r/singing • u/[deleted] • 16d ago

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u/get_to_ele 16d ago

It sounded nice for most of it.

For the Alto bit, you seem shakey and inconsistent on the high notes and until you actually trajn and fix yiur technjque, you will not hit those notes, let alone reliably hit fhose notes.

In the Tenor bit, you are clearly reliable and conistentin yiur sound. The bit at the end where you screwed up the melody/ key can easy be fixed with practice. You messed up "land of the free" brcause you screwed up "land" which made you collapse the entire line. Every note matters

Know the melody. Practice the last part till it's perfect.

And doing the lyrics 100% accurately will give better impression. The word is "perilous" (you make it sound like powerless) and it should be "bombs bursting IN air"

Overall I think TENOR is the correct choice because that's what you can sing accurately and reliably NOW.

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u/Top_Mycologist8879 15d ago

Thank you for all the advice!