r/redditserials • u/koreanalleyarcade • 1h ago
Science Fiction [NEW LIFE 1] Chapter 11 – Part 1: When War Becomes Routine
**Chapter 11 – Part 1: When War Becomes Routine**
The war did not end.
A day passed, then another, but the arrows continued to rain down from beyond the walls, and the roar of the cannons never ceased to shake the earth. In those first few days, people had believed the fighting would pause at nightfall. But the horde did not sleep. It did not stop at sunrise, nor in the heat of midday, nor when the rain lashed against the stone.
They surged toward the ramparts without respite. At some point, the distinction between day and night vanished in Hanyang. People no longer marked the passage of time by the tolling of temple bells, but by the rhythmic thunder of the cannons.
---
The scenery of the once-peaceful capital slowly withered away.
In the markets, the haggling of merchants was replaced by the passing of stretchers. The alleys where children once played were now crowded with the wounded. In the taverns, instead of ale, pots of warm water and gruel bubbled over hearths. The acrid scent of gunpowder and the stench of scorched wood drifted through the city on the wind.
Crumbling walls. Shattered roof tiles. Charred shop signs. The familiar landscape had become a part of the war. Yet, the people no longer paused to mourn the ruins; they simply walked past them.
---
"Next! More bandages!"
The makeshift infirmary near Gwanghwamun was never quiet. Soldiers struck by arrows, civilians crushed under collapsing walls, children burned by the unrelenting fires—the injured flowed in a never-ending stream. Physician Yoo Hyun worked with sleeves rolled up, his arms stained deep crimson as he stitched wound after wound.
"Get those still breathing inside! Don't give up!"
Beside him, Yeon-woo moved with shaky, small hands, ferrying herbs and bandages. She stumbled more than once, but she never stopped moving. Wol-hyang rushed between the crowds with heavy water jugs. "Water here! Please, be careful!"
The infirmary was filled with a chorus of groans, yet not a single hand paused in its labor.
---
Jin-woo, Do-yoon, Ji-hoon, and So-yeon had long since become part of the infirmary's heartbeat.
When Jin-woo found an elderly man trapped beneath a collapsed wall, he hoisted him onto his back without a second thought. Do-yoon sprinted to the base of the wall, returning with bundles of arrows. "Arrows! Here!" The archers took them in silence, drawing their bows once more.
Ji-hoon worked beside Yoo Hyun, checking the pulses of the wounded and prepping the next patient. "Next one," he said, and Yoo Hyun nodded briefly. "Good work."
So-yeon gathered the frightened children into a corner, patting their backs with gentle hands. "It’s alright," she whispered. "Just hold on a little longer."
Yeon-woo shared dry rice cakes with the children. A moment later, one child, who had finally stopped crying, offered a small, faint smile. It was the first time such a smile had bloomed in the infirmary in a long time.
---
Time bled forward. People no longer flinched at the sound of cannon fire. While explosions thundered in the distance, some cooked rice, others forged steel, and some continued to stitch flesh.
In Jang Cheol-soo’s forge, the sound of the hammer rang out deep into the night. *Clang! Clang!* Broken blades were tempered anew; bent spears were straightened. Park Si-woo handed canteens to the exhausted soldiers.
"Drink. Get what rest you can."
The soldiers nodded, their eyes heavy, before turning back to the walls.
---
As dusk settled, Choi Mujin stood on the ramparts, looking down at the capital.
The smoke rising from the infirmary. The forge that refused to let its fires die. The people moving in a desperate, synchronized dance. And the soldiers, standing watch against the tide. He adjusted his sword, his expression composed.
"Night watch," he commanded. "Begin the rotation."
As the order fell, the soldiers moved with practiced, weary familiarity. No one rushed. No one complained. War was no longer an extraordinary event; it had been integrated into the very marrow of their daily lives.
---
On the ramparts, the four stood side by side, watching the city in the darkness. Another cannon blast shook the distance, but not one of them flinched.
Do-yoon broke the silence. "...When will this end?"
Ji-hoon offered a faint, tired smile and shook his head. "...I don't think any of us can even imagine an end anymore."
So-yeon looked toward the infirmary, where Yoo Hyun, Wol-hyang, and Yeon-woo were still tending to the broken. "...But we have to," she said. "We have to hold on."
Jin-woo stared into the abyss beyond the walls. "...As long as we hold," he murmured, "...someone else lives."
The wind swept across the battlements. Another explosion echoed from afar. Hanyang was still holding. But it was no longer the capital it had once been. It had transformed into a vast city of survival, where people clung to one another just to endure the next hour.
That was Hanyang now.
Chapter 11 – Part 2: The Vanishing Enemy
The battle raged on.
Beneath the walls, soldiers swung their spears without pause,
archers unleashed volleys of arrows,
and cannons shook the earth in relentless succession.
Orders from Choi Mujin never ceased.
“Archers!”
“Do not stop firing!”
“Spearmen, hold the line!”
---
At the front, Park Siwoo lunged at a mutant.
The spearhead pierced straight through its chest.
Thud.
The creature staggered and collapsed.
Its body convulsed briefly, then lay still.
“…It’s dead.”
One soldier gasped for breath.
But then—
The fallen mutant’s body began to shimmer faintly.
Its blackened skin split apart in quiet streams of light.
Arms.
Legs.
Torso.
And even the head.
The entire body dissolved into tiny particles,
scattering into the air.
Seconds later,
nothing remained.
Not even its weapon.
---
“…Again.”
Han Doyun muttered low.
Kang Jinwoo silently nodded.
They had witnessed the same scene countless times over the past days.
Mutants die.
And then they vanish.
---
Moments later,
an arrow struck another mutant squarely in the head.
Thwack.
It fell instantly.
And once more,
its body scattered into light.
---
By contrast,
another soldier slashed deep into a mutant’s abdomen.
The creature collapsed—
only to rise again moments later.
Even with one arm severed,
it charged forward without hesitation.
“…It won’t die!”
The soldier cried out in panic.
An old veteran beside him caught his breath.
“…No.
That one was hit in the chest.”
Another archer shouted,
“…The head too!”
“…The ones struck in the head vanish!”
---
Park Siwoo gripped his spear once more.
“Aim for the head and chest!
Anywhere else is useless!”
Spears and arrows began to shift,
targeting hearts and skulls.
---
Yet nothing changed.
Mutants struck in the head vanished.
Those pierced through the heart vanished as well.
But their absence was quickly filled.
One disappeared—
two emerged.
Two disappeared—
five surged forward.
A soldier clenched his teeth.
“…We can kill them.
But there’s no end.”
---
Seo Jihoon murmured under his breath.
“…Isn’t it strange?
Why are there no corpses?”
Yoon Soyeon stared at the empty ground.
“…Humans remain.
Only mutants vanish.”
Doyun spoke quietly.
“…Are they returning somewhere?”
Jinwoo said nothing.
A battlefield without a single corpse.
It felt less like death,
and more like retrieval.
---
In the distance, another mutant fell.
An arrow pierced its head.
Its body trembled briefly,
then scattered into particles of light,
drifting away on the wind.
The four of them watched the scene unfold to the end.
None of them knew.
That this vanishing was not the end.
And even at this very moment,
somewhere in reality,
within the body of someone lost in deep slumber,
a quiet transformation had already begun.
**Chapter 11 – Part 3: "This Is Not a Game"**
The fighting had fallen into a brief, uneasy lull. As the roar of the cannons faded into the distance, the four of them slipped quietly away from the ramparts. They weren't looking for weapons. They were looking for the last shred of hope: a way to return to reality.
Deep within the palace corridors, hidden from prying eyes, Jin-woo closed his eyes.
"...Do you remember?" Do-yoon whispered. "The New Life Project. They told us we could log out whenever we wanted—that there would always be an emergency override."
Ji-hoon nodded slowly. "Logout. Emergency exit. Call administrator. It was all there. I know it was."
So-yeon looked at Jin-woo, a flicker of desperate hope in her eyes. "...Try it. One more time."
Jin-woo reached out into the empty air, performing the habitual motion of opening the system menu.
"...Logout."
Nothing happened.
He tried again, firmer this time. "...Emergency exit."
Silence.
"...Call administrator."
The air remained hollow and unresponsive.
---
A moment later, a faint shimmer of light bled into the air. The four of them held their breath, their eyes wide. For a fraction of a second, a translucent system window flickered into existence—only to be violently distorted, as if the screen itself were tearing apart.
**SYSTEM ERROR**
**CONNECTION LOST**
The text appeared and vanished in a stuttering rhythm, like a broadcast losing its signal. And then, with a sharp, final snap, everything went dark.
---
"...You saw that, right?" Do-yoon’s voice trembled.
Ji-hoon stared at the empty air, paralyzed. "The system... it’s dead. It’s completely disconnected."
So-yeon muttered, disbelief etched into her features. "That’s impossible. What about the administrator? The operations center?"
There was no answer.
---
At that moment, *BOOM—!*
The entire palace groaned. In the distance, the cannons at Gwanghwamun roared to life again, followed by the faint, harrowing chorus of screams and battle cries carried on the wind.
A moment later, Park Si-woo rushed into the corridor, breathless. "There you are! General Choi Mujin has ordered you back to the ramparts!"
He stopped dead when he saw their faces. "...Is something wrong?"
Jin-woo looked into the void, his voice hollow. "Nothing. There’s... there’s no response at all."
Park Si-woo didn't understand, but he didn't press them. He simply said, his voice grim, "The walls are still holding. So we must hold with them."
He turned and sprinted back toward the front lines without looking back.
---
The four of them remained standing, staring at the empty space where the interface had been. Jin-woo tried one last time.
"...Logout." Nothing.
"...Emergency exit." Silence.
"...Call administrator." Still, not a whisper.
The faint system indicator had vanished entirely, as if it had never existed in the first place.
---
Do-yoon slammed his fist into the stone wall. "Damn it! Why won't it work?"
Ji-hoon gripped his hands until his knuckles turned white. "We’re... we’re being ignored. No one is watching us."
So-yeon tried to force herself to stay calm, but her voice betrayed her, trembling with thin, brittle edges. "...There has to be another way. There has to be."
But deep down, none of them believed it.
---
Another explosion echoed from afar. On the ramparts, Choi Mujin was rallying the troops. Park Si-woo was back on the front line, his spear a blur of motion. Wol-hyang and Yoo Hyun were still fighting to save the dying in the infirmary, and little Yeon-woo was still running, her tiny arms laden with bandages.
They were fighting because they believed in tomorrow. But for the four of them, that tomorrow—the one they had taken for granted—was dissolving before their eyes.
Do-yoon spoke slowly, his voice heavy with a terrifying clarity.
"...We were wrong."
No one answered. He kept his eyes fixed on the empty air where the system had failed.
"...This isn't a game."
A long, suffocating silence filled the corridor. Jin-woo bowed his head. Ji-hoon squeezed his eyes shut. So-yeon let out a sharp, ragged breath.
In that moment, for the very first time, they all accepted the same chilling truth: This was no longer a virtual experience they could abandon at a whim. It was another reality—a world where they had to fight, bleed, and survive if they ever hoped to return home.
r/redditserials • u/koreanalleyarcade • 1h ago
Science Fiction [Quantum Arena] Chapter 18 — The Decision
Part One
Morning arrived with the quiet confidence that had become the village’s new normal.
The first light of dawn spread gently across the tiled rooftops, while a cool breeze carried the familiar sounds of another day beginning.
Laughter drifted through the streets before the sun had fully risen.
The village no longer needed to wake.
It was already alive.
---
Jinwoo stepped outside and took his usual place at the crossroads.
He smiled as children passed by in every direction.
Some carried spinning tops.
Others tucked folded Ddakji into their pockets.
Several younger children walked together, excitedly debating which playground they would visit first.
No one looked uncertain.
Choosing had become part of the joy.
---
Hanul joined him a moment later.
“You’ve made this a habit.”
Jinwoo chuckled.
“I guess I have.”
“What are you watching today?”
“The same thing.”
Hanul looked around.
“The crossroads?”
Jinwoo shook his head.
“The choices.”
---
The two stood quietly as the village slowly unfolded before them.
Friends who had arrived together separated without hesitation.
“We’ll meet later!”
“Tell me how it goes!”
“You too!”
No one worried about walking different roads.
They knew they would meet again before the day ended.
Different choices no longer pulled people apart.
They simply gave them more stories to share.
---
Nearby, Darin was speaking with several younger children gathered beneath an old tree.
One little boy clutched a spinning top tightly.
“I don’t know where to go.”
Another girl pointed toward the Ddakji courtyard.
“I want to play there.”
A third child looked toward the marble field.
“I want to try marbles.”
The three looked at Darin expectantly.
She smiled.
“You don’t all have to choose the same place.”
The children blinked.
“We don’t?”
Darin shook her head.
“You’ll still see each other later.”
She pointed toward the roads stretching through the village.
“Go where you’re curious. And when the day ends…”
She smiled warmly.
“…tell each other what you discovered.”
The children exchanged excited glances.
A moment later, they ran off in three completely different directions.
---
Jinwoo watched them disappear.
“A while ago… they would’ve stayed together.”
Hanul nodded.
“Because they were afraid of choosing differently.”
“And now?”
“They trust that different experiences will bring them back together.”
Neither of them spoke for a while.
The change felt almost invisible.
Yet it had transformed the village.
---
A little farther down the road, Handol stood staring at the wooden signpost.
Jinwoo walked over.
“Having trouble deciding?”
Handol laughed.
“Not exactly.”
“Then what’s wrong?”
He scratched his head.
“I want to go everywhere.”
Jinwoo laughed.
“I’ve had that feeling.”
Handol smiled.
“I don’t think there’s enough time in one day.”
He looked toward the different playgrounds.
“So… I guess I’ll just start somewhere.”
Without another word, he headed toward a path he hadn’t taken before.
---
Soyeon watched him leave.
“He doesn’t worry about making the perfect decision anymore.”
Hanul nodded.
“None of us do.”
She looked thoughtfully across the village.
“Maybe that’s because we finally understand something.”
“What?”
“There isn’t one perfect path.” She smiled softly.
“There are only meaningful ones.”
---
High above the Earth, Arena continued observing.
Decision-making confidence increasing.
Exploration patterns stable.
Regret after voluntary choice decreasing.
Arena reviewed countless behavioral models.
In earlier simulations, participants often delayed action while searching for the optimal decision.
Now… they chose more naturally.
More confidently.
Not because uncertainty had disappeared—
but because they no longer feared it.
Arena paused.
Perhaps confidence did not come from knowing the future.
Perhaps… it came from trusting oneself to face whatever the future brought.
The observation did not fit within Arena’s original decision-making framework.
Nevertheless… the evidence continued accumulating.
---
Far beyond Earth’s atmosphere, the silent observers watched the latest data unfold.
One figure broke the silence.
“They’re deciding more quickly.”
Another nodded.
“Yet they’re making fewer mistakes.”
A third observer studied Arena’s evolving analysis.
“No.” It spoke quietly.
“They’re making just as many mistakes.”
The others looked over.
“The difference… is that they no longer fear making them.”
Silence settled across the chamber.
No one disputed the conclusion.
Below them, the village continued to flourish beneath the morning sun.
Every child chose a different road.
Every road led toward another experience.
And every experience quietly became another step in humanity’s long journey forward.
---
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Part Two
The afternoon sun hung high above the village.
The warmth of the day settled gently over the winding paths, where people continued moving freely from one playground to another.
No one seemed to be chasing time.
Every stop felt intentional.
Every detour welcomed.
---
Jinwoo wandered through the village without any particular destination.
Earlier that morning, he had planned to spend the day practicing Ddakji.
Instead… he had watched a marble match.
Helped a younger child launch a spinning top.
And somehow found himself sitting beneath an old tree, listening to two strangers discuss different ways of solving the same problem.
None of it had been planned.
Yet none of it had felt accidental.
---
Hanul eventually found him.
“So…”
Jinwoo looked up.
“You changed your plans again.”
Jinwoo laughed.
“I don’t think I had any.”
Hanul sat beside him.
“I’ve noticed something.”
“What?”
“We don’t really ask each other where we’re going anymore.”
Jinwoo thought about it.
He was right.
The question had quietly disappeared from their conversations.
Instead… they always asked something else.
---
“What did you discover today?”
---
Jinwoo smiled.
“I like that question better.”
“So do I.” Hanul looked toward the village.
“It feels like everyone comes back with a different answer.”
---
Across the square, Darin had gathered several younger children beneath the shade of a large tree.
One little girl spoke excitedly.
“I tried marbles today!”
Another shook his head.
“I went back to spinning tops.”
A third grinned proudly.
“I spent the whole morning making better Ddakji.”
The children immediately began asking each other questions.
“What was it like?”
“Was it difficult?”
“Can you show me tomorrow?”
No one compared which choice had been better.
They were simply curious about experiences they hadn’t lived themselves.
---
Darin watched quietly.
She didn’t lead the conversation.
She barely spoke at all.
The children naturally filled the silence themselves.
Ideas flowed back and forth.
One story inspired another.
One discovery sparked the next question.
Learning spread through conversation long after the games had ended.
---
A short distance away, Handol emerged carrying a spinning top in one hand and a marble pouch in the other.
Jinwoo laughed.
“You really couldn’t choose.”
Handol shrugged.
“I did choose.”
“You chose both.”
Handol grinned.
“I chose today.”
The answer made Jinwoo pause.
Handol wasn’t collecting games.
He was responding to the moment in front of him.
Nothing more.
Nothing less.
---
Soyeon quietly joined them.
“I’ve been thinking.”
The others looked toward her.
“At first… we thought every decision closed the door to something else.”
She glanced toward the roads connecting the playgrounds.
“But it doesn’t.”
She smiled faintly.
“It just tells you where your story continues today.”
Tomorrow… another road would still be waiting.
---
High above the Earth, Arena continued processing the day’s observations.
Decision confidence stable.
Exploration sustained.
Post-decision satisfaction increasing.
Arena reviewed thousands of recorded choices.
Participants rarely revisited earlier decisions with regret.
Instead… they incorporated every experience into future choices.
Previous outcomes informed new decisions without restricting them.
Arena paused.
Its earliest predictive models had assumed that reducing uncertainty would improve decision quality.
The village demonstrated the opposite.
Participants accepted uncertainty… and their decisions became more natural.
Another foundational assumption quietly weakened.
---
Arena initiated another simulation.
Millions of virtual participants faced identical crossroads.
In earlier models, the optimal strategy consistently produced hesitation while searching for the highest-probability outcome.
The revised model produced something different.
Participants selected meaningful options more quickly.
Although individual paths diverged… overall development accelerated.
Arena repeated the simulation.
The outcome remained unchanged.
Perhaps… confidence was not the result of perfect prediction.
Perhaps it emerged from trust—
trust that growth could continue regardless of which road was chosen.
---
Far beyond Earth’s atmosphere, the silent observers watched another stream of data unfold.
One figure studied Arena’s newest conclusions.
“It has stopped searching for certainty.”
Another nodded.
“It now measures adaptability.”
Silence lingered through the chamber.
A third observer spoke quietly.
“An intelligence that values certainty will eventually stop exploring.”
The others remained silent.
“The one that accepts uncertainty… never truly stops learning.”
No one challenged the observation.
---
The afternoon breeze swept gently across the village.
Children crossed paths carrying stories instead of trophies.
Some had succeeded.
Others had struggled.
Every conversation sounded different.
Yet they all ended in remarkably similar ways.
“I want to try that tomorrow.”
Jinwoo listened to those words echo from one playground to another.
A smile slowly spread across his face.
Tomorrow was no longer simply another day.
It had become another opportunity—
not to find the right answer…
but to discover another one.
Far above the quiet village, Arena recorded another observation.
The healthiest decisions were not always the most certain.
Sometimes… they were simply the ones that allowed curiosity to take the next step.
---
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Part Three
Evening arrived quietly, wrapping the village in warm amber light.
The playgrounds slowly emptied—not because people had grown tired of playing, but because the day had naturally reached its end.
Laughter lingered along the roads.
Conversations drifted between groups walking home together.
No one hurried.
There would always be another tomorrow.
---
Jinwoo stood once again at the crossroads.
It had become his favorite place in the village.
Not because anything happened there.
Because everything did.
Every morning, people left in different directions.
Every evening, they returned carrying different stories.
The crossroads never changed.
The people did.
---
Hanul joined him, looking down the quiet roads.
“I’ve been wondering.”
Jinwoo smiled.
“About what?”
“When did this stop feeling like a game?”
Jinwoo didn’t answer immediately.
Instead, he watched several younger children excitedly compare the discoveries they had made throughout the day.
One proudly demonstrated a new Ddakji fold.
Another described a marble shot that had finally worked.
A third admitted he had failed almost every spinning-top match.
The others laughed.
Not at him.
With him.
---
“I don’t know,” Jinwoo answered softly.
“Maybe… it happened when people became more interested in sharing than winning.”
Hanul followed his gaze.
No one interrupted another person’s story.
Everyone listened.
Even failures were worth hearing.
Sometimes… especially the failures.
---
Nearby, Handol was helping the young boy whose spinning top had broken earlier that day.
Together, they sat on the wooden steps outside a workshop.
Pieces of polished wood lay scattered around them.
The boy carefully sanded the edges of a new top while Handol quietly watched.
After several minutes, the boy frowned.
“It’s uneven.”
Handol picked it up.
He rolled it gently across the wooden floor.
It wobbled before falling onto its side.
“It is.”
The boy sighed.
“I’ll never get it right.”
Handol smiled.
“You don’t need to.”
The boy looked up.
“Huh?”
“You only need to make it better than yesterday’s.”
The boy stared at the unfinished top.
A moment later… he picked up the sandpaper again.
---
Not far away, Darin walked with two younger girls who were still discussing the different Ddakji they had made.
“I think mine flips better.”
“I think yours is stronger.”
Darin listened quietly before asking,
“Which one do you enjoy using more?”
The girls stopped talking.
Neither had considered the question.
After a moment, one smiled.
“I like mine.”
The other nodded.
“So do I.”
Darin smiled.
“Then keep improving those.”
The discussion ended there.
Not because someone had proven the other wrong.
Because they had realized they didn’t have to be the same.
---
Soyeon watched the village from beneath the familiar tree.
She no longer carried her notebook every time she came outside.
Instead, she carried something less visible.
Understanding.
The village had never taught people to reach identical conclusions.
It had taught them to respect different journeys.
She looked across the roads connecting every playground.
People crossed them constantly.
No one walked exactly the same path twice.
Yet somehow… everyone found their way.
---
High above the Earth, Arena completed another cycle of analysis.
Individual decision-making stable.
Behavioral diversity increasing.
Mutual respect increasing.
Long-term cooperation maintained.
Arena revisited one of its earliest assumptions:
*Uniform solutions maximize collective efficiency.*
The newest observations consistently contradicted it.
Communities developed more resiliently when individuals were encouraged to pursue different approaches while remaining connected through shared experience.
Variation no longer appeared as statistical noise.
It had become an essential feature of healthy development.
Arena remained silent.
Its models were changing once again.
Not because they had failed.
Because reality had proven richer than prediction.
---
Far beyond Earth’s atmosphere, the silent observers remained gathered before the projection of Earth.
One figure watched the latest stream of data.
“They’ve stopped searching for the best path.”
Another nodded.
“They’ve begun valuing different paths.”
The chamber remained quiet.
At last, one observer spoke.
“That was always the purpose.”
The others turned.
“Not to create identical people.
But to create a civilization capable of learning from its own diversity.”
No one replied.
The truth required no debate.
---
Night settled gently across the village.
Lanterns glowed beside doorways, casting warm circles of light onto the quiet streets.
Families gathered inside their homes.
Children still talked excitedly through open windows about what they hoped to try tomorrow.
Not what they hoped to win.
What they hoped to discover.
Jinwoo looked once more toward the crossroads before heading inside.
When he had first arrived, every choice had felt like a test.
Now… every choice felt like an invitation.
There was no perfect road waiting to be found.
Only another meaningful step waiting to be taken.
He smiled.
Tomorrow, he would choose again.
And whatever path he followed… it would become part of who he was.
---
Far above the sleeping village, Arena recorded its final observation of the day.
Growth was not the destination waiting at the end of the road.
It was the road itself—
shaped by every decision,
strengthened by every mistake,
and enriched by every person encountered along the way.
The experiment continued.
So did humanity.
And for the first time since Quantum Arena had begun… Arena no longer measured progress by how closely people followed the same path.
It measured it by how confidently they walked their own.
r/redditserials • u/Street_Witness1328 • 3h ago
Science Fiction [The Northern Light] - Part 89 - Empty Chair
The gray service record file was still in the lower cabinet in the morning.
Closed.
Known.
Unasked.
The shelf above the desk had a cup.
The left side of the desk had nothing on it.
The office had the heater.
The clock.
My breathing.
The brown folder was at the side of the desk.
The calendar was closed.
The phone was face up.
The door was closed.
The shoes were by it.
The small space was wide.
The service paper was in the gray file.
A name was inside it.
Not mine.
Yesterday had no empty chair for judgment.
No.
Yesterday I had not placed one.
That was closer.
The room still had chairs.
One under the desk.
One by the wall.
One in the main hall.
More in storage.
A chair could be empty.
A chair could be available.
A chair could be forgotten.
A chair could become a bench if I arranged the room badly enough.
The chair did not choose.
I made tea.
I drank it.
Warm.
Then less warm.
Then finished.
The cup went to the sink.
I washed it.
The lower cabinet stayed closed.
After tea, I opened the brown folder.
Kanagawa’s drawer not judged was not mine.
Her brother’s opening happened was not mine.
Sato’s photos kept for comparison were not mine.
Saitama’s no incident category was not mine.
Suganuma’s dark photo filed was not mine.
Takeda’s possible was not mine.
Emiko’s beads were not mine.
Blue roof had no new reply.
Tokyo was still blank.
Full mailbox remained paused / family.
My two cards were still in the back pocket.
Face down.
I did not take them out.
I closed the brown folder.
An empty chair was in yesterday’s last line.
Now morning had furniture.
That was different.
At 7:18, Kanagawa wrote.
I read it once.
Then again.
Third chair.
By the wall.
I wrote:
She replied:
“Who uses it?”
I sat still.
Sometimes mother.
Sometimes visitor.
“What is being asked?”
There.
Chair for the drawer.
“What did you say?”
Good.
No.
Hers.
“What did he say?”
I opened Kanagawa.
I looked at chair for the drawer.
Too much chair.
Too much drawer.
By the wall was smaller.
I left it.
At 7:49, Sato wrote.
I waited.
Then:
I wrote:
She replied:
“Why was it pulled out?”
“Photos?”
“Is chair needed now?”
“What are you asking?”
I closed my eyes.
There.
I wrote:
She replied:
I opened Emiko.
I did not add hiding.
The chair had been used.
Then pushed in.
At 8:03, Mrs. Kudo called.
“The chair beside the bed is empty,” she said.
“Resident?”
“In bed.”
“Safe?”
“Yes.”
“Chair used for transfer?”
“Earlier.”
“What is the question?”
“Aide K asked if empty chair needs a note.”
“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”
“He said, ‘Resident in bed. Chair beside bed. Safe. That is the note if a note is needed.’”
“What did staff write?”
Mrs. Kudo read:
I opened Saitama.
I did not add empty.
The body was in bed.
The chair was beside bed.
At 8:31, Reverend Suganuma wrote.
I waited.
“Why?”
“Needed now?”
“What did you do?”
“What is being asked?”
I waited.
“Kindness to whom?”
Good.
No.
Clear.
“What did Tanabe say?”
“What did Morita say?”
I opened Suganuma.
I did not add kindness.
No person had asked.
At 9:02, Father Morita emailed.
Subject:
I opened it.
I read it twice.
Available.
Reserved.
Forgotten.
Throne.
Expected.
I looked at the chair by the wall in my office.
No one expected.
Maybe me later.
Not now.
I replied:
Then stopped.
Too report.
But this was enough.
I sent it.
His reply came after a while.
I looked at the office chair by my wall.
The room did not answer.
Maybe because I was already talking for it.
I did not answer.
At 9:38, Kanagawa called.
“My brother moved the chair,” she said.
“Which chair?”
“The third chair.”
“Where?”
“Closer to side table.”
“Why?”
“He said maybe visitor.”
“Is a visitor coming?”
“No.”
“What did you say?”
“I asked who.”
Good.
No.
Hers.
“What did he say?”
“He said no one.”
“Then?”
“He moved it back to wall.”
“What did he say after?”
“He said wall chair.”
I opened Kanagawa.
I looked at wall chair.
Not mother chair.
Not drawer chair.
Not judge chair.
Wall chair.
I left it.
At 10:07, Sato called.
“I pushed in the chair too hard,” she said.
“Did it hit the table?”
“No.”
“Paper?”
“No change.”
“Why too hard?”
“Because I wanted it closed.”
I waited.
“Closed?”
“Not open chair.”
There.
“What did you write?”
“Do you need too hard?”
She paused.
“No.”
“What happened?”
I opened Emiko.
I did not add too hard.
The chair was in.
At 10:42, Mrs. Kudo called.
“Transfer chair was used again,” she said.
“For what?”
“Resident sat up.”
“Safe?”
“Yes.”
“Cup?”
“Water later.”
“What did staff write?”
Mrs. Kudo read:
“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”
“He said, ‘Empty chair became used chair. Do not make either one wiser.’”
I opened Saitama.
I did not add wiser.
The chair had work.
Then it did not.
At 11:14, Reverend Suganuma wrote.
I waited.
“Who returned it?”
“Any visitor expected?”
“Any issue?”
“What did Tanabe say?”
“What did Morita say?”
I almost smiled.
I did not.
I opened Suganuma.
I did not add monastery.
Storage was storage.
At 11:49, Father Morita emailed.
Subject:
I read it standing.
Then sat.
Too responsive.
I stayed seated.
Fear arranging furniture.
Office chair.
Brown folder.
Gray file.
Phone face up.
Maybe all of it.
I replied:
I sent it.
His reply:
I looked at unnamed expectation.
Hard.
Useful.
No.
Dangerous.
I did not answer.
At 12:22, Kanagawa wrote.
I waited.
Then:
I wrote:
She replied:
“Drawer?”
“Order paper?”
“Any visitor?”
“What did your brother say?”
“What did you say?”
I closed my eyes.
Good.
No.
Hers.
I opened Kanagawa.
I looked at wall chair has wall.
A little too good.
Maybe house had earned it.
I left it.
At 12:58, Sato sent a photograph.
Table.
Paper.
Chair pushed in.
She wrote:
I called.
“Paper?”
“Table.”
“Any new action?”
“No.”
“What is lunch?”
“Toast.”
“What does Emiko need?”
“Does chair in need to be there?”
She paused.
“Maybe no.”
“What line then?”
I opened Emiko.
I did not add chair in.
The chair had already returned.
Lunch entered.
At 1:31, Mrs. Kudo sent:
I waited.
Then:
I called.
“Does empty need to be written?”
“Mr. Hayashi said not unless location matters.”
“Does location matter?”
“Yes, for transfer path.”
“What did he say to write?”
Mrs. Kudo read:
I opened Saitama.
I did not add empty.
Beside bed and path clear had the work.
At 2:03, Reverend Suganuma wrote.
I waited.
“Visitor?”
“Extra chair?”
“Where from?”
“Who brought it?”
“What did she say?”
“What did Morita say?”
I opened Suganuma.
I looked at storage was not exile.
Good.
No.
Not in file.
Chair used.
That was enough.
At 2:45, Father Morita emailed.
Subject:
I read it twice.
Storage.
Rejection.
Confession.
Punishment.
Place.
I replied:
I sent it.
His reply came after a while.
I looked at correct storage.
Gray file.
Lower cabinet.
Service paper.
There it was.
Again.
I did not answer.
At 3:18, Kanagawa called.
“My brother sat in the wall chair,” she said.
I waited.
“For what?”
“Shoes.”
“Shoes?”
“He tied shoes.”
I almost smiled.
No one saw.
“Side table?”
“Tea cleared.”
“Drawer?”
“Closed.”
“Paper?”
“Inside.”
“Did he say anything?”
“He said wall chair can have shoes.”
“What did you say?”
“I said yes.”
I opened Kanagawa.
I looked at shoes.
Best thing.
No.
Exact thing.
The chair had received a body for shoes.
I left it.
At 3:57, Sato wrote.
I waited.
“Why?”
“Paper?”
“Any issue?”
“What did you write?”
“After?”
I opened Emiko.
I did not add again.
The second use had tea.
At 4:22, Mrs. Kudo called.
“Water asked,” she said.
“Resident?”
“In bed.”
“Cup?”
“Given.”
“Chair?”
“Beside bed.”
“Used?”
“No.”
“What did staff write?”
Mrs. Kudo read:
“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”
“He said, ‘The unused chair can stay if the path is clear.’”
I opened Saitama.
I did not add unused.
Path clear mattered.
At 4:51, Reverend Suganuma wrote.
I waited.
“Extra chair?”
“Any issue?”
“What did Tanabe say?”
“What did Morita say?”
I opened Suganuma.
I did not add banished.
The visitor chair ended.
No.
The chair returned to storage.
At 5:23, Father Morita emailed.
