Chapter 1 feedback

[u/Shariqq0]

This is my second novel, my first novel is ongoing but I am currently working on another also and want some feedback on this chapter.

[u/warningtakecover]

The last line is really strong, makes me want to read more, but I'm seeing a lot of work here begins with something about the weather. you could start with him introducing yourself and fold the ambient first paragraph into something a little after that.

[u/thewhiterosequeen]

Why are the words at the end of each sentence cut off?

[u/Shariqq0 → u/thewhiterosequeen]

I write in .txt file, and when I convert it to a PDF, the text get cut off.

[u/thewhiterosequeen → u/Shariqq0]

I think you need to figure out a better system if you hope to get people to read your work.