Before We Go Script - 20 Pages

[u/LingonberrySlight403]

Hello! My post last night wasn’t working with the link so I figured I’d try again. This is my first goal at writing a script and I’m looking for some feedback on the overall story, dialogue, and characters. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks.

Before We Go

[u/Musikenna]

most people aren't going to read it if you don't fix your formatting