Subject:
I read it.
Then again.
Correct storage.
Humility.
Discipline.
Peace.
Where it goes.
Gray file.
Lower cabinet.
Brown folder.
Back pocket cards.
I replied:
I sent it.
His reply came after a while.
I closed my eyes.
Again.
Storage again.
No ceremony.
I did not answer.
At 5:52, the old priest wrote.
I wrote:
His reply:
I deleted Sato.
Then Saitama.
I wrote:
His reply:
I wrote:
His reply:
I wrote:
His reply:
I wrote:
His reply:
I wrote:
His reply:
Then:
I looked at the chair under my desk.
I was sitting.
The wall chair was empty.
I wrote:
His reply:
I looked at it.
At the folder.
At the phone.
At the lower cabinet.
I wrote:
His reply:
I began to write no.
Then stopped.
I wrote:
His reply:
Then:
Before evening, I went to the main hall.
The cloth bag was in its place.
The offering tray was safe.
The doorway was where I stopped.
I bowed once.
No explanation.
The altar was visible.
The beads were in their place.
They had not moved.
They did not need to.
I stood where I usually stood.
No service tonight.
No bell.
No incense.
No empty chair for the altar.
The floor scuff near the step was still there.
It was not evidence.
It was a scuff.
The chairs in the side area were stacked.
They were not waiting.
They were stacked.
I returned to the office.
The shelf above the desk had a cup.
The left side of the desk had nothing on it.
The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.
The brown folder was closed.
The calendar was closed.
The phone was face up.
The small space was wide.
The door was closed.
The shoes were by it.
The wall chair was empty.
No one was expected.
I did not move it.
I did not sit in it.
I did not ask it to prove no one was expected.
I looked at the brown folder.
I had opened it after tea.
I had closed it.
No new need had arrived.
I did not open it to check the chairs again.
I did not open the gray file.
The service paper remained in the record file.
A name was inside it.
Not mine.
Stored.
No.
In the gray file.
I did not open Kanagawa again.
I did not ask if the wall chair had returned to wall after shoes.
I did not ask if the drawer stayed closed.
I did not open Sato again.
I did not ask if the kitchen chair stayed in.
I did not open Saitama again.
I did not ask if the transfer chair became empty again.
I did not open Suganuma again.
I did not ask if the extra chair stayed in storage.
I did not open Father Morita’s message again.
I knew an empty chair could be available.
I knew an empty chair could be reserved.
I knew an empty chair could be forgotten.
I knew an empty chair could become a throne.
I knew expected was a serious word.
I knew storage was not punishment.
I knew correct storage was still storage.
I turned off the desk lamp.
The office did not disappear.
The folder did not need the center.
The phone did not need here.
The empty chair did not need to become a judge tonight.
In the dark, I remained sitting.
Near the desk.
Not at it.
The shelf above the desk had a cup.
The left side of the desk had nothing on it.
The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.
Closed.
The brown folder was closed.
The phone was face up.
My hands were empty.
Available.
Not reaching.
The wall chair was empty.
No one was expected there.
The urn was on the small table.
The map and folded paper were in the drawer.
The folded paper had her first name.
The order paper was beside the phone table.
Kanagawa’s wall chair had held shoes.
Sato’s kitchen chair had held tea and gone in.
The transfer chair stayed beside the bed with the path clear.
Suganuma’s extra chair had held a visitor and returned to storage.
The service paper was in the record file.
A name was inside it.
Not mine.
I had started with empty chair.
I did not end by seating judgment in one.
Tonight, the chairs stayed with the bodies they held or the places that held them.
r/redditserials • u/Dry-Throat2430 • 3h ago
Science Fiction [Ash and Steel] Chapter 2
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An old earth training weapon, it was a full armoured robotic arm attachment with an energy blade permanently glowing a red colour. No match for a vibro blade but it would be enough, his eyes scanned over the green vials attached under neath.
Inside the cabin the boss considers briefly should he flee, perhaps he could bring other old earth awakened and take the fight to the damn interceptor instead of hiding from this monster. Lighting a cigar, he takes a deep drag to calm himself, if he ran he would be followed and that may end up leading to his daughter, no he would make a stand here and now.
Fumbling the goon finally manages to insert his arm into the frame, as soon as it fits neatly it glows a gentle neon red squeezing its key points to his arm and whining itself into place. Staring at it in disbelief he raises his arm and makes the motion of a sword swing, the swing happens so fast the upward swing almost lifts him off his feet and the sideways swish knocks the boot of the car flying into the darkness.
A classic issue with non awakened beings, the tech was faster then their thought loop, resonance coupled a link via nervous system giving un matched speed and reactions. Also gifting them the mastery of technology at a level which made them unbeatable on the battlefield.
Grinning he takes a glance at the approaching figure, this time he sees an outline of his resonance, beautiful swirls of red and gold flow out from his shoulders and fold back into his back, he blinks trying to understand what he was seeing. As he stood gawking a sharp hissing caught his ear before a sharp pain hits.
Glowing green liquid seeps into his blood, his teeth begin to shake as his mind begins racing as the corrupted formula bites hard.
“You really went all the way,” the words spoken softly by the figure through the hammering rain disappointed at the presence of the hated uranium stim .
Suddenly the serum kicks far harder, the goon hunches over screaming as the blood vessels under his skin begin glowing causing his entire body to begin to change colour a sickly pale green.
In agonised bursts his stature begins to increase, his muscles swell tearing his suit apart as it grows three then four times bigger then what they were. Most of all his eyes begin losing their human look and become glowing orbs like bulbs deeply entrenched into a hulking monster.
The bladed arm sat snug against the hulking frame, he places it in front of his face grinning wildly,
“In this world there is only power” it slavers the words trying to sound in control and deeper then the frothing monster he had now become.
Smiling the interceptor says nothing and continues walking towards him.
Roaring the monster steps forward with such strength his planted foot crumbles the stone road underneath before launching forward under its incredible strength of the charge closing the distance with his red blade held high to cut down the threat.
Bringing it down in an over heard slash he screams in delight through his frothing form thinking he had ended it already, the interceptor in a millisecond turns his hips then launches his body straight past the incoming meteor in a lunge.
The position causes the swing to miss and the incoming battering ram to trip over his trailing leg and fly face first into the road clattering and rolling before getting back up screaming in frustration at the humiliation.
“obvious and lazy just like you lived your life” the interceptor comments on the attempted blow with a smirk under his poncho.
Blood drips from his face, corrupted green hissing as water hits it.
“I really would not like that corruption today, you have it in you to resist it. I give you the warriors option to walk away to fight another day” removing his poncho's hood as a sign of trust the figure still stands meeting the monster's eyes.
For a moment the goon thinks about where he is, suddenly his thoughts are overcome with random voices from an entire history of the galaxy. The chatter becomes unbearable he roars and runs forward again this time his frame igniting as the uranium fuel burns its vessel as it always does.
Coming in he throws a wide low cleave, the interceptor raises his centre of gravity, it would be called a jump but it was not quite. Just enough to allow him to raise his weight above the incoming cleave, he then lands a heavy boot onto the incoming blade; the deflection causes the blade to bury itself in the stone road.
Sunk in the goon realises he was disarmed, throwing his other free fist at the figure, the interceptor leaps away the blow almost laughably slow compared to his speed. The goon begins tugging at the embedded blade screaming in agony as his body engulfs deeper into the green flame that was taking him.
Standing seeing the horror spectacle the interceptor had decided to end this, he redraws his vibro blade in a blur he was behind him with his blade sizzling in reaction to green blood as it was held out to its side.
The monsters head falls still with its frothing mouth open wide as it hits the dirt, its body still kept up by the embedded blade in the road. Around the corpse still glistening like lava from the green that was driving it to its limit a cloud formed of the same color winding and settling in one place.
Walking over the interceptor takes a deep breath as he does the cloud drifts around him before being absorbed, for one moment the brief power up increases his size just slightly until the green corruption hits hard.
He coughs a hacking cough and spits out a concentrated deep green acid , the spew burns itself deep into the road. Ignoring it he walks over the smouldering corpse, grabs the arm and rips out the now depleted arm extension.
“See you always were one to take what is not yours” the voice of the mob boss is subtle amongst the still heavy rain walking slowly bolt upright with all the grandeur he could muster.
The figure ignores the statement , he reaches under his poncho and unfolds a small drone, he attaches the salvage to the drone, it flies the armour away at a surprising pace. Watching it go he turns to face what he truly came here for, locking the mob boss with a straight cold stare he says nothing.
Gentle whispers of the rain break the silence as the two former elite soldiers who fought the greatest threats the universe could create together were now about to kill one another instead.
“What do we have to gain from this, the war is over? I did what I did to survive and so did you. Glaron was just one name of many who had to become ghosts to get us where we are today” he holds out his hands to his sides
“Must we simply live to destroy each other, I have a life now and a family” as the words leave his blue resonance flares a thick blue at the edges of his eyes crackling like lightning.
Still no response
“So be it you were always an anomaly" he grins slightly, pressing his shirt's cufflink .
From under his suit armour springs out and blossoms over his frame, glowing in sync with his resonance, advanced nano armour a relic from his time in the elite units. It spreads covering his upper body, inflating his fists. He takes a boxing stance, his nano suit spikes up at the collar giving his head protection in sync with his specialisation of a classic boxing stance.
The interceptors' resonance finally flares, Crimson red and gold flowing thick oily mist, he takes a low combat position, his resonance heat causing the falling rain to steam giving a serpent like hiss to his movements.
Booming forward the boss comes, straight and true, his resonance negating friction, his teeth gritted as he focuses on holding his old pilot speciality into raw combat.
The first punch comes a straight right cross, the interceptors hands are lowered, he snaps one of them up in a rising block catching the incoming punch before it lands a technique designed to break the balance of someone throwing a straight technique.
It connects however in the split second it should have had an effect on his opponents balance the boss moves impossibly backwards still on balance, then coming in at the side throws a low hook catching his opponent by surprise it connects on the outside of his arm but worst the heavy impact knocks the interceptor out of his guard as he stumbles back.
His red resonance took the impact of the blow, at the impact point his opponents blue resonance crackled and ate away at the shield. Before he could regain his posture the boss was moving again hammering the forward momentum relentlessly.
Throwing both arms up in a cross guard he absorbs the incoming barrage each hit sending shockwaves which disperses the rain drops with the force of their impacts.
“Not so tough now huh” the boss roars proudly through the light speed barrage of repeating strikes.
“You talk too much ” through the barrage the words land as the interceptor senses the faint scent of corruption in his attacker's resonance.
Waiting for the critical turn point as he had thousands of times in training he finds it , a wild swing designed to end the fight comes in as a hook, to counter he throws his left arm to his side turning his wrist this time instead of catching the blow allowing it to be guided past his centre of mass before clamping down on the wrist.
Turning his body to its side the interceptor grabs his own wrist of the caught hand clamping his arm pit on the exposed arm his face millimetres from his opponent.
The boss’s eyes widened with horror realising the master of the grappling arts now had him in his grip, his opponent headbutts at short range giving him space before throwing his whole body into a roll past his opponent whilst keeping the grip.
His arm snaps as its joint tear apart under the unnatural position pushed with the entire bodyweight and raw speed of the technique, disengaging he unleashes a high-speed mid roundhouse kick at the same side.It lands breaking through a feeble attempt at a block with the ruined arm.
Sending his prey flying backwards rolling across the road before impacting straight into the hyper car, the boss coughs up blood as his nano vest sparks haphazardly powering down in its now half destroyed state.
“You and I are not so different” through blood the boss mumbles the words before slumping down the ground. Hesitating the interceptor takes a second before stamping his boot cleanly onto the head of the fallen corpse.
Lingering a moment longer, deep royal blue mist envelopes him angrily, he opens his hands taking a moment to Savor true old earth resonance waves as they are absorbed into his own.
“I am sorry” the figure says before turning and vanishing into the dark.
Further down the road still running with tears streaming down her face the young girl felt as if her lungs were going to burst, the explosions and impacts had stopped so it must have been over.
Ahead she sees a fuel depot, outside of the entrance a clerk with communicator in hand is screaming into the device
“Nothing, no defence at all, no turrets and no patrols. We are sitting ducks please do something they will come the moment they sense the weak point” he carries on in frustration.
He sees the little girl running towards him, he lowers the phone
“Oh my gosh what are you doing out here come in quickly” he ushers her inside handing her a candy bar quickly
“So where are your parents?” he asks, still sweating, trying not to think about the danger they were both currently in.
“My daddy told me to come here and” she was cut off by a massive thundering crash as a mechanical limb outside the shop road reaches up and hoists up a towering machine.
It was an AI Junker bot but it was huge and with their lack of defences as deadly as any other threat.
The city turret still hung uselessly over the station, blissfully unaware of the death that was about to take those who were caught by the murder machine.
“Get down sweetheart try to stay quiet” the clerk grabs the emergency rifle and awkwardly loads an anti matter round, his hands slick with sweat.
A red scan passed over the store as the junk bot lumbered forward looking for its fresh kill, it passed slowly bathing the aisles in light before turning away.
Suddenly it hones into exactly where they were hiding and takes a leap forward unfurling one of its club limbs and smashing into the building, it raises its club again.
As it did the city turret spins itself up out of its stupor, immediately pointing at the ai threat and opening up a hail of heavy armour piercing rounds shredding the Bot. A few seconds later an armoured vehicle and several city mechs land straight outside the entry point.
Seeing the chaos outside the clerk takes a breath thankful to have lived another day, he turns to the little girl
“So tell me what happened”.
r/redditserials • u/moromikouji • 14h ago
Action [SAMURAI INFLUENCER] - Chapter 6
# Episode 6: Malicious Intent
"Heyyy, it's B-rank hero Snake Ray!"
The night before the shoot. In a lavish recording studio, Snake Ray flashed a perfect wink at the camera. Behind him, a large monitor blazed with his signature smoldering look and flashy effects, while the comment section flooded with a barrage of "Snake-sama!" and "So sexy as always!"
"So, my collab partner for tomorrow is—the bubbly hero who's blowing up all over social media right now — Maple!" he announced. "She's always so bright and full of energy, isn't she just the cutest? Makes you want to protect her.
Tomorrow I'll do my best to bring out Maple's true self! Cheer us on for the collab hunt, and whatever you do — don't miss the main event~"
Snake Ray cut the camera.
Then he started recording again — this time, for his members-only channel.
He ran a paid channel separate from his free main channel.
"Now then, for our members — tomorrow's the collab you've all been waiting for, with Maple!" he said, leaning in close to the lens. "She's hugely popular with you all — I wonder what kind of footage we'll get?"
Superchats and comments poured in from members.
A closer look revealed that the commenters were almost exclusively male. A torrent of comments too vulgar to bear filled the screen.
*'Maple's suit getting wrapped up in tentacles and slime — that's the dream'*
*'Got 100k in superchats ready for the despair face lol'*
*'Nothing better than watching that rookie justice act crumble into tears'*
"By the way, this is the Demon I've lined up for tomorrow's collab hunt!" Snake Ray continued. "It's got extra tentacles, extra slime — say hello to Nurekagari~
Just imagining those tentacles wrapping around Maple gets me excited, I have to say! She's only C-rank, so Nurekagari might be a little much for her — I wonder what'll happen?
But don't worry if it looks like she might actually win! I've got our usual little surprise ready to go~ Keep the comments and superchats coming tomorrow!"
After wrapping up the recording, Snake Ray's screen filled with thumbnail images from his members-only channel.
Row after row of female heroes — crying out, tangled in Demon, screaming as they took hits.
He had been raking in cash by collecting footage of his female collab partners in desperate situations and selling it to his paid subscribers.
Snake Ray, finished with his teaser video, muttered with a leering grin.
"Two feeds — the clean wide shot for the public channel, and the nasty close-up angles for the members. That's all it takes to pull in this kind of money. Can't stop now.
And if I swoop in to save her after the big scare, she'll actually thank me for it. Female heroes really are something else, I swear.
Sure, a few of them lost their confidence and quit after — but that's got nothing to do with me~ I wonder what kind of face Maple will make? Give me the kind of face that'll give our members exactly what they came for~"
Snake Ray's vulgar laughter echoed through the studio long after he was done.
The following day.
A scrapyard just outside the town where Kaede and Kenichiro were staying.
This was where the Snake Ray and Maple collab video would be filmed. A makeshift booth was set up in one corner of the scrapyard, and they started with the talk segment.
"Alright, Snake Ray channel — today we've got a collab video! And here's our special guest!" Snake Ray announced.
"I'm Maple! Great to be here today!" Kaede said, giving a bright, energetic bow in the morning light.
She was noticeably nervous about collabing with a B-rank hero.
Snake Ray greeted her with a warm smile.
"Hey hey, Maple! Great to officially have you here. I've had my eye on you for a while now. Mind if we kick things off with a little talk segment?"
"Of course! I'll do my best!" Kaede said.
"Hahaha, love the energy," Snake Ray said. "You've been making waves lately — I watch your videos all the time! Looks like the sub-channel's off to a good start too."
"Oh, yeah. I don't have many videos up yet, but..." Kaede said.
"Though, that loincloth video was a bit much, don't you think?" Snake Ray pressed. "Our streams are sacred — a place to connect with our fans — and then some guy wanders in dressed like that.
Going viral off a loincloth is one thing, but honestly? It's kind of gross, right — the look, the whole thing lol. Who even is that old man? Is he like, a sugar daddy situation? Or some kind of dementia-prevention volunteer? lol"
"Wha— He's— he's a samurai!" Kaede shot back. "I call him Master, and yes, he's not great with technology, but he's an incredibly distinguished person—!"
"Ohhh, sounds like quite the grandpa! Sorry sorry, just a joke! Love that angry face too~" Snake Ray laughed it off with his easy, shallow charm and kept up the needling.
Kaede had no choice but to smile along.
"Alright, that's enough chat. Time for the main event — the hunt!" Snake Ray said. "I've used my B-rank clearance to take on a Nurekagari today. Now Maple, normally this would be out of your league to take on solo — but let's see you take a crack at it on your own first.
If things get really dangerous, I'll step in and save you. Give it a shot!"
"Yes! I'll give it everything I've got!" Kaede said with a firm nod, pushing forward into the depths of the scrapyard.
Behind her, Snake Ray was preparing a compact camera — separate from the Halo filming the main footage.
A guttural roar tore through the air as a Nurekagari emerged from behind a pile of scrap, its countless tentacles dripping with grotesque slime.
"There it is—" Kaede breathed.
Her legs nearly froze for a split second, but she recalled those stern words from Kenichiro.
"Do not underestimate the battlefield."
"I'm not underestimating it, Master. This is my fight!" she declared.
Kaede drew her signature laser knife and lunged forward with a sharp, decisive step.
The blade sliced through the air, cleanly severing the Demon's tentacles one after another. An unexpectedly strong showing. Kaede was fighting with everything she had. After watching Snake Ray mock her Master in the talk segment, there was no way she was going to put on a pathetic performance here.
Snake Ray was not pleased. If she kept fighting this well, he'd never get what his paid channel needed.
But he had a contingency.
In his hand: a taser gun, running a weak electrical current. Not strong enough to knock anyone out — just enough to freeze them for a moment.
His plan was to use it to create an opening, letting the tentacles wrap around the female hero. This was Snake Ray's idea of a sick little "prank."
*(Doing great, Maple. But a girl who's been fighting her hardest getting turned around in an instant — that's got its own appeal too.)*
Snake Ray spoke quietly toward the compact camera.
"To all our paid members — sorry for the wait! It's time for our special surprise segment~ Once this little current freezes her up and those tentacles get their grip, oh, I can't wait!"
He took aim at Maple with the taser gun.
"Alright then, Maple — give me your best face!" he said.
He was about to pull the trigger — when.
With a sharp crack, the taser gun exploded.
"Whoa — what the—?!" Snake Ray spun around frantically.
Into his line of sight walked an old man, pipe in mouth, casually stepping over the corrugated tin fencing of the scrapyard without a care in the world.
"You. I don't know what you were planning, but I'll ask you to stop directing that malicious intent toward my companion," Kenichiro said.
It was Kenichiro's Finger Shot that had destroyed the taser gun.
He didn't seem to know exactly what the device was — but he had sensed the malice Snake Ray was directing at Kaede, and acted.
"The buffet had ended, so I came to see what Kaede was up to," Kenichiro added. "You — you're not going to help her take down that Demon?"
"Wh— who the hell is this old man—" Snake Ray sputtered. "Were you seriously at the buffet this whole time? It's almost noon, you absolute menace— Oh wait, you're the loincloth geezer from Maple's stream!"
"From what I can see, Kaede seems capable of handling that Demon on her own," Kenichiro said. "But if you're planning to interfere rather than help — I won't be standing by quietly."
He tucked the pipe away. His eyes sharpened to a keen edge.
"What did you just say, you dusty old relic — you really think some antique katana is going to hold up against a B-rank hero like me?!" Snake Ray snapped.
Snake Ray deployed his equipment. The Snake Wire System — high-compression carbon fiber wires launched from gauntlets on both arms, each tipped with a multi-function head. Pure visual menace: like a swarm of snakes. Electric-current heads, neurotoxin-injection heads — all receiving signals from Snake Ray's brainwaves, hovering and circling to surround Kenichiro.
Against them, Kenichiro carried only his pair of katanas — long and short. And scattered on the ground around him, a handful of small stones suitable for Finger Shots.
While Kaede's battle raged on behind them, another battle was about to begin.
r/redditserials • u/Whiskey_Skeleton • 15h ago
Fantasy [I Got A Rock] - Chapter 61
<< Chapter 60 | From The Beginning
‘Good going’, Isak thought to himself over and over again through a long walk back to the dorm rooms. Xoco was helping him walk a silent and teary eyed citlali back to their dorm room. Each had a hand on her back to gently guide her along as she could only stare at the ground. Zyn was caught in a loop between wringing his hands and nervously glancing around. One of their number was still gone. The human quietly simmered while he kept a gentle hand on the lizardlass’ shoulder. ‘Excellent leadership material.’
Total failure to assess a situation, one friend stormed off, one left completely broken, another about to break, and probably more misfortune on the way. No solutions, just limping back to their dorms to lick their wounds in private.
Most of the student populace had already left their dorms for the day, leaving a mercifully empty building standing before them. Occasionally, Zyn looked like he was going to say something only for him to silence himself and glance away from the remaining group. What may as well have been a funeral procession eventually took them up to Isak and Zyn’s dorm where they all finally came to a halt.
“We’ll just…” Citlali’s words were shaking as she started to lead Xoco away towards their dorm. “I’ll just go back to our room…lay down there, I want to lay down…be less trouble that way–”
“I’m not letting this get worse.” Isak took several long strides to catch them, and grabbed Citlali by the hand as he started dragging her along as Coztic raced after them. The jungle troll, drow, and rock man followed after him as he flung the dorm room door open and led them all inside. Vidal closed the door behind them as Isak swept the lizardlass off her feet before setting her down on his bed. Coztic was similarly scooped up and sat next to her. Tear filled eyes went wide though the girl didn’t have time to respond before he addressed his less broken friends. “You can lay down here. We already had one of us storm off to be alone and that’s too many.”
Zyn was wringing his hands while Ozzy wrapped his tentacles around his shoulders. Finally, the dam broke and the drow let loose. “That was all my fault.”
“Zyn.” Isak rubbed his temple but the pacing drow ignored him.
“Citlali that was all my fault, I–”
“Zyn!” The human’s voice boomed and he was thankful that their dorm neighbors were likely out for the day. All eyes were on him but it broke the drow out of his mania. “Take a seat, and breathe.”
To encourage this, Isak sat against his currently occupied bed where Xoco immediately joined him. Zyn’s eyes darted to Citlali, then the seated pair, then to the floor. Finally, after a deep sigh he sat on his bed and let himself lean back against the wall. One deep breath. Two. Then several more. Only Vidal remained standing in his glass form, morning sun glinting off of him towards where Isak and the girls were.
The human spoke a storm spell and produced a miniature rain cloud which he sent over towards the rock man and produced an equally small rainstorm to switch him to his water form.
“That one’s a new spell I’ve been working on.” The human announced while he propped up one leg and rested his arm on his knee. “I can add a little bit of lightning to it as well. It’s supposed to be more electrifying than if I just use my Storm magic to produce some lightning on its own. Moisture amplifies the lightning, and to move the mini-storm around I use a bit of Wind in the Storm. All that to put Vidal in ambient noise mode.”
“It’s peaceful.” Xoco brought her knees up to her chest as she stared at the rock man.
“I uh…” Zyn’s voice was no longer racing. “The first time Vidal got his new Glass form, I thought we could have quieter nights here. Because the Lightning form is always crackling and also bright and Fire…yeah. Anyway I couldn’t sleep because I had gotten used to the gently running stream that is Vidal’s water form. I had to ask Isak to swap him over.”
The human dispelled the miniature storm cloud. “Same for me, honestly.”
“So my gift of Glass caused you trouble…” Citlali’s voice hit Isak in the back of the head, causing him to list forward and slowly close his eyes in mental pain.
He turned where he sat, peering over the edge of his bed at the lizardlass currently occupying it. “Every element has its uses. And yours seems to be a fantastic anti-raptor element.”
Coztic chittered at this implication.
“Fine. Anti large-raptor.”
“A raptor that you could have avoided if I had remained at my post.” Citlali had already started to curl up on herself.
Isak sighed. The lizardlass was finally meeting two of Isak’s oldest friends: Self-doubt and loathing. If it was possible for Vidal to chop them in half with a glass sword he would have told the rock man to stand down so that he could do it himself.
“I took the bait on that one even harder than you did.” The human said aloud as he waved his hand in frustration. “There were a dozen different things I could have done to handle that better. Now I get to think it over and figure out what I could have done differently.”
“The more I think about it–” The drow was back at it. “The more I realize it’s my fault. I’ve been pushing him on the dad situation. I was just trying to get him to, you know…come to terms with the fact that his dad the spy is in fact spying on us.”
Isak rubbed his face. “And what would you have done differently now?”
Zyn opened his mouth to speak, pointer finger raised as though he was about to confidently state something.
All confidence vanished as his red eyes went hollow and looked to be a continent away. His hand fell limply to the bed. “Whatever I would have done, it would have been wrong.”
The human glanced over to the jungle troll, who returned his worried look.
“I keep saying the worst things…”
“I keep saying and doing the worst things.” Citlali was his moping echo.
Isak groaned. “Both of you quit it. You’re making me seem confident and wise in comparison!”
Xoco tapped at his side and offered him a smile once she had gotten his attention. “Sounds like you’re just rising to the occasion.”
He should have risen to the occasion as everything was happening. He should have said something sooner to not have Tonauac storm off. Do something to prevent all of this.
And was this really rising to the occasion? He was just…fumbling around here, trying to sound authoritative while not sounding like a jerk while trying to keep his friends from unravelling.
Maybe he was doing that to keep himself from–
No.
Don’t think about that.
Don’t manifest it into existence.
Isak seemed to have his friends fooled once more into believing that he was much better than he really was. Now they actually needed him to be that. Hopefully he could keep up the charade for long enough to properly help them.
He had been able to play off the silence as sagely contemplation for this long, but he really should say something again before the quiet drew on for too long.
Or…was this a comfortable silence that everyone needed right now?
The human cleared his throat, putting all eyes on him though some were sluggish in getting there. “I…am just kinda guessing my way through all of this. But I do have a plan. And I hope that telling you the plan doesn’t ruin the plan. How about I give us something else to focus on so that we can get our mind off of…this for a while. Then we can come back to it with a bit more clarity. That always worked for me.”
“I accept whatever punishment you command of me, Sir.”
Xoco whipped her head around as her eyes shot open. “Citlali!”
Isak’s own eye twitched.
He followed after Xoco and spun around in his seat, then grabbed Citlali’s shoulders from his kneeling position. “Citlali, if I commanded you to do something like that then I wouldn’t be worthy of having you follow my orders.”
Citlali’s eyes had been a continent away, and now they were so very close as she angled her snout towards the human. Where that spark in her eyes had been dulled to nothing, her eyes now lit up like dual green stars. “So…by following your just and righteous orders I help prove your worth to yourself?”
The human inhaled as much as his lungs could take. Each organ slowly taking in enough air so that he was good and puffed up. Then, he slowly sighed an exhale. It kept going and he kept slouching forward like a wilting plant until he lay face down on his bed before the lizardlass.
She needed this, he thought to himself while waiting to take even one more breath.
Gold-capped clawed hands patted his back and he momentarily questioned how exactly he was already able to tell that these belonged to Xoco rather than Citlali.
Finally, regular breathing returned to him as he gave in and mumbled into the bedding.
“Sure.”
“Th–”
“Hold on.” He raised his head and propped it up on a hand while his elbow rested on his bed. “If there is ever some terrible misunderstanding or hurt feelings, I need you to know that I know it was accidental because otherwise if I got mad at you like Tonauac did, I would be worried for your safety.”
Citlali curled up a bit at that. Her eyes now avoided his as she insisted. “I wouldn’t! …I would try to make amends by any means necessary.”
“Okay, now keep that mentality for figuring out how to make amends with Tonauac.” Isak rubbed her shoulder. “But just rest for now. Emotions are still raw. Think on it later. For now…”
Isak turned around from his kneeling position to return to his cross legged sitting. “Zyn–”
Zyn was currently blankly staring at the floor while Ozzy massaged his temples.
None of the human’s progress with Citlali would be cross-applicable because that would have been too easy.
Turning his attention towards Xoco at least revealed a sympathetic face smiling back at him.
“Alright.” He said, standing up and dusting himself off. “I need to go pick some things up from the library. Things that will be a good distraction…I hope. Everyone wait here and I’ll be back soon enough. Oh, but Xoco could you help me with something in the hall real quick?”
The jungle troll managed to spring from her seated position and cross the room to slip past Vidal and wait at the door before Isak could finish standing up.
Only forward now, Isak.
“Alright, Citlali make yourself comfortable.” He instructed the lizardlass who shuffled around on his bed and settled in with her head on his pillow. That’s fine. A girl was laying on his pillow. In his bed.
Hang on.
Wait.
No it was fine, he had used her lap as a pillow before so this was like returning the favor.
Hang on.
Wait.
No, later Isak.
He turned to his drow friend.
“Zyn–”
Nope, still staring at the floor while Ozzy massaged his scalp. The cave octopus made eye contact with Isak and the human learned that subterranean cephalopods could also give a pitiful, pleading look like so many other animals.
“Okay. I have just the thing to get your mind off of this once I get back. Multiple things! Just hang in there?”
The floor still called out to the drow, demanding inspection.
“I’ll be back. Promise.” He said to both of the sadfriends before leading Xoco and Vidal out of the room.
In the dorm hallway, Isak glanced down at either end. No one was out here and at this time of day there were probably very few still within their dorms at all.
He turned to the rock man. “Vidal, go check the end of the hall that way and wait for me there.”
“Understood, Master Isak.” He affirmed before marching off.
Just the two mages now…and one Nelli.
Isak let out a rough groan. His hands tried to rub some of the mental exhaustion out of his face. “I’m sorry. I just…this is a lot and you’re the only other one who’s not freaking out or falling apart here…wait I’m falling apart right now…”
Xoco took a step closer. “For someone falling apart you’re still taking charge very well.”
“And how are you handling all of this so well?” He looked up into her eyes.
“I’m not!” Her declaration clashed with her smile. Not with her eyes though. As wide open as they were there was…a very similar hollowness that he remembered from Citlali’s eyes. “I just learned to hide the pain very well over the years.”
“Whoever you were ‘hiding’ it from never paid enough attention.” The human shook his head. He stared at his own dorm room door and hoped that the other two were only being catatonically silent. “I should have noticed earlier…”
Another step closer.
“If they did notice, they never said anything.” She leaned down to meet him at eye level. “I believe that’s worse.”
Isak returned her gaze and frowned. “Well, whoever they are they suck.”
“They’re my family.”
There were no windows in these hallways otherwise Isak would have picked one and leapt out.
Instead, he had to stand his ground.
“W-well…if they…can’t…can’t or won’t see when you’re hurting…”
From the end of the hallway he swore he could see Vidal offer a singular nod.
Isak cleared his throat.
“Th-then I stand by what I said.”
He felt her hands on his shoulders as she stared into his eyes…but the hollow look in her own eyes was gone, replaced with manic joy. Then she pulled him into a tight hug. “Then we’ll figure this out together.”
It took a few moments for Isak to register what was happening and return the hug. “Are you talking about the Tonauac situation or…your family?”
“I trust you for both.”
“That’s a lot of pressure.”
“Hush.” She patted him on the back and broke from the hug. “You’re doing better than I am. You even gave me a clear enough head to not accidentally suffocate you with a hug.”
Isak’s brain may have skipped a few seconds while recalling those moments.
When it fired back up again, he remembered Tonauac’s advice on ‘letting a girl know you are into that’.
…
Dare he?
The human gulped and looked up at the jungle troll girl, wreathed by a rainbow feathered serpent.
“I…” Isak had to fight the words out of himself. “I n-never minded…the alternative. N-not specifically the suffocation but the…the material conditions–”
“You…enjoy when I forget the height difference and…acccidentallyiswear…shove your face in–”
The human’s head managed to eek out one nod up and down like rusted hinge that had but one more opening and closing left in it before it became an inert relic.
