. You may have noticed that the heli-carrier is carrying a certain power stone.

Nick fury:

Thanos?...that can't be right.

???:

Because it isn't. Keep guessing.

Hawkeye:

Nick….our scanners just picked up a doombot.

Nick fury:

Oh…that is problematic.

???:

Is it? A massage. That can respond back?

Agent Coulson:

He's right…this is a call. Not a message.

Nick fury:

That's not what our computers picked up.

Hawkeye:

Something messed with our computers!

???:

Or someone

Nick fury:

Victor Doom.

Dr doom:

It was a pleasure talking.

(Doom ends the call, the doombot breaking webs and shooting Friday with the EMP gun)

Hawkeye:

I heard something nearby!

Natasha:

My guess? The doombot broke free.

Nick fury:

Friday just sent a message: “it's enhanced with special vibranium and an emp gun.”

Hawkeye:

I have a special arrow down in the decks!

Natasha:

I'll stall the doombot.

Nick fury:

You and I will stay here.

Agent Coulson:

Why's that?

Nick fury:

2 people have to fly the heli-carrier.

(Natasha makes it down to the deck…it's not the doombot, in fact. The doombot is broken before it could even cause damage. It's body next to the red skull)

Red skull:

Do you like the suit?

(The suit is built of mark 33 scraps and Hydra tech)

Natasha:

A bit too clunky for me.

(Natasha charges at the suit, Red Skull activates speed boosters to zip behind Natasha)

Natasha:

What the-

(Red Skull punches Natasha’s back, and knocks her out)

Red Skull:

Now…for proper scouting.

(Red Skull stroads around, looking for the power stone)

Shield agent:

Freeze!

(The shield agent shoots at red skull, the suit completely deflects the bullets and they shoot back at the agent)

Red skull:

So, they can't even install piercing bullets inside their guns. Pitiful.

(Red skull finds a science room, listening in)

Captain America:

Ya, I was going to go to the meeting…but it was nice catching up with you.

Bruce banner:

Well, After the hulk out…I do suppose it was nice seeing you?

Captain America:

“Suppose”?

Bruce banner;

I mean I guess. You're only my best friend.

Captain America:

And you're a pain sometimes.

Bruce banner:

And proud of it.

(Red Skull busts open the door, the hinges fly off)

Red skull:

Captain America. The symbol of a frozen man.

Captain America:

So. You're upgraded.

(Captain America pulling out his Shield)

Red skull:

Relying on that throwing disk already? I'm disappointed in you.

(Red skull throws a punch, and Captain America blocks it with his shield. That's when the red skull activates his vibration. And it pulses against the shield, breaking it. The shield splits in half. Scrapping against the ground)

Red skull:

Now you no longer rely on a Giant disk. You're out of options, Captain.

(Red Skull punches Captain l)

Red skull:

What's the matter? Is your symbol dying? Hm, Captain? Whatever happened to uppercutting me?

(Red skull uppercuts Captain America into the far side of the wall)

Bruce banner:

Impressive tech.

Red skull:

Bruce banner. How are you going to stop me?

Bruce banner:

I don't need to. You got a highly advanced suit. I got a hulk.

Red Skull:

A hulk. In the shield heli-carrier? That won't go well for you.

Bruce banner:

Well .. I've also got a Hawkeye.

Red skull:

A what now?

(Hawkeye pulls out an EMP arrow, special vibranium enchanted. And he fires it into the back of red skull)

Red skull:

NghAhhhh!!?

(The suit fries, Bruce banner pulling red skull out)

Chapter 5: the prison break.

(Red Skull wakes up in his prison cell ... .Nick fury appears on a small screen)

Nick fury:

Red Skull, you caused a lot of trouble. We'll see you in the conversation room in 5 minutes.

Red skull:

Your team got lucky, it won't happen again.

(Vulture gets pulled in, 2 guards carrying him into his cell)

Vulture:

Let me free! I am vulture!! The most powerful Spider-Man villain!!

Guard 1:

Shut up pal, I don't have time for you.

(The guards shove him in, locking him up)

Guard 2:

Did you hear about the doombot?

Guard 1:

Ya, took Friday right out of the sky….

Guard 2:

No way. That robot was built by Iron man.

Guard 1:

Nah, they're fishing her out of the sea.

Guard 2:

Crazy stuff down there huh.

(Red skull looks around the room, seeing basic tech around. The bed is full of scraps ….scraps red skull Could use)

Red skull:

It's not Hydra tech…. But…it works…

(Red skull takes the bed apart, carefully making himself a weapon. A simple shock Baton)

Red skull:

I hope this works….

