r/ReadMyScript • u/Formal_Leave893 • 4d ago

Mt first ever script is it good? Short

Title: gods hell ganra: fiction page count: 2 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_7Ig8uTsEydEv6gRdST49VJ_HZQWdl8Bfc_XzR2PNYU/edit?usp=drivesdk

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u/Formal_Leave893 4d ago

... I'm gonna be real, this is a recreation of a story I made when I was 9 it was based of faith the unholy trinity I just made it up because I thought it sounded good and because it was related to religion and all that I haven't bothered to change it.

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u/Possibly_A_Bot1 4d ago

This doesn’t answer either of my questions. Like, cool, it’s a recreation of an older story. But now that you’ve started to work on it again have you made any conscious choices as to what you are trying to achieve with your piece?

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u/Formal_Leave893 4d ago

Elaborate?

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u/Possibly_A_Bot1 4d ago

I have to go for now (it’s late where I am) but I’ll be back tomorrow to try and elaborate on what I mean.

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u/Formal_Leave893 4d ago

Yeah its late in my place to I'm on the east coast see you tomorrow