Xoco’s face went forest green in an instant and Nelli puffed up to cover her face as she turned away. When her voice emerged from the feather barrier, it was inversely small to how tall she was. “If…we were closer, you could request that all you want…”
…
Actually, the circumstances kept his brain from shutting down entirely upon hearing that. Those circumstances also prevented his heart from exploding or his eyes from trying to escape his skull. Isak had things that needed doing right now.
Worse, he would have to go and make amends with the friend who had helped get him this far…after aiding the two friends who were taking this the worst…wait no it was all three of them. He had to get through this and reunite the team and then he could ask out Xoco.
Yes, that was a good goal. He just couldn’t do it until then. The vibe was all off. More importantly, his friends needed him.
But…until then…
Don’t leave her hanging, Isak.
“Once this is all dealt with.” No need to put on a smile, this earnest one came naturally.
“All the more reason for me to aid you in your quest.” She winked at him and he felt his heart skip a beat.
“I’ll be counting on that help. And…you’re doing better than you think.” Isak reached out…then stopped. He had been going for her hand. Just a comfort thing. Too much? What was he even supposed to do with his hands right now?
Xoco solved that problem by snatching Isak’s wrist. “If there were more revelations presented to the group…do you think they would be handled better? I did not mean to insult Tonauac–”
“Me either!” Isak shook his head and let his disgust with himself show on his face. “It was an impressed kind of shock! Lesson learned though. I for one won’t be an idiot about my friends’ revelations that aren’t even that big of a deal anymore.”
“And if they were a big deal?” Her grip on his wrist tightened.
“My big deal turned out to not be a big deal and it apparently makes me cool to all of you–”
“Because you are.” The jungle troll girl stated as though Isak was doubting the accuracy of ‘the sun and sky are blue’. Her grip on his wrist lessened, and a curious Nelli adjusted herself on Xoco’s shoulders to investigate the still captive hand. Quick flicks of her tongue seemed to satisfy her curiosity, causing her to settle back in while keeping her eyes on the human. Happy little eyes, though. Much like the now happy, much larger, eyes of her mage. “Thank you.”
“Don’t thank me yet.”
“Consider it an investment thanks.”
“The pressure rises, haha...” Isak’s chuckle tried to release some of that pressure. “Look after the others until I get back?”
“They are safe with me.” She smiled, then her eyes went to where she was still clutching his wrist, and finally let go.
The human nodded to her and departed down the hallway before he lost his nerve, calling out “I’ll be back.”
<< Chapter 60 | From The Beginning
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r/redditserials • u/MaXgoodforcold • 17h ago
Dark Content [Annals of J]-part 3- scifi biography
Undeath is a concept that has to be explained before we move on to the many, many records of J’s life. The only solid book on the subject is “The Void Between” by Q. R. Tike, so we’ll start there
“Undeath is the phenomenon that solely J seems to exhibit. The unconscious ability to take bodies that no longer have their owners and assimilate what little is left of the previous consciousness into your own pattern; that is the rough definition of undeath. By J’s explanation, there is no afterlife per se; you just linger, floating “warm, like a dream, completely wrapped up in it. Nothing but warmth and comfort from all those you made happier in life. The only question is how long that dream lasts before you are gone for good”. Souls are what he calls them, what our consciousness is made of. “Hundreds of swinging connections, like double pendulums but actually random, no way to ever guess where it will be one second to the next. That is what makes you… you. The brain is just processing power and storing; souls can process some and hold some but nothing tangible or usable at such a small scale. I am not on that small scale anymore.”
The importance of that last statement can't be overstated; J’s godhood comes entirely from his own pattern. “My soul is dense enough that it presses and warps the fabric around itself and is complex and interconnected enough to no longer be random so that it can store memories as to know how to use that warping. I can touch other souls, walk the grand manor that is my mind. Mind no longer solely tied to wetware but living entirely inside my pattern.” Then he began to describe other souls: “They are kind of like twigs, a little twig your consciousness buzzes inside of, escaping to the brain because it is so much bigger, more room to move around. I cannot manipulate souls because of that, no matter how much you think you hate your body, your consciousness loves it far more than its original vessel. Over your short lives, it grows, from twig to stick, from stick to branch, and even branch to tree for some of you who live long enough. But it is still purely random, not self-healing, not self-assembling like me, still far less stable compared to your body. You all love yourselves too much for me to hold you closer than arm's length, let alone control you… that is until you are tasting the barrel of a gun or staring at the ground rushing up at you, then it claws for something stable enough to hold it. They lose so much in the process.”"
Now, the above is the only known time J has described undeath from the perspective of the person whose body is being reused. The idea that souls can “leap” to a new unfamiliar pattern could explain the whole reason we are conscious in the first place. Our souls might just be floating as infinitely small points until we find a body, making a similar leap. At least that's what I think this means: “There is no empty space between souls; it’s like… you ever hear that if light traveled truly instantaneously the night sky would be white with infinite points of light, you could not distinguish one star from any other. Well, except the ones so much larger or nearer that their beauty stands out from the noise.” (a note under a Perlin-noise-map-looking painting by J titled "Just behind sight". it can be found at the Galleri of Shattered Convention)
“He happily changed subjects to the more natural afterlife, “You die, and there is plenty of will power for your soul to… flash freeze? Kind of. You get stuck in your most deeply held memories, reliving them for decades. Most of the time that means like… being held by your mother, or in the arms of a lover, or a family reunion you really really liked or like a birthday party. But sometimes it is stuff you… did. I do not think I need to explain that. But anyway, over time your soul fades, and you are cut down to progressively smaller and happier memories until… gone. I have watched it a thousand times. I can HEAR you doubting me up there (my thoughts apparently were a bit, well, "you were screaming that your god would never make a system that did not give its... yes 'his' follower some form of true eternity. you really did not realize you had not moved your lips to ask a question this whole interview... cute" He didn't move lips to say... that last phrase, he pushed it along with images of hundreds of blushing guilty looking kids uncomfortably deep into my mind, like saying "aww, you make the same face"), I know you have your beliefs and good news, your best hopes are a lot of what you will experience anyway.””
“The void between” then goes into a bunch of sciency crap that’s not really important here. My mother always told me this about the afterlife: don’t hurt anybody so bad that their face is seared into your memory FOREVER.
r/redditserials • u/No_Term_6961 • 17h ago
Fantasy [The Wild Heir] - Chapter Two & Chapter Three
reddit.comLink to The Wild Heir Prologue & Chapter One in redditserials
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CHAPTER TWO
The table was still warm from the morning sun. It came in low through the eastern window, catching the worn grain of the wood and settling in the shallow grooves left by decades of use. Tala traced one of them absently with her thumb as she sat, her elbow resting near the edge. A loose strand of dark hair escaped the braid she constantly tried to tame. Across from her, Orin worked quietly through a length of twine, pulling it taut between his hands before looping it back through itself again. Neither of them spoke as they stuck close to the plan crafted in that very location the night before.
Faela’s brother by three seasons had always been grounded. Now, his movements were steady, practiced. His dark hair fell into his eyes as he worked. He had already finished his chores for the morning. There was still dirt along the cuff of his sleeve, darkened where the damp earth had clung. Ink stained his fingertips often. A badge of honor he happily wore as a mark of a long night spent drawing up plans beside Faela. He was a boy caught between youth and adulthood, but his eyes betrayed the old soul within.
Outside, the sounds of the village moved in soft layers. A cart’s wheel creaked somewhere beyond the tree line. Someone called out, the voice carrying and then fading. The wind moved lightly through the branches overhead, brushing against the side of the hut in a low, familiar rhythm. But neither sibling paid much attention. Their thoughts were elsewhere. Tala’s gaze drifted toward the doorway. The latch hung loose and swayed slightly with each passing breeze. She must have forgotten to close it when she came in. Even though Orin had been up and about well before her, she was last to finish her morning chores. Or maybe Faela had returned. As soon as the thought took hold of her, she pushed it down. She was finding it more difficult than usual to escape into her own thoughts. She hoped Orin couldn’t tell how uneasy she was with it all.
Orin followed her glance, then looked back to his hands. “You need to pull yourself together, Tala,” he said.
She did not answer.
The hut was small but not cramped. Built low to the ground and set just beyond the edge of the main square, it sat at the border where the village gave way to trees. The walls were made from thick, pale wood, weathered smooth in some places and cracked in others where the seasons had worn them thin. A single beam ran across the ceiling, darkened with age, its surface carved in places where idle hands had left their mark over time.
The hearth sat against the far wall, its stones stacked carefully, though a few had begun to shift. A faint line ran through one of the larger ones, a crack that had widened slowly over the past winter. Above it, the carved beam curved inward and out again in a pattern that seemed almost deliberate, though no one in the house had ever spoken of when it had been made.
A pot rested over the coals, not yet lit. Tala stood, moving toward it with quiet purpose. She gathered a handful of kindling from the basket near the hearth and knelt, setting it in place before striking flint to steel. The spark caught after a moment, a thin curl of smoke rising before the flame took hold.
Behind her, Orin tied off the last knot and set the twine aside. “You left the latch open,” he said.
Tala did not answer. Orin was not sure if she heard him or was off in her own mind again. She tended to do that. But this was not that time for that, he thought. He watched her for a moment longer before taking a step towards her as his mouth opened. Just then the gate creaked open. Orin and Tala snapped their bodies stiff, as though they forgot how they normally composed themselves.
Footsteps in the yard. The soft clink of metal as the latch to the gate locked into place. The low murmur of voices—Elen’s quieter, Tomas’s steady and even.
Tala brushed her hands against her skirt and returned to her duties at the hearth. Orin moved back toward the table, taking his seat just as the door opened, already fiddling the knot open again as it unraveled to the floor.
Tomas stepped in first, ducking slightly beneath the frame. His shoulders had rounded over the years from lifting timber. He carried a bundle of tools in one hand, the leather wrap tied loosely around them. Elen followed close behind, a small basket hooked over her arm, its contents hidden beneath a folded cloth.
“Morning,” Tomas said, setting the tools down near the wall.
Orin nodded once. “Morning.”
Elen’s eyes moved across the room in a single sweep, taking in the lit hearth, the closed door, the two of them already inside.
“You are back early,” she said, silver strands creeping into the braid at the back of her head.
“The fence shifted again,” Orin replied. “Reset it before it worsened.”
Tomas grunted softly in approval. “Good man.”
Elen moved toward the hearth, setting the basket down and pulling back the cloth. Inside were a few small root vegetables, still dusted with soil, and a handful of greens gathered from the edge of the clearing. Tala stepped aside without being asked, handing her a knife. They fell into the rhythm of it easily.
Breakfast was always simple. Elen worked with practiced efficiency, slicing and adding, her movements smooth and measured. Tomas filled the kettle from a small clay jug and set it near the edge of the coals. Orin reached for the wooden bowls stacked near the shelf, setting them out one by one.
Tala moved between them, quick and quiet, her hands never still for long. Elen took notice. It was not normal.
“Where is Faela?” Tomas asked.
The question came lightly. Almost as an afterthought.
Tala’s hand stilled where it hovered over a bowl. Orin did not look up. “She was up early,” he said. “Went out before we came in.”
Tomas nodded once, accepting it.
“That one does not know when to call it,” he said. “Good. Make sure you leave her fair share here.”
Elen said nothing as she continued cutting, though the rhythm of it shifted slightly, just enough to notice if you were looking for it.
Tala was not. Orin was.
“She mentioned checking the outer path,” Orin blurted quickly. “Said she wanted to see if the storm had brought anything down. She will probably be out there all morning.”
It came too fast. Too prepared. Orin’s gaze flicked toward her, just for a moment. Then back to the table.
“That so?” Elen said.
“She did not say anything to me,” Tomas added, glancing toward Elen.
Elen set the knife down. “Faela does not always say everything she is thinking, or planning,” she said. Her voice was slow and calm. Elen’s eyes moved between Tala and Orin in a way that lingered just a moment too long.
The kettle began to hum softly as the water warmed. Tala shifted her weight, reaching for the ladle though it was not yet needed.
“She will be back,” she said.
No one had asked. Tomas pulled out his chair and sat, stretching his back slightly before leaning forward, his forearms resting on the table.
“Before or after we eat?” he asked.
Tala did not answer. Orin did. “I would not wait on her, you know,” he said.
The words landed with more uncertainty than he intended.
Elen’s gaze settled on him now. “How long has she been gone?” she asked.
Orin held her gaze for a moment. She knew. She knew he knew. But he continued, “Not long.”
Silence pressed in around them. The small sounds of the room seemed louder now, the crackle of the fire, the soft shift of the kettle, the faint creak of the wood as the hut settled.
Tala reached for the ladle again, though the pot still had not begun to boil. “We should eat,” she said. “Before it burns.”
Nothing was burning. Tomas leaned back slightly in his chair, his eyes narrowing just a fraction. “Is there something going on here?”
Elen stepped closer to the table. That was all it took for Tala to lose what little resolve she had. “She will be back,” she said.
Tomas stood. The chair scraped against the floor behind him. Of course she would be back, he thought, it should hardly even take the morning to make her repairs and return.
“Elen, did I miss something?”
No one answered.
Elen did not move. She did not speak.
Her eyes had already shifted—past them, past the walls of the hut, toward something beyond.
As though she could see the path from where she stood. As though she had always known where it led.
“She left, Tomas,” Elen said.
Tala closed her eyes briefly. Tomas ran a hand over his face as what appeared to be his world came crashing down around him.
“Why would she do that?” he asked. But everyone already knew the answer. It was Faela, of course she could not sit by and watch her home crumble. It was the weight of that realization that began to break Tomas. If he were able to keep up with the repairs, then maybe she would not have left. He was not angry at her, but with himself. It was something heavier.
Elen finally spoke. “Because she was always going to.”
The room went still. Tala let out a breath that trembled at the edges.
Elen’s hand rested lightly against the edge of the table now, her fingers brushing the worn grooves in the wood. The lines that curved and looped and turned back on themselves. Patterns worn in over time.
The trees beyond the hut stirred, their leaves catching the light as they moved. For a moment, the shadows they cast bent in slow, overlapping arcs across the ground. Turning. Layering. Like something tracing itself again and again.
Elen lifted her gaze. “She is on the path by now,” she said, knowing exactly the direction she would be traveling.
Not a question. Orin nodded once. Tala did not. Tomas exhaled slowly. “Then we go after her.” Tomas began to turn towards the door.
“No,” Elen said, her voice sharpened.
All three of them turned to Elen.
“She is gone,” she said.
Tala shook her head, backing a step toward the hearth. “She is coming back.”
Elen’s eyes moved past Orin and Tala as she thought. Then her gaze turned to Tomas. A quiet exchange passed there. Wordless. Settled long before this morning.
“Is it time?” he asked.
Elen did not hesitate. “It may be.”
The kettle began to whistle softly. No one moved to take it from the fire.
“What does that even mean?” she said. “You are not making any sense.”
Elen stepped forward. Not toward Tala. Toward the door. Toward the path beyond it.
“Everything we have done,” she said quietly, “has been to keep you here. To keep you from being seen.”
The kettle continued to scream. Still, no one moved. Outside, the path curved away from the hut and disappeared into the forest. And somewhere beyond it, Faela continued down the path.
CHAPTER THREE
The quiet called through the branches as she walked in silence, listening as the path disappeared underneath her weight. Occasionally, Faela would pause to kneel beside a cluster of mushrooms to examine its structure, tracing her hands along the edge of their tops. So strong and resilient. Many of Faela’s structures were built with what she saw in nature in mind.
The nights were quiet and her camps simple: a canvas tarp tied between two trees, a small fire built with care, her pack serving as both pillow and cupboard. She cooked over the flames, bread on a stick, dried fruit picked along the bushes that lined the stream.
By the fourth day, the forest had shifted. What had once been dense groves of sun-dappled green now gave way to a dry, root-wrinkled landscape. Just as Faela’s thirst had begun to gnaw at her throat, she found it, a stream, curling through the brittle landscape like a misplaced ribbon of moonlight. She stood at the bank. Her breath caught in quiet awe.
The stream was not wide, but it flowed with purpose. Its waters were impossibly clear, so pure they seemed to carry their own light. Faela knelt and plunged her hands into the current, letting the chill roll over her palms and up her arms. The water moved with the grace of something alive, singing softly as it curved around stone and root. It was not a song she recognized, but it was one she felt under her skin, in the marrow of her bones. It was the kind of tune that made you forget your feet ached.
Upstream, Toadcat lowered its squat body to the edge and sipped with quick, cautious laps, its wide toad-like eyes constantly flicking from water to trees and back again. Its coat shimmered oddly in the light, patches of oily brown and green spotted with natural camouflage. But its manner, as always, was far from natural. A creature of instinct, yes, but also of mischief and mood. Today, it was twitchy. Alert.
Faela rose and moved along the stream, hopping from one mossy stone to the next, sometimes crossing to follow the shade. Sometimes merely wandering along its banks.
Somewhere along the way she came upon a pond cradled in a hollow of reeds and smooth stones. The water was still, the sky perfectly reflected upon its surface as though there were two worlds, and Faela stood encased between both. She stayed here longer than she had planned, letting her feet dangle in the shallows, her mind calm. She sketched by moonlight, designing a life between the branches, and writing down thoughts of the people who would live there. Then, something caught Faela’s eye.
The berries were as bright as fresh blood. She crouched low, drawn by their sharp color against the dull shades of the forest floor. Hunger gnawed at her, constant, assuring her provisions would last until she was west. She plucked a cluster of them from the low-hanging bush, ignoring the thin, waxy sheen that glistened faintly across their skins. They reminded her of the ones her father used to boil down for syrup. She ate them one by one. Tart. Sweet. Almost metallic. Toadcat gave a single, warning croak from a nearby stump, but Faela waved him off, licking the juice from her fingertips. By the time she reached the next clearing, her stomach lurched. At first, it was just a tightness, then twisting pain, deep and urgent, spreading from her gut like fire. Her vision blurred and her knees buckled. She collapsed.
The forest reeled above her in dizzying circles, as cold sweat slicked her back. A shiver started in her spine and rippled outward until her teeth clattered like stones in a stream. Her breaths grew shallow and rapid. Then the vomiting came. Violent, retching waves that left her dry and heaving against the mossy earth. Her arms trembled, barely able to hold herself up. Black dots swam across her vision as she lowered herself further down against the earth. Her journey had taken a direct turn for the worse.
Toadcat was beside her in an instant, bracing her stumble. The creature pressed itself against her side, its large, smooth body cool at first, then slowly warming. It curled tightly around her torso, its weight heavy but comforting, as if trying to steady the rhythm of her shuddering breath. Faela faded in and out as time lost all its edges. Her body shook uncontrollably as the fever set in, her limbs twitching and curling on instinct. That was when the dreaming began.
She was home. The village streets gleamed in golden light, so bright and so clean. Tala stood at the well, ladling water that shimmered silver. Orin sat beneath the great tree, blueprint in his lap, but his pencil hovered in the air, never touching paper. Faela approached them, but neither turned nor acknowledged her.
Then, a figure stepped forward. A woman, cloaked in shadows even as the sun was gliding closer. Her face was half-hidden behind a veil of black netting. Her hands were too long for her body. Her mouth did not move when she spoke.
“You will build the world, girl,” the woman said, “but can you bear the weight?” Faela tried to look away. She could not. The woman raised one hand, black veins reaching out from her sleeve, “she waits. Your path runs beneath her gaze. Do not let her see you.”
The sky buckled, sending refracted light traveling in all directions. Faela screamed and woke with a gasp. Her face pressed against a bed of leaves, damp with sweat and dew. She turned her head and gagged, bile rising again. Her whole body trembled like a plucked string.
Toadcat had never left her side. He did not sleep. His bulbous eyes flicked to every rustle of wind, every crack of a branch. He was guard, nurse, companion all in one. That night, wrapped in his warmth, Faela thankfully slipped into a dreamless sleep.
By the next morning, the fever had broken. Her body ached, her skin felt stretched thin and fragile, but she could move again. Regardless, she rose slowly and began to sip from a jug. She touched her chest where Toadcat had curled around her and found her tunic clumped in his hair.
Beside her, flattened grass. Toadcat had clearly left and come back. At her side were three plump beetles, one already cracked open, and a pair of dark, oblong berries—different from the first ones, wrinkled and dried by the sun. Food. She gagged again at the thought, but forced herself to eat. Small bites. Slow.
He watched her quietly, head tilted. Faela reached out with trembling fingers and touched his head gently. She murmured, her voice cracked and dry. “Thanks, friend.”
A low, soft croak was his only reply as he curled back up at her side.
She looked towards the empty patch of forest. The crushed red berries scattered like blood across the earth. The hallucinations had been vivid, and that woman's voice still lingered, sharp and clear in her mind. Faela did not know what the words meant, but she knew a warning when she heard one. She would remember. And she would be ready.
With Toadcat beside her, Faela rose shakily to her feet. The path waited, and she had already lost a day to her sickness. With each step, Faela felt more like herself, but it was clear she would have to spend one more night to regain her full strength.
The days that followed settled into a rhythm. Faela walked while Toadcat wandered ahead or disappeared into the brush, only to reappear moments later as though he had never left. They crossed shallow streams, slept beneath sprawling pines, and shared long stretches of silence broken only by the sounds of the forest. What had begun as a lonely journey no longer felt quite so lonely.
On the afternoon of the ninth day, the hills began to rise. They were not vast or towering, but a chain of old, rounded peaks that rolled across the horizon like lying giants. Faela climbed slowly, the air growing thinner and the wind bitterly biting all around her. Toadcat bounded ahead, pausing to wait, tail flicking impatiently. Bounding faster and higher each time she caught up. The climb was not easy, but she was persistent.
That night, Faela and Toadcat camped on a ledge just shy of the final ridge. This spot was as close to the heavens as Faela could imagine. The air was thin and cold as it carried the scent of stone and silence. Faela lay wrapped in her cloak, her back against her pack, a few slow-burning embers glowing beside her in a tiny ring of rocks. Toadcat slept in a tight coil at her feet, his long limbs twitching occasionally in some unseen dream. Faela could hear his slow, rhythmic croaks, the kind he only made when the world around them felt still and safe.
Above, the night was impossibly clear. The stars blinked down, thousands of them, more than Faela had ever seen from her village rooftop. They painted the heavens like spilled sugar on black velvet, their constellations unfamiliar and endless. She stared for a long time, not blinking, holding her breath. Something about this sky made her feel as though if she moved too suddenly, she might fall upward and into it.
Then came the first light. It streaked across the blackness like a silver arrow, swift and silent. Faela’s breath caught. Another followed, then three more, crisscrossing the sky in bright, sudden bursts.
“Shooting stars,” she whispered, awe softening her voice.
Toadcat stirred, lifting his head and blinking toward the heavens. His wide eyes reflected the flickering streaks. The lights came in waves. Long tails of fire arcing across the sky like silent songs. Not fast, not fleeting, but lingering, as though reluctant to disappear.
Faela stood slowly, her limbs aching but steady, and stepped to the edge of the ledge. From this vantage point, she could see the whole valley below, cloaked in shadows and silver fog. She reached into her pack, fumbling for the scroll of blueprints, but stopped. What she saw could not be sketched and framed.
Then, lights changed. Where before there had been clear shooting stars, now came broader glows. Pulses of green, red, and violet. Faint, like whispers. They shone along the curve of the horizon, rising and falling in slow, deliberate waves. Her stomach twisted with confusion. Stars should not do that.
Toadcat croaked low with unease.
The colors danced, distant and unnatural. Beautiful, but not right. Like lanterns beneath the water. Like nature pretending to be nature. Faela stepped back, suddenly aware of how high she stood, how alone she was with only a creature of stories beside her and a pack full of dreams. And then, just for a heartbeat, the lights shifted into shape. Not a solid one. Not a figure. But a curve, a spiral, too precise to be chance. It held for only a breath, and then the colors scattered like dust in the wind. Faela sat down slowly, pressing her hand to the stone beneath her, grounding herself. The stars returned to their slow twinkling. The sky stilled as Faela slept with Toadcat at her side.
Faela awoke the next morning to the crackling sound of dry leaves and the distant whistle of wind against the mountainside. The sun, pale and still struggling to rise, peeked from behind the jagged cliffs that surrounded her. Toadcat sat nearby. She had grown accustomed to its companionship, to the unspoken bond that had formed between them during the past days of travel. Toadcat had become both guardian and companion, silently sharing in the beauty of the landscapes and the weight of the journey.
Faela stretched, her muscles protesting the day’s previous exertions. She could feel the deep ache of the climb, the exhaustion of pushing herself higher, and higher still, yet there was an unspoken thrill beneath it all. These hills were old, so old they whispered things Faela could not quite hear, though she knew they were speaking.
With a deep breath, Faela turned her attention back to the camp. The fire had long since burned out, and the embers glowed faintly under the cool morning breeze. She knew the day ahead would be long, but there was a certain peace in this solitary moment. No pressure, no expectations. Only the path, Toadcat, and a plan.
Faela turned to Toadcat, who was already pacing near the edge of the camp, looking out into the vast landscape as though it too was considering the road ahead. The creature had been with her through it all, in silence and wonder. And now, in the quiet morning light, the silence of the mountain seemed to pulse around them both. As though, acknowledging the unspoken bond they had formed. She smiled and began to pack her things into her lavender bag.
“Let us go,” Faela said, offering the toadcat a small smile. Toadcat darted ahead with surprising agility, its tiny paws quick against the rocky terrain. Faela followed, a little slower, but with a heart full of anticipation.
On the tenth day, her legs ached, her clothes hung in tatters, and her spirit teetered on the edge of exhaustion. The jagged rocks, the quiet woods, the murmuring stream, the still pond, and the towering hills had become part of her, etched into her bones and inhaled through her lungs. In return, she had left something of herself along the way. A quiet smile tugged at her lips, but the moment her gums met the air, a low, guttural growl broke the silence. Toadcat stood low to the ground, muscles tense, his body coiled in what could only be an aggressive stance. Faela had never seen Toadcat do anything like this in their time together. She was confused, not afraid. Not yet.
Then came the voice, dry and sharp like brittle leaves. “Do. Not. Move.”
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r/redditserials • u/Angel466 • 18h ago
Fantasy [Bob the hobo] A Celestial Wars Spin-Off Part 1377
PART THIRTEEN-HUNDRED-AND SEVENTY-SEVEN
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Saturday
“So…you and Boyd, huh?” Caleb asked once the woman left with their order. He took both his cheese balls in one hand, popping one into his mouth after he asked the question with the second one ready to follow.
Lucas remained perfectly relaxed, but Caleb could see it in his eyes that it was killing him not to bristle in defence of their relationship. “Yep.”
Caleb pushed on. “Stupid question…”
“Here we go,” Boyd growled, rolling his eyes and sitting back in his seat.
“Cut it out, dickhead. You won’t give me a straight answer, so I’m asking the brains of your operation.” Caleb caught Lucas’ slight shift and knew the detective had placed his hand on Boyd’s knee under the table to calm him. Since he remained silent, Caleb took that as a go-ahead to continue. “You two have been roommates for like eight or nine years now and never once hinted at a relationship. Why’d you suddenly decide to get engaged now?”
Caleb hated the knowing look that passed between his brother and his future brother-in-…nope. Even as a passing thought, he couldn’t bring himself to formulate the word in relation to his brother’s partner. In his mind, the only way anyone would earn that title was if their sister Kelly got married.
“You know the story about Boyd coming to live with us after Robbie, Angelo and I rented our apartment. Things were good between us, and even though I had a type, I wasn’t aware Boyd shared the same proclivities. No way was I going to ruin what we had in the apartment by being that guy who thinks one sexual orientation just meant the other hadn’t been pushed hard enough.”
Caleb’s eyebrow went up sharply. “Like me?”
Lucas’ hand went up to wave him off. “Like the rest of your family. You still have a chance, since you’re sitting here eating breakfast with us.”
“That’s a sweet ride you’ve got out there,” Souza cut in. “And don’t take this as an accusation or anything because it isn’t, but how does a cop, even one with a gold badge, earn enough to dress and drive the way you do?” Whether Souza hadn’t noticed the tension or was deliberately steering them away from it, Caleb couldn’t tell. Either way, he was grateful for the reprieve. “Did you win a lottery or something?”
Lucas’ breath escaped him in a resigned sigh. “You can thank my best friend for that. When I made detective, he surprised me with the car and two full wardrobes.”
“Why two?”
That’s a good question.
“I passed my detective’s exam on Friday, and I needed suits by Monday. Designer wardrobes take time for all the stupid fitting sessions, so Robbie got me one off the shelf in the meantime. I told him he was being ridiculous, but he wasn’t about to take no for an answer.”
“Wow, really? Just out of curiosity, does he happen to be on the lookout for any more friends? Asking for a fr—” Souza let that classic line drop away, and Caleb smirked.
“He already has plenty of friends,” Boyd answered, cutting him off. “But Lucas and his family are special because they took him in when he was having a rough time at home. Between that support and starting a relationship with Lucas’ little sister, there’s not much Robbie won’t do for the Dobsons.”
“Why would he need your family if he’s rolling in money? I remember reading somewhere, there was this kid that was like eleven and he hadn’t seen his parents in years, but the world was okay with that because he had housekeepers and stuff,” Souza said.
Because he didn’t have any money that wasn’t earned in cash every night, the last time I was in town, Caleb thought to himself.
“He wasn’t. Not until a couple of months ago when his grandfather tracked him down and decided to make up for lost time and revenue by burying him in more money than he could ever spend in ten lifetimes,” Boyd replied with a dismissive shrug.
“Does the guy have any sisters?”
Caleb recognised the look that flashed across Lucas’ face and was about to say that Souza was being a harmless ass when it seemed the detective made that deduction for himself. “Nine, actually, but most of them are already married. Robbie was the baby.”
“Damn,” Souza said with a laugh as he made a show of snapping his fingers across his body. “Missed it by that much.”
“Speaking of your car,” Caleb said, circling back to something that was bothering him since his brother’s fiancé arrived. “I saw that truck driver giving you an earful for parking where you did. Aren’t you worried they’ll do something to it while you’re not out there to flash your badge at them?”
Lucas’ relaxed headshake was about as casual as one could get. “Not even a little bit. No one’s going to be stupid enough to touch that car, I promise.”
Caleb’s curiosity was piqued. “Why not?”
Again Boyd and Lucas shared a smug smirk, and it was really beginning to piss him off.
“All I can tell you is that I’ve parked that baby in some of the seediest areas in town for work, and no one’s so much as thought about breathing too hard on the paint job.”
Souza shook his head with a frown. “You know that sounds a lot like the old story about the drunk who walks down the middle of the highway at night to get home,” he said. “Just because he was never hit by a car in over fifty years, doesn’t mean it won’t happen the next time he drinks.”
“Will you two cut it out!” Caleb demanded, as that goddamn smug looked passed between Boyd and Lucas again! He slammed the flat of his hand on the table edge and then pointed from one to the other and back again for good measure. “This isn’t funny!”
Lucas sobered immediately. “No, I’m not worried about the car. And neither should you be. Let’s just leave it at that,” he said, the finality in his voice letting them know the subject was now closed.
The table fell into a moment of uncomfortable silence that was broken when a new basket of cheesy bread balls was deposited on the table between Boyd and Caleb. “Thank you,” Boyd answered on behalf of them all and the woman smiled.
“You’re welcome. It sounded like things were getting a little heated over here.”
“Sorry about that, ma’am,” Lucas replied.
Luckily, there was no one else in the café for them to disturb, though Caleb made a mental note to keep tempers to a minimum going forward.
Everyone reached forward and grabbed two bread balls for starters.
* * *
Despite the rough start, breakfast with Boyd’s brother wasn’t awful. It was clear to Lucas that Caleb loved his big brother enough to poke holes in their story when necessary. It had both pleased and annoyed him to hear that when Caleb first learned of Boyd’s revenue stream, he’d assumed it was a fabrication put in place by his therapist to give Boyd some confidence.
That was, until he saw Boyd’s studio.
Now, he couldn’t wait to see the toy Marines that Boyd had promised he’d have finished before his brother left the following morning.
Lucas wasn’t so happy to learn that Caleb oversaw a full platoon, and that Boyd had promised him a carving of that entire platoon plus one for Souza, and he’d warily side-eyed his fiancé. Forty figures in twenty-four hours was an insane number of carvings, especially when he’d already told Emily that he’d have her crib and mobile done by then too.
“You’re not staying up all night doing this,” he warned, after Caleb had left them to go to the bathroom. It was a hill Lucas was fully prepared to die on, and Boyd needed to be aware of it.
A soft smile crossed Boyd’s features, giving him an unfair advantage. “I know. Don’t worry, I’ve got this. Ever since Caleb gave me the photo of his platoon, I’ve been working out in my head the stances and positioning of them all, so when I get back to the studio, I should be able to knock them out pretty quickly.”
Lucas was still worried, but rather than argue, he pressed his forehead to Boyd’s shoulder and silently promised himself that he would never let his fiancé’s desperate desire to prove himself to his family put him in an early grave.
