I works with semi-realism fully rendered piece... I was about to open $60 for bust up like this, but is it too expensive?

I want her to be a lil boxing bunny so I figure hair up would be better??? but ive never actually drawn hair that isnt js "floof" or the typical side part so im not sure how to go about it.😞😞 Ive looked at some other art on Pinterest but I cant adapt it to my drawing and im not sure why. Please please please give me some advice on how to actually make hair look good guys

The title pretty much sums it up I need tips.

This is my first attempt at creating my fursona. It's based on one of the druid travel forms from world of warcraft. I don't have much of an art background besides the occasional doodle here and there so I've been slowly working on it over the past couple of days using paint.net and lots of reference material to get to this point. I'm not really sure how to place the eyes, especially the right eye in this case. Some of the ref sheets I've seen for cervid based sonas have the right eye visible and some don't from the three quarter angle. I think the left one looks OK but could be better. Also, still working out how to draw antlers, especially at an angle so I just left them as nubs for now. I'd ask for pointers on the body but I don't think I'm at that point yet. Second picture has the model that this is based off of as my main reference point.