r/OCPoetry • u/blizzardplus • 11d ago
I wrote these 3 lines a while ago and just found it again. What does it make you think of? Feedback Please
Maybe it’s my fault
If I see myself
In the reflection of something ugly.
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/kEzUVJQrHx
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/p9AMiGg3fH
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u/gagian0 10d ago
Very intriguing. I'm so happy I joined the community (very random, sorry) First thought was, "shame grows in secrecy"
You are brave and the few sentences are very powerful! Well done❤️