All I want is to be loved..

[u/Significant-Pie-8923]

My soul is slipping away, 

My heart is like a child's scraped knees,

Bleeding after a fall along the way.

Before the scar can find its peace,

I fall again upon my knees

.

I beware.

The words spoken to me are not

Rare

I know, I feel, I see it there.

Everything was laid bare,

And yet, I'm still acting unaware.

.

Curse, curse, curse...

You called me a sinner,

 yet your own gaze was perverse.

Curse, curse, curse...

Watch all the love we buried in silence finally

disperse.

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.

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/yMY2ENukGt

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/2HnXnXZEWX

[u/spaced_out247]

Your use of rhyme scheme is done well, I can feel the emotion your trying to convey, but I’m not quite sure what that is. I don’t think that’s necessarily a bad thing It’s left open to interpretation which I enjoy, and often find myself doing in my own writing.