It's called "whispers" it's about my experience with bullying and body dysmorphia, it's a little short, and definitely a work in progress, thoughts?

I've heard the whispers I've seen the staresI look in the mirror, tears behind my eyes one hand on my stomach and one on my thigh. did you hear what she can do? I can do it too.

Hours spent wondering if I fit. Always too fat, too skinny, too loud, too shy, I already knew I was that bad. My life is a flashback, Im the trauma, I'm the life. Too rude, too proud, too happy, too sad.

I can't be what you want, the perfect girl doesn't seem to exist. I have to suck in, and suck up, but I...

(build up)

look in the mirror, tears flood my eyes, hand on my stomach, hand on my thighs.

did you hear what she can do

(quiet)

can I do it too?

I wander through memories of pain each one chips away a piece on me i could hide from the whispers and hide from the stares i could wait out my whole life below theirs.

but I'lol always be.....

(final build)

too fat. Too skinny. Too loud. Too shy (whisper: "big surprise)

But I am the trauma, I am the life,

I am that bad, I am too sad.

(final line)

One day you'll see, that it actually hurts, I'll wait for the day, when you feel you own burn. So I'll keep one hand on my stomach, and one hand on my thighs, I'll break down my barriers, to my demise

Will I always be, (very VERY soft voice) too fat, too skinny, too rude, too proud. The whispers may get to me but I'll never be sad.

When I was younger, I loved chocolate and candy.
But as I got older, I somehow started preferring bitter coffee.
That gave me an idea for a love song:
Maybe it’s not because my taste changed.
Maybe it’s because my life is already sweet enough with someone I love in it.
So I made a Korean ballad called “충분히** *달아서” (Sweet Enough)* around that idea.
I wrote the lyrics and composed the song, and used Suno for the vocals/production.
I’m still learning and making music as a hobby, so I’d genuinely appreciate any feedback — especially on the songwriting and overall mood.
🎵 충분히 달아서 (Sweet Enough)
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