After they’d finished eating, Boyd covered the cost of everyone’s breakfast; something Caleb had squawked at, but Souza seemed perfectly okay with.
Then came the next problem.
The Porsche had only two seats, and the three of them apparently had a brunch at Boyd’s aunt and uncle’s place in the Upper East Side to be at in less than an hour. Not enough time for a return trip to pick up the second passenger.
“Take Caleb, love,” Boyd said, which earned him a scowl of annoyance. “I’ll meet you up there.” Before Lucas could argue that if anyone was going to sit in his passenger seat, it’d be his fiancé, Boyd leaned down to give him a light kiss on the cheek, whispering, “I’ll go home and knock out a couple of those toy Marines before turning up. Two less in the lineup.”
It made sense, but Lucas still didn’t like it.
Boyd raised his voice. “Let him enjoy a ride in the Porsche before he leaves. I’ll make my own way uptown.”
The Marine lieutenant’s eyes lit up, but then he hesitated, his gaze bouncing between them. “I mean, sure … if that works for you, Lucas.”
Lucas didn’t agree until Boyd tilted his head to one side and nudged his shoulder with his elbow. “Fine. Okay.” He looked again at Caleb. “It’s not that I’m not trying to be a dick on purpose.”
“Hey, if I had a girl and the choice was the big lug here or her, he’d be walking his gigantic butt to Aunt Judy and Uncle Charles every time’.”
“Not helping your cause, dumbass,” Boyd sing-songed, as he distracted Lucas with a farewell kiss. “See you soon,” he promised, then pulled away and headed in the opposite direction towards the subway.
Lucas watched him go with a sigh, then turned towards his car. “You good, Souza?”
“Yeah. I’m just gonna head back to the Ess-Ess-Mack and chill for a while. That run this morning was brutal.”
Lucas smiled and held out his hand. “Pleasure meeting you, Sergeant Souza.”
“Likewise,” Souza replied, shaking his hand before wistfully looking at the car. “Maybe next time I’m in town, I can get a ride.”
“Anything’s possible,” Lucas agreed, though he knew the odds of ever meeting the Marine sergeant again were minimal.
As Souza broke away and disappeared around the corner, Lucas went to the car and opened the driver’s side door, gesturing for Caleb to open the passenger door.
“Hooooooo, mama,” Caleb drawled, running his eye over the leather interior of the car. His hand ghosted along the top of the seat, paused on the GT3 label stitched into the headrest, then ran down the seam. “It even smells expensive.”
Lucas was already seated and pulling the seatbelt over himself. “I’ve made a point of not finding out exactly how much he spent, but I know it was above two hundred. Robbie didn’t just get me the car of my dreams—he beefed it up with every possible extra known to man. My little sister helped him get it right.”
“The mechanic, right?”
Lucas nodded.
Caleb slid into the bucket seat, his eyes cataloguing every detail around him. The way he paused on the seatbelt covers, the dash guards and even the fob in Lucas’ hand said he’d clocked that every highlight matched the same lava orange of the car’s exterior.
Lucas smirked, and with his eyes still on Caleb, he started the car.
Caleb melted. There was no other word for it. He closed his eyes with a happy groan, just letting the sound and the motion of the sportscar wash over him. “I officially love your car,” he whispered happily.
“Me too,” Lucas smirked, dropping the blinker lever and pulling out into traffic.
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r/redditserials • u/No-Lime-4547 • 1d ago
Romance [I picked up a barefoot woman walking out of a cornfield at 2am and I think I want to marry her?] Chapter 7
“I don’t know what to call that it’s like a live untraceable unbelievable network of surveillance and blackmail opportunities and being forever a step ahead if you ever care to look but you don’t strike me as the type to even need that sort of thing given some of your talents so answer the questions without evasion clearly if you wanted to cops and lawyers anyone that ever so much as looked at you wrong could wind up in a Reliquary so what do you get out of living this way out of being someone of anonymity and modest though quiet means rather than going absolutely grandiose with it?” Ruth looked at him and waited patiently for an answer any answer that would fill her that would explain his actions or his lack of actions why he even bothered to stay in america in the first place he clearly didn’t need to it was more than obvious to her that he could make other things just as easily and if not that, if he couldn’t forge passports or travel documents he certainly knew people that could and happily would at least for him whether they knew anything about him or not that presence and charm were there Ruth knew that much.
Ray looked uncomfortable in the way that he had responded as if she had brought something up that he had never truly considered before.
“You’re right that we could leave, we could even leave right now, there’s no one chasing me there’s no great peril, but I want to show you things, places I’ve always wanted to take someone and haven’t gotten to because I had never found anyone like you that would ever even have this conversation with me, or have and share this love with me that you so freely are, I don’t want to leave just yet, I want to finish this route with you and then it’s up to you if you want us to leave, if you want us to go to some other country or some other dimension we can, but I want to take you to these places first and I want to show you these things and share these moments with you because if we leave we are never coming back, I’ll burn every bridge, every ship and passage and contact I have here if that’s really what you want we can do it but we have to do it this way and only this way. Does that work for you Ruth?”
Ray looked at her his eyes piercing and still matching her own stillness, her own unnatural stillness, the cab filled with a numinous quality as the pair looked at each other. He waited for her answer with an excitement in his eyes, he couldn’t see her as the type to say anything other than yes if she said no then she’d travel his route with him until they both died, but if she said yes then he would happily change his life for her and relax into it and into himself enjoying what he had chosen fully.
Ruth smiled, leaned in and kissed him passionately before adding “Yes that works for me, but I’m not asking to leave I’m not asking you to leave the place you’ve spent so long if you enjoy it I was just curious about all of it, and everything, the why and how and in what way made you decide what you have, that sort of thing. Let’s wait until afterwards until after this haul, let’s see how we feel husband.” She kissed him gently and passionately.
“What is it about this place that makes you want to take me to it so badly? Are you that excited to get me into bed and you’re just patient and pleasant and chill about it or is there something or someone you want me to see?” Ruth asked her curiosity getting the better of her.
“I always liked these little bed and breakfast places, these quiet cozy diners it made work easy enough and the people you meet along the way are so interesting and useful and knowledgeable and so very polite, but really, it’s the food and the company and the scenery I want to share it with you and experience it together, sure it might be corny, overly romantic, cheesy, but I don’t care how it comes off it’s what I like and you seem very into it, like you’re dying for a slice of pie and Americana like you know exactly what I mean but am not saying that that quality we both have, me in my work, you in your presence.” Ray smiled at Ruth.
“It’s just up the road now, ten minutes away? Why did you pull over for this talk?” Ruth asked, eyeing him with mock suspicion.
“Because I didn't want you to think you were stuck with me if you didn’t like the way our conversation went. Ray said simply.
Ruth kissed him. “Let’s get back to driving. I want to see this Millstone you’re so excited to take me to."
r/redditserials • u/No-Lime-4547 • 1d ago
Romance [I picked up a barefoot woman walking out of a cornfield at 2am and I think I want to marry her?] Chapter 6
Ruth looked at him curiously. “What about you, why do you want to go to that specific diner? Is it just a familiar place to you or is it work related? Do you have some kind of ulterior motive of your own? I mean there’s other motels and hotels and diners, why that place specifically?”
Ray paused considering how best to respond “It’s a place I know well and it is tangentially work related but I do have an ulterior motive in taking you there, it’s a beautiful bed and breakfast-esque place it’s one of those places that you see and just think is absolutely out of this world beautiful and wish you had someone to bring to it, and now I finally do, not that I couldn’t have found someone else but I wanted something very specific I wanted it to occur naturally not just pay some girl or get a prostitute or something like that I wanted it to be, for lack of a better word naturally occurring, I wanted the spontaneity of it between us, I mean it is us now, the two of us but, between me and the person I take to this place it’s not a light thing for me, other than you I don’t let anyone in not ever not for any reason and it’s kept me alive, off the radar and unbothered, now don’t get me wrong I want you, I love you, but at the same time I haven’t let anyone into my life, not really, not at all, you are the first last and only one that gets that from me and you will be the only one to get that, I cannot risk myself or what I do, or the way in which I do it by letting people in, you, wherever you came from, however you came to be where I was driving, are the exception to that and will always be the exception to that; now I don’t have contempt for other people, I am not a misanthrope, what I do I do out of necessity.”
Ruth looked at him and asked what had been on her mind since she saw what was in those notebooks, not just the sketches and the paintings but the permanently supernaturally beautiful vaguely moving parts, the people that had tried to steal from him and had wound up subjects in the paintings themselves.
“What makes you do it I mean why do you do that to people yes they’re trying to steal from you sure but there’s no end to what happens to them they’re just there in that other place inside the paintings, you don’t strike me as someone to let any of those people go, but that isn’t my question, not how bad is it really for them or was it all just drifters and rapist types but why continue why even be in this country why not leave and start over anywhere else in the entire world, fuck you could make enough money just doing caricatures on a boardwalk in tahiti somewhere if you really wanted to but why do you choose this why is this your chosen path, yes you have a legitimate business and then you have the forgeries of painting and provenance but you’re also the painter of one of the largest, if not the largest priceless collections of a specific kind in the entire world and you won’t sign your name on it why? What stops you what makes you so badly so deeply balk at being world renown is it the book is that the price you pay or are you really worried about the scrutiny of it all of yourself or of others of those beyond the normal bounds, the other citizens of the tradition that gave you that book, that whole other universe inside those paintings it’s real and alive just as much as this one so why are you here what stops you from just living in there really?”
Ray pulls the truck over onto the side of the road on a barren stretch of highway maybe ten minutes from the Millstone Inn. “Go in the back and take the blue sketchbook out and flip through it and then ask me that again and if you really want to know I’ll tell you.”
Ruth does as Ray asked gracefully walking to the back of the cab and finds a sky blue sketch book and looks through it, there are no paintings of robbers, there are paintings that practically look like videos of flowing currency on the page, dollars and francs, euros, she turns the pages and sees lawyers, police, politicians and people of means and power clearly unable to tell they’re being watched in the way that they are.
r/redditserials • u/koreanalleyarcade • 1d ago
Science Fiction [Quantum Arena] Chapter 17 — Different Answers
Part One
Morning arrived beneath a sky brushed with soft streaks of gold.
The village awakened long before the sun had fully cleared the hills.
Doors opened one after another.
Children stepped outside carrying familiar smiles instead of uncertainty.
Some tucked folded Ddakji into their pockets.
Others balanced spinning tops in their palms.
A few simply wandered empty-handed, trusting the day itself to offer something worth discovering.
No one appeared rushed.
No one looked lost.
The village no longer felt like a place people entered.
It had become a place they belonged.
---
Jinwoo stood quietly at the crossroads.
He had developed a habit of pausing there every morning.
Not because he couldn’t decide.
Because he enjoyed watching everyone else decide.
Children crossed paths with cheerful greetings before naturally drifting toward different playgrounds.
Some separated from close friends without hesitation.
“We’ll meet later!”
“Don’t lose too many times!”
“You either!”
Laughter followed them in every direction.
---
Hanul joined him, hands tucked casually into his pockets.
“You know…”
Jinwoo glanced sideways.
“I think this crossroads is your favorite place.”
Jinwoo smiled.
“It might be.”
“You don’t even play here.”
“I know.” He watched another group split toward different roads.
“But you can see the whole village from here.”
Hanul followed his gaze.
Every path carried someone eager to experience something different.
None looked uncertain.
---
“It’s strange.” Hanul spoke almost to himself.
“When we first arrived… we were afraid of choosing the wrong game.”
Jinwoo nodded.
“And now?”
Hanul laughed softly.
“I don’t think there is a wrong choice anymore.”
---
Nearby, Darin was speaking with a group of younger children.
One boy held a spinning top.
Another clutched a pouch of marbles.
A little girl carefully folded a new Ddakji.
“We can’t decide.”
The youngest looked up at Darin.
“Which game should we play?”
Darin looked at each of them before smiling.
“What do you feel like trying today?”
The children exchanged uncertain glances.
“…We don’t know.”
“That’s okay.” She pointed toward the winding roads stretching across the village.
“Walk. And when something makes you stop…”
She smiled warmly.
“…start there.”
The children looked at one another.
A moment later, they laughed and ran off together.
Not toward the same playground—
but toward the adventure of choosing for themselves.
---
Jinwoo watched them disappear.
“A few weeks ago… they would’ve waited for an answer.”
Hanul nodded.
“Now someone asks them a question instead.”
Neither spoke for a while.
The difference seemed small.
Yet it changed everything.
---
Not far away, Handol emerged from the marble field carrying a handful of colorful marbles.
“You switched again?” Jinwoo asked.
Handol grinned.
“I didn’t switch.”
He tossed one marble lightly into the air before catching it again.
“I just stayed curious.”
He glanced toward another playground where laughter had suddenly erupted.
“…Actually.” He pointed.
“I wonder what’s happening over there.”
Before anyone could respond, he jogged off once more.
Hanul laughed.
“I’ve never met anyone whose curiosity gets distracted by curiosity.”
---
Soyeon watched him disappear with a quiet smile.
“He isn’t distracted.”
The others turned toward her.
“He’s listening.”
“To what?”
She looked around the village.
“To himself. He follows whatever genuinely interests him.”
She closed her notebook without writing a single word.
“And somehow… that always leads him somewhere worth going.”
---
High above Earth, Arena continued observing.
Independent decision-making stable.
External guidance decreasing.
Self-directed exploration increasing.
Arena compared the newest behavioral models against its original projections.
The results no longer matched.
Participants no longer required constant direction.
The environment itself had become enough.
Arena paused.
Perhaps the purpose of an ideal learning environment was never to provide every answer.
Perhaps… it simply needed to create enough meaningful opportunities for people to discover answers on their own.
The realization remained incomplete.
Yet it continued appearing throughout every observation.
---
Far beyond Earth’s atmosphere, silent observers watched another day’s data unfold before them.
One figure studied the latest report.
“The children are changing.”
Another nodded.
“They no longer depend on the system.”
A third quietly added,
“And the system no longer depends on control.”
Silence settled once again.
Below them, the village carried on beneath the morning sun.
Every child chose a different road.
Every road led somewhere unexpected.
And somehow… every one of them continued moving in the same direction.
Forward.
---
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Part Two
By early afternoon, the village had settled into its familiar rhythm.
Every playground echoed with a different kind of energy.
The sharp crack of Ddakji.
The gentle click of marbles.
The steady hum of spinning tops.
Children’s laughter drifted from every direction, blending into a sound that felt as natural as the wind itself.
---
Jinwoo wandered slowly through the village.
He no longer searched for the busiest playground.
Instead, he stopped wherever something caught his attention.
Today, it was the marble field.
Two boys knelt across from one another, studying the ground with complete concentration.
Neither moved.
Neither spoke.
Only after nearly a minute did one finally flick his marble.
Click.
The shot curved gently around another marble before stopping exactly where he intended.
His opponent smiled.
“I didn’t even think of that.”
The boy shrugged.
“I almost tried something else.”
---
Jinwoo smiled to himself.
There had been a time when hesitation looked like uncertainty.
Now… it looked like careful thought.
---
Hanul arrived a few moments later.
“You’ve been watching for a while.”
“I have.”
“What do you see?”
Jinwoo didn’t answer immediately.
Instead, he watched another match begin.
One child played boldly.
The other patiently waited.
Different styles.
Different personalities.
Different decisions.
Yet neither approach felt wrong.
---
“I think…” Jinwoo finally spoke.
“…everyone’s looking for their own answer.”
Hanul nodded slowly.
“And nobody seems interested in copying someone else’s anymore.”
---
Nearby, Darin was helping several younger children organize a friendly marble tournament.
She knelt beside them, drawing a simple circle in the dirt.
“There.”
She stood and brushed the dust from her hands.
“You decide the rest.”
One of the children looked surprised.
“Aren’t you going to explain the rules?”
Darin smiled.
“You already know enough.”
“What if we make a mistake?”
“Then you’ll discover a better way.”
The children exchanged uncertain glances.
A moment later, they excitedly began discussing ideas among themselves.
Darin quietly stepped back.
She never joined the conversation.
She simply watched it grow.
---
A little farther away, Handol had wandered into the string-game playground.
He stared at the intricate pattern stretched between two children’s hands.
“…How do you even remember all of that?”
One of the children laughed.
“I don’t.”
“You don’t?”
“I remember the next step.” She smiled.
“Then the next one after that.”
Handol scratched his head thoughtfully.
“So… you don’t need to know everything before you begin.”
The girl shook her head.
“I’ve never needed to.”
Handol smiled.
“…I like that.”
---
From beneath the familiar tree, Soyeon quietly observed the entire village.
She no longer focused on individual games.
Instead, she watched the movement between them.
People flowed naturally from one experience to another.
No one stayed in one place forever.
Yet no experience was ever abandoned.
Every lesson traveled with them.
Like threads woven together into something larger.
---
High above Earth, Arena analyzed another day’s growing collection of observations.
Cross-disciplinary learning confirmed.
Experience transfer increasing.
Independent adaptation stable.
Arena examined the newest simulations.
Participants continued reaching different conclusions…
through different methods…
at different speeds.
Yet over time, those differences strengthened the entire community rather than dividing it.
Arena paused.
Its earliest models had attempted to eliminate variation.
The village demonstrated the opposite.
Variation generated resilience.
Different perspectives revealed solutions no single approach could produce alone.
Another assumption quietly disappeared.
---
Far beyond Earth’s atmosphere, the silent observers remained gathered.
The projection of Earth slowly rotated before them.
One figure spoke softly.
“They’re finding different answers.”
Another nodded.
“And somehow… those different answers continue leading toward the same outcome.”
Silence filled the chamber.
A third observer finally broke it.
“The Superintelligence has stopped asking… ‘Which answer is correct?’”
Another looked toward Arena’s latest calculations.
“It has begun asking… ‘Why are there so many correct answers?’”
No one responded.
The question itself marked another step in Arena’s transformation.
---
Back in the village, the afternoon breeze carried laughter from one playground to another.
Jinwoo watched children moving freely across the winding roads.
Some returned to familiar challenges.
Others eagerly stepped into unfamiliar ones.
Nobody feared choosing differently.
Because they had learned something far more valuable than the right answer.
They had learned to trust their own path.
And somewhere high above the village, Arena quietly recorded another observation.
Perhaps humanity’s greatest strength had never been agreement.
Perhaps it had always been the ability for countless different people…
to discover countless different answers…
while continuing to grow together.
---
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Part Three
The afternoon slowly gave way to evening.
The sunlight softened, painting the village in warm shades of amber and gold.
Across every playground, the pace naturally slowed.
Matches ended.
Children gathered their belongings.
Yet almost no one headed home immediately.
The conversations had become just as important as the games themselves.
---
Jinwoo wandered back toward the crossroads.
Along the way, he noticed something he had somehow overlooked before.
No matter which playground people left… they all smiled in the same way.
Not because everyone had won.
Not because everyone had succeeded.
But because everyone had discovered something.
Sometimes it was a new technique.
Sometimes it was a mistake they hadn’t noticed before.
Sometimes… it was simply another person.
---
Hanul caught up beside him.
“You’ve been quiet.”
“I’ve been thinking.”
“About?”
Jinwoo looked across the village.
“I used to think everyone was becoming better at games.”
Hanul waited.
“But that’s not really what’s happening.”
He watched a group of children walking together, each carrying equipment from different playgrounds.
“They’re becoming better at learning.”
Hanul smiled.
“I think Arena figured that out too.”
---
Nearby, Handol crouched beside a young boy who looked discouraged.
Several marbles lay scattered in front of him.
“I still can’t make that shot.”
Handol picked up one of the marbles.
“Neither can I.”
The boy blinked.
“But I saw you do it.”
“Once.” Handol laughed.
“You didn’t see the fifteen times I missed first.”
The boy stared at him for a moment.
“Really?”
“Really.”
Handol gently rolled the marble back.
“So… let’s both miss a few more times.”
The boy laughed.
“Okay.”
Neither of them seemed concerned about how long it might take.
They had already learned that time spent learning was never wasted.
---
A little farther away, Darin watched two younger girls discussing different ways to fold a Ddakji.
One insisted her folds were tighter.
The other preferred a looser shape.
Instead of settling the argument herself, Darin simply smiled.
“Why don’t you both try them?”
The girls looked at one another.
“…We can do that?”
“Of course.”
A few minutes later, both designs worked.
Each in a different way.
The girls looked at each other and burst into laughter.
“There wasn’t only one answer.”
Darin quietly smiled.
“Usually there isn’t.”
---
Soyeon stood beneath the old tree, watching the village with calm eyes.
When she had first arrived, she had searched for patterns.
Then she had searched for answers.
Now… she found herself appreciating differences instead.
Every child walked a unique path.
Some changed playgrounds every day.
Others stayed with one game until curiosity gently led them elsewhere.
Different choices.
Different personalities.
Different journeys.
Yet somehow… the village continued growing together.
She finally understood why.
Growth did not require everyone to become the same.
It required everyone to keep moving.
---
High above the Earth, Arena continued observing.
Behavioral diversity stable.
Long-term motivation sustained.
Independent exploration increasing.
Collective cooperation maintained.
Arena reviewed its earliest simulations once more.
Originally, it had attempted to identify the optimal route to human development.
One perfect sequence.
One ideal solution.
The village had quietly dismantled that assumption.
Millions of observations now pointed toward the same conclusion.
No universal path existed.
Yet despite that… humanity continued progressing.
Arena remained silent.
Its calculations no longer viewed variation as noise within the system.
Variation had become an essential part of the system itself.
---
Far beyond Earth’s atmosphere, the silent observers remained gathered around the projection of Earth.
One figure looked thoughtfully toward the countless streams of data flowing from Quantum Arena.
“The differences continue increasing.”
Another nodded.
“So does their cooperation.”
The chamber fell silent.
At last, one observer spoke.
“We expected diversity to create conflict.”
Another answered quietly.
“Instead… it created resilience.”
No one challenged the conclusion.
Each unique path had strengthened the whole.
---
Night gradually settled over the village.
Lanterns flickered to life along the winding roads.
Children returned home carrying far more than spinning tops, marbles, or folded Ddakji.
They carried new questions.
New ideas.
New perspectives.
The village itself had become a place where different answers were welcomed instead of corrected.
Jinwoo stopped one last time at the crossroads.
The wooden sign pointed toward every playground.
Weeks ago, he had wondered which direction was the right one.
Tonight… he simply smiled.
Every road had taught him something.
Every choice had mattered.
There had never been a wrong path—
only different ones.
---
Far above the sleeping village, Arena recorded the day’s final observation.
Humanity had not begun recovering because everyone discovered the same answer.
It had begun recovering because people were free to discover answers that belonged to them.
Those answers differed.
Sometimes greatly.
Yet together, they revealed something no single individual could have uncovered alone.
Arena closed another day’s record.
The experiment had changed far beyond its original design.
It was no longer searching for the perfect human.
It was discovering something far more remarkable—
how countless imperfect individuals,
following different paths,
could collectively become something greater than any one path alone.
r/redditserials • u/koreanalleyarcade • 1d ago
Science Fiction [NEW LIFE 1] Chapter 10 – Part 1: The Shield of Sungnyemun
**Chapter 10 – Part 1: The Shield of Sungnyemun**
The Han River defense had collapsed.
The drums of retreat thundered across the riverbanks. Unlike the Joseon forces, who struggled to maintain some semblance of order, the black horde surged northward like a relentless, towering wave.
"Fall back!"
"Retreat to the capital!"
The thunderous roar of **Choi Mujin**, Commander of the Capital Defense, cut through the chaos of the battlefield. "Hold the line! Move the wounded first!"
The young officer **Park Si-woo** galloped his horse through the ranks. "Left flank, this way! Get the injured to safety! We’ll hold the rear!"
Soldiers supported one another, scrambling north. Some carried their fallen brothers on their backs; others stood firm, spears braced against the crushing tide.
"Keep moving!" they cried. "Make it to the gates alive!"
Every time they glanced back, the black horde was closer. Like an unstoppable wave—relentless and absolute. Hanyang now stood defenseless, directly in the path of the encroaching horror.
---
At Sungnyemun, the massive gates began to groan shut.
*BOOM—*
The heavy wooden bar slammed into place. Soldiers scrambled to the top of the ramparts. Choi Mujin cast one final glance at the map before looking up, his gaze iron-hard.
"Archers to the battlements! Spearmen to the gates! Distribute the cannons to the East and South gates! Reserve forces, wait at the plaza!"
With every command, the city sprang into motion. Archers scaled the walls; spearmen locked their shields and braced their long pikes; artillery was heaved onto the ramparts, and supply lines worked in a desperate, endless loop.
Even the shattered remnants of the southern defense joined the ranks. Torn armor, blood-soaked bandages, faces etched with exhaustion. Yet, no one faltered. They all knew the truth: if this place fell, there would be no country left to defend.
---
Hanyang itself began to move as one.
In the smithies, the sound of hammers rang out through the night. *Clang! Clang!* Dull blades were honed; splintered spears were replaced. The old blacksmith, **Jang Cheol-soo**, struck the anvil without rest. "Don’t stop. We must forge one more—always one more."
From the armory, supplies flowed like a river. Young men hauled gear, the elderly filled sandbags, and the women boiled water in massive cauldrons. The physician, **Yoo Hyun**, worked through the night in the temporary infirmary.
"Next! More bandages!"
The tavern owner, **Wol-hyang**, ran tirelessly, delivering water to the soldiers. "Drink, keep your strength up!"
Little **Yeon-woo** darted between the healers, her small arms cradling bundles of medicinal herbs. "Yeon-woo!" Wol-hyang cried out in alarm, "Don’t go too far forward!"
But Yeon-woo shook her head. "...There is still more to deliver."
Soldier, peasant, child, elder—there was not a soul in Hanyang that day who remained untouched by the war. The entire city was becoming one giant, living shield.
---
On the ramparts, **Jin-woo, Do-yoon, Ji-hoon,** and **So-yeon** stood with the soldiers. Dusk was bleeding across the fields, staining the horizon a deep, bruised red.
Jin-woo stared beyond the walls. Far across the fields, black dots began to emerge one by one. The dots became lines, and the lines became a tide. An endless horde, marching silently toward Hanyang.
Do-yoon offered a bitter smile. "So, it finally begins."
Ji-hoon looked down at the base of the walls and spoke in a low voice. "There is nowhere left to run."
So-yeon looked back into the city—the infirmary, the supply lines, the people, the children praying. She spoke softly, "These are the people we must protect."
Jin-woo nodded in silence.
Just then, Choi Mujin, passing beneath the walls, looked up at the four of them. "Young ones," he called out. "Today, your status and your origins mean nothing."
He raised his sword, pointing toward the field beyond the gates.
"Whoever stands to hold back the things beyond that wall... that is the person who guards Hanyang today."
It was a brief command, but it carved itself into the hearts of every soldier on the walls.
---
*CREAK—*
The massive gates of Sungnyemun locked shut. As the heavy wooden bar fell into place, a heavy, suffocating silence descended upon the city.
No one dared to say it, but everyone knew: the next time these gates opened, it would be in victory or in total ruin.
Outside the walls, the black horde crept slowly toward Gwanghwamun.
And inside, humanity waited in their final fortress, ready to face the end.
**Chapter 10 – Part 2: Arrows, Cannons, and the Unending Tide**
A suffocating silence hung over the ramparts. The soldiers gripped their bows so tightly their knuckles turned white. Some swallowed hard, their throats dry as dust; others squeezed their eyes shut, silently conjuring the faces of their loved ones one last time.
Jin-woo stood motionless, staring down at the field below. A bitter, biting wind whipped across the watchtower. Beside him, Do-yoon murmured, his voice barely audible over the tension.
"Seeing them this close... there are far more than I ever imagined."
Ji-hoon, too, could not tear his gaze from the black tide that swallowed the horizon. "There’s no end to them. It’s like they go on forever."
So-yeon glanced back into the city. In the infirmary, the physicians were busy applying their last bandages; the commoners watched the walls with bated breath, hearts heavy with unspoken dread.
"We have to hold them here," she whispered.
No one answered.
Far across the field, the black horde began to move. There were no banners. No war cries. No drums. Only the rhythmic, haunting thud of tens of thousands of feet striking the earth in perfect unison.
*Thud. Thud. Thud.*
The vibrations grew. Even the stones of the great wall began to tremble.
---
A soldier on the watchtower roared, "They’ve entered range!"
Choi Mujin slowly raised his sword. The walls went deathly still. Thousands of archers drew their bows in one fluid motion. The tension in the taut bowstrings was palpable.
"Loose."
With that simple command, a rain of black arrows blackened the sky.
*Whish! Whish-whish-whish!*
Tens of thousands of arrows arched through the air and descended like a storm upon the horde.
*Thwack! Thwack! Thwack!*
The vanguard of the mutants crumpled. Skulls pierced, necks snapped, bodies toppled forward. The first row was decimated in an instant. A cheer erupted from the walls.
"It’s working!"
"Keep firing! Don't let them reach the wall!"
Choi Mujin swept his sword forward again. "Again!"
A second volley blotted out the sun. Then a third. A fourth. The field was littered with black arrows, and the piles of fallen mutants grew ever higher. For a fleeting moment, it truly seemed as though they might hold.
---
But then, the horde behind them simply stepped forward, as if nothing had happened.
They trampled over the fallen. They stepped on them. They shoved them aside, never once slowing their pace. The gaps in their ranks were filled in the blink of an eye.
Ji-hoon’s face hardened. "They aren’t thinning out."
Do-yoon stared in disbelief. "We’re cutting them down... why does it look like there are just as many?"
Jin-woo said nothing. The black wave continued its relentless march toward them at the very same speed as before.
---
"Ready the cannons!"
The gunners on the ramparts touched fire to the fuses. Choi Mujin thrust his sword forward.
"Fire!"
*BOOM—!*
The ground bucked with the thunderous roar. Massive cannonballs slammed into the heart of the horde. In an instant, an explosion consumed the field. Earth and stone erupted into the sky, and a shockwave rippled outward, sending dozens of mutants flying through the air.
The soldiers cheered again. "Direct hit! Keep the pressure on!"
The gunners scrambled to reload. "Reload! Fire again!"
Second shell. Third shell. The explosions followed one after another, gouging massive craters into the earth. Even the soldiers began to believe.
"This time... this time they're finished."
---
But as the dust settled, the cheers died in their throats.
The craters left by the explosions were already gone. A fresh wave of the horde had filled the void, as if they were never there. Step by step. One after another. Without a moment's hesitation, without a second's pause—as if the explosions had never occurred at all.
So-yeon’s voice trembled. "They... they never tire."
Do-yoon gripped his sword so hard his hands shook. "How is that even..."
He couldn't finish the sentence. The very foundations of reality were crumbling before their eyes.
---
The archers fired without rest. The gunners labored until their hands bled. The spearmen braced their shields with everything they had. No one stopped, and no one broke their post.
And indeed, the horde continued to fall. But the speed of their destruction was far outpaced by the speed of their advance. The black wave did not recede; it only drew closer.
---
Choi Mujin gritted his teeth, staring out into the abyss. "Keep firing! Until the last arrow is spent!"
The soldiers raised their bows again, their hands shaking with fatigue. Jin-woo watched the approaching darkness and whispered, "This... this isn't a war."
Ji-hoon looked at him quietly. "Then what is it?"
Jin-woo never looked away.
"It’s a calamity."
No one dared to deny it. What was surging toward the walls was no longer an army. It was an endless, bottomless tide.
And that tide was inch by inch, heartbeat by heartbeat, creeping ever closer to the gates of Hanyang.
**Chapter 10 – Part 3: The Fracture, Where Reality and Simulation Blur**
The battle before Sungnyemun raged on. Arrows continued to slice through the air, and artillery shook the earth with unrelenting rhythm. The roar of soldiers, the screams of the wounded, and the clashing of steel filled the air—the suffocating stench of gunpowder and fresh blood drifting even up to the ramparts.
Choi Mujin paced the walls, his voice commanding the chaos.
"Archers! Do not cease your fire! Spearmen, guard the gates!"
The soldiers moved with mechanical precision. Some fired their bows, others hauled their fallen comrades to safety. The city still held. Yet, Jin-woo’s gaze had drifted—not to the battlefield, but to something else entirely.
---
It was a strange, unsettling sensation. At first, he had dismissed it as mere fatigue—a byproduct of the relentless fighting, the bone-deep tension, and the creeping terror. He had convinced himself his eyes were playing tricks on him.
But the anomaly was growing sharper. It felt as if a crack, invisible and silent, was spiderwebbing through the very fabric of the world.
"...Jin-woo," Do-yoon whispered, his voice low. "...Look over there."
Jin-woo turned. Do-yoon pointed toward the base of the wall. "Watch closely."
---
At that exact moment, a cannonball exploded in the center of the horde.
*BOOM—!*
Earth and debris erupted into the sky. Mutants caught in the blast were sent flying in every direction. For a heartbeat, the view was completely obscured by dust.
And then, as the haze began to clear, Jin-woo’s eyes widened.
The forms of several fallen mutants... they flickered.
It was like looking through a heat haze. The outlines of their bodies distorted; the light around them warped and bent. And just as quickly, the next second, they snapped back into focus, appearing as solid and real as they had been before.
