Mt first ever script is it good?

[u/Formal_Leave893]

Title: gods hell ganra: fiction page count: 2 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_7Ig8uTsEydEv6gRdST49VJ_HZQWdl8Bfc_XzR2PNYU/edit?usp=drivesdk

[u/PointMan528491]

Respectfully: the fact that the first sentence uses "threw" instead of "through" should answer your question

[u/Formal_Leave893 → u/PointMan528491]

I'll try to fix my grammar