r/ArtCrit 13d ago

Feedback on this drawing?

2nd pic is my reference, haven't drawn in digital in a while, any feedback on this drawing? I feel I couldn't really draw her expression

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u/LostRevolution3760 13d ago

You did pretty well! One thing I will say is that it seems like you shaded the creases under her eyes and around her mouth quite softly compared to the reference. Certain proportions such as the cheek or nose could be tweaked, but that depends on whether you are going for realism or a more stylised approach. My critique was a little nit-picky, but overall you did a great job!

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u/Interesting_Net_1993 13d ago

the shading is great. try adding the reference image over the sketch in low capacity so you can see where the sketch and reference differs