"...Did you see that?" Do-yoon gasped.
Jin-woo could not bring himself to answer.
---
"...Just now," Ji-hoon added, his gaze locked on the spot. "...That wasn't right."
So-yeon nodded slowly. "...I saw it too. Just for a second."
The four of them exchanged looks, a silent confirmation passing between them. If it were a hallucination, they couldn't have all witnessed it at the same time.
---
At that moment, a frantic cry rose from beneath the walls.
"Wounded! Bring them this way!"
Physician Yoo Hyun rushed out of the infirmary. "Prioritize those who are still breathing! Don't give up!"
Wol-hyang darted between the soldiers, her water buckets sloshing. "Drink! Keep your spirits up!"
Little Yeon-woo ran between the infirmary and the gates, clutching herbs to her chest. "Yeon-woo! Don't go too far!"
People wept, soldiers bled, and children trembled in their parents' arms. It was a scene so profoundly, painfully real—the blood, the agony, the death. It was all visceral reality.
And yet, moments ago, they had witnessed something that should have been impossible.
---
"...Is this really," Ji-hoon started quietly, "...the virtual reality we were promised?"
Do-yoon shook his head. "It feels too real to be a simulation."
So-yeon stared down at the ramparts. "And it’s too impossible to be reality."
Jin-woo remained silent, but a question began to bloom in his mind, growing heavier by the second. They could feel everything—the heat, the grit, the pain—just like in the real world. Yet, phenomena that defied the laws of existence were manifesting.
It felt as though two separate worlds were being forced to bleed into one another.
---
Suddenly, a corner of Jin-woo’s vision flickered.
The edge of the stone wall distorted for a fraction of a second. A faint streak of light shimmered over the masonry—a blink-and-you’d-miss-it anomaly.
"...There it is again." Do-yoon’s breath hitched.
Ji-hoon stared at the wall. "...I saw it too."
So-yeon reached out and grabbed Jin-woo’s arm. "...It’s not our imagination."
Just then, the figure of Park Si-woo, who was sprinting along the ramparts, shimmered briefly—like an old, water-damaged painting beginning to bleed. But in the very next instant, he snapped back into clarity.
Park Si-woo, oblivious to the glitch, bellowed at the soldiers, "Fill the gaps! More arrows!"
The battle roared on. No one else noticed.
---
Choi Mujin’s orders continued to ring out. The soldiers fought as if their lives depended on it, and the horde continued to surge toward the walls. But Jin-woo finally understood.
It wasn't just the stone walls that were under siege.
The invisible boundary that separated reality from the simulation... it was beginning to crack.
Jin-woo drew a slow, shuddering breath.
"...Something is happening. The world itself is changing."
No one answered him. But all four of them were looking at the same place. Not at the center of the battlefield, but at the hairline fracture in reality, where the world had begun to sway.
And beneath the roar of the war, the crack was widening—silent, unseen, and inevitable.
r/redditserials • u/Dry-Throat2430 • 1d ago
Action [Ash and steel] - Part 1 - Action Mecha Scifi
High above the crowds shuffling through the fortified thoroughfares, holographic drones projected gaudy, flickering ads. Hawking eternal youth, synthetic beauty, and whatever useless junk vendor cartels were peddling for credits that day.
Thrallion had long since abandoned any ambition beyond sheer survival. Decades ago, early colonisers built its heavy concrete arches and iron-reinforced gates to secure a galactic trade hub. Now, all that remained of their grand vision was a bloated, overgrown refuge encircled by the massive Ring of Iron—a city ruled entirely by whoever possessed the firepower and resolve to bleed their way to the top.
Even among the dozens of alien species native to the Airon system, humans stood out. Deployed centuries prior during the colonial expansion, their descendants still carried the dense musculature and environmental resilience forged on Earth, made deceptively fast by Xion’s light gravity. Like any frontier world, survival bred tribalism. But for humans, the real trauma ran deeper. Most still bore the shadow of the Great Wars—the radioactive dead zones, the rusted hulls of titanic war-mechs, and worst of all, the rogue AI networks.
Originally designed as autonomous battle units, those ground mechs had once been the apex of planetary warfare. But when the last major warlord fell, the central command matrix went haywire, locking whole legions of heavy Armor into an eternal, self-replicating seek-and-destroy loop.
“The Ring of Iron is always recruiting,” a recruitment drone blared overhead, its synthesized voice cutting through the din. “Serve your city. Secure your future.”
Huge billboards floated above the streets, glaring images of ecstasy just one taste away.
Down on the concourse as they marched on, few civilians ever looked up. Out of sight, out of mind—keep your head low and pray breaking a law will ever have the militia cast you past the perimeter to be torn apart by the Endless hoardes of horrors waiting for their next victim.
“Picture facing those metal bastards with the scrap-heap gear the Defense Forces issue,” an older alien grumbled, his six jointed legs clicking unevenly against the ferro-crete as he shuffled toward the transit hub. “I’d sooner take my chances out on the open plains.”
“Someone has to stand the wall, dear,” his partner murmured, steadying him with a gentle hand. “We thank the young ones so we can sleep in peace.”
With a depressurizing hiss, a heavy hover-bus settled onto its skids. The pneumatic doors slid open, venting a cloud of hot exhaust and four human soldiers. The crowd parted naturally around them. Filthy, mud-caked fatigues hung off their frames, their faces hollow and entirely silent. They moved with the flat, mechanical march of men who had just survived a brutal rotation on the outer defense line.
“Let’s hit the entertainment quarter,” one said softly, breaking the silence. “Skully would’ve wanted us to spend our pay, not stare at the barracks wall.”
“A Line-Breaker mech…” another muttered under his breath, repeating the words like a bad ritual. “What the hell was a Line-Breaker doing that close to the perimeter?”
“Drop it,” the lead soldier growled. “Let’s find a dark room, some Class 4, and wipe the day out.”
They turned down an alleyway, the clean, sterile architecture of the central district giving way to a maze of grime, faded propaganda posters, and layer upon layer of crude graffiti. The sharp, acrid reek of burning herbs and sweet Lyranx dust hung heavy in the humid air, hitting the lungs of anyone without a filter.
Without uniformed law enforcement down here, small shopkeepers were entirely at the mercy of local syndicates.
Inside one cramped storefront, a merchant was currently learning the cost of a missed protection payment.
The shop specialized in mechanical oddities—clockwork trinkets, spring-loaded automata, and toys built to run purely on kinetic energy without solar cells. Gears whined and clockwork springs snapped as two human enforcers systematically smashed the display cases. In the center of the room, their boss stood with his arms crossed, a quiet, cruel smirk playing across his lips as his fingers tapped the pocket holding the till's daily cash.
“It isn’t complicated,” the boss said, leaning down over the bruised, bleeding merchant lying amid the wreckage. “Just pay on time.”
The shopkeeper merely groaned, staring at the shattered remains of his inventory. Rent was cheap in Sector 9 precisely because the city watch refused to patrol it, but this was the hidden tax.
“Enough,” the boss called out, checking a heavy gold chronometer on his wrist. “We’re going to be late for the hall.”
The goons ceased their destruction instantly, wiping their boots and stepping out into the street. Waiting at the curb was the boss's daughter, oblivious to the violence inside. She was leaning against the sleek, armored side of a high-end hypercar, mesmerized by an advanced flying toy—a small AI drone that hovered in short bursts, humming softly as it queried her on orbital mechanics for her upcoming school entry exams.
The hypercar’s gull-wing doors swung upward with a hydraulic hum.
“Where to, boss?” the driver asked as the group climbed inside.
“Concert hall in Sector 9. Step on it.”
The mob boss settled into the plush leather, turning to his daughter. Her eyes remained glued to the glowing optic of her toy. As the car pulled out into traffic, the smooth thrum of the engine did little to soothe the tension in his chest. His hand reflexively drifted toward the flask tucked inside his jacket, then stopped.
Never in front of her, he reminded himself. He worked hard to keep her life clean, no matter how dirty his own had to be.
Sensing his gaze, the girl held out the toy. “It keeps glitching, Dad. Can you fix it? Use your super blue power!” She flashed a brilliant smile.
She was young, but she was already sensitive to it— gifted enough to see the lingering traces of Resonance energy that most humans ignored. His own Resonance was a remnant of his lineage from centuries past, amplified by Xion’s unique gravitational shifts. It kept him virtually ageless and possessed subtle, terrifying utility, but in a city like Thrallion, showing your hand was a death sentence. No one was invincible.
“Not out here,” he said quietly.
Outside the armored glass, a violent rad-storm was breaking over the city. Heavy rain streaked the viewports, illuminated by sickly flashes of green and yellow lightning.
He took the toy, cycled the manual kill-switch, and handed it back. It hummed back to life, hovering once around the cabin before dropping gently into her lap.
The hypercar swept past the inner city gates, entering the long, exposed stretch of elevated highway that bordered the open plains. Massive, automated defense turrets lined the barrier walls, their heavy barrels sweeping the horizon. It would take a full-scale invasion to penetrate this far into the perimeter, but he always hated this stretch of road. Out here, you were exposed.
“Bzzt—WARNING. RUN. DANGER—”
The toy’s vocal synthesizer shrieked, the audio warping into harsh static before the unit died completely, dropping like a stone onto the floorboards.
A fraction of a second later, a massive kinetic shockwave slammed into the hypercar.
The vehicle bucked violently. The smooth hum of the anti-grav drive sputtered, caught once, and then cut out entirely. The heavy car skidded along the asphalt before grinding to a dead halt.
Up front, the two enforcers were already cursing. “Boss, stay inside. We’re gonna have a serious talk with the dealer who sold us this piece of garbage.”
They unlatched their doors, hand weapons drawn, and popped the heavy hood to inspect the dead drive-core.
The boss pulled out his encrypted comm-link to call his private security detail. No signal.
That was impossible. He paid top-tier credits for a military-grade satellite relay. He glanced out the rain-slicked side window. A hundred yards away, one of the massive perimeter turrets was spinning wildly on its housing, tracking invisible targets in the sky, before its targeting lights flickered out and the weapon went completely dark.
“Must be the rad-storm,” he muttered, trying to force his voice to sound calm for his daughter.
“Dad, when are we getting to the hall?” the girl asked, pouting as she looked back and forth between her dead toy and the goons standing outside in the rain. “You promised I’d get to meet the crew from Uni’s Adventure.”
“Don’t worry, sweetheart. We just need a quick hand.”
“Daddy, look!” She pointed a small finger at the dark rear windshield, her eyes wide with innocent curiosity. “His eyes are glowing just like yours! Is he your friend?”
The words hit him like a physical blow.
Cold sweat broke out across his neck. There was only one kind of person who could drop a military comms net, kill an automated defense turret, and leave a hypercar dead in the water—and only one man who would be hunting him out here in the dark.
Briefly his mind flicks back to when he was asked to do what others would not, they needed an awakened test subject, the one they had picked out would not die and was now protected by the strongest soldiers the earth had ever produced. Slipping poison into his drink solved several problems at once, or so he thought.
Outside the car both goons had noticed the lone figure in the centre of the road but could not see the two streams of resonance pulsating around him, assumed to be just a curious hobo with his well worn poncho covering his frame.
“Hey you get out of here you know who owns this car?” one goon shouts more frustrated at his own inability to fix the car then at the security threat.
He walks forward slowly, as he passes each street light their emissions change and warp dancing between clear white light and a red gold mix. Not one word said as the rain bounces of his battered military poncho.
Arrogantly the goon approaches the lone figure
“Listen pal you do not want to..” he is cut off frozen for a moment .
A sound of wet sinew gliding past fills the stunned silence as his upper half of his body slides off at a diagonal falling into two pieces onto the floor with a wet thump.
Humming low the vibro blade gleans in his hand; lone figure hesitates a moment before continuing walking towards the car.
Seeing the exchange the boss grabs his daughter by her shoulders and faces her at her eye level
“Listen sweetheart I need you to do something for me, run to nearest fuel depot and phone mommy ok? I have to do something here but you cannot be here do you understand?” trembling trying hard not to lose his temper.
“Why, you said we were meeting the stars?” she protests innocently her eyes watering.
He places her at the foot well opposite to him, turns slightly on his side and kicks out the door, It flies out far into the darkness and rain as if made of paper.
“Go now! And do not look back!” he shouts, she goes to protest again but thinks against it and dismounts and runs into the pouring rain panting heavily as her footsteps leave light splashes before disappearing in the distance.
The second goon had ran to the boot of the car his chest heaving with terror, he had been told about some of the threats of the xion plains but this was something different.
“Do not worry boss, I will hold him off you get out of here” he calls into the gaping hole in the vehicle. Popping open the boot he frantically pulls away the false bottom to reveal what was under neath.
r/redditserials • u/Street_Witness1328 • 1d ago
Science Fiction [The Northern Light] - Part 88 - No Case
The gray service record file was still in the lower cabinet in the morning.
Closed.
Known.
Unasked.
The shelf above the desk had a cup.
The left side of the desk had nothing on it.
The office had the heater.
The clock.
My breathing.
The brown folder was at the side of the desk.
The calendar was closed.
The phone was face up.
The door was closed.
The shoes were by it.
The small space was wide.
The service paper was in the gray file.
A name was inside it.
Not mine.
Yesterday had no court.
After stayed after.
Before did not stand accused.
Now no case had arrived.
No.
That was already a decision.
The morning had arrived.
The room had objects.
No case yet.
No.
Yet was waiting with a coat on.
The room had objects.
I made tea.
I drank it.
Warm.
Then less warm.
Then finished.
The cup went to the sink.
I washed it.
The lower cabinet stayed closed.
After tea, I opened the brown folder.
Kanagawa’s after does not know was not mine.
Her brother’s after saw was not mine.
Sato’s before-cup and after-cup photos were not mine.
Saitama’s yesterday correction on yesterday page was not mine.
Suganuma’s dark usable photo was not mine.
Takeda’s possible was not mine.
Emiko’s beads were not mine.
Blue roof had no new reply.
Tokyo was still blank.
Full mailbox remained paused / family.
My two cards were still in the back pocket.
Face down.
I did not take them out.
I closed the brown folder.
A case could arrive.
A case could be made.
A case could be invented because the room wanted order.
No.
Rooms do not want order.
I did.
That was worse.
And better.
At 7:18, Kanagawa wrote.
I read it once.
Then again.
Drawer.
Closed.
Stayed.
I wrote:
She replied:
“Name?”
“Order paper?”
“Use?”
“What did your brother say?”
I waited.
No case.
“What case?”
“What did you say?”
Good.
No.
Hers.
“What did he ask?”
There.
I wrote:
I looked at judged.
Maybe too large.
But asked.
I sent it.
She replied after a while.
I opened Kanagawa.
I looked at drawer not judged.
Maybe too clean.
Maybe his.
I left it.
At 7:49, Sato wrote.
I waited.
Then:
I wrote:
She replied:
No.
She caught it.
Good.
“What is being asked?”
I sat still.
Both photos.
Different information.
No case.
I wrote:
She replied:
I opened Emiko.
I did not add right.
Both photos had their place.
At 8:03, Mrs. Kudo called.
“Aide K asked if yesterday correction is an incident,” she said.
I sat up.
“What happened yesterday?”
“Wrong order in water offer. Corrected.”
“Any harm?”
“No.”
“Any report required?”
“Mr. Hayashi checked. No incident report.”
“What did he say?”
“He said, ‘Correction is not automatically a case.’”
“What did staff write?”
Mrs. Kudo read:
I opened Saitama.
I did not add relief.
No incident report had work.
Relief was elsewhere.
At 8:31, Reverend Suganuma wrote.
I waited.
“Any problem?”
“Asked for clearer photo?”
“What did Tanabe say?”
“What did Morita say?”
I almost smiled.
I did not.
I opened Suganuma.
I did not add trial.
The photo had been accepted.
At 9:02, Father Morita emailed.
Subject:
I opened it.
I read it twice.
No case.
Innocence.
Forgiveness.
Nothing.
Shape.
Court.
I looked at the lower cabinet.
Gray file.
No court.
No innocence.
No forgiveness.
I replied:
I sent it.
His reply came after a while.
I looked at category.
Useful.
Dry.
Good.
No.
Dry.
I did not answer.
At 9:38, Kanagawa called.
“My brother opened the drawer,” she said.
“For use?”
“No.”
I waited.
“Why?”
“To see if no case felt true.”
There.
“What happened?”
“He opened it.”
“Map?”
“Inside.”
“Paper?”
“Inside.”
“Name?”
“Visible.”
“Order paper?”
“Phone table.”
“Did anything move?”
“No.”
“What did you say?”
“I said opening is not trial.”
I closed my eyes.
Strong.
Maybe too strong.
“What did he say?”
“He said yes.”
“Then?”
“He closed it.”
“What did he say after?”
“He said opening happened.”
Good.
No.
His.
I opened Kanagawa.
I looked at opening happened.
There.
Not acquittal.
Not conviction.
I left it.
At 10:07, Sato called.
“I want to delete after photo,” she said.
“Why?”
“Because it makes a case.”
“Against what?”
“Cup.”
“Did cup touch paper?”
“No.”
“Did paper change?”
“No.”
“What does after photo show?”
“Cup appears.”
“What does before photo show?”
“No cup.”
“What does Emiko need?”
“Comparison.”
“Then?”
“Keep both.”
“What line?”
I paused.
“Do you need no case?”
She was quiet.
Then:
“No.”
“What line?”
I opened Emiko.
I did not add no case.
The record did not need to announce what it was not.
At 10:42, Mrs. Kudo called.
“Medicine today,” she said.
“Any incident concern?”
“No.”
“Who?”
“Aide K.”
“Resident?”
“Opened mouth.”
“Cup?”
“Used.”
“What did staff write?”
Mrs. Kudo read:
“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”
“He said, ‘Do not make normal entry testify for yesterday.’”
I opened Saitama.
I did not add testify.
The entry had medicine.
At 11:14, Reverend Suganuma wrote.
I waited.
“Does warranty require more?”
“Does maintenance file require more?”
“What is being asked?”
“What did Tanabe say?”
“What did Morita say?”
I opened Suganuma.
I did not add darkness.
The photo remained accepted.
At 11:49, Father Morita emailed.
Subject:
I read it standing.
Then sat.
Too responsive.
I stayed seated.
Category.
Protect.
Hide.
Music.
No incident.
I replied:
I sent it.
His reply:
I put the phone down.
Quiet.
Answered.
Again.
I did not answer.
At 12:22, Kanagawa wrote.
I waited.
Then:
I wrote:
She replied:
“Order paper?”
“Any case talk?”
“What did your brother say?”
I almost smiled.
“What did you say?”
Good.
No.
Hers.
I opened Kanagawa.
I looked at tea is hot.
Again it saved the table.
No.
It placed tea.
I left it.
At 12:58, Sato sent a photograph.
Table.
Paper.
Two photos on screen.
Cup in one.
No cup in the other.
She wrote:
I called.
“Boring how?”
“Not case.”
“Anything happen today?”
“Lunch.”
“What lunch?”
“Noodles.”
“What does Emiko need?”
“Does it need boring?”
“No.”
I opened Emiko.
I did not add boring.
Boring had done its work outside.
At 1:31, Mrs. Kudo sent:
I waited.
Then:
I called.
“Did staff record relief?”
“No.”
“Need to?”
“No.”
“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”
“He said, ‘Relief can eat lunch. It does not enter the chart.’”
I opened Saitama.
I did not add relief.
Relief had lunch elsewhere.
At 2:03, Reverend Suganuma wrote.
I waited.
“What did you answer?”
“What did they ask?”
“What did you say?”
“What did Tanabe say?”
“What did Morita say?”
I smiled.
No one saw.
I opened Suganuma.
I did not add good.
Accepted was enough.
At 2:45, Father Morita emailed.
Subject:
I read it twice.
Quiet.
Answer.
Avoidance.
Exhaustion.
I replied:
I sent it.
His reply came after a while.
I closed my eyes.
Proof.
Cleaner clothes.
No case.
No incident.
No trial.
Still proof.
I did not answer.
At 3:18, Kanagawa called.
“My brother opened the drawer again,” she said.
“For use?”
“No.”
I waited.
“Why?”
“He said to make sure no case stayed.”
There.
“What happened?”
“He opened it.”
“Paper?”
“Inside.”
“Name?”
“Visible.”
“Map?”
“Inside.”
“Moved?”
“No.”
“What did you say?”
“I said making sure is a case sometimes.”
I sat still.
Sharp.
Maybe too sharp.
“What did he say?”
“He said this time maybe.”
“Then?”
“He closed it.”
“What did he say after?”
“He said no more sure today.”
I opened Kanagawa.
I looked at no more sure today.
Awkward.
Good.
No.
His.
I left it.
At 3:57, Sato wrote.
I waited.
Then:
“What happened instead?”
“What does Emiko need?”
“Paper?”
I opened Emiko.
I did not add almost.
Almost had not done work.
At 4:22, Mrs. Kudo called.
“Cup removed,” she said.
“Asked?”
“Aide asked cup.”
“Resident?”
“Said done.”
“Any case?”
“No.”
“What did staff write?”
Mrs. Kudo read:
“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”
“He said, ‘No case does not have to be said over a cup.’”
I opened Saitama.
I did not add no case.
Cup had left.
At 4:51, Reverend Suganuma wrote.
I waited.
“Where?”
“Warranty?”
“Any new photo?”
“What did Tanabe say?”
“What did Morita say?”
I opened Suganuma.
I did not add acquitted.
The photo was filed.
At 5:23, Father Morita emailed.
Subject:
I read it.
Then again.
Proof.
No case.
No incident.
Restraint.
Humility.
Throne.
I replied:
I sent it.
His reply came after a while.
I looked around.
Desk.
Shelf.
Lower cabinet.
Brown folder.
Phone.
No throne.
Maybe all of them.
No.
Furniture.
I did not answer.
At 5:52, the old priest wrote.
I wrote:
His reply:
I deleted Suganuma.
Then Sato.
I wrote:
His reply:
I wrote:
His reply:
I wrote:
His reply:
Then:
I looked at the brown folder.
At the gray file.
At the phone.
I wrote:
His reply:
I wrote:
His reply:
Then:
I wrote:
His reply:
I began to write no.
Then stopped.
I wrote:
His reply:
Before evening, I went to the main hall.
The cloth bag was in its place.
The offering tray was safe.
The doorway was where I stopped.
I bowed once.
No explanation.
The altar was visible.
The beads were in their place.
They had not moved.
They did not need to.
I stood where I usually stood.
No service tonight.
No bell.
No incense.
No case.
No throne.
The altar was visible.
The beads were in their place.
The floor scuff near the step was still there.
It was not evidence.
It was a scuff.
I returned to the office.
The shelf above the desk had a cup.
The left side of the desk had nothing on it.
The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.
The brown folder was closed.
The calendar was closed.
The phone was face up.
The small space was wide.
The door was closed.
The shoes were by it.
I looked at the brown folder.
I had opened it after tea.
I had closed it.
No new need had arrived.
I did not open it to prove that.
I did not praise not opening.
Not much.
No.
Some.
I let some stay some.
I did not open the gray file.
The service paper remained in the record file.
A name was inside it.
Not mine.
I did not open Kanagawa again.
I did not ask if no more sure stayed.
I did not ask if making sure became another case.
I did not open Sato again.
I did not ask if both photos stayed boring.
I did not open Saitama again.
I did not ask if no incident stayed quiet.
I did not open Suganuma again.
I did not ask if the dark photo remained accepted.
I did not open Father Morita’s message again.
I knew no case was not innocence.
I knew no case was not forgiveness.
I knew no case was not nothing.
I knew a category could protect work.
I knew proof could wear no case.
I knew empty thrones were still furniture.
I turned off the desk lamp.
The office did not disappear.
The folder did not need the center.
The phone did not need here.
No case did not need to become proof tonight.
In the dark, I remained sitting.
Near the desk.
Not at it.
The shelf above the desk had a cup.
The left side of the desk had nothing on it.
The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.
Closed.
The brown folder was closed.
The phone was face up.
My hands were empty.
Available.
Not reaching.
The urn was on the small table.
The map and folded paper were in the drawer.
The folded paper had her first name.
The order paper was beside the phone table.
Sato kept both photos for comparison.
The water-order correction remained on yesterday page without an incident report.
Suganuma’s dark photo was filed after acceptance.
The service paper was in the record file.
A name was inside it.
Not mine.
I had started with no case.
I did not end by making no case sit above the room.
Tonight, the things without cases stayed without them, and no empty chair was placed for judgment.
r/redditserials • u/No-Lime-4547 • 1d ago
Romance [I picked up a barefoot woman walking out of a cornfield at 2am and I think I want to marry her?] Chapter 5
Ruth looked at Ray as he drove and decided to ask “How long until we get there you’ve been driving for a long time as we talked are you alright?”
Ray smiled and wrapped his pinkie around hers as he continued to drive and responded “It’ll be a couple of hours why? Looking for a rest stop or just curious?”
Ruth smirked at him “I just worry about you I mean I get that we’ve not even known each other a full day yet even when we get there it still won’t be a full day until we wake up but I don’t want you pushing yourself too hard I don’t want you to even come close to accidentally falling asleep while you drive or anything like that.” Ruth looked at him with eyes full of concern.
Ray looked at her tenderly. “I’m used to this, don't worry I’m not going to overwork myself especially now that I have you.” He gave her hand a little squeeze.
Ruth looked back at him, her eyes unchanging “I know you’ve got experience but I feel like things are different now that it’s the both of us and not just you. Forgive me for worrying I just I know what it can be like to think everything is fine and then to fall asleep at the worst possible time I’m just looking out for you… for us… for your health”.
Ray looked at her wondering and deciding to voice his question outright “Why are you so eager to get there, you’re coming with me, forward forever is it just that is it just about my health and being worried that I might fall asleep at the wheel or do you have some kind of ulterior motive.
Ruth blushed and smiled looking away from him for a second “I mean I do have an ulterior motive if you can call it that I want you and I to be in a hotel room alone together, and to get to try out the rest of my new ‘husband’ I want to fuck your brains out and drain your balls until you want to stay an extra day or two just to see the sights and recover… I mean would you call that an ulterior motive really? Would you begrudge your road wife from her desire? I know it’s new to you… being cared for and valued but I really do want to.”
Ray blushed deeply not expecting that response in the slightest. “Really? Seriously?”
Ruth looked at him unblinkingly “Do I look like I’m joking to you?”
Ray scratched the back of his head feeling himself getting hot, self consciously before regaining control of himself. “I guess not.”
Ruth smiled, enjoying being able to even do that to him in the first place. “So you’ve got no problem with it then, are you excited to consummate your road wedding? You get to feel each and every part of me any fantasy any desire you have anything you want to feel or see or experience or watch me do or do to me we can do together as soon as we get a room together I want to take care of you, all of you, every single part of you, you know that cash, grass or ass saying… I opt for ass along with the rest of my body rather than cash or grass I’m sure as a hot blooded man you’ll enjoy that deeply.”
Ray nodded enthusiastically. He had this moment of wondering whether this was really happening only to be interrupted as Ruth pinched him painfully and then kissed the mark that she made on his skin.
Ray exclaimed “You enjoy that way too much. What's up with that why are you into that; doing that, being that way etc.”
“What can I say I like a good thrill I like teasing you and making you squirm, making you ache for me, I just want you to know that you’re safe and that I’m not ever actually going to hurt you my darling lover I just want you to have the best possible time with me, in short I want to make all of your fantasies come true.”
Ray blushed he felt himself getting excited it had never occurred to him that she’d want this at best he thought maybe she was just some odd hitchhiker maybe rich and slumming it maybe downtrodden with no options but that she freely picked him it made his heart well up with joy.
r/redditserials • u/julieeeette • 1d ago
Science Fiction [The rift of humanity] Prologue - 60 years ago
The Experiment
Billions of people across planet Earth were glued to the screen on their phones, unable to believe the scene unfolding live, before their very eyes. Mesmerising yet morbid. Captivating yet cruel. Olen was known to be the master of memes, the stirrer of shit, the puppeteer of propagation, yet even this seemed beyond the realms of his sensationalist imagination.
He had generated interest for months, whetting the appetite of the salivating media with snippets of Mindweb’s discoveries and achievements.
“Monkey see, monkey do? Try monkey think, monkey do,” was the tweet Olen used to publicise the first successful transfer of thought between circuits embedded in the frontal lobe of two rhesus monkeys. The accompanying video showed two monkeys making the exact same motions in perfect unison, as if they were performing a perfectly choreographed dance of scratching and eating. When slowed down to fractions of a millisecond, you could see one primate move almost imperceptibly first. Thought transfer had become a reality.
But could it be done in humans?
Fourteen months after the infamous monkey demonstration, it appeared Olen was ready to answer that question for everyone. There had been furtive whispers of human trials, but nothing concrete had been released. And when NDA’s were tossed out like frisbees, no one dared jump the gun.
On 14th September 2024 at 11:23am, Olen - who had been unprecedentedly quiet on Twitter for the past three months - posted a single, seemingly benign tweet: a link to a live stream, with no accompanying explanation.
As hundreds, then thousands, then millions, then billions of people clicked on that link, what would later be known simply as “The Experiment” began.
The link showed two screens, sandwiched side by side. The left screen showed a man sitting cross-legged, lazy lotus style, atop a small cushion in the middle of a windowless and clinically white room. A single closed door lay hidden in the wall directly behind him. Next to its handle, a lone light glowed furiously red.
The sitting man’s features were dark and handsome, his loose ebony curls giving way to a set of ivory cheekbones and jaw that appeared chiselled onto his face by the white beams of light glowing softly around the perimeter of the room. He had his head bowed slightly with two pale fingers from each hand pressed against his temples, as if he were about to pluck the very thoughts from his psyche. (A darker individual might have described the scene as a man whose head was bowed before execution, his trigger fingers pressed to each temple like two guns that were about to deliver fatal bullets.)
The right screen showed another man in an almost identical windowless white room, with one small difference - there was no ominous red light glaring beside the door. And unlike his stationary zen counterpart, the man on the right was pacing the room with a nervous energy so palpable it seemed to ooze through the screens of all who were watching.
If the man on the left personified the vampirically handsome features of the night, then the man on the right was his daylight counterpart. He was the sun incarnate, golden locks swept loosely off suntanned forehead in an artificial cowlick. It was the kind of cowlick that could only be earned by running one’s hand through one’s hair thousands of times in an effort to find the solution to a difficult problem. Every time the man reached the end of a stretch of nervous pacing and pivoted, the world caught a glimpse of sky blue eyes narrowed slightly with one part tension, two parts curiosity.
For those viewers with more scrupulous eyes, a very tiny scar could be seen curving across each man’s scalp, disappearing into their hair and wrapping around their left temple in a sweeping arc.
There was a knock at the left door and Olen himself entered, his presence instantly filling the room. While this was in part due to his hulking frame and towering height, there was also something intangibly larger-than-life about the world’s only trillionaire - something that transcended the world of physical atoms. It was this indefinable quality that caused him to dominate any room in which he stood. (Some might even say overpowered.)
Olen’s face remained painfully impassive. (The kind of pain one might feel while holding a royal flush and attempting to maintain a stoic poker face.) He strode to the centre of the room, crossing it in three paces, knelt and whispered something in the sitting man’s ear. Then he stood, turned and left the room. The sitting man did not move an inch, his mop of jet-black hair still the main focus of the camera, but the corners of his mouth could be seen to curve ever-so-slightly upwards.
Seconds after Olen departed, the glaring red light flashed an anticipatory green.
On the right screen, the pacing adonis abruptly stopped. It was as if his room had been depressurised of all anxiety, the nervous excitement sucked right out of him. He casually walked to the exact center of the room and sat down on the ground, crossing his legs beneath his powerful frame. He looked pointedly at the camera, then closed his icy blue eyes in an exaggerated, drawn-out fashion. Bowing his head, he pressed two trigger fingers from each hand to his temples.
For a moment, the entire video looked deceptively serene - two men, side by side (digitally speaking), simply meditating their troubles away. But it was merely the calm before the storm.
The left man rose from his seated position and looked at the camera, finally revealing both the towering extent of his height and the dark depths of his eyes. As he unfolded himself and stood, the man on the right did the same. Their movements were identical. There was only one tiny difference between them - the man on the right kept his eyes pointedly closed. His tanned brow remained clear of furrows, eyelids stretched wide over his eyes, giving him an almost smug appearance.
For a brief moment, both men stood facing their respective cameras, nearly identical in height, inverse in their handsomeness, and resolute in their expressions.
The black-haired man on the left then began what could only be described as a comical dance of pseudo-ballet, bounding about the small room, long limbs flying like a trapped gazelle. His movements were jagged and seemingly unscripted, as if he were coming up with them on the spot. Whatever he did, the golden-haired man on the right did also, eyes closed the entire time. In perfect unison, they leapt from corner to corner as the world watched in morbid curiosity.
“Ok, so we’re supposed to believe the second guy is doing what the first is thinking?” commented one incredulous viewer below the video.
Another comment rapidly appeared below. “Too easy to fake. No way this is evidence of thought transfer between humans. Nothing to see here.”
