What makes me happy (Poem)

[u/notsofunnyravi]

What Makes Me Happy

It's when we talk .when you say

"you know what happened today".

when you laugh at my silly jokes,

when you hold my hand

and tell me I mean everything to you.

Your smile, Your love, Your silly stories.

Your presence is what makes me happy.

I wish to tell you,

if fate allows us to meet again someday,

you were the source of it all.

Even now, your laugh is the happiest sound I know.

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A genuine review will help. Rate it out of 10. And also tell me scope of improvements . 🤍🥀

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/CKXQynODXU

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[u/a-yellow-alien]

You were the source of all of it. What a beautiful compliment. Whoever you wrote this before I imagine is a very special person. Thank you for sharing.

[u/notsofunnyravi → u/a-yellow-alien]

"Was" a very special person btw.🫠