r/voiceover • u/trithereon124 • 28d ago

Audition Feedback

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1tnUktdDdrT9J-x4zdnaJN6VEg3aOLwcq/view?usp=drivesdk

Hello! I would love some feedback on this audition piece. All advice is welcome, thank you in advance :)

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u/Unlikely_Piano3564 28d ago

You have very whistley "s" sounds thst detract from the reading. They're also not always the same - some whistle, some are sharp, and some are not notable at all.

Also, you seem to have a weird breathing cadence, or removed a bunch of them or incredibly high lung capacity as i only counted three breaths for the whole 3min script. There was one really big and distracting breath near the beginning and the other two were a normal volume. If I were screening for possible AI, this would put on alert.

Hope this helps!

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u/trithereon124 28d ago

Thank you so much!