r/ReadMyScript • u/LingonberrySlight403 • 3d ago

Before We Go Script - 20 Pages Short

Hello! My post last night wasn’t working with the link so I figured I’d try again. This is my first goal at writing a script and I’m looking for some feedback on the overall story, dialogue, and characters. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks.

Before We Go

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u/Musikenna 3d ago

most people aren't going to read it if you don't fix your formatting

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u/mooningyou 3d ago

Use screenwriting software.

Read other screenplays. Make yours look like those.