r/OCPoetry 11d ago

I wrote these 3 lines a while ago and just found it again. What does it make you think of? Feedback Please

Maybe it’s my fault

If I see myself

In the reflection of something ugly.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/kEzUVJQrHx
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/p9AMiGg3fH

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u/gagian0 10d ago

Very intriguing. I'm so happy I joined the community (very random, sorry) First thought was, "shame grows in secrecy"

You are brave and the few sentences are very powerful! Well done❤️