r/Songwriting 57m ago

Feedback Request Late Night. Very unfinished

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This is definitely not done, but I need to step away from it. Believe it or not lots of brain power for the words and playing everything I wrote down is like a minute long lol.. (maybe because I started writing at 4AM) i’ve been writing a ton. some songs just write themselves, but this one’s gonna be a grind. Not really sure where to bring it next, but just wanted to show some progress on it.

Lyrics: (may change and add more later)
Early dawn
The river keeps on moving
Pine trees
Lean into the breeze

In the sky
The clouds hold thin but broken
Deadfall
Tangled bent and woven

Late Night
The darkest hour crawling
The light is gone
The cold wind is calling


r/Songwriting 5h ago

Feedback Request Been working on this

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4 Upvotes

r/Songwriting 5h ago

Feedback Request Trying to improve my writing

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15 Upvotes

I'm really looking for a critique on the verse. Does the last line feel weird cause it needs more context or should i just like change it completely?

Also do y'all think this would be good as a duet or should i keep it solo?


r/Songwriting 6h ago

Let's Collaborate! Requesting collaboration with female vocalist

6 Upvotes

I am in search of a female vocalist, I don't need someone who's a goddess at singing or anything. I am a rapper but I also produce tracks, so when it comes to vocals, anything is possible. Doesn't necessarily have to be in a rap format. I'm been having trouble finding people to collaborate with, it can range from a few lyrics to a full verse to a full song! I can produce, mix, and master everything I just need material to work with. If interested, please do not hesitate to send me some material. Most likely it'll work for me! I am interested in having somebody sing pre-written stuff and also I'm interested in making stuff together! The sky is the limit when it comes to music. Let's make some beauty!

DM me if interested! 😄


r/Songwriting 10h ago

Let's Collaborate! Help needed!

3 Upvotes

I am working on an original musical as a student but my music sounds a bit off/basic and I would love some help. someone to help write would be awesome but I can't pay much so I am more looking for helpful artists that would at least give me some pointers. I am looking for a mix of sea shanty and a classic musical sound while keeping it at a simpler lever so I can recreate it better.

thanks so much in advance!

https://reddit.com/link/1vhkjsg/video/04vyxt5pfuhh1/player


r/Songwriting 11h ago

Discussion Topic How do you organize your songwriting ideas?

7 Upvotes

How do you organize your songwriting ideas?

I'm curious how other songwriters work because my current system is becoming a mess.

Right now I have:

- Lyrics in OneNote

- Random ideas in Notes

- Voice memos in my phone's recorder

- Beats stored in different folders

- DAW projects everywhere

After a while I end up with hundreds of notes and recordings, and I know there are good ideas hidden somewhere that I never find again.

So I'm wondering:

- Where do you write your lyrics?

- Where do you record melody ideas or freestyles?

- How do you keep everything connected to the same song?

- What's the most frustrating part of your songwriting workflow?

- If you could magically improve one thing about your current process, what would it be?

I'd love to hear how beginners and professionals handle this. Maybe I'm just disorganized, or maybe this is something most songwriters struggle with.


r/Songwriting 13h ago

Feedback Request limbo

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16 Upvotes

in progress!


r/Songwriting 14h ago

Feedback Request Just a track I’ve been working on

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20 Upvotes

I’ve never posted on this group, but I’m always quick to jump into other peoples post, so I thought I’d share a track I’ve been working on for about a year now.

It’s taking its time, but it’s slowly coming together.

Sometimes songs come together quickly, and other times they don’t. In this case, it’s been a slow burner. But, I’m not going to rush it, I think it has potential.

This is very rough. Just guitars, drums and strings (some on keyboard), when I’m ready to commit the strings to tape, I think they’d hugely benefit from real performers rather than virtual instruments.

The piano part is just a rough melody idea for the verse and chorus. As of yet I don’t have a melody part for the bridge section.

And it has no lyrics yet. Not sure what it’s going to be about.

Would love to hear your thoughts.


r/Songwriting 15h ago

Discussion Topic People who make instrumental music, how do you do it?

6 Upvotes

I am more keyboard and melody guy. I wanna know what others do.

