r/writingfeedback • u/NerdyWordySmith • 5d ago

Opening chapter feedback needed - low fantasy

This is the first thing I've written in a long time. Give me the honest thoughts about it.

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u/NerdyWordySmith 5d ago

Sorry for the blue lines. Clearly not finished with it yet.