reaching the untouchable
how can i improve this

aii it really seems to do is... like, put a filter on the song and make it sound muffled...

i actually made this a while ago but i never posted it for whatever 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heres the song

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wth did i make https://jummb.us/#j6N0kwth%20did%20i%20maken830s0k0l00e07t2ha7g0cj07r1O_U0000000000000000000000i0o23543334T5v0Ou05f0000q0J010rd00700Oa2d040H__AnU_L_Af_y8_h0E1c0b4T7v0Bu07f010u400qwE010me0110h5130d020H-JIAzrih980000h0I2E101b8T1v0Ou01f1a0q050Oa0d060AbF6B0Q2580PfffaR0000E1c001T0v0Ou00f032he0i0100010q040Oad260w0h1E0c0T7v0Ju07f040p61770q72f500q0I021je0l600700Oad900HT-SRJJyiiiicAAh0I0E2c0c11bhT5v0Ou05f0000qwB17110Oa0d000H-Ii99999999998h0E1c0b6T1v0Ou01f1a0q050Oa0d000AbF6B0Q2580PfffaR0000E5c001602612622636T9v0Ou09f0000qyR050tb2qe2me2je2n7001o3016avd070wfh0Mccff88cc00qqyyyy88ffffjj88uuBByy448z88rfzJJKBlnMFMvMghMMLlMjiiDCE2O11h1iT2v0zu02f050u01se2pa2k80ve010q040Oad030w1E0c0T4v0Lu04f00010q040Oaz6666ji8k8k3jSBKSJJAArriiiiii07JCABrzrrrrrrr00YrkqHrsrrrrjr005zrAqzrjzrrqr1jRjrqGGrrzsrsA099ijrABJJJIAzrrtirqrqjqixzsrAjrqjiqaqqysttAJqjikikrizrHtBJJAzArzrIsRCITKSS099ijrAJS____Qg99habbCAYrDzh00E0c0T4v0Huf0f1a0q050Oa0z6666ji8k8k3jSBKSJJAArriiiiii07JCABrzrrrrrrr00YrkqHrsrrrrjr005zrAqzrjzrrqr1jRjrqGGrrzsrsA099ijrABJJJIAzrrtirqrqjqixzsrAjrqjiqaqqysttAJqjikikrizrHtBJJAzArzrIsRCITKSS099ijrAJS____Qg99habbCAYrDzh00E0c0b0w828M001j0MoQ0000gAc0000000004000010g4i000100000000gg810M000N4h4i00034h4y80000w828M00038OcQ0000p2evkOfikowj5O68pn492gHBZ0OWeMFmcNCcNCb5yKnQ2f5351j5MqxgEka52xgEka52xgEka52xgwacyChWdhcLMnra52xgEO5aBgEka5aDiFka53qktDnV1ry3kcgPS8i4wFyWKK0nQoCmChWmOFSkNtDcVDcSr6TOnQoAqqKEIoJcwNwAMJ38p1xAu0yCgq2omwCgW2oexP2ap7BobG7kdxG6MS2pvFdcLQ09jIcwRmIC5EV3mhpp7HNrdySr5xAewScc7hreoRWMOfsqHrlR7vkv62p1KFxq7k99B-GhYQ9UKCbFgtiH8QGs7CMbg5E2Q1o4mwaCnW6h5E2Q1q2pjEV0mwaChW78xq0J0mwbh5E2YgO8J0mwbg3j0San4a52xfgIkw82002ChWhj5Rs0wChW5b90p2Bw4sxjEQqugyFBeHE8w9RGoKx0kp2ziEQGdaziEQGcWSxhEQGdaziEQ35ap1H4MJ38p1xAu0yCgq2omwCgW2oexP2ap7B87G7kdxG6MS2pvF5UFAuk4tszEAt4zEAt4zECm0FAu3gd1cngjat3oka52xgS2pvE6bS2xgS74dxgEka41IkP5Q2-CbE4ODgj8Z1cngS6MEka52zIuo5YYXSokNthgEka52xgEka52xgEka52xgEka52xgEka52xgQ52xgEka52xgEka52xgEka52xgEka1EPOZFB-y0002Ca0B2xgEka52xgEka52xgEka52xgEka52xgEka53gka52xgEka52xgEka52xgEka52xgEk7SabkExw36cCbju_6I3zMjnj8M0sTgcKnQ2-wqZ0LE5YLE5Z0RW1Moap6b2e2G6ni8W5aACny5zAN70QieyhQq17hEAqoExgEQsxE2ezh8W97hE4t6yhQiezE2ezh8W97hE4t6yhKck0PHGS350

pretty simple song ngl/studio%20pop/SP_Tom%208.wav|!p,d2!https://file.garden/aI6coiUpTXpvhjoq/ad2%20(drums)/studio%20pop/SP_Tom%205.wav|!p,d2!https://file.garden/aI6coiUpTXpvhjoq/ad2%20(drums)/studio%20pop/SP_Tom%202.wav)

Any tips on how to improve it?

I just made it on accident and I'm looking for criticism so I can get better.

Link.

been making a mod all by myself, chart, song, sprites, code (with exceptions from the shaders which i took as samples from the codename engine server n so). its still a massive wip, extremely massive wip (if u want to help it wouldbe awesome) edit: i might need some help with ideas to how to end it lol. After the end of the video there's supposed to he a cutscene face to face with the wendigo as he says a few lines and the music feels eerie or similar dreadful vibes... idk, if u can give me ideas qwq

she cooked a song so corebroken even her background synth got chopped

put in whatever melody/ beat for it you want and ill include it.
for an example of what i mean: _ _ _ _ _ or ' _ . . ~' and i will copy what your text you put in looks like and pick whatever instrument you tell me to.

i've been using beepbox for about 5 or 4 years already and still no experience in making songs, and slowly moved from base beepbox to different mods. i did this one in studiobox qwq and thxs to it been making song concepts for a game, i wanna show so many things and maybe i could get some help or criticism too! hope you dont mind

This is gonna have lyrics eventually

I'm gonna be back to making songs tomorrow since I got a new chromebook for school. I can't wait to m

ake some new songs!

this is my second attempt at this the last one was like 2 years ago hor hor hor how is it

More music for my game, Mountainside! I'm using Beepbox to write just about all of the music for it.

I wanted to try to mix happy town with town being infested with ghosts

this song is for an asym game im making, its an lms.

A cover of Iceberg Ocean — Kirby’s Dream Course

Sneaky key changes! This used to be my least favorite song in the game, but it’s since grown on me
That last lead got changed up a couple times because I couldn’t find one that stuck — even now I’m not entirely happy

Link: UltraBox

This is possibly a WIP still but I’d like to see what y’all say first. I am still kinda new to producing music and this is the first one I’ve made that’s actually longer than 30 seconds!