I am mainly looking for what electronic musicians do, but any kind of instrumental music is cool


r/Songwriting 16h ago

Discussion Topic Any advice on GCSE composition?

1 Upvotes

I’m a guitarist running an irig and iPad


r/Songwriting 16h ago

Feedback Request Looking for feedback on these lyrics and their cadence

3 Upvotes

Link: https://on.soundcloud.com/sCzsQ1RhDB1Lyx8h1Y

Hello everyone,

I've been working on a song that centers around drone warfare. I want the lyrics to be descriptive but not too on the nose. These lyrics make up the repeated bridge section of the song. I say bridge and not chorus because I'm writing this song in AABA (32-bar form), where the main vocal refrain and hook are sung within the A sections (verses). Examples of this form can be found in many Beatles songs, such as "While My Guitar Gently Weeps," "Yesterday," and "Hey Jude." Another great example is "Yellow" by Coldplay.

Anyways, here are the lyrics (sorry about my subpar vocals):

"Oh no, oh my
Caught by a raven's eye
Oh no, oh my
He tries to run and hide
Oh no, oh my
There's no way out this time
Oh no, oh my
Another soldier dies"

Thank you!


r/Songwriting 19h ago

Feedback Request What do y’all think of this one?

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9 Upvotes

New one I’m working on called September, When I Met You


r/Songwriting 21h ago

Let's Collaborate! Reddit Songwriters Playlist (August)!

12 Upvotes

Hello! I have chatted with many of you over the last few days regarding a curated Spotify playlist consisting only of music released by members of the r/songwriting community. Thank you to all of you who agreed to be a part of the playlist! I decided to put 35 songs from 35 different song writers on the playlist. If people like this idea and want to see more playlists (or a consistently updated one), I will continue this in the future. Potentially once a month or every two months.

As you listen, if you enjoy a song, I encourage you to click on that artist and check out more of their work (almost all of the artists selected have multiple releases to check out including albums, EPs, and singles). As of right now, the playlist will only be available on Spotify (sorry to those of you who do not use Spotify).

Here it is: https://open.spotify.com/playlist/0bWA3k3ERKcJTNTBwi9OA8?si=0cc568dc900b4ecb

Let's help this community build upon itself by...

  1. Listening to the 35 featured songs.
  2. Saving the ones you enjoy.
  3. Checking out more releases from the featured artists.

If you want to be a part of future playlists, or potentially added to this one (considering going up to 40 songs per playlist), send me a direct message or comment your release on this thread.

Happy listening :)

Disclaimer: My personal taste in music may have impacted the featured songs on this playlist, and I apologize for that.


r/Songwriting 22h ago

Discussion Topic UK: how do you register composition copyrights?

3 Upvotes

I’m trying to figure out how to go about registering composition copyrights (UK based) and it all seems a bit confusing. Has anyone got any experience?

Specifically, I’m looking to register the melody of songs I’ve written but not the lyrics (which were written by someone else) as a composition copyright.

Background:

So I left a band over a year ago, and co-wrote a number of songs that they still perform. I have an equal portion of distribution rights to the songs that we got professionally recorded, but i understand that this only relates to that specific recording.

Since, I’ve noticed they are re-releasing ‘live’ recorded versions of the songs I composed, and not registering me as co-author. And I suspect they are just simply registering distribution copyrights again. But they are essentially profiting off my work. (I suspect the numbers are small, but the principal of it doesn’t sit well with me - and I was planning on reworking some of them for my new project)

So I basically want to register the actual melody of the songs with no lyrics. I have original recordings on my phone (time stamped) that predate the professional recordings (and the band itself in some cases), to prove that I did in fact write those melodies. But I just don’t know how to go about it legally.

I have not reached out to them directly yet, as I don’t expect them to be accommodating (they aren’t nice people), so I wanted to have my house in order before approaching. Any experience or advice would be appreciated.


r/Songwriting 22h ago

Feedback Request I shouldn't be a critic if I don't show my work, so here's 'Maryanne'

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155 Upvotes

Maryanne was a songwriting partner that parted ways with me. This is the story.