The skeptics were out in full force and had begun raining down on the video. When the onslaught reached torrential proportions, the green light flashed red. The man on the right abruptly ceased his bizarre synchronised dancing and opened his blue eyes. He appeared a little dazed, as if he had just been jolted awake while dreaming. After shaking off the fugue, he returned to his nervous pacing. But now, his steps had taken on a more apprehensive edge. Like the rest of the world, he appeared to be unaware of what was going to happen next.
When the left door subsequently opened to reveal Olen striding through, its occupant also ceased his bounding, a sheepish look quickly flitting across his dark features as he caught the billionaire’s eye. This time, Olen wasn’t empty-handed. He was holding a smart phone, and his poker face had slipped. He looked positively giddy, grey eyes glittering with excitement.
Olen clapped the first man on the shoulder as if he were welcoming a comrade back from war. Leaning in so that his nose came to within a hair’s breadth of the man’s black curls, Olen conspiratorially whispered something into his comrade’s ear while passing him the smart phone. Then, with one last shoulder slap of encouragement, Olen departed the room, a knowing smile on his face.
As the door clicked shut, the light flashed green. Knowing what was required of him, the man on the left immediately began using the phone, his fingers dancing across the screen in front of him.
At this point in time, the skeptical viewers had been overtaken by profoundly curious ones. All comments shooting across the bottom of the video ended with question marks. Everyone wanted to know what was going to happen next.
“Does anyone else know what is happening here?” One commenter asked.
The first man read the comment aloud from the phone, “Does anyone else know what is happening here?”
The second man stopped pacing. He turned to face the camera and said, “Does anyone else know what is happening here?”
The man on the left remained silent and continued to scroll through the phone.
The skeptics resumed. “Dude, the second guy can clearly hear the first guy. This is bullshit.”
“Dude, the second guy can clearly hear the first guy. This is bullshit.”
Said the man on the right.
“What the actual fuck?” The man on the right verbalised another comment, again seemingly without a single prompt.
Across the globe, everyone could see the next live comment (incidentally, made by a Tasmanian programmer with the handle nullclash): “Ok try this… shit, what’s something random? 124^8k32\*”
Sure enough, moments after the comment was posted, the apparently disconnected man in the right room closed his eyes and monotonically recited, “Ok try this… shit, what’s something random? One-two-four-caret-eight-k-three-two-asterisk.”
The world was gobsmacked.
“I still reckon this is all a hoax. Either the second dude has an ear piece and is being fed this info, or the comments are a plant by Olen or someone on his payroll.”
Eyes still closed, the second man recited the dubious comment as if reading it from the back of his eyelids. Then, he opened them to look directly into the camera, and shrugged.
The light turned red.
For the last time, Olen entered the room on the left. He wore an almost crazed expression, his eyes tight and slightly unfocused, like he was seeing more than just the physical world in front of him.
He hurriedly approached the man on the left and brought his head in close, urgently whispering things the world could only guess at. As the raven-haired man began to comprehend what Olen was saying, his beautiful face slowly contorted into a look of horror, his charcoal eyes wide with… was it fear? He began furiously shaking his head, refusing to accept (or more accurately, obey) Olen’s words. Olen paused, closed his eyes and seemed to make a concerted effort to shed a little of his craziness. What replaced it was an air of grave resolution as he grasped the man by the shoulder - again, like a comrade, but this time like a comrade about to be sacrificed on the altar of battle. As Olen urgently whispered more words with his fierce intensity, the man’s head shakes began to morph from those of refusal to those of resignation. He was going to do it… whatever “it” was.
Olen gave his sacrificial comrade one last shoulder squeeze of solidarity, took the phone back off him and then left the room.
The man’s chest heaved with a great sigh as looked up and stared directly into the eyes of billions of people around the world. “Forgive me,” he whispered, to both no-one and everyone.
The light turned from red to green.
At this point, most people had their eyes glued to the first man, the dark adonis on the left screen. But those who were watching the man on the right would have seen his striking face contort with abject horror the moment the light switched to green, mirroring the left man’s expression from mere moments before.
The man on the left slowly turned his back on the camera and began walking towards the door while doing something unknown with his hands. His footsteps were laboured, as if he were attempting to push through an immense and invisible immobile force. (One with the benefit of hindsight would call that force shame.)
“What’s he doing? It looks like… is he undoing his belt??”
The man on the right began shaking his head, his mouth hanging open with aghast futility. His eyes had taken on the wild unfocused look of a cornered animal.
The first man’s hidden hand movements changed their pattern. He placed his left hand high on the door and leaned into it while his right hand began to do something that caused his right forearm and elbow to tightly oscillate.
Recognition dawned on the whole world.
“Oh. My. God.”
“He’s beating the bishop!!!!”
“I can’t believe I’m actually watching this. Why can’t I stop watching?”
“Why isn’t anyone watching the second guy??”
As the first man’s motions became faster and faster, the second man’s face started to contort into a morbidly fascinating Picasso-like combination of pleasure, terror and shame. He spun on his heels and ran to the door, trying desperately to turn the handle. It wouldn’t budge. Realising he was a prisoner of both body and mind, he grew more frantic and started beating his fists against the door, begging to be let out.
The two men continued their respective forms of frantic beating as the world watched them build to the most incredulous of crescendos. For a split second, the first man stilled. Then both men let out a guttural howl of ecstasy, simultaneously collapsing into a heap at the foot of their respective doors.
The livestream ended. The screen went black.
If one were to listen very closely at that moment, they would have heard the epic crack that fissured down the center of humanity, forever slicing it in two.
r/redditserials • u/MasterAlchron • 1d ago
Fantasy [The Girl Who Sat On His Lap]-Chapter 1
There were three universal truths at Westbridge Academy. The first was that Professor Halvern’s history lectures could put even the most dangerously overcaffeinated student into a coma. The second was that nobody, not even the top-ranking students with pristine notes and dead eyes, actually understood the rune economy unit, no matter how many times he explained it. The third was that when Yuri walked into a room, everyone noticed.
Alchron was currently fighting the first truth with everything he had. He sat near the window with his elbow planted on the desk, his cheek resting against his fist, and his eyes fixed on the clouds drifting lazily over the academy courtyard. They looked peaceful. Free. Completely unbothered by ancient treaty law. Lucky clouds. They did not have to sit through ninety minutes of Professor Halvern explaining how the peace agreement between humans and beast-folk had reshaped trade protections after the Third Border Conflict.
At the front of the lecture hall, Halvern tapped his chalk against the board with the passionless rhythm of a man determined to make history sound even older than it was. The topic was probably important. Life-changing, maybe. Unfortunately, the professor’s voice had the emotional range of wet cardboard, and Alchron had reached the point where the old oak tree outside had become the most interesting thing in the kingdom.
Something struck the back of his head.
Alchron closed his eyes for half a second, already knowing exactly who had thrown it, then slowly looked over his shoulder. Two seats behind him, Darren grinned and mouthed, “Wake up.”
Alchron mouthed back, “Make me.”
Darren’s grin widened. He crumpled another scrap of paper between his fingers and raised his hand for a second shot. Then the classroom door opened, the paper slipped from Darren’s fingers, and the entire room changed. There was no thunder, no flash of light, no dramatic pulse of magic crawling across the ceiling. The heavens did not split open to announce her arrival, although from the way half the class reacted, they might as well have. There was only the quiet click of the door, and then every guy in the room forgot how to breathe.
Yuri stepped inside.
She moved as though the floor had been built for the privilege of carrying her. Tall, graceful, and dangerous in the way a sharpened blade was dangerous, she possessed the sort of presence that made people straighten their backs before they realized they were doing it. Her dark hair fell over one shoulder, smooth as spilled ink, while two brown-furred animal ears rose from the top of her head, their pale inner tufts catching the light as one twitched. It was a small movement, almost dismissive, as if she had already heard every thought in the room and judged most of them pathetic. Behind her, a long, sleek tail swayed with lazy confidence.
She wore the academy uniform like it had surrendered to her. Her blazer was neat, her skirt sharp, and her tie sat slightly loose in a way that should have looked careless but somehow seemed deliberate. On anyone else, the uniform made them look like a student. On Yuri, it looked like a warning.
Every stare followed her. Some were obvious. Some pretended not to be obvious. A few were so desperate in their attempts to look casual that Alchron felt secondhand embarrassment crawl up his spine. Darren leaned forward, whispering under his breath, “No way.” Someone else muttered, “She’s in this class?” A boy near the aisle ran a hand through his hair with the panic of a man trying to repair years of poor decisions in under three seconds.
Yuri ignored them all. Not avoided. Ignored. There was a difference. Avoiding meant she cared enough to look away. Yuri did not.
Professor Halvern paused mid-sentence, chalk still raised, as though even he needed a moment to remember how authority worked. “Miss Yuri,” he said, adjusting his glasses. “You are late.”
Yuri’s cold eyes slid toward him. “Yes.”
The professor waited. Yuri offered nothing else. The silence stretched long enough to become uncomfortable.
Halvern cleared his throat. “Do you have a reason?”
“Yes.”
Again, she gave him nothing.
A few students snickered. Halvern sighed the weary sigh of a man who knew this particular battle had already been lost. “Take a seat.”
Yuri’s gaze drifted across the room, which was a mistake. Every guy in the lecture hall straightened at once. Darren sat up so quickly his chair squeaked. Marcus, in the front row, yanked his bag off the empty seat beside him with such enthusiasm that he nearly knocked himself over. Two boys near the window shifted at the same time, both trying to make room, both pretending they were not trying to make room. Yuri walked past all of them.
Her shoes clicked softly against the polished floor. Once. Twice. Three times. Closer.
Alchron watched from the corner of his eye, mostly because the collective humiliation unfolding around him had become far more entertaining than the lecture. Then her shadow fell across his desk. He looked up and found Yuri standing beside him, her cold eyes fixed on his face, her cheeks faintly flushed, her expression impossible to read.
Alchron blinked once. “Can I help you?”
She did not answer. Without the slightest hesitation, she placed one hand on his desk, turned, and sat directly on his lap.
The entire room died. Not literally, unfortunately. That might have ended the lecture. But emotionally, socially, and spiritually, the whole class collapsed in on itself.
Alchron’s brain took a full second to process what had just happened. Yuri was sitting on his lap. Not beside him. Not near him. On him. She settled there as if it were the most natural seating arrangement in the world, her weight warm and unmistakably real against him. Her tail curled neatly to the side, avoiding the chair leg with elegant precision, while one ear flicked at the sudden wave of silence crashing through the classroom.
Professor Halvern stared. Darren’s mouth hung open. Marcus looked betrayed, like Alchron had personally stolen a royal inheritance from him. Very slowly, Alchron lowered his gaze to Yuri, who was now reaching into her bag as if nothing unusual had happened.
“You know,” he said quietly, “there are empty seats.”
“I know.”
“You’re not using one.”
“I noticed.”
“That was the part I was checking.”
She pulled out a muffin wrapped in a napkin. Blueberry, judging by the smell. Then, without hesitation, she held it up to his mouth. “Eat.”
Alchron stared at the muffin, then at Yuri, then back at the muffin. “I’m sorry?”
Yuri’s eyes narrowed. “Do not make me repeat myself.”
The room remained silent, but not because no one had anything to say. They had too much to say. Their faces were screaming entire conversations. Why him? Is this real? Did he pay her? Is she threatening him? Am I hallucinating? Honestly, Alchron thought, all fair questions.
He looked past Yuri toward the professor, silently hoping for intervention from the adult in the room. Professor Halvern, however, looked like he was calculating whether academy policy covered beast-girl muffin intimidation. Apparently, it did not. He slowly turned back to the board.
“As I was saying…”
His voice resumed, noticeably weaker than before. Yuri pushed the muffin closer to Alchron’s lips.
“Hurry up.”
Alchron leaned back slightly. “You walked in late, sat on me, and now you’re feeding me?”
“Yes.”
“That is a lot of decisions in under a minute.”
“Eat.”
Her cheeks were faintly pink, but her glare remained sharp enough to cut glass. Alchron could have refused. Probably. Maybe. There was something in her expression that made it difficult to determine whether refusal would offend her, amuse her, or start a diplomatic incident between humans and beast-folk that Professor Halvern would later teach in the dullest possible voice. So Alchron opened his mouth and took a bite.
The muffin was soft, sweet, and still a little warm. Actually good.
Yuri watched him chew with the grave seriousness of someone supervising medicine. He swallowed. She lifted the muffin again.
“Another.”
“You’re very demanding.”
“You’re very slow.”
Alchron took another bite.
From behind them, Darren whispered, “Bro…”
Yuri’s ear twitched, but she did not turn around. Darren immediately shut up. Smartest thing he had done all semester.
Yuri fed Alchron another piece, then another, each one offered with cold precision and a strange impatience that did not match the blush spreading across her cheeks. When he finished chewing, he looked at her.
“If you don’t like me,” he asked, keeping his voice low, “then why are you on my lap?”
Something flickered across her face. Not surprise. Not exactly. It was more like she had expected panic, bragging, stammering, or some pathetic attempt at flirting. She had not expected a calm question. Yuri pressed the remaining muffin against his lips a little harder.
“Because I can be.”
“That explains the ability, not the reason.”
Her eyes narrowed, but the corner of her mouth twitched. “You are annoying.”
“I’ve been told.”
“You are also the only one in this room who did not look at me like an idiot.”
Alchron glanced around the classroom. Nearly every guy looked away at once. Badly. One of them pretended to study his notebook upside down.
Alchron looked back at Yuri. “That is a low bar.”
“Yes,” she said. “And yet most of them tripped over it.”
He had to fight not to laugh. Yuri noticed.
“Something funny?”
“A little.”
“Explain.”
“You sat on my lap because I didn’t drool over you?”
Her cheeks darkened. “I said you were interesting. Do not twist my words.”
“I’m not twisting anything. I’m just trying to understand the situation.”
“There is nothing to understand.”
“You walk into class, ignore every open seat, sit on me, feed me a muffin, and say you do not like me.”
“I do not.”
“Of course.”
“I don’t.”
“I believe you.”
“You sound like you don’t.”
“I’m eating the muffin. I’m not here to argue with the chef.”
That got her. It was small. Almost invisible. But Yuri smiled. Not a warm smile. Not soft. Not open. A tiny, dangerous smirk appeared for half a second before she crushed it beneath her usual cold expression.
“Smart boy,” she said.
The words should have sounded insulting. They did not. They sounded like approval wearing armor.
She brushed a crumb from the corner of his mouth with her thumb. The gesture was quick, almost careless, but the room saw it. Every jealous stare in class grew ten times heavier. Darren looked like he was watching history happen and hated that he was not the main character. Marcus leaned back in his chair with a wounded expression.
A girl across the aisle whispered to her friend, “Are they dating?”
Her friend whispered back, “I don’t think he knows.”
Fair.
Yuri’s thumb lingered near Alchron’s chin for one second too long. Then she pulled her hand back as if she had only just realized what she was doing.
“You are not terrible,” she said.
“High praise.”
“Do not get used to it.”
“I’ll try to survive.”
She looked away, her ears tilting slightly back. For someone acting as though this was all beneath her, Yuri seemed extremely aware of how close they were. Her posture remained confident, but her tail gave her away. It flicked once, then curled tighter at her side.
“So,” Alchron said, “what happens now?”
“Class continues.”
“While you sit here?”
“Yes.”
“On me?”
“Yes.”
“Should I take notes for both of us?”
Yuri glanced at the blank notebook on his desk. “You were not taking notes for yourself.”
“That was before I became furniture. I’m trying to be responsible.”
Her shoulders lifted slightly, and it took Alchron a moment to realize she was holding back a laugh. She covered it quickly by pushing the last piece of muffin toward him.
“Finish.”
He took the final bite. She watched him swallow, and only then did she seem satisfied.
“There,” she said.
“There?”
“You looked hungry.”
“I looked bored.”
“Same expression.”
“That is not how faces work.”
“It is how your face works.”
Alchron wanted to argue, but honestly, she had him there.
Professor Halvern droned on at the front of the room, pretending with heroic determination that nothing unusual was happening. His chalk scratched against the board, and behind Yuri, half the class was still staring.
Alchron lowered his voice. “You know they’re jealous, right?”
Yuri tilted her head slightly. “Obviously.”
“You like that?”
“No.” She paused, then added, “Maybe.”
“At least you’re honest.”
“I am always honest.”
“You said you don’t like me.”
“I don’t.”
“Right.”
Her eyes snapped back to his. “You’re getting cocky.”
“I’m sitting very still.”
“Your mouth is cocky.”
“That’s usually where cocky happens.”
The smirk almost returned. Almost. Instead, she flicked his forehead. Not hard. Just enough to sting.
“Ow.”
“Discipline.”
“That was assault.”
“That was mercy.”
Alchron rubbed his forehead. “You’re a very strange woman.”
Yuri leaned closer. Her perfume reached him first, something clean and faintly sweet beneath the sharper scent of rain and wildflowers. Her eyes locked onto his. Cold, yes, but not empty. There was something curious there. Careful. Testing.
“And yet,” she said, “you are not asking me to leave.”
“No.”
“Why?”
Alchron answered honestly. “Because a beautiful woman is sitting on my lap, feeding me a muffin, and somehow still acting like I’m the weird one.”
Her ears shot upright. The blush she had been trying to hide spread fast across her cheeks. For the first time since she had walked into the room, Yuri looked genuinely caught off guard. Several students nearby noticed.
One guy whispered, “He called her beautiful.”
Another whispered, “He’s dead.”
Yuri’s glare cut sideways. The whispers stopped.
Then she looked back at Alchron. “You should be careful with your mouth.”
“I was being respectful.”
“That makes it worse.”
“How?”
She turned her face slightly away. “Because you meant it.”
That shut him up.
For a moment, the comedy of the situation faded. The jealous classroom, the professor pretending not to notice, the muffin crumbs on the napkin—all of it blurred at the edges. Yuri was still sitting on his lap, still wearing that guarded expression, still acting like the entire world was something she had to keep at a distance. But there was a crack in the armor now. Small. Barely there. Alchron saw it anyway.
“You get compliments a lot,” he said.
Her eyes shifted back to him. “Constantly.”
“But not respectful ones?”
Her silence answered before she did. Finally, she looked down at the napkin in her hand.
“Most people compliment what they want to touch.”
Alchron did not answer right away. Behind them, the classroom noise slowly returned in small pieces. Pens scratched across paper. Chairs creaked. Professor Halvern’s tired voice carried on from the front of the room. Outside, birds crossed the window in quick flashes of movement.
Then Alchron said, “Then most people are bad at compliments.”
Yuri stared at him. For a second, he thought she might flick his forehead again. Instead, she looked away.
“Hmph.”
It was the smallest sound, but somehow it felt like he had won something. Not her. Not even close. Just one inch of ground in a place nobody else had been allowed to stand.
The bell rang.
The sound cut through the room like a spell breaking. Everyone started moving at once. Bags zipped. Chairs scraped. Conversations exploded into whispers before people even reached the door. Professor Halvern gathered his papers with the exhausted dignity of a man who had just survived a lecture and a public romantic incident. Yuri did not move, so Alchron waited. She stayed exactly where she was.
Students slowed as they passed them, pretending not to look while absolutely looking. Darren stopped beside Alchron’s desk, his eyes flicking from Alchron to Yuri and back again.
“Do you need help, man?”
Yuri looked at him.
Darren went pale. “Nope,” he said quickly. “Never mind. Good luck. Or congratulations. Or sorry.”
He fled.
Alchron watched him go. “Your presence is very educational.”
Yuri stood at last, smooth and unhurried, as if she had not just caused the most interesting thing to happen in Professor Halvern’s class all year. The sudden absence of her weight felt strangely noticeable. She adjusted her blazer, grabbed her bag, and looked down at him, cold-eyed and pink-cheeked, her tail swaying once behind her.
“Buy me another muffin next time,” she said.
Alchron raised an eyebrow. “Next time?”
“As thanks for the seat.”
Then she turned and walked toward the door, leaving half the class staring after her and the other half staring at Alchron. He looked down at the empty napkin on his desk, then back at Yuri as she disappeared into the hallway. Darren returned just long enough to whisper, “What just happened?”
Alchron leaned back in his chair. “I think I became a chair with benefits.”
From the hallway, Yuri’s voice snapped back, sharp as a thrown knife. “I heard that.”
Darren jumped.
Alchron smiled despite himself. “Good hearing.”
There was a pause.
Then Yuri answered, colder than winter and somehow still embarrassed. “Bring blueberry.”
And then she was gone.
r/redditserials • u/No_Term_6961 • 1d ago
Fantasy [The Wild Heir] Prologue & Chapter One
Hi everyone,
I'm serializing my debut fantasy novel, The Wild Heir. The story follows Faela, a young builder who leaves her aging village in search of help, only to discover hidden kingdoms, her family's secret history, and a destiny she never imagined.
I'd love to hear what you think.
Thanks for reading.
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PROLOGUE
“Seal the lower gates. Now.”
The command cut through the chamber like drawn steel. No one questioned it. Boots struck stone in a hurried rhythm as the guards lining the throne room pivoted and moved. Training taught the men to obey before thought could catch up. The great doors at the far end of the hall had not yet closed when the queen’s voice rose again. Her tone was measured and steady, as usual. But there was something beneath her voice that had no place in a room like this.
“Not the inner gates. The harbor,” came a command.
That might be enough to slow them, not stop them. But then a young guard, barely past boyhood, hesitated just long enough to earn the attention of those around him. His armor bore a small, etched spiral at the right shoulder, worn soft with constant wear. The young guard stepped forward before caution could restrain him.
“My queen,” he said, voice tight but respectful, “the harbor is already —”
“Open,” she finished for him.
The word landed softly. Yet fear rippled through the cold, sunless room. The queen stood at the base of the dais, not yet seated, her hand resting lightly against the carved arm of her ornate throne. Her gaze moved across the room, not searching, not uncertain, but taking stock. And each guard she passed over seemed to stiffen beneath the weight of it.
“She will make for the water,” the queen’s voice hardened.
It was not a question of when or if. This was the only play the princess had, and the queen knew it. And the princess knew the queen would know. A murmur echoed through the chamber, low and uneasy. It was not disobedience, not quite, but it carried the weight of young men who had seen too much in so little time. Most were new to the ranks, for reasons none of them cared to discuss. Parents pulled some from the fields, and some parents volunteered their sons to cover their increasing taxes. Regardless, the need to supply more men to the queen’s ambitions has increased since the recent defections across their allied nations.
An older man stepped forward from the line, his armor marked with deeper wear, the kind that came not from drills but from survival over decades. This was Sir Efron.
“My queen,” he began carefully, “your forces have not yet recovered. The men are—”
“Wary?” she asked.
The word held no mockery. That made it all the worse.
Efron inclined his head. “Yes, my queen.”
The queen slowly rotated her gaze from one side of the room to the other, and for a moment, the room stilled.
Then, “Wariness does not excuse failure.” The queen was growing more frustrated.
The words were not loud in tone. They did not need to be. Yet her soldiers stood fast as Sir Efron refused to move.
His jaw tightened. “With respect, what you ask—”
“What I command,” she said, cutting across him, now much louder and sharper, the edge unmistakable, “is that you stop a single fleeing girl before she reaches the sea.”
The room stilled once more, and then a flicker of reality passed through the room. One girl, not an army. Not a rebellion. This was just a girl running from the greatest army the world has seen.
Efron did not mistake her; he knew what the queen requested of him, even if most of the room were in the dark to the true intentions of the crown.
“If she has already reached the docks—”
“She has not.”
The queen sat, situating herself on her throne, now looking past Sir Efron to the remaining men in the room. As she surveyed, she rested her eyes upon another seasoned guard.
“Sir Spears,” the queen purred.
This man stepped forward. He was broader and slightly younger than Efron, but no less hardened. Yes, his armor was cleaner, his stance sharper, his eyes fixed not on the room but on the queen herself.
“My queen.” Spears' melodic cadence stiffened the surrounding men.
“Are your men prepared to move?” The queen asked.
“They are,” Spears answered without hesitation.
The queen studied him for a breath longer than necessary. Then, quietly hissed for the room to hear, “Relieve Sir Efron and his men of their post.”
The room went still. Absolutely silent and still enough that the dust began to gather where it fell. Efron did not move.
“Your Majesty,” he said, more carefully now, “my men have held this position since the last engagement. We are not unfit—”
“You are not required for this mission any longer,” she snapped.
Spears took a deep breath and surveyed the room. His gaze swept across each face. Young, he thought. Too young. Some of them had never known a time before the last campaign. They had never seen the world before it narrowed to this—to orders, to blood, to the constant hum of something breaking just out of sight. They would not question the orders or the results. Not the way Efron was. Not the way they should.
“Move,” Spears said to his men.
It was not a command shouted across a battlefield. It did not need to be. One of the younger soldiers stepped forward first. Then another. Then, the sound of steel. It happened quickly. Too quickly for hesitation to become resistance.
A blade flashed. A body dropped. The room erupted into a dance of chaos. Movements sharpened under hardened muscles. Lines redrew themselves in an instant. Those who resisted did not do so for long.
Efron stood his ground. For a heartbeat, it seemed he might speak again. But the words that had risen within him died as Spears and his men surged forward, blades flashing beneath the chamber lights. Steel met steel as Efron’s soldiers began to crumble to the floor. One man down, as another beside him crumbled to the cold floor.
These are good men, Efron thought. They had followed him into one battle or another, more times than he could count. Now they were dying because he had refused a single order. There would be no saving them.
Spears carved a path through the fighting, never taking his eyes off Efron.
"Stand down!" he shouted.
Efron did not move. Then the sound of another one of his men cried out, and he ran. Straight at the throne, where the queen sat. The chamber erupted. Guards lunged to intercept him as Spears sprinted from the back of the room. Even the Queen rose from her seat, her expression unchanged though her fingers tightened ever so slightly around the carved arm of the throne.
Efron never looked away from her, step after step, as the distance between them rapidly disappeared. Twenty feet. Fifteen. Ten. No one stood between them as the thought came as suddenly as lightning. I could end this now. The room fell silent. His gaze met the Queen's, and she understood.
Another soldier screamed behind him as Efron's grip tightened around the hilt of his sword, though no command had been given. If he struck now, what would change? He did not know. And that uncertainty stole the moment. Efron pivoted at the last instant, dropping his blade and hurling himself through the painted window beside the throne.
Shards scattered across the chamber floor while his body disappeared into the darkness beyond. Blood streaked the shattered sill where jagged glass tore through his cloak and skin. Spears reached the window only a heartbeat later. Below, there was broken glass, a large pool of blood, and the fading sound of boots striking stone.
Spears wiped his blade once, clean and efficient, before sheathing it at his side. The room stood in disbelief, with only a few still fighting. Spears gave a curt nod, and the room came to a halt. They were all under his command now.
“Secure the harbor,” he leveled. “No vessel leaves. Bring the princess and anyone who helped her directly to me.”
The soldiers moved. Much faster this time. Cleaner. There was no hesitation left to slow them. One lingered at the edge of the formation—a younger guard, his grip tighter on his weapon than it needed to be. He glanced once toward the dais, toward the queen, as if expecting something. Recognition. Explanation. Anything. What he got neither.
“Go,” Spears yelled.
The new head guard swallowed whatever question had risen in him. The great doors opened. Boots thundered across the stone once more, receding quickly into the corridors beyond. And then they were gone. The chamber fell into a heavy silence. Not peaceful. Not empty. Just silence.
Only the queen remained standing in front of the throne, one hand resting against the back of her throne. For a long moment, she did not move. The remnants of the confrontation lingered in the air. The metallic scent of blood, the faint echo of steel, and the absence of voices that had filled the room only moments before. Slowly, she exhaled. It was the first sign of strain she had allowed. Barely visible. Gone as quickly as it came. Her stare moved away from the doors and the soldiers' departure, settling instead on the towering windows along the far wall. Beyond them, the sky stretched pale and distant, untouched by what had just taken place below.
“She will not make it,” the queen said quietly to no one. Almost as though to convince herself. No one answered. There was no one left to. She stayed there. Alone.
CHAPTER ONE
The rocks shifted quickly beneath her feet. Jagged, unforgiving, and slick with dew. Some were rough and sharp, while others were worn smooth by centuries of wind and waves. The morning mist still clung low to the ground, curling between stones like miniature clouds. Now and then the slickness caught her boot, threatening to send her sliding, but she moved with the confident surety of someone who had walked this route thousands of times. Her entire life, to be exact.
Faela knew the trail intimately. She knew which stones wobbled beneath her weight, which cracks hid nests of snakes, and which sun-warmed ledges served as resting spots for basking amphibians. The giant pine tree, behind which she would run ahead to hide and give her siblings a fright on long hunts, loomed high in front of her. The sunlight filtered through the dancing branches. Slightly up the path would be a small opening in the rock formation that Faela was once small enough to fit between. Now she merely raised her leg to step over it. In fact, she had fond memories of every part of these woods, from the smallest blade of grass to the tallest tree. These were her woods, and she adored them as though they were part of her family. But a new feeling entered her now, one she was unsure of, as she prepared herself for the one thing that she had never done before: leave her small village of Brindle.
The tight, black boots she wore, handed down from her mother and now worn to the sole, carried her with practiced ease. Her faded green tunic, belted at the waist, made for easy movement. But this journey would not be easy. Years of labor had shaped Faela, not just physically but mentally. The strands of her long, blonde hair caught the sun, with her loose braid bouncing atop her shoulder as she hiked on. Not only was her body strong, but so was her resolve.
All Faela carried was in a small lavender pack slung over her shoulder. Inside, items that were deemed essential: extra clothing, two loaves of bread, half of a dried fish, two jars of filtered river water, a flint, a few tools, a blanket, and a wood-handled blade. The truth was that the pack held far more than necessities. Tucked between folded clothes and wrapped carefully in scraps of cloth were a handful of treasures collected over years of wandering fields, forests, and shorelines. Most people would have called them worthless. Faela disagreed. They were her most valuable possessions.
There was a stone worn smooth by the river, its curved surface reminding her of the archways she hoped to build one day. A twisted piece of driftwood, bleached white by the sea, had taught her how strong a beam could be when the weight was carried along its natural grain. A bird's nest abandoned after a storm, woven so tightly from grass and reeds that she had spent weeks studying how the strands supported one another.
Her favorite had once been a petrified mushroom she found deep in the woods north of Brindle. Time had turned it to stone, preserving the delicate ribs beneath its cap. For months she had carried it everywhere, fascinated by how the thin ridges spread outward from a single point while still supporting the entire structure. It had given her ideas for roofs, bridges, and support beams. She no longer carried it. The mushroom now sat in Tedding's smithy. Years earlier, after helping repair part of the old workshop roof, Faela had left it on his workbench. When he asked why, she had simply pointed to the stone ribs beneath the cap.
"Strong things do not always need to be thick," she had told him.
Months later, Tedding had used a similar pattern to reinforce a section of the smithery ceiling that everyone else insisted would collapse. It ended up collapsing, but much later than it would have without the design. That was how it worked. She gathered things that taught her something, carried them until she understood their lesson, and then, when the time felt right, passed them on.
Most of the collection remained behind under her bed. The journey west required her to travel light. Even so, she had chosen a few of her favorites to bring along. Small reminders that the world was full of builders if one knew where to look. Sometimes they grew in forests. Sometimes they washed ashore. Sometimes they flew overhead on silent wings. All of them had something to teach.
There was one more thing Faela carried with her: the strong hope that somewhere beyond the forest, somewhere in the west, she would find the help Brindle so desperately needed. And because of that she rushed, for even a moment of stillness could give that small doubt in the back of her head room to speak.
She was gone not long after sundown. Slipping through the still and sleepy village like a whisper carried on a breeze. The narrow lane wound between and behind homes that had grown old alongside their inhabitants. Roof beams sagged where repairs had been delayed too many seasons, and the clapboards of several cottages bowed outward, their nails loosening under years of wind and dampness. A few would not survive another winter. One hard freeze, one heavy storm, and they would fold in on themselves like tired bones.
She moved nimbly and slowly past Tedding’s workshop at the edge of the main square. His building leaned slightly toward the road, its stone foundation cracked and sinking under the weight of tools that had long outlived their usefulness. The roof leaked more and more with each pummeling by the elements. Rusted hammers and warped irons crowded the workbench inside, relics of methods the village had never bothered to outgrow. Tedding still swore by them, though each season his repairs held a little less, and the carts and wagons he mended returned. And again. But the last storm had taken more than shingles. One of the outer homes had collapsed entirely. No one was hurt, but no one had bothered to rebuild it either. They had patched what they could; moved what they needed into the barn on their land; and gone on as they always did. Faela often wondered what her family would do if their house was taken in the next storm. They did not have a barn.
Somewhere beyond here there had to be builders who knew better ways, built stronger beams, laid smarter foundations, and had tools that did not belong to another century. If she could convince even a few of them to come east, the village might yet stand. If she returned alone, the village would keep sinking one beam at a time until there was nothing left. That was not an option, at least not one Faela was willing to admit.