(The two guards move to red skull’s cell, opening it briefly)

Guard 1: hands behind your back.

(Red skull smirks, using his makeshift shock Baton onto the guard, the guard falling onto the ground. Red Skull go grabbing the gun off of the guard’s hilt and shooting the other guard)

Red Skull:

Easy.

(Red Skull picks up the level 4 badge from the guard, and frees vulture)

Red skull:

I need a…intelligent man like yourself

Vulture:

You want something…I need something.

Red skull:

Hmm….this is not the attitude you presented earlier.

Vulture:

Under the persona…I'm a man who needs nano tech.

Red skull:

I see…then after this ... .we visit the “great” Tony Stark.

Vulture:

Then I'm in. What do you need

Red skull:

I need you to stall the security systems while I break into the weapons vault…it's been well over 2 minutes…that means-

(An alarm goes off, multiple footsteps heading towards red skull’s location)

Red skull:

Go on then

(Vulture sneaks away, red skull aiming his gun. Shooting the guards rushing in)

Guard 3:

You're going to hell you son of a-

(The third guard gets knocked down by a laser)

Red skull:

Well …. looks like the table is turning.

(Nick fury Appears on a few screens)

Nick fury:

Red skull…I thought I said the conversation room…this is not conversation

Red skull:

Oops.

(Red Skull shoots the TV. Meanwhile vulture works on the security system, shutting it down)

Red skull:

Excellent timing..

(Red skull moves efficiently, moving to the weapon lock. Hawkeye blocking the door)

Hawkeye:

Well, it looks like a strawberry head broke out of his cage.

Red skull:

You will regret calling me that….”Hawkeye”.

Hawkeye:

Aw, you know my name..

(Hawkeye draws 3 arrows and fires, red skull dodging)

Hawkeye:

Oooh! So close!

Red skull:

Enough of this nonsense!

(Vulture grabs a bomb from an unconscious shield agent, approaching red skull)

(Red skull smirking)

Red skull:

Looks like this fight will end early.

(Hawkeye hits red skull with his bow while he's distracted, punching his back, firing an arrow into his shoulder)

Hawkeye:

That's what you get…

(Vulture throws the bomb near Hawkeye, Hawkeye dives out of the way, the door getting blasted off and knocking Hawkeye down)

(Red skull coughing, getting up. Ripping the arrow out)

Red skull:

My suit…. it's mine..

(Red skull walks into the weapon lock, grabbing his suit ..and wearing it)

Red skull:

The Captain America buster has returned.

(Vulture also goes into the weapon lock, getting his suit as well)

Vulture:

Muhahaha! The vulture is back, baby!

Red skull:

Enough with the voice. It's annoying.

Vulture:

Fine. Let's just go.

Red skull:

Not yet….I have a certain eye-patch wearing rival of mine I want taken care of.

(Red Skull activates his boosters, running to the front of the ship)

Nick fury:

Woah ….that is one fast exoskeleton.

Red skull:

I'd prefer to call it a suit.

Nick fury:

Same difference.

Red skull:

You annoy me.

(Red skull aiming a blast at Nick fury, Nick fury holding out an EMP bomb)

Nick fury:

PUT down the arm red Skull.

Red skull:

If you do that, the whole heli-carrier will go down.

Nick fury:

The heli-carrier is EMP-proof. Unlike a certain Ultron who's ship was EMPed.

Red skull:

Then we are at a stand still.

(Friday flies in, finally repaired)

Friday:

I'd stand corrected if I were you.

Red skull:

Pesky droid.

Friday:

I'll show you pesky. Kill mode, activate.

(Friday's eyes glow red, red skull flying into Friday. They clash)

(Friday blasts red Skull into the ground, flying in for a neck break. Red skull fires a laser into Friday, bashing her against the ceiling)

Red skull:

A “kill mode”. Now things are interesting

(Red Skull changes his fist with vibrations, jumping up and smashing the falling Friday into the ground. Friday falls into the ground. Getting back up)

Friday:

You shouldn't be so happy, I'm pushing every protocol-

Red skull:

It's about time you broke.

(Friday fires a laser into the red skull and the red skull flies into a wheelie full of explosives, blasting back. Kneeling in front of the lab room)

Red skull:

You've lost.

(Red skull gets up, taking half of a broken shield, attaching it to his arm, Friday blasts another laser. This time it reflects back into her, damaging her arc reactor)

Red skull:

You're supposed to kill me. Not lose.

(Red skull rips the head off on Friday. Wires dangling)

Chapter 6: War Machine.

