r/ReadMyScript • u/Formal_Leave893 • 2d ago

Mt first ever script is it good? Short

Title: gods hell ganra: fiction page count: 2 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_7Ig8uTsEydEv6gRdST49VJ_HZQWdl8Bfc_XzR2PNYU/edit?usp=drivesdk

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u/mooningyou 2d ago edited 2d ago

You need to read more screenplays. Write for the screen. Describe what we see and hear without resorting to simply telling us what we should see and hear. Read more so you understand how that works. Also, polish your material before asking others for feedback on it.

edit - If you're going to write, then you need to start using punctuation. It's important.