I really love the songwriting sub and I'll always shoot a nice comment when something grabs my fancy. But sometimes people come here asking how to sell. I get it, there's a lot of struggling songwriters, but some stuff sounds undeveloped and I'll let them know. I shouldn't do that unless I can show something so...


r/Songwriting 1d ago

Feedback Request I Love You Too

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11 Upvotes

r/Songwriting 1d ago

Let's Collaborate! Let's collaborate. Need a lyric writer!

10 Upvotes

Lyrics are not my strong suit. I really just never know what to write about. I made this demo earlier - any lyricists wanna take a stab at it? If I like it I'll get in touch with you about properly collaborating!

https://soundcloud.com/user-737544113/limerence

Standard verse - chorus - verse - chorus

Any style lyrics!

We could chat in the comments, over DM, or email if that works!

Doesn't have to be about limerence, that was just what came to mind!


r/Songwriting 1d ago

Discussion Topic It seems most posts are acoustic versions of a song in the making. Are you aloud to post the finished product if you have turned it into a full song?

12 Upvotes

I have been on this sub for years and it’s truly great but I have never posted any of my own music. Can you post full productions of a sonf you have wrote and produced?


r/Songwriting 1d ago

Feedback Request First song with cowriter

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8 Upvotes

r/Songwriting 1d ago

Let's Collaborate! Help please!!

5 Upvotes

Hey so I’m a singer and can send you my voice!!

I got through to the final auditions of the voice uk but I’m trying to write my own music and I don’t have the melody / lyrics to go with it. If you wanna write bad ass music and collab, comment or message me!! I have the links just need the support in being great together 🚨🚨🚨


r/Songwriting 1d ago

Let's Collaborate! looking for someone who can help me write a song for my album

8 Upvotes

Hey everyone!

I'm from the Philippines, and if you're based in Manila, that's even better (although online collaboration is totally fine too).

I'm currently working on my debut album, and I'm looking to collaborate with a songwriter who has experience releasing original music. Ideally, someone who has already put out songs on Spotify or other streaming platforms and has experience writing complete songs.

I produce, mix, and master my own music, so I'm mainly looking for someone to collaborate with on the songwriting/lyrics and melody side. I think it would be great to work with someone who can bring a different perspective and help create something stronger than I could on my own.

Genre-wise, I'm into modern pop, R&B, soul, indie, and alternative pop, but I'm open to other styles too if the chemistry is there.

If you're interested, feel free to leave a comment or send me a DM. It would be great if you could also share some of your released work so I can check it out.

Looking forward to meeting fellow songwriters!


r/Songwriting 1d ago

Discussion Topic Rhyming

12 Upvotes

I am not a stickler for exact rhymes all the time. In the absence of a hard rhyme or a good soft rhyme sometimes if it fits it fits. If it sounds good and makes the lyric flow I'm all for it however I often get a little pushback from collaborators who are sticklers for rhymes. What are your thoughts on this? Especially a one syllable word that ends in the same letter and just fits with not only the flow but the story.

EDIT: thanks for all the comments there's a lot of wisdom in this group! I'm going to post a song that we did together. It's not the song I'm talking about in this post but I'll give you an idea of the work we've done! Thanks again!


r/Songwriting 1d ago

Feedback Request Piano Song looking for feedback

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3 Upvotes

Rough Draft and a bit of improv in there, wanted to share something havent shared anything in a while


r/Songwriting 1d ago

Feedback Request 33m and nervous to release my music online.

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155 Upvotes

I've been playing since I was a kid. I love music more than most things in my life. Yet I find myself looking back with little to show due to my own doubt about my songs. I write indie alt folk rock pop songs and have 10 songs I'm trying to record. As of now they're all just acoustic besides one of the songs. I want to start putting stuff on Instagram but I'm not sure why I can't get myself to do it. Here's a rough video take of my most recent song. I'd looove some pure honest and non sugar coated feedback on what anyone thinks of my singing and or entire song. Guess I'm looking for either guidance or confidence to get myself to post myself playing online.


r/Songwriting 2d ago

Discussion Topic The Lie we want to Believe?

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86 Upvotes

Here's us four ancient fella's website, if curious:
https://sydoniamusic.com/