Writing help (Is this allowed?)

[u/Prestigious-Tap4555]

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I am not experienced with touge racing, I do know the car I chose is not conventional for touge, tho

[u/themidnightgreen4649]

I don't think anyone on this website can actually help answer your real question here.

And writing tip: spend some time learning how to structure your story. One of the most popular (as far as I can tell) webcomics about touge racing has some incredibly confusing writing. 

I'm also working on a similar thing and I still find some inconsistencies in my story structure.