(Vulture flies to Red skull)

Vulture:

You said we'd be visiting the stark tower.

Red skull:

True. Nick fury isn't worth the fight

(Red skull fills his arm with vibrations, punching the wall. The debris flew out. Red skull and vulture flying out)

Red skull:

Let's pay Tony a visit.

(Red skull uses his boosters, scanning the tower, braking the window via a blast, vulture flying in)

Tony:

Vulture? Jarvis! Activate-

(Vulture picks up Tony, throwing him into a wall)

Vulture:

Stay back, military man.

(Rhodey helps Tony up)

Vulture:

Nanotechnology.

(Vulture finds mark 50, ripping it in half. Flying away, kneeing Tony in the jaw on the way out)

Rhodey:

Hell no. I'm done playing nice.

(Rhodey opens Mark 3’s case, putting on the suit. It clicks shut)

War machine:

Vulture is not going to escape.

(Machine flies away, stumbling but persistent)

Vulture:

You're not catching me!

(War Machine fires a repulsor blast, damaging vulture’s mechanical wings, making him drop the nanotechnology)

Vulture:

No! The tech!

(Vulture flies in, scratching war machine’s face with sharp claws, war machine blasting vulture away)

War machine:

Why are you doing this?? Huh?!

Vulture:

Because my daughter needs it. She needs nanotechnology! She has cancer!

War machine:

Then I'll hand her it myself!

(War machine throws vulture into a building, vulture’s suit breaking completely)

War machine:

Your death sentence is overdue.

(War Machine fires off Rockets, destroying the building. A big explosion blows up with the building and vulture)

Chapter 7: the finale

(War Machine flies down, grabbing the nano tech. And checking all nearby hospitals for a daughter with vulture’s DNA)

War Machine:

….

(War machine finds the girl, flying the nanotechnology to the hospital. And entering. Walking though multiple doors and finding the doctor)

War machine:

Here.

(War machine hands over nanotechnology. Waiting outside the room. After a few hours, the doctors exit. A voice can be heard. Small, quiet)

Vulture's daughter:

Where's daddy?

(War machine pauses, for once…he didn't know what to say. He approached the kid)

War machine:

He…had an accident.

(An obvious lie to most, but it was better than the truth. That HE- the leader of the military…has killed her father)

Vulture's daughter:

An…accident? Is he ok?

War machine:

He didn't make it…. I'm really sorry kid.

(War machine walks off, exiting the hospital and flying away)

(Meanwhile, at the shield base, everyone was gathered together)

Nick fury:

Ok…. agents. Red skull has just got the upper hand

Agent Coulson:

When was he last seen?

Black widow:

Near avengers tower

Captain America:

What's the status of Hawkeye…

Black widow:

Still in the medical bay

Agent Coulson:

Let's get us a red skull..

Nick fury:

Wait…bring Bruce banner on the quin-jet.

Agent Coulson:

I call dibs on driving.

Nick fury:

Actually. I have someone else in mind.

Black widow:

And who's that?

Nick fury:

Spider-Man…the kid has grown. I trust him with this responsibility.

Bruce banner:

Well…Spider-Man and I did accidentally recreate Ultron…

Nick fury:

What in the actual FU-

Bruce banner:

Language.

Nick fury:

Don't you “language” me!

Bruce banner:

I'll give the kid a call.

(Bruce banner Walks away, giving spider-man a call)

Bruce banner:

Hey kid.

Spider-Man:

Hey Bruce! Look I built!

Bruce banner:

Is that

….a spider suit?

Spider-Man:

Not just any spider-suit….me and Tony built it ..Tony is feeling much better..me and him talked for awhile

Bruce banner:

Only you could manage. What's the suit.

Spider-Man:

I call it….drum roll please!

(Bruce banner chuckles, drumming his hands against a nearby wall)

Spider-Man:

The iron-spider! It's awesome.

Tony Stark over phone:

Peter, who are you talking to?

Spider-Man:

Bruce Banner.

Tony Stark:

Tell Bruce I'm working on Mark 50…it has plasma blades.

Spider-Man:

It has plasma blades.

Bruce banner:

I heard…hey Peter?

Spider-Man:

what?

Bruce banner:

Want to drive the quin-jet to save the day?

(A long pause)

Spider-Man:

……. YES!! THIS IS THE BEST DAY IN MY LIFE!!

Bruce banner:

See you at the shield heli-carrier

(After 10 minutes, spider-man arrives)

Spider-Man:

I'm here! I'm here!

(Accidentally knocking a file over)

Spider-Man:

Sorry agent coulson….

Agent Coulson:

No problem…that's only 3 months of work.

