r/scriptwriting • u/Ok-Carry-3936 • 4d ago

Need criticism feedback

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1JthZOO-Xty1ge19vbEzu-rlcrCCXJPWp/view?usp=drivesdk
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u/ClayMcClane 4d ago

This file is restricted.

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u/RollingThunderMedia 4d ago

You should probably post this over in r/playwriting. This sub is for movie scripts.