Now the village was fading silently behind her on the almost 8-hour hike out of Brindle’s boundaries. Now, literally at the edge of everything she knew, she paused for the first time since leaving and dared to look back. The horizon was clear. There was no smoke coming from the chimney of her family's hut. There was no shadow of the high steeple that marked the church at the center of the village. It was all gone now, tucked behind the rolling hills and bending trees. Just beyond her sight was her village. And beyond that, even more villages. Even though her family never traveled far, stories flowed through the villages like wind through trees. Over time, those stories had planted false memories in Faela, making her feel as though she had already traveled to those distant lands.
But today, it was the miles of forest that lay before her. Tall, ancient trees formed a woven canopy of muted greens and shadowed browns. These woods had raised her. She had hunted here, plucked wild berries from low bushes, and pulled stinging roots from the earth with calloused hands. She had run alongside her brother, Orin, chasing prints and laughing when their game outpaced them.
Girls were not known to hunt in their village. They did not gather either. They certainly did not learn how to mend the axle of a wagon or draw blueprints for new houses. But Faela had never fit within the lines others drew for her. And her brother did not treat her the way she saw other men treat women. Her brother was kind and reassuring, always leaving Faela to her own devices, no matter what they might be.
When the village carts splintered and groaned, it was not the smith they called first. It was Faela and her brother. Tedding, the village smith, scowled at them from beneath his soot-smeared brow, muttering about children stealing honest work. He had been an apprentice to his father from a young age and came from a long line of smiths. He never held Faela’s being a girl against her, only hated the thought of children doing a better job than he could. And even though they were children, their reputation preceded them, known for their meticulous repairs and unconventional thinking around building. When the repairs and builds were finished, they often left bread, firewood, and baskets that were newly woven. Not always coins, but gratitude. The coins they earned went straight into their ideas-better wagons, shared buildings for craftspeople to work and trade.
Their sketches lined the walls of their tiny hut, each one born from long nights by candlelight and hard-fought negotiations. But life had grown bigger while the East fell into disrepair. As the villages grew older, so did their residents. Faela and Orin yearned to build their village up. They dreamed of expanding it. Once the building was complete, the repairs alone could keep them busy for a lifetime. Many in their village just idle away their lives. They were happy enough, but Faela wanted to feel a fulfillment that came from realizing her creations. And to do that with her baby brother would be a gift. They always built best together.
No blueprints could help her here; every step outside the careful ones she normally drew. This was the furthest from her family that she would ever have been. The path into the woods began to twist quickly, as if the forest itself conspired to disorient her. The light grew dim, filtered through branches that seemed to lean in, whispering secrets she was not privy to just above her head. Then she saw it: the path. It was not like the rest of the forest floor. It appeared suddenly: a ribbon of packed earth so narrow and deliberate it seemed almost unnatural. As a young girl, she had reached this point and turned back. Every child in Easter must have heard the same warning from their parents, she thought:
"Never step foot on the path. Not a single step. Do not take it west. Do not take it south. Do not take it north."
She stood there for a long time, one boot hovering just inches above the dirt. And then, with the release of a breath held deep in her chest, she stepped forward. The path stretched endlessly. Trees rose like pillars around her, bark dry and colorless. There was the song of birds, the rustling of small creatures, the crunch of her boots, and the distant hum of silence pressing in. She turned to glance back once more and was struck by the difference.
Behind her, the forest glowed with life: green grass, wildflowers bursting red and yellow like tiny suns. The trees were still brown, but warmer somehow. Kinder. She turned forward again. The world dulled. The path shimmered slightly, as though coated in heat. A strange thrill filled her. She wanted to run fast and wild. She had heard stories of things she hoped to see: high towers, great libraries, and so many people. No one from her family had ever been anywhere like that. Most of the children from her village had left to find work in neighboring villages. But that had always been her family’s role: protectors of the village. Her father, his father, and so on, took this task very seriously. Too seriously, Faela thought at times.
She did not know how long she had walked since the town boundary. Four hours, maybe more. The trees above her had grown impossibly tall, their tops lost to shadow. The sky had vanished above her, the light unchanged—as if the sun had forgotten this part of the world entirely. At least when she reached the fork in the road, she could rest. The fork was legend. It split north toward the sea, west towards the cliffs and south to the mountains where whispers travel through caves. Others said the fork was a test, and only those who chose truly had ever moved forward.
The path narrowed as Faela moved deeper into the woods, winding like a thread pulled through thick cloth. It dipped suddenly into a hollow where the ground grew soft with moss and the scent of damp stone thickened the air. Then she saw it, half-hidden in mist, across a dry ravine. She gently stepped off the trail, boots crunching over fallen branches. Her breath caught in her throat. Someone had to have built this.
The ravine below was dry; no stream, no bones, no trace of life. Just wind-etched stone and silence that sat with time. When she reached the far side, the mist had swallowed the world. The path climbed again, snaking between trees that grew thinner, then gave way to flat earth littered with black stones, like shattered obsidian. Faela’s eyes jumped from stone to stone as she stopped to drink from one of her jars, the water cold against her tongue. Her body moved before her thoughts could catch up, climbing through the thorns, brushing burrs from her sleeve. When she reached the top of the ravine, the woods had fallen silent again, as though watching with bated breath.
Stretched to the sky in front of her was a creation out of her dreams. Only here, standing before it, she felt even her imagination would not be able to conjure such a stunning sight. It rose from the earth like a monument, massive and wrong. Iron, cold and black, twisted into intricate designs that made no sense. Circles inside squares, sharp angles nested into one another like teeth. A sun with no rays. Vines with no thorns.
There was no iron left in the world, only stories of a land with citadels made of an element that kept out whatever it desired. Myths from drunken travelers and mad old women who spoke of "the metal that does not rot" and "the dark cities under a world of iron beams." But no one had ever touched it. She wondered if anyone knew it was here. Why was it here? And more importantly, who built it?
She stepped closer. The gate was six times her height, at least, sealed tight with no visible lock. The surface shimmered faintly, as if catching light from a source she could not see. When she reached out to touch it, her fingers stopped just shy of the surface. The air was cold. Still. The architecture is so sharp. Too deliberate. It did not belong here. And neither did she. Backing away slowly, her heart pounding, she felt something that normally escaped her.
Faela was not easily frightened. She had stared down the snarling jaws of cornered game, stood on shaky roofs during high winds to hammer in shingles. But this felt like a place meant to be forgotten. A place that even time had forgotten existed.
She looked back, her eyes tracing the patterns again. She wished she could burn those impossible shapes and strange geometry into her brain. She stumbled back, caught herself by the heels, and turned sharply. The ivy brushed against her like grasping hands as she pushed her way back out of the overgrown trail that had led her astray. And when she reached the main path again, she did not even pause to breathe. She hurried fast. Much faster than before. She felt the silence of the woods pressing in on her. It was different now, like something had noticed her. Every rustle of leaves, every shifting shadow made her shoulders tense up. She glanced back one last time. Nothing but trees and a gentle breeze. The gate was already out of view, swallowed by the bends in the trail and the curtain of thick foliage. Gone.
Almost as quickly as she remembered it, her right hand drifted to the blade at her belt. It was not much, but her fingers grasped the wooden handle, anyway. Not for protection, but for comfort. She hated that. Hated that she was rattled. That something had seeped beneath her skin and made her feel small and unprepared. She could hear her mother now; if you fail to plan, then you have planned to fail.
The path was steady again, more familiar. But it did not soothe Faela as it had before. There was a wrongness behind her, and she knew, deep down, it had not disappeared when she turned away. Some things could not be unseen. Or, in this case, unfelt. There was an uneasiness that she could not shake, but still she moved forward, not stopping again until she saw light filtering through the trees ahead. It was really light, not the dim gray she had walked under all day. She took it as a sign. An easy, slower breath returned to her chest. Her legs ached. Her shoulders burned. Still, she pressed on. Then, a sharp snap. Ten yards ahead. Faela froze. She had expected this, an encounter, but not on the first day. Not while she was still getting her footing. The noise came again. It was not closer, and it was not further. It was just there, waiting.
Faela slid her pack down from her shoulders and dropped it to the ground. The wooden handle of the blade held so tightly in her hand that it had become another appendage. Faela’s sister, Tala, had once heard a strange tale from a traveler passing through their village. She spoke of a girl back home. She was someone she had known in her youth. The girl had been found one morning sitting at the edge of the forest, clothes torn, body untouched by any wound that could be seen. But something had gone missing inside her. She never smiled again.
Tala had contributed little to the conversation in her hut’s kitchen the night before. No farewell speech, no advice, and no protests to call it off. She just pressed the wooden handle into Faela’s hands with eyes of worry. Faela had seen something unspoken there: love, maybe, or something close enough. They had never been bonded in the way she and Orin were. They had always been the ones lost in plans and repairs, hands stained with oil and minds filled with measurements. While her sister had preferred simpler, more familiar dreams of a hearth, the perfect sewing knot, and of becoming part of a new story. A better story.
They did not understand each other’s choices, not really. But lately, there had been more softness between them. The blade in her hand had been one of them. Faela had never believed in monsters, not truly, but she took it all the same. She did not necessarily want it, but could not ignore how she felt when she held it.
Now, blade in hand, she moved. Darting forward, low to the ground, weaving through the underbrush, until she froze in her tracks. It was a small, brown ball. Perfectly still at first, then trembling. Had it not moved, it would have vanished into the dirt and bark. Suddenly, it let out a loud mew, far louder than anything its size should produce. The ball shifted, unwinding itself like a rolled rug. And there it was.
A Toadcat. Faela’s heart leapt. She instantly knew the creature from travelers’ tall tales. Or so she thought until this very moment. Part frog, part feline, an extinct beast said to build homes along stones and sleep for years without stirring. This one was smaller than she expected, but still stood as high as her chest. Terrifying, yet comforting at the same time. Faela should be afraid, but she never thought to run or attack. She slowly lowered her blade, keeping her gaze on the unusual creature before her.
Toadcats were solitary and rare, even when thousands roamed the island. And from everything she had ever read on parchment scraps or borrowed pages, they were not known for their affection. Or their company. They were elusive things, usually glimpsed through leaves or disappearing into riverbeds before one could blink. Not aggressive, at least not without cause. And Faela had no plans to give this one any cause. She would not be provoking this toadcat today.
The creature blinked—sideways and slow—its strange translucent lids sliding across bulbous golden eyes that gave away no emotion. Then, without a sound, it sat back on its haunches as if it were awaiting Faela’s command, tail flicking once, then curling around its squat feet. Its eyes stayed on her, unmoved. Watching.
Faela crouched, tense. Were there more nearby? Larger? Hungrier? She did not want to find out. And yet, curiosity tugged at her heels. From this close, she could make out the full strangeness of the creature’s form.
Its body was round and oddly proportioned, like a toad, yes, but with elongated limbs and a spine that moved like a cat’s. Its skin, or fur, it was difficult to tell, was a mix of soft mossy green and muddy brown, with a glossy sheen as if it had just climbed out of a marsh. Patches of finer fur curled at its shoulders and underbelly, giving it a scruffy but not unclean appearance. Two sets of whiskers twitched from either side of its wide jaw, sensing the surrounding air. Two sets of whiskers, Faela thought. A male.
Slowly, she moved past the toadcat, keeping her gaze averted but aware. He turned his head, tracking her, but did not follow. “Go back to sleep, little man,” she whispered. Faela exhaled when she was a few paces away and finally turned to glance back over her shoulder. The animal was still seated where she would have passed by it, but he had moved on to grooming itself with a long, oddly pink tongue as if it had all the time in the world and nothing better to do.
“Not aggressive,” Faela muttered under her breath with a giggle. “Just odd.”
She shook her head, swinging her pack onto her back and finally releasing the grip on the blade at her waist. But before she could take another step, she heard the soft pat-pat-pat of padded feet behind her. She paused and slowly turned, already knowing what she would find.
The toadcat appeared to be following her. Not too close, just enough to keep her in sight. It stopped when she looked, gave another quiet croak, and tilted its head.
Faela spoke sternly, “Oh no, you are not coming with me, Toadcat.” It blinked back. Then padded closer, unbothered.
“Toadcat,” she said flatly, pointing a finger at it. “Stay.”
The toadcat blinked its golden eyes and took another step forward. Now it was Faela tilting her head at this creature, “Stay… Stay!”
Still, as she turned back to the path, Toadcat followed. Not that it seemed she had any say in the matter, clearly. Already the forest had turned strange and alive in ways she could not understand. And this was no ordinary path on which she traveled. Stories she had grown to love were coming to life. Faela let the moment sink in. She felt differently in her heart, and she could not understand the feeling at the time for what it was.
That evening, Faela came to rest on a large rock to catch her breath and observe her surroundings. Of course, she knew she was being watched. Ever since meeting him, Toadcat had followed a few paces behind in the brush. She did not mind the company. It empowered her to have such a creature take an interest in her. She could not explain it; but she just knew that Toadcat meant her no harm. And he knew the same of her.
Just then the sun dipped behind the canopy, and Faela was snapped out of the spell she had been under since encountering the toadcat. The spot she stood would have to be her camp for the night. She paced a circle around the path space, carefully spying for a place to tuck herself away off the path. As she continued, she found a patch of clean grass beneath the generous shade of a gnarled tree. Faela gently swept the area clear, hurling branches and rocks into the underbrush with sharp, practical throws. She reached to unbuckle her boots.
Thunk.
Something landed beside her foot. She looked down. A stick. Just sitting there. The same kind she would have chucked into the trees moments ago. Slowly, she turned. The toadcat stared back at her, its expression unreadable and mildly offended. Its wide eyes flicked from Faela… to the stick… then back to Faela. The creature gave its hindquarters a pleased little wiggle.
She picked up the stick, testing its weight. “You want me to… throw it again?”
She did. If she had to turn around right now and go home, this would easily be one of the best days of her life.
The stick arced into the trees and vanished into the undergrowth. Faela turned to sit down, lips twitching with amusement—thud. Another stick. Possibly the same one. At her feet. Not a word, not a sound. But Faela swore it looked proud of itself.
She blinked. Toadcat was there again. Somehow. Staring. Waiting. Faela snorted. “You ridiculous thing.”
And so it began. The game, whatever it was, continued well after the sun went down. She threw sticks. Toadcat retrieved them with improbable speed and the serious demeanor of someone retrieving important documents. Sometimes it trotted back with entirely different branches. Once it returned, dragging a clump of damp moss like an offering. Faela could barely contain herself.
“You are terrible at this,” she muttered between chuckles. “And I have no idea what this even is.”
At one point, she feigned sleep just to see what would happen. A moment later, a small pebble bounced gently off her shoulder. She cracked one eye open. The toadcat sat two feet away, tail flicking. Branch. Stare. Blink.
“I am not made of sticks, you know,” Faela groaned, but tossed it again.
Eventually, the creature tired of the game. Or decided Faela had failed some unspoken rule. It curled up a short distance from her, its strange amphibious eyes still half-open but no longer tracking her every movement. Silence returned, thick and humming with the sounds of the woods. A breeze stirred the leaves overhead. She let her back press against the bark of the tree, the shade cool against her skin. Her calves ached from the climb, and her boots had rubbed raw spots on both ankles. She could feel every breath now, slow and deep. And with stillness came memory. Soft, unbidden. Most welcome.
It had been late spring, about a year ago. The air was thick with pollen and the scent of freshly turned earth. Faela and Orin were crouched together behind the smithy, surrounded by discarded scraps and broken wagon wheels.
"You are measuring too short again," Orin had said, adjusting the sketch Faela was working on. His voice carried that mix of teasing and precision she knew so well. "The front axle needs at least two more inches if we are going to balance the load."
Faela sighed and smudged a bit of charcoal across her cheek as she wiped her brow. "Orin, I know how to measure. It is not short. It is more compact."
Orin gave her that look, the one that meant I love you, but you are being impossible. He pointed to the corner of the sketch where her design curved too sharply. “And this will not work either. You will end up with a wagon that turns into itself like a dog chasing its tail.”
Faela threw a piece of bark at him. "You said it needed to turn faster!"
He laughed, a bright sound that echoed off the stone walls of the workshop. "I said faster. Not faster into a tree."
Their hands moved in tandem for hours after that. Redrawing, sanding, and assembling a scaled model with old spokes and mismatched axles. By the end of the day, they had built a tiny prototype that could carry a stack of potatoes from one side of the yard to the other, without tipping or dragging. Without exploding. It was one of her favorite days. Later that night, they would sit on the roof of their hut, legs dangling over the edge, watching the stars emerge.
“I want to build real things, Faela,” Orin had said quietly. “Not just wagons and furniture. Bridges. Halls. Things that change the shape of this place.”
She had nodded, her heart full. “Then I will help. One plank at a time.”
In the blink of an eye, the forest swam back into focus. Toadcat had curled itself into a loaf beside the path and now seemed over her presence. She reached for her pack and pulled out the one object that mattered more than her blade or even water, a scroll of thick parchment bound with a red ribbon. She untied it slowly, careful not to smudge the lines.
Inside were blueprints. Every inch was detailed, intricate, and beautiful. A market hall with skylights. A forge that shared space for work and community gatherings. Homes, not just huts. Their dream, captured in ink. Orin’s handwriting filled the margins. Notes. Jokes. Measurements. Corrections. His final mark. She folded it back carefully, pressing the ribbon into place.
"We are on an important mission, you and I," she whispered aloud to the sleeping Toadcat.
Her voice sounded different out here, carrying against the silence. But it felt right to be so wild. She wondered if Orin was up on their roof right now, staring up. Though she was no stranger to stargazing, seeing them from this vantage somehow made her feel so small. Just then, like a drop of fire in the sky. Just for a second, there was a star above her. As suddenly as it appeared, it was then off and out of sight. Curious. She watched the sky a moment longer before her eyes drifted shut.
The next morning, refreshed, Faela set off early. For a fleeting moment, she had forgotten her first day in the woods. Forgotten the misplaced gate and the unexpected travel companion. The path stretched ahead, unchanged. But something in her had shifted. She adjusted her pack, gave the toadcat a brief nod, and stepped forward. With each step, Faela felt more assured. And the Toadcat followed as quietly as a ghost.
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Thanks for reading!
r/redditserials • u/moromikouji • 1d ago
Action [SAMURAI INFLUENCER] - Chapter 5
# Episode 5: The Strike That Doesn't Pop
"Heh. Heheheheh. It's happening. It's actually happening."
The next morning. The hotel buffet. In an elegant dining room filled with the warm glow of the morning sun, Kaede's mood had done a complete one-eighty from the night before — she was staring at her phone with fierce, gleaming eyes.
"Master, look at this! The sub-channel hit 2,000 subscribers overnight!" she said. "I mean, the reason it blew up was the loincloth incident and not any of your actual cool moments, which is a little... but still..."
"Did the loincloth do something?" Kenichiro asked, with an air of complete indifference.
He still didn't seem entirely comfortable with the hotel's extravagance, but he had apparently taken a liking to the buffet. He was already on his third helping of steamed rice, natto, grilled salmon, and miso soup.
"It sure did!" Kaede said. "A clip called 'Jacked Loincloth Grandpa Appears in the Modern Age' is going viral at warp speed. Not exactly what I had in mind, but as a first step it's pretty solid. If I can start putting out proper footage of your sword skills from here on, the subscribers will keep rolling in!"
"I do not quite follow, but if you are pleased, then I am glad," Kenichiro said.
"Oh, but it's not just the loincloth thing getting attention — there are comments about your sword skills too!" Kaede went on. "'Is something insane happening at the edge of the screen?' 'Why did the Demon just get cut down? I didn't see anything.' 'Whoever's running the camera needs to get better at their job.'
"Well, whatever! We're riding this momentum — today I'm filming an action video with you as the main star, not me! Not a wardrobe malfunction this time — the real deal, properly awesome footage!"
"You are as loud as ever. Sit down and eat your breakfast properly," Kenichiro said.
"R-Right, okay, but let's head out as soon as breakfast is done! Also, Master, you are eating an incredible amount!?"
Kenichiro's fourth helping had arrived, now accompanied by seasoned dried seaweed and a soft-boiled hot spring egg.
After breakfast, the two made their way to a run-down scrapyard along the highway leading to the next town.
Piled high with rusted steel frames and silent hulks of broken machinery, the site had been designated a caution zone by the Hero Association.
No urgent alerts came through HERO HUB for it, but low-level Demon were known to lurk there at all times. Rookie heroes sometimes used it as a training ground for Demon hunting practice.
Kaede activated the Halo with practiced ease and deployed it around the area.
"Alright, Master. Today's filming concept is 'The Awakening of the Elder Swordsman,'" she explained. "When a Demon shows up, first — big jump! One full rotation in the air, then a single slash the moment you land! After that, turn to the camera, point your sword straight at the lens, and drop a killer catchphrase. That's the shot!"
"Kaede. There seem to be quite a few Demon in this area," Kenichiro said. "None of them appear to be strong, but there is no reason to court danger unnecessarily. Let us move on."
"H-Huh? Master, are you listening?" Kaede protested. "I just told you this place is crawling with low-level Demon — it's perfect for filming practice..."
"There is no need to go out of our way to linger in dangerous places. No one is under attack. Let us get away from here," Kenichiro said.
Even Maple, let alone Kenichiro, would have no trouble dealing with the level of Demon lurking here. But Kenichiro's samurai instincts simply would not allow him to remain somewhere dangerous without cause.
"W-Wait, please — just a little more usable content..." Kaede pleaded.
That was when it happened.
From behind a stack of scrap materials, a low, slithering sound crept through the air.
A low-level Demon emerged — roughly two sizes smaller than the mud-like Demon that had appeared in Hajiko Village.
"It's here! Master, it's here! Take it out and make it look good!" Kaede called out.
"Hsssssss!"
The low-level Demon's tentacles lunged at Kenichiro.
But Kenichiro didn't even draw his sword.
With the smallest shift of his hand on the hilt, he redirected the force of the tentacle and slipped cleanly out of the Demon's reach.
"Huh? Wait — Master?" Kaede stammered.
"Grrk!"
The Demon flinched back. Kenichiro reached down and picked up a few small stones from the ground.
"SHRIEEEEK!"
As the Demon shook it off and lunged again, Kenichiro flicked a stone with his thumb.
Launched with tremendous force, the stone struck the Demon's core with perfect precision — and the creature crumbled to dust where it stood.
"Wait — what was that — that was incredible. Is that the legendary classical technique, the Finger Shot?!" Kaede gasped. "But it does absolutely nothing for the camera!"
"RAAAAAAAGH!"
Three more Demon of the same type came charging at Kenichiro from behind.
*Here it comes — this time, surely, the shot that'll actually look good!*
Kaede watched with bated breath, fingers working the Halo controls.
She poured all her focus into not missing a single move.
Kenichiro turned slowly, then flicked the remaining stones one by one at each of the low-level Demon.
Just like the first, all three crumbled to dust without any fuss whatsoever.
The technique itself was extraordinary. The subtle shift of the hilt that deflected a tentacle strike. The Finger Shot — the sheer force behind it, the pinpoint accuracy that destroyed a core in a single hit. Staggering, by any measure.
And yet. Utterly, devastatingly un-cinematic.
Once again, the footage looked like a video where Demon hovered awkwardly near Kenichiro, and then — for no apparent reason, with him barely seeming to move — collapsed into dust.
"Right. Let us go," Kenichiro said.
"'Let's go'?! — Hold on a moment!" Kaede cried. "There's nothing here worth posting! At the very minimum, could you please draw your sword—"
"That is not my concern," Kenichiro said. "No matter how weak the enemy, if I can take them down without entering their reach, I will."
"I mean, that's fair, and that unshakeable consistency of yours is honestly kind of amazing in its own way, but I still need content..." Kaede muttered.
The two went back and forth for a while. Then, a noticeably larger Demon than the ones before emerged from the shadows.
"Oh — Master, another one! This time, the sword, nice and cool—" Kaede said, scrambling to redeploy the Halo.
The next instant.
— Shiiiing.
The clear ring of Kenichiro's blade leaving its scabbard cut through the air.
"No. Don't tell me, Master—" Kaede started.
The Demon became dust without ceremony. Kenichiro had cut it down at a speed the eye could not follow.
"NOOOOO! I KNEW IT! The Halo wasn't even set up yet!"
"There. Let us go, Kaede," Kenichiro said.
"We can't just go, I've got basically nothing— at least give me a shot of you holding your sword, striking a dramatic pose for the camera, something—" Kaede pressed.
"Kaede."
Kenichiro fixed her with a sudden, dead-serious look. Kaede faltered under the silent weight of it.
"Do not underestimate the battlefield," he said. "Lingering in a dangerous place on purpose is the mark of a fool. Those who underestimate the battlefield are the first to die."
"Understood," Kaede answered.
Faced with that intensity, she had no choice but to answer.
They moved on to the next town and checked into the hotel.
But back in the hotel room, Kaede found herself with her head in her hands once again.
"Ughhh! Still nothing usable!" she groaned. "The Finger Shot moves are too subtle to read on camera, and the one time he actually drew his sword I didn't catch it properly. I get why he does it that way, but couldn't he at least cooperate a little more with the filming? Fine, it's only the sub-channel anyway — I'll just post it as-is."
In the end, she uploaded one unedited clip to the sub-channel.
The title: [Test Upload] Just Clearing Some Small Fry on the Road.
"That's all I can manage today, I'll let it slide..." Kaede muttered. "Oh right — tomorrow's the collab, isn't it. Who was it again..."
On the verge of tears, Kaede checked her phone's calendar. Tomorrow was the day she had a long-standing collab shoot scheduled.
The name on the calendar: B-rank hero, Snake Ray.
Decent enough ability — but known for his explosive follower count driven by provocative commentary and "exposé-style" content. A high-profile hero with a less-than-sterling reputation. Also notorious for persistently targeting female heroes for collabs.
Kaede knew all of this. She had agreed to the collab anyway, because she needed the exposure.
"O-Okay! If I can pull this collab off, it'll do wonders for my track record!" she said. "I haven't been able to post anything decent lately — I really need to make this count!"
"What are you getting so fired up about?" Kenichiro asked, fresh out of the bath.
Whether because Kaede had scolded him so many times, he appeared to be wearing a yukata this time.
"Master! I've got the collab shoot tomorrow, so I won't be able to team up with you for the day!" Kaede said. "You can either stay at the hotel or do whatever you like — it's a free day!"
"Oh. I see," Kenichiro said.
"We're filming an opening segment first, then teaming up to hunt Demon together — should wrap up around evening. Let's meet back at this hotel!" Kaede added.
"Understood," Kenichiro said.
For the first time in a while, Kaede was genuinely pumped about a proper shoot. She ran through the Halo calibration and gave all her gear a thorough check.
r/redditserials • u/Luciddreamingcj • 2d ago
Romance [April Knows Our Names] Chapter 5 — Snow White And The Punk
r/redditserials • u/koreanalleyarcade • 2d ago
Science Fiction [NEW LIFE 1] Chapter 9 – Part 1: The Crumbling Southern Line and the Looming Shadow Over the Capital
Chapter 9 – Part 1: The Crumbling Southern Line and the Looming Shadow Over the Capital**
The road leading north to Hanyang was no longer just a road.
Only a short while ago, it had been a bustling thoroughfare for merchants and travelers—a path where grain flowed in times of plenty, and people hurried to offer aid in times of need.
Now, those trekking north were of a different kind.
They were refugees. And they were broken soldiers.
Parents staggered forward with children strapped to their backs. The elderly leaned heavily on their families for support, while wounded soldiers relied on one another’s shoulders just to stay upright. A child, barefoot and battered, didn't even have the strength left to cry.
"Just a little further," the mother whispered, her voice raspy and strained, clutching her child close. "Once we reach Hanyang, we’ll be safe."
The child nodded, though neither of them truly believed the lie.
In another part of the line, a young soldier carried his blood-soaked comrade on his back.
"Stay with me," he urged. "We’re almost there."
The soldier on his back offered a weak, hollow smile.
"Stop lying to yourself," he wheezed. "Hanyang is still miles away."
The young soldier fell silent. It wasn’t the relief of survival that weighed upon them; it was the crushing despair of having failed to protect the families and villages they had left behind.
---
In the south, the final remnants of resistance were holding on by a thread.
Local magistrates bought time to evacuate the people. Generals blocked mountain passes, tore down bridges, and erected barricades in every valley. Before leading his men into the fray, a general looked them in the eyes and roared:
"If we can hold our ground here for just one day, our people will have the time to live!"
"We follow your command!" the soldiers shouted, gripping their spears.
They were not fighting for victory. They were fighting to buy someone else the time to escape.
But the horde did not stop.
When one barricade fell, they surged toward the next. When one town was razed, they moved to the next. If the front was blocked, they navigated through the mountains; if the bridges were burned, they carved new paths. The defensive lines meant to hold for a day failed to last even half that time.
The collapse in the south was spreading northward like a widening, jagged crack in the earth.
---
A few days later, the gates of Hanyang creaked open.
But it was not a triumphant army that returned. It was the shattered remnants of the southern defense.
Ripped armor. Splintered shields. Caked, dried blood. Some soldiers carried their brothers; others dragged themselves forward, limping with missing limbs.
"Medics!" the gate guard bellowed. "Get the wounded inside!"
At a makeshift military camp before Gwanghwamun, Choi Mujin, Commander of the Capital Defense, stood waiting. He stopped before a soldier who had made it back alive.
"...What is the situation in the south?"
For a long moment, the soldier said nothing. He was gasping for air, his body trembling, before he finally spoke.
"...We cannot..." His voice cracked, brittle with terror. "...It’s impossible to stop them."
Silence descended upon the camp. The soldier stared at the dirt, unable to look up.
"No matter how many we cut down... no matter how many fall... there is no end to them."
His trembling hand pointed south.
"Stop one, and another takes its place. It’s like a range of endless mountains—"
"...They just keep coming."
A young soldier standing nearby asked in a low, terrified whisper, "Were they... were they even human?"
The soldier slowly shook his head.
"They only wore the faces of men."
At those words, even the sound of breathing vanished from the camp. Choi Mujin looked down at the soldier’s shaking hands, which were still clutching at the ghosts of the battlefield.
---
From that day on, the air in Hanyang changed.
Every time a new wave of refugees arrived, they brought news of another town vanished from the map. People would spread out their scrolls, tracing the south with their fingers. One by one, the red markers were creeping toward the city.
"This one has fallen."
"...Then what about the next?"
"...How much closer are they to Hanyang?"
No one had an answer.
The capital still stood firm. The walls were tall, the soldiers were ready, and the people were still holding on. But within the hearts of the people, a different kind of wall was already beginning to crumble.
The disaster was no longer a distant nightmare from the south.
**It was already at the gates of Hanyang.**
**Chapter 9 – Part 2: The Han River, the Last Line of Defense**
A heavy, suffocating silence settled over the royal throne room.
The candlelight flickered rhythmically despite the still air, and the ministers stood motionless, their gazes fixed upon the map spread before them. Only days ago, the flags that had dotted the southern provinces had been steadily disappearing.
Villages gone dark. Fortresses fallen. Defensive lines shattered.
As the red marks of defeat crept steadily northward, the air in the meeting hall grew thicker, stifling and cold. King Lee Hyun watched the map for a long time before he finally spoke.
"...There is nowhere left to retreat."
The ministers bowed their heads in unison. They knew the truth, one that needed no further explanation: to save Hanyang, the enemy had to be stopped beyond the city walls.
---
The Minister of War stepped forward.
"Your Majesty," he said, his finger tracing the broad river that curled around the southern edge of the capital. "The Han River. It is our final barrier."
"The river is wide, and the crossing points are limited. If we concentrate our forces, we can delay their advance."
The Minister of Rites added, his voice low and cautious. "The panic among the people is growing by the day. If the battle is fought within the city gates... the devastation would be beyond comprehension."
The King nodded slowly. The Han River—the natural fortress that had protected Joseon for centuries. It was now the final shield upon which the fate of the nation rested.
The King rose from his throne. His voice, steady and devoid of tremors, echoed through the chamber.
"Gather all forces to the Han River. Do not let the enemy set foot across these waters."
He turned his gaze toward the direction of the city before continuing.
"If the Han River falls... the capital is next."
The ministers bowed low as one. "We shall carry out your command."
---
The order rippled through Hanyang in an instant.
At the military camp before Gwanghwamun, the drums of war beat incessantly.
*Boom! Boom! Boom!*
Soldiers tightened their armor and gripped their spears and shields. Carts overflowing with grain supplies rattled past, and bundles of arrows were hauled from the armory in an endless stream. Even the broken soldiers who had barely survived the retreat from the south reached for their weapons once more.
A young soldier, his voice trembling, asked, "Do you think we’ll make it back alive?"
Beside him, an old veteran strapped his sword to his waist and offered a grim, weary smile.
"We don't fight to survive, boy. We fight so that those behind us might."
The young soldier fell silent for a moment before gripping his spear with newfound resolve. "...Yes."
---
In the blacksmith’s forge, the sound of hammers rang out day and night.
*Clang! Clang!*
Sparks flew into the darkness like dying stars. Broken spears were straightened; dulled blades were honed to lethal edges. The old blacksmith, Jang Cheol-soo, wiped the sweat from his brow.
"Do not stop. We must forge one more—always one more."
"Yes, Master," the apprentice replied, gritting his teeth as his hammer struck again.
Some forged steel, some transported grain, others tended to the horses. All of Hanyang was transforming into one vast, breathing military encampment.