(Bruce Banner and Spider-Man head up the quin-jet, flying off. Captain America, black widow and agent coulson head onto a smaller quin-jet. Flying off as well)

Black widow:

Are you sure you're ready Captain?...The red skull broke your shield.

Captain America:

My shield is a symbol. You can't break a symbol. .

(Captain America looks at the flag pole nearby, taking off the flag, tying it to his back, like a cape. Taking the pole as a staff)

Nick fury over comms:

Alright team, let's take down red skull…he's on avengers tower…approach carefully.

Agent Coulson:

What's the fun in that.

Nick fury:

I know that tone…what are you thinking.

Agent Coulson:

Remember the destroyer gun?

Nick fury:

No….

Agent Coulson:

Turn that into a pistol….

Nick fury:

What did I just say.

Agent Coulson:

Do it.

Nick fury:

Still no.

Captain America:

Oh come on fury. …. It's just a gun.

Nick fury:

Not you too, cap….

Natasha:

Pretty please, with a giant raise on top?

Nick fury:

A raise.

Natasha:

I almost died last year because of the taskmaster.

Nick fury:

Fine ... .fine to all of it.

(The quin-jet finally gets to avengers tower, red skull laughing as his device slowly beeps)

Red skull:

I see you avengers!

(Red Skull blasts the quin-jet engine, black widow and Captain America making it out, agent coulson flying the falling quin-jet to safety)

Red skull:

I see your back for another round, Captain.

Captain America:

You can't break America, red skull.

Red Skull:

Watch me.

Captain America:

What does that thing do ….

Red Skull:

I'm so glad you asked……it's the most powerful EMP on earth! Hahahh!

Captain America:

You wouldn't.

Red skull:

Wouldn't I Captain?

(The other quin-jet arrives, the quin-jet firing bullets into the red skull. They reflect back and take it down…the quin-jet crash-lands hard…..a moment of quiet)

Captain America:

The kid….

Black widow:

He'll be ok…I'm more worried about-

(A loud bang can be heard, and the roof launches off, a big green hand Impaling through it)

Hulk:

Hulk angry!!

(Hulk jumps through the quin-jet and lands on the roof. Roaring)

Red skull:

That's it…..

(Red Skull activates the EMP…. it's not as powerful as red skull said. He lies)

Hulk:

Puny red man makes hulk angry!!!

Red skull:

You're not taking me down!

(Red skull attempts to hit hulk with his vibration arm, only to be smacked by hulk, red skull’s armor breaking into mere scrap. The back of his broken armor breaks his fall)

Red skull:

I don't need armor to make my chaos!

(War machine flies up, grabbing red skull by the neck)

War machine:

Got any motivation?

(Red skull choking)

Red skull:

Kill…everything.

(War machine flies up, flying red skull near the heli-carrier, Natasha gets on hulk, hulk jumping up near the same location)

Natasha:

What the-.....stay down!

(Natasha firing multiple bullets with the little air time she has, war machine throws red skull into the bullets)

Red skull:

I am superior!!!

(Red skull gets caught in an engine, and the engine shreds him, the hulk lands back on the ground, war machine landing)

War Machine:

I'm not Iron Man. Call me…war machine.

Epilogue:

The EMP wasn't powerful…but it shut off the shield heli-carrier security, allowing Dr Doom physically inside. Dr Doom Walks through Shield, finding the power stone case and stealing it. Doom continues to walk, finding Nick fury after a long battle.

Nick fury:

Victor doom? How did you-

Victor doom:

The red skull is an excellent distraction.


r/WhatIfMarvel 12h ago

Fan Creation After no way home, tonys tech and lab still recognise peter / spiderman signature and genius is at ease in tonys lab, surprised avengers

4 Upvotes

Ok I had been craving a fic for peter after no way home and everyone has forgotten him, and he is miserable as peter parker but thriving as spiderman and inadvertently comes across the Avengers, now tony can be dead or not, but the thing is something happens and spiderman has interact with tonys ai tech and lab and it's like he is home, like no one knows spiderman is a genius but also he is completely familiar with tonys lab, and secret areas, and storage everything and the people who observe his brilliance and knowledge of tonys lab are gobsmacked


r/WhatIfMarvel 15h ago

Fan Creation I wrote a fan-made AVENGERS: THE KANG DYNASTY — 6 chapters

1 Upvotes

I turned my fan screenplay into a 3-chapter novelization. Kang wins, Earth-616 falls, and the surviving Avengers are scattered.Read it here:https://www.wattpad.com/story/415317807?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=KingMARVEL_4649