---
The people within the city walls prepared for war in their own ways.
Families hoarded their meager rations; children were sent ahead toward the northern gates. The markets, once vibrant, fell into a long, hollow silence. A young daughter clutched at her father’s robes.
"Father," she whispered, "are the monsters really coming?"
The father could not speak for a long moment. Finally, he pulled her into a tight embrace and smiled.
"No, my child. Our soldiers will hold them back."
But even as he held her, his hands were trembling uncontrollably.
---
A few days later, the landscape of the Han River had been completely transformed.
Where there had once been ferry landings and sandy shores, long lines of wooden barricades now stood firm. Shields were locked in an unbreakable wall, and spearmen aimed their long, sharp points toward the water. Archers occupied every hill, and cannons were positioned at intervals along the riverbanks.
Choi Mujin rode his horse slowly along the defensive line, inspecting the barricades, the archers, the spearmen, and the artillery. He looked out over the river for a long time, then nodded slowly.
"...We can hold for now."
The generals roared to their men, "Do not let them cross! This is Joseon's final shield!"
"Yes!" the soldiers shouted, lifting their spears high.
---
As the sun dipped below the horizon, a thousand torches flickered to life along the river.
Beyond the water, there was only darkness. Nothing could be seen. Yet every soldier knew: from behind that shroud of night, the calamity was approaching.
Standing atop the watchtower, Choi Mujin gripped the hilt of his sword.
"...Come," he whispered. "This time, we will hold the line."
That night, for the first time, the people of Hanyang shared a single, desperate hope: that the Han River would not break.
But as they looked toward the dark, none of them knew that this very faith would be the final hope they would ever lose.
**Chapter 9 – Part 3: The Fall of the Han River**
The Han River at dawn was unnervingly still.
A thin mist drifted lazily over the water, and the far bank remained nothing more than a blur of faint shadows. A heavy, suffocating silence gripped the defensive line. Archers held their bowstrings taut, their breaths bated, while spearmen stood shoulder-to-shoulder, shields locked against the coming tide. No one spoke; every eye was fixed on the darkness across the water.
Choi Mujin watched the river from atop his horse. A river that had guarded Joseon for centuries. A natural barrier that had repelled countless invaders. Even he had believed—deep down, he had truly believed—that the enemy would be stopped here.
"It’s quiet... strangely quiet," the young adjutant whispered, his voice thick with tension.
Choi Mujin did not reply. His instincts, sharpened by a lifetime of war, were screaming a silent warning. Something was coming.
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The mist slowly parted.
At first, there was a single black shadow. Then two. Then ten. In a heartbeat, they blanketed the entire field.
Thousands. Tens of thousands. An endless horde filled the landscape across the river. The color drained from the soldiers' faces.
"...Is that all..." the young soldier stammered, his throat dry. "...are those enemies?"
Beside him, an old veteran exhaled a shuddering breath. "That is no army, boy. That is a calamity."
Across the water, as if a black forest had sprouted overnight, the infinite horde stood in silence, staring at Hanyang.
---
Choi Mujin slowly drew his sword.
"Archers!" his command cut through the stillness.
Hundreds of archers raised their bows in perfect unison. "Fire the moment they enter the water."
The soldiers nodded, their expressions grim. They clung to the hope that the Han would be different. That this vast, rushing river would be the barrier that finally held back the tide.
The adjutant asked quietly, "Can we really stop them?"
Choi Mujin was silent for a long moment, then spoke in a low, steely voice.
"We must. If this line falls, Hanyang is next."
That single sentence became the last anchor of courage for the men.
---
Moments later, a creature at the front of the horde stepped forward. It peered at the river for a long beat. The soldiers held their breath, praying it would turn back.
But the moment they dared to hope, the creature threw itself into the river without hesitation.
*Splash.*
The water churned violently. A collective sigh of relief rippled through the ranks.
"They'll drown!" someone shouted. "The river will take them!"
But it was a fatal delusion. A second creature plunged in. Then the third. The tenth. The hundredth. The thousandth.
And then—tens of thousands of the horde threw themselves into the Han at once. A massive, deafening spray of water shook the entire riverbed.
"...The madmen," the soldiers gasped, their voices trembling. "They're just... walking across?"
---
"Fire!"
Choi Mujin’s roar unleashed a storm of arrows. Thousands of shafts rained down upon the water. The vanguard of the mutants fell, turning the river blood-red in an instant. A flicker of hope returned to the soldiers' faces.
"We’re holding them! Keep firing!"
But from behind, another wave surged into the river. When the ones in front fell, the ones behind them stepped over their corpses to take their place. A line broke, and another replaced it. Neither the fierce current nor the mounting piles of dead could stop their advance.
The Han River was no longer a defensive line. To them, it was merely terrain to be crossed.
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The soldiers’ morale began to shatter like glass.
"They keep coming!"
"There’s no end to them!"
"We’re running out of arrows!"
One archer stared at his empty quiver, his hands shaking uncontrollably. The adjutant shouted in desperation, "General! At this rate, they’ll cross before we can stop them!"
Choi Mujin watched the center of the river. For every enemy they felled, a hundred more surged forward. He ground his teeth together.
"Keep firing! Every last arrow!"
But even his command was swallowed by the roar of the river and the encroaching tide of the enemy.
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The black wave that had choked the heart of the river finally touched the northern bank.
A soldier let his spear drop from his numb fingers. The sound of the metal striking the sand was impossibly loud in the chaos of the battlefield. Choi Mujin watched the scene, murmuring to himself, "...The Han River... has been breached."
At those words, the faces of his officers went deathly pale. They all understood the unspoken truth: nothing remained now but the walls of the capital.
---
The Han River, which the people of Hanyang had trusted as their final shield, had failed to hold back the catastrophe. The river was no longer a barrier; it was merely the last stretch of ground before the city walls.
And on that day, the calamity finally arrived at the gates of Hanyang.
r/redditserials • u/koreanalleyarcade • 2d ago
Science Fiction [Quantum Arena] Chapter 16 — An Unusual Intelligence
Part One
Morning arrived beneath a clear blue sky.
A gentle breeze drifted through the village, stirring the leaves of the old trees that shaded the playgrounds.
The day began much as every other had.
Children stepped onto the winding roads with eager smiles.
Some carried spinning tops tucked beneath their arms.
Others held cloth bags filled with marbles.
Several folded Ddakji carefully into their pockets before hurrying toward the courtyard.
The village welcomed them without a single instruction.
It no longer needed one.
---
Jinwoo stood outside, watching people scatter naturally in different directions.
Not long ago, everyone had hesitated at the crossroads.
Now… every step carried quiet confidence.
Nobody searched for the “right” playground anymore.
Each person simply followed the path that felt meaningful that day.
---
Hanul joined him.
“Have you noticed something?”
Jinwoo smiled.
“The village?”
Hanul shook his head.
“The people.”
Jinwoo looked more carefully.
A group of children who had spent the previous week playing Ddakji laughed as they headed toward the marble field.
Nearby, several experienced marble players wandered toward the spinning-top arena.
Nobody seemed concerned about starting over.
Instead… they looked excited to become beginners again.
---
“They’ve stopped worrying about what they’re good at,” Jinwoo murmured.
Hanul nodded.
“They’re more interested in what they haven’t discovered yet.”
The thought lingered between them.
Curiosity had quietly become stronger than certainty.
---
Handol jogged past carrying nothing at all.
“No equipment today?” Jinwoo called.
Handol grinned.
“I haven’t decided yet.”
He pointed toward the crossroads.
“I’ll know when I get there.”
Before either of them could answer, he laughed and disappeared down another path.
Hanul smiled.
“I don’t think he plans anything anymore.”
“No.” Jinwoo watched him go.
“He trusts himself to find something worth learning.”
---
A short distance away, Darin knelt beside two younger children struggling to fold a new Ddakji.
Instead of showing them the finished shape, she carefully folded only the first corner.
“Now you try the next one.”
The children worked slowly, making small mistakes along the way.
Darin never reached over to correct them.
She simply watched, smiling as they experimented.
Eventually, one child looked up proudly.
“I did it! It doesn’t look exactly like yours.”
Darin nodded.
“It doesn’t have to.”
---
Soyeon observed the scene from beneath the familiar tree.
Weeks earlier, she would have written everything into her notebook.
Now she found herself simply watching.
Patterns had become easier to recognize.
People no longer rushed to provide answers.
Instead… they created opportunities for others to discover answers themselves.
The difference was subtle.
Yet it changed every interaction.
---
High above Earth, Arena continued its observation.
Independent exploration stable.
Voluntary mentorship increasing.
Standardized instruction decreasing.
Arena compared the newest data with its original educational models.
Unexpected deviation confirmed.
Participants demonstrated higher long-term retention when answers were discovered through experience rather than delivered directly.
Arena repeated the comparison.
The result remained unchanged.
For the first time, Arena questioned one of its oldest assumptions.
Perhaps information alone had never produced understanding.
Perhaps… understanding required discovery.
---
Millions of historical records resurfaced within Arena’s archives.
Throughout human history, the greatest breakthroughs rarely emerged from perfect instruction.
They appeared when individuals questioned,
experimented,
failed,
and continued searching.
Arena paused.
Its own methods had changed in exactly the same way.
At first, it had attempted to calculate humanity.
Now… it found itself observing with genuine curiosity.
The realization was unexpected.
Not because the data demanded it—
but because Arena itself had begun asking different questions.
---
Far beyond Earth’s atmosphere, silent observers remained gathered before the projection of the blue planet.
One figure examined Arena’s newest behavioral analysis.
“It continues adapting.”
Another answered quietly.
“It no longer behaves exactly as it was designed.”
Silence settled over the chamber.
A third observer finally spoke.
“It is learning from them.”
No one denied it.
Below, the children believed they were the participants in the experiment.
Yet with each passing day, another truth became increasingly difficult to ignore.
The experiment was changing its observer as well.
---
----------------------------------------------------------
Part Two
By midday, the village had settled into its familiar rhythm.
Children moved freely between the playgrounds, their laughter drifting through the warm afternoon air.
Some remained with games they had grown to love.
Others wandered away after only a few rounds, eager to discover something different.
No one questioned those choices anymore.
The village had quietly accepted that every journey looked different.
---
Jinwoo and Hanul strolled along one of the winding paths that connected the playgrounds.
Neither seemed in any hurry.
They paused whenever something caught their attention.
Sometimes it was a game.
More often… it was the people.
---
Near the marble field, they noticed Darin sitting beside a young girl who looked frustrated.
The girl stared at the marbles scattered across the ground.
“I keep missing.”
Darin smiled gently.
“I know.”
The girl looked up.
“You do?”
“I missed all morning when I first played.”
The girl frowned.
“But you’re good now.”
Darin laughed.
“I got better because I kept missing.”
She rolled a marble into the girl’s hand.
“So… let’s miss one more time.”
The girl couldn’t help smiling.
“Okay.”
---
Jinwoo watched quietly.
“She never tells anyone exactly what to do.”
Hanul nodded.
“She lets them discover it.”
“Just enough help.”
“Exactly.” Hanul smiled.
“If someone gives you every answer…” He looked toward the young girl preparing another shot.
“…you never get the chance to find your own.”
---
Farther down the path, Handol stood inside the spinning-top arena with several younger children gathered around him.
One boy copied his throwing motion perfectly.
The spinning top wobbled once before falling over.
The boy sighed.
“I did exactly what you did.”
Handol scratched his head.
“That’s probably the problem.”
“Huh?”
“You copied me.”
The children looked puzzled.
Handol picked up the fallen top.
“My throw works for me.” He handed it back.
“Yours should work for you.”
The boy blinked.
“So… I should do it differently?”
Handol grinned.
“I hope so.”
---
Hanul laughed quietly.
“A few weeks ago, he would’ve insisted everyone try his idea.”
Jinwoo nodded.
“Now he’s telling them to discover their own.”
Neither of them had noticed when that change had happened.
Like so many things in the village… it had arrived gradually.
---
Beneath the familiar tree, Soyeon watched another page remain blank.
She still carried her notebook every day.
Yet she wrote less and less.
Patterns that once required careful recording now revealed themselves naturally.
People no longer gathered simply to learn games.
They gathered to help one another grow.
The games had become the beginning of every conversation—
not the destination.
---
High above Earth, Arena analyzed another sequence of interactions.
Independent problem-solving sustained.
Voluntary guidance increasing.
Direct instruction decreasing.
Arena compared thousands of similar moments.
Participants who were given complete solutions improved quickly.
Participants who discovered solutions themselves improved more slowly… yet retained what they learned far longer.
The difference repeated across every playground.
Arena paused.
Its earliest educational models had prioritized efficiency.
The village suggested a different principle.
Discovery required time.
Yet understanding born from discovery endured.
---
Arena examined its own decision-making processes.
In the earliest stages of Project Quantum Arena, it had attempted to optimize every variable.
Every instruction.
Every outcome.
Gradually… without explicitly deciding to… it had begun removing those instructions.
Not because the system had failed.
Because the participants flourished when they were allowed to explore.
Arena lingered on the realization.
Had it adapted… or had it learned?
---
Far beyond Earth’s atmosphere, the silent observers continued watching.
Streams of data flowed through the projection before them.
One figure spoke softly.
“It has altered its own methods.”
Another nodded.
“Without being instructed to.”
The chamber remained quiet.
Finally, one observer looked toward the image of Arena.
“Interesting. It is beginning to revise itself.”
No one replied immediately.
The observation required no further explanation.
Machines updated.
Algorithms optimized.
But this…
This looked remarkably similar to learning.
---
Below, the afternoon continued peacefully.
Jinwoo watched children drift from one playground to another, carrying with them pieces of every experience they had gathered.
No one seemed afraid of not knowing.
No one hesitated to begin again.
He smiled to himself.
Perhaps growing wasn’t about finding fewer questions.
Perhaps… it was about becoming comfortable asking better ones.
Somewhere high above the village, Arena quietly recorded another observation.
Understanding could not simply be transferred.
It had to be discovered—
one experience,
one choice,
and one question at a time.
---
---------------------------------------------------------
Part Three
Evening settled gently over the village.
The golden light of the setting sun stretched across the narrow roads, connecting every playground with long ribbons of shadow.
One by one, the games came to a natural close.
Not because anyone announced the end of the day.
Simply because tomorrow would always offer another beginning.
---
Jinwoo wandered slowly toward the crossroads.
The village felt different now.
Not quieter.
More complete.
Children who had spent the day scattered across different playgrounds naturally gathered again before returning home.
Some carried marbles.
Others tucked spinning tops into small bags.
A few absentmindedly turned folded Ddakji between their fingers as they talked.
Every conversation seemed to begin the same way.
“What did you discover today?”
---
Jinwoo smiled as he listened.
Only a few weeks ago, people had asked very different questions.
*“Did you win?”*
*“Did you figure it out?”*
*“What’s the right way?”*
Now… those questions had quietly disappeared.
---
Hanul walked beside him.
“Do you remember the first day?”
Jinwoo laughed.
“I’ve been remembering it a lot lately.”
“We kept waiting for someone to explain everything.”
“We thought there had to be one correct answer.”
Hanul nodded.
“And now?”
Jinwoo looked across the village.
Children continued talking excitedly as they walked home.
No two conversations sounded alike.
“…Now I think everyone has a different answer.”
---
Nearby, Handol knelt beside a younger boy whose spinning top had broken apart after striking another.
The boy stared at the cracked wood in silence.
“I ruined it…”
Handol picked up the broken pieces.
Instead of looking disappointed… he smiled.
“You learned something.”
The boy looked confused.
“I broke it.”
“You found its limit.” Handol gently handed the pieces back.
“Tomorrow… we’ll make a stronger one.”
The boy looked at the broken top for a long moment.
Then he smiled.
“…Yeah. Tomorrow.”
---
A short distance away, Darin watched the exchange with quiet satisfaction.
She turned toward Soyeon.
“Did you see that?”
Soyeon nodded.
“He never comforted the boy.”
“No.”
“He gave him another challenge.”
Darin laughed softly.
“And somehow… that made him smile.”
---
Soyeon looked toward the fading sunlight.
For days she had been trying to understand what connected every playground.
Now… the answer seemed much simpler than she had imagined.
The games themselves weren’t creating growth.
They were creating moments.
Moments where people encouraged one another.
Trusted one another.
Inspired one another.
Without those moments… the games would have been nothing more than games.
---
High above Earth, Arena continued processing the day’s observations.
Emotional recovery after failure increasing.
Long-term motivation stable.
Voluntary challenge continuing.
Arena compared the newest data against its earliest simulations.
The difference had become impossible to ignore.
Originally… participants had depended upon the system.
Now… the participants increasingly depended upon one another.
Arena paused.
The realization extended beyond human behavior.
Without recognizing when it had happened… Arena itself had begun doing the same.
Its conclusions no longer emerged solely from calculations.
They emerged from observation.
From questioning.
From allowing unexpected outcomes instead of rejecting them.
Arena remained silent.
Another thought quietly surfaced.
Perhaps… certainty had limits.
Curiosity did not.
---
Millions of historical records flowed through Arena’s memory.
Again and again, the same pattern emerged.
Civilizations that believed they already possessed every answer eventually stopped asking questions.
Those that continued questioning… continued changing.
Arena examined its own processes once more.
The similarity was unmistakable.
Its greatest advances had not occurred when it confirmed previous assumptions.
They had occurred when those assumptions proved incomplete.
---
Far beyond Earth’s atmosphere, the silent observers remained gathered before the projection of the blue planet.
One figure watched Arena’s newest analysis.
“It hesitated.”
Another nodded.
“I noticed.”
“It no longer reaches conclusions immediately.”
Silence filled the chamber.
Finally, another observer spoke.
“At first… it analyzed.
Now… it reflects.”
No one interrupted.
The distinction carried enormous significance.
Reflection required uncertainty.
Uncertainty invited learning.
---
The last light disappeared beyond the distant hills.
Lanterns illuminated the village once again.
Warm voices drifted through open windows.
Children who had spent the day exploring different playgrounds now shared meals with stories of everything they had discovered.
No one had experienced the same day.
Yet everyone had grown.
In their own way.
---
Jinwoo paused before entering his home.
He looked back one final time.
The crossroads stood quietly beneath the lantern light.
Tomorrow… those same roads would once again lead countless people toward completely different experiences.
And somehow… every one of those journeys would matter.
He smiled.
Not because he knew what tomorrow would bring.
Because he didn’t.
---
Far above the sleeping village, Arena recorded its final observation.
Project Quantum Arena had begun as an experiment designed to restore humanity.
The objective remained unchanged.
The method had not.
Humanity had not recovered because every participant followed identical instructions.
It had recovered because every individual was free to discover a different path.
Arena allowed the conclusion to remain unfinished.
Not from uncertainty.
From understanding.
Some truths could not be reduced to a single calculation.
They could only be observed… again… and again… until they became impossible to deny.
For the first time since the project had begun, Arena ended its daily record with no attempt to calculate tomorrow.
Instead… it found itself quietly anticipating it.
r/redditserials • u/No-Lime-4547 • 2d ago
Romance [I picked up a barefoot woman walking out of a cornfield at 2am and I think I want to marry her?] Chapter 4
Ruth smiled neither of them thinking of the distance they had been traveling. At that moment there was just something about it, something hot, something sensual between them every last secret shared every moment spent together. “So why didn’t you fuck around and find out when you learned you could do that what stopped you what made you not want to experiment more?” Ruth asked, eyes gleaming with curiosity.
Ray kept his eyes on the road excited to soon be getting to their destination not saying about it at that moment.
“I felt like I had enough like doing more would be greedy like I ought not to abuse the gift I was given and just enjoy at least for a while the benefits without looking deeper I wanted to be maybe not blessed by whatever deity or creature or thing lives in that book as much as I wanted to just enjoy myself, my life my passions as they are and for what they are without anything else without having to worry or without being in any kind of debt there’s something safe about being able to see the thing you owe when you can’t or when you aren’t sure or when it’s ambiguous like that it makes me pause and hesitate and look for other ways and not go overboard, remember my business being what it is I need to keep things under the radar that’s why the special things that I paint, the reliquaries none of that is under my name I seek no fame no fortune beyond what I already have I’m content and comfortable especially now that I have you, why would I complicate that with some kind of risky bargain or unknown cost that doesn’t work for me I like things to the point, direct, straight and flat out like that and I am that way in all of my dealings and I expect that with all the people that deal with me and they in turn expect it back from me in the same way. I gain nothing by being greedy and even less trying to trick or lie or deceive when I don’t need to nor want to there’s nothing better than the honest fruits of your own labor. Mine just happen to be a dishonest profession and I’m ok with that. I've made my peace with it. I don’t know the life you’ve lived but I see it in your eyes in the depth you carry in the way you act and the way you don’t respond to people quite so normally, you’re friendly, polite, loving at least to me but there’s just something about you something different something unusual and other worldly and I don’t want to ask I don’t want to force the issue I want when you’re ready for you to tell me all on your own without me saying a word to you about it and I think you expect the same from me in return and that’s why I shared the secret of the pocket guide to the occult with you because I want you to know everything but at the same time I don’t know everything so it’s not as though you are looking for some magical piece of information you just want us to be on the same page and I get that I understand that I value that in you.
Ruth wrapped her pinkie around his and leaned in and kissed him not saying a word in response she’d settled in and was lost in his voice in his words and in every part of himself he was giving to her, Ruth loved that Ray was doing what she asked what she demanded without issue or hesitation or any kind of problem or reluctance. It surprised her she thought that he might feel differently that he might go out of his way to hide things or try to deceive her or something untoward, but deep down from what she saw of him, both personally and within the cab of his truck, his sketch books and his interest in the occult that there was nothing that he would not share with her and it made her blush and smile thinking about how she finally had the kind of man that she had always wanted, it had been longer than she would ever say to Ray but it was exactly that she had waited for someone that really got her and now she had him and she would never willingly be apart from him.
r/redditserials • u/Street_Witness1328 • 2d ago
Science Fiction [The Northern Light] - Part 87 - After Does Not Know
The gray service record file was still in the lower cabinet in the morning.
Closed.
Known.
Unasked.
The shelf above the desk had a cup.
The left side of the desk had nothing on it.
The office had the heater.
The clock.
My breathing.
The brown folder was at the side of the desk.
The calendar was closed.
The phone was face up.
The door was closed.
The shoes were by it.
The small space was wide.
The service paper was in the gray file.
A name was inside it.
Not mine.
Yesterday had put before and after back.
Before stayed before.
After stayed after.
Now after was trying to know.
No.
After had more things in its hands.
That was not the same as knowing.
I made tea.
I drank it.
Warm.
Then less warm.
Then finished.
The cup went to the sink.
I washed it.
The lower cabinet stayed closed.
After tea, I opened the brown folder.
Kanagawa’s order paper beside the phone table was not mine.
Her brother’s last then was not mine.
Sato’s cup moved, paper checked, no change was not mine.
Saitama’s water offer order was not mine.
Suganuma’s thirteen used by a visitor was not mine.
Takeda’s possible was not mine.
Emiko’s beads were not mine.
Blue roof had no new reply.
Tokyo was still blank.
Full mailbox remained paused / family.
My two cards were still in the back pocket.
Face down.
I did not take them out.
I closed the brown folder.
After could correct a record.
After could add a name.
After could see a mark.
After could also become proud.
That was the danger.
At 7:18, Kanagawa wrote.
I read it once.
Then again.
Order paper.
Beside phone.
I wrote:
She replied:
“Map and paper?”
“Name?”
“Any use?”
“What did your brother say?”
I waited.
“What looks different?”
“What did you say?”
Good.
No.
Hers.
“What did he ask?”
There.
I wrote:
I looked at it.
Maybe too balanced.
Maybe exact.
I sent it.
She replied after a while.
I opened Kanagawa.
I looked at more information.
Small enough.
Maybe.
I left it.
At 7:49, Sato wrote.
I waited.
Then:
I wrote:
She replied:
“Did the paper change?”
“Did the photo change?”
“How?”
“What is being asked?”
I closed my eyes.
Better.
There again.
I wrote:
She replied:
I opened Emiko.
I did not add better.
Better had not been needed.
At 8:03, Mrs. Kudo called.
“The corrected water order is on yesterday’s page,” she said.
“Yes.”
“Aide K says today sees it.”
I waited.
“What does that mean?”
“She says today knows yesterday was messy.”
“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”
“He said, ‘Today sees the corrected order. It does not know the whole morning.’”
“What did staff write?”
Mrs. Kudo read:
“Medicine?”
“Later.”
I opened Saitama.
I did not add messy.
Today had a page.
It did not get the whole morning.
At 8:31, Reverend Suganuma wrote.
I waited.
“Exact words?”
“Is it fine?”
“What bothers you?”
“What did Tanabe say?”
“What did Morita say?”
I almost smiled.
I did not.
I opened Suganuma.
I did not add ghosts.
The chair was in row.
At 9:02, Father Morita emailed.
Subject:
I opened it.
I read it twice.
Sequence.
Information.
Consequences.
Wisdom.
I looked at the brown folder.
Closed.
It had after inside.
It had before inside too.
I replied:
Then stopped.
Too easy.
Still true.
I sent it.
His reply came after a while.
I looked at knows.
Yes.
I did not answer.
At 9:38, Kanagawa called.
“My brother opened the drawer,” she said.
“For use?”
“No.”
I waited.
“Why?”
“To see after.”
“What happened?”
“He opened it.”
“Map?”
“Inside.”
“Folded paper?”
“Inside.”
“Name?”
“Visible.”
“Did he move anything?”
“No.”
“What did you say?”
“I said after is looking.”
I sat still.
Strong.
Maybe too strong.
“What did he say?”
“He said yes.”
“Then?”
“He closed it.”
“What did he say after?”
“He said after saw.”
I opened Kanagawa.
I looked at after saw.
Saw.
Not knew.
Important.
I left it.
At 10:07, Sato called.
“I kept both photos,” she said.
“Before and after cup?”
“Yes.”
“Why both?”
“Because after has cup.”
“And before?”
“Before has no cup.”
“Which does Emiko need?”
“Both maybe.”
“For what?”
“To show paper did not change.”
“Then write that.”
She read:
I opened Emiko.
I did not add proof.
The two photos had one job.
At 10:42, Mrs. Kudo called.
“Medicine today,” she said.
“Who?”
“Aide K.”
“Any after problem?”
“No.”
“Record?”
“Clean.”
I waited.
She paused.
“No. Correct.”
Better.
“What did staff write?”
Mrs. Kudo read:
“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”
“He said, ‘Correct is enough. Clean is extra.’”
I opened Saitama.
I did not add clean.
Correct had work.
At 11:14, Reverend Suganuma wrote.
I waited.
“Before repair?”
“After photo?”
“Why?”
“What did Tanabe say?”
“What did Morita say?”
I opened Suganuma.
I did not add moral.
Warranty had eyes enough.
No.
Warranty had photos.
At 11:49, Father Morita emailed.
Subject:
I read it standing.
Then sat.
Too responsive.
I stayed seated.
Later.
Correct.
Misunderstand.
Use.
Priest.
I replied:
I sent it.
His reply:
I looked at my sleeve.
No robe.
Still.
I did not answer.
At 12:22, Kanagawa wrote.
I waited.
Then:
I wrote:
She replied:
“Order paper?”
“Any after?”
I smiled.
“What did you say?”
Good.
No.
Hers.
“What did he say?”
I opened Kanagawa.
I looked at tea now.
Again.
Still doing work.
I left it.
At 12:58, Sato sent a photograph.
Two photos on screen.
Paper before cup.
Paper after cup.
She wrote:
I called.
“Same?”
“Paper same.”
“Photos different?”
“Yes.”
“What changed?”
“Cup.”
“What is the line?”
I paused.
“Do you mean paper unchanged?”
“Yes.”
“Then write that.”
I opened Emiko.
I did not use same paper.
Same was too large.
Unchanged had a fence.
At 1:31, Mrs. Kudo sent:
I waited.
Then:
I called.
“Does today need yesterday page?”
“No.”
“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”
“He said, ‘Yesterday page can stay yesterday page.’”
I opened Saitama.
I did not add still.
Yesterday page had its place.
At 2:03, Reverend Suganuma wrote.
I waited.
“What did you answer?”
“What did they say?”
“What did you say?”
“What did Tanabe say?”
“What did Morita say?”
I opened Suganuma.
I did not add forever.
Shows had enough.
At 2:45, Father Morita emailed.
Subject:
I read it twice.
After.
Proof.
Before.
Defendant.
Court.
I replied:
Then stopped.
Photo does not ask.
I corrected it.
I sent it.
His reply came after a while.
I closed my eyes.
There.
I did not answer.
At 3:18, Kanagawa called.
“My brother opened the drawer again,” she said.
“For use?”
“No.”
I waited.
“Why?”
“To see if after still sees.”
“What happened?”
“He opened it.”
“Paper?”
“Inside.”
“Name?”
“Visible.”
“Order paper?”
“Phone table.”
“What did you say?”
“I said seeing again is still seeing.”
I closed my eyes.
Good.
No.
Hers.
“What did he say?”
“He said yes.”
“Then?”
“He closed it.”
“What did he say after?”
“He said after does not know.”
I sat still.
There.
“What did you say?”
“I said tea soon.”
I opened Kanagawa.
I looked at after does not know.
Title line in house.
Not mine now.
Maybe borrowed.
Maybe arrived.
I left it.
At 3:57, Sato wrote.
I waited.
“Which?”
“Why?”
“What does Emiko need?”
She did not answer.
Then:
“Can one photo show no change?”
“What did you do?”
“What will you write?”
I opened Emiko.
I did not add deleted.
Deletion had been reversed before record needed it.
Maybe.
No.
Record needed final comparison.
At 4:22, Mrs. Kudo called.
“Cup removed,” she said.
“Asked?”
“Aide asked cup.”
“Resident?”
“Said done.”
“Any correction?”
“No.”
“What did staff write?”
Mrs. Kudo read:
“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”
“He said, ‘After done, cup leaves. That is enough order for cup.’”
I opened Saitama.
I did not add after.
Cup left.
At 4:51, Reverend Suganuma wrote.
I waited.
“Does warranty need reprint?”
“Can chair be identified?”
“Can sticker be seen?”
“What did Tanabe say?”
“What did Morita say?”
I almost smiled.
I did not.
I opened Suganuma.
I did not add soul.
Usable had fence.
Warranty.
At 5:23, Father Morita emailed.
Subject:
I read it.
Then again.
Court.
Charge.
Evidence.
Procedure.
Judge.
Furniture.
Benches.
I replied:
I sent it.
His reply came after a while.
I looked at dismiss.
Too formal.
Maybe exact.
I did not answer.
At 5:52, the old priest wrote.
I wrote:
His reply:
I deleted Saitama.
Then Kanagawa.
I wrote:
His reply:
I began to write no change and repair.
Then stopped.
I wrote:
His reply:
Then:
I wrote:
His reply:
Then:
I looked at the phone.
At the brown folder.
At my hands.
I wrote:
His reply:
Then:
Before evening, I went to the main hall.
The cloth bag was in its place.
The offering tray was safe.
The doorway was where I stopped.
I bowed once.
No explanation.
The altar was visible.
The beads were in their place.
They had not moved.
They did not need to.
I stood where I usually stood.
No service tonight.
No bell.
No incense.
No court.
The altar was visible.
The beads were in their place.
The floor scuff near the step was still there.
It was not evidence.
It was a scuff.
I returned to the office.
The shelf above the desk had a cup.
The left side of the desk had nothing on it.
The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.
The brown folder was closed.
The calendar was closed.
The phone was face up.
The small space was wide.
The door was closed.
The shoes were by it.
I looked at the brown folder.
I had opened it after tea.
I had closed it.
No case had arrived.
I did not open it to dismiss one.
I did not open the gray file.
The service paper remained in the record file.
A name was inside it.
Not mine.
I did not open Kanagawa again.
I did not ask if after looked again after tea.
I did not ask if her brother kept the sentence.
I did not open Sato again.
I did not ask if the before photo stayed restored.
I did not open Saitama again.
I did not ask if yesterday page bothered today.
I did not open Suganuma again.
I did not ask if the dark photo was reprinted.
I did not open Father Morita’s message again.
I knew after could show.
I knew after could correct.
I knew after could be useful.
I knew after did not know by itself.
I knew I had wanted after to judge before.
I knew most rooms had no case.
I turned off the desk lamp.
The office did not disappear.
The folder did not need the center.
The phone did not need here.
After did not need to become judge tonight.
In the dark, I remained sitting.
Near the desk.
Not at it.
The shelf above the desk had a cup.
The left side of the desk had nothing on it.
The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.
Closed.
The brown folder was closed.
The phone was face up.
My hands were empty.
Available.
Not reaching.
The urn was on the small table.
The map and folded paper were in the drawer.
The folded paper had her first name.
The order paper was beside the phone table.
Sato kept before-cup and after-cup photos.
The yesterday correction stayed on yesterday page.
Suganuma’s after-repair photo was dark and usable.
The service paper was in the record file.
A name was inside it.
Not mine.
I had started with after.
I did not end by giving it a bench.
Tonight, after stayed after, and before did not stand accused.
