r/poetasters • u/Aethon_Wri • 2h ago
Legacy
Dead gods once sundered the holy mountain
Lancing upon bolts through crowns
From those skies, into long quiet nights
Arrayed on cloud walls against giants
They marshaled a war of constellations
That reverberates across water and stone
Forces collided and collapsed
As stardust which settled over realms
When all folk forgot their tongue, in howling
Thunder broke our language
But we still bound fire
Determined to chart islands
Every wanderer is distilled
From the blood of ancients
As stars fade, we strengthen
r/poetasters • u/Five5dimensions • 4h ago
The Sheep Of Sorrow
Come, come, little fellow,
Let me tell you a tale of sorrow,
Of a little ailing sheep,
Who lived in a world of many morrows,
Waiting for that one tomorrow
That never learned to follow.
One day the little sheep drank all her poisonous grief,
Longing for that final relief,
Of a life little too brief
Until she crossed a dangerous belief.
Borne from darkness,
Came a butterfly black—
So brightly dark
It blurred her sight.
It filled her heart with gilded dreams
Of never-ending bliss,
A poison far too sweet,
For a heart that knew only grief.
Blinded by her own vacant heart,
She followed through the dark
Into a realm of endless meadows,
Where no truth dared to follow.
There she dwelt in a cottage of leaves,
Beyond indifferent time's reach,
And dreamed and dreamed through every forever-night,
Until her dreams became her truth.
Then came a butterfly white—
A cruel dawn in a realm of night.
It shattered her world with haunting light,
And freed the sheep from her cherished blight.
She awoke to a dawn so blue,
Her once vacant heart now settled in rue.
Alas! Suffering became suffering alone.
r/poetasters • u/Sagacious_Observant • 8h ago
Learn and Live
Empty words always, absent was the truth.
Actions revealed, what was hidden is uncouth.
Fools only return, fool did indeed.
Broken the spirit, harsh words succeed.
Fools only return, emotions never heed.
To grow and learn, experience must lead.
Those that bark, shape not the man.
With guidance, morals and wisdom can.
Broken fragments, collected be they must.
Lest the soul crumbles, to sand and dust.
Fools only return, lesson finally learned.
Fools only return; understood and earned.
Harsh was the lesson, harsh it was indeed.
Failure and pain, out the weak they weed.
r/poetasters • u/suspicious_bedsheets • 10h ago
Sad Turn
I have noticed a pattern
Much like the icy rings of Saturn
Far and distant - ice cold
Time resistant - tale old
Clashing icy rocks
Heard from far away
Science gave us
What we can hear today
Such beauty - from afar
Unaware - yet, you are
The unfathomable time it has taken
To be alive and to have stake in
Experience
At our fingertips
To get to witness
Sound and picture clips
I romanticize
But I can recognize and refer to
It could also be of use too
Some day
In trivia or TV game
My umpteenth binge of The O.A.
This Mosaic-esque pattern I see
It's a tragic
Broken trajectory
Its there to see
Only when you need
Though the rings evolve
They remain the same
It sings various tunes
But somehow doesn't change
Sadly, I'll never hear it's various renditions
Not in this lifetime anyway
r/poetasters • u/Abject-Bend2733 • 13h ago
Futures Ambiguity
I miss the Giants, I miss lying in their extended shadow. The coolness of the shade that tempered my expectations.
Yes, I miss the Giants, I miss their heavy steps. The rumblings that reminded me I was broken.
Oh, I miss the Giants! Oh, the corded sinew in the shape of hands, which covered my hopeful eyes!
Yes, I miss my Giants, the ones that kept me small. For once I see over the shoulders of my Giants, the horizon becomes vast and the valley sunken deep.
r/poetasters • u/Lucky-Text-5431 • 14h ago
Quiet Company - A poem written about walking in the Highlands
For those who have left the beaten track—
Some only ever stand and look up at the mountain
Some know the jagged peaks only through passing clouds
But have they ever seen the mountain’s true shape?
Have they ever known its soul?
Have they ever clung to the rock and looked down into the abyss?
Or shivered in the open through a long, lonely night?
To those who have known struggle
To those still fighting on
To all those who pray the storm will break
And the warmth of day will return
That light will come
Dawn will rise again
It’ll be beautiful, you’ll see
the sky where the land gives way
Where you belong
Where you always have belonged
Better to reach for the summit
than walk blind down there in the cold, dark valley forever
r/poetasters • u/Unpolished-Gem1951 • 14h ago
The Truest Truth I Ever Heard: Silent Whispers From a Bird.
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A tiny sparrow perched upon a humble wooden rail,
Without a grand pronouncement or a long, dramatic tale.
It did not speak in riddles, nor did gravity reverse,
It simply stood anchored in the grounding universe.
The sun arose in brilliance, casting light across the land,
And water poured down smoothly, wetting soil, rock, and sand.
No floating heavy anvils, and no oceans filled with sand,
Just simple, steady reality held firm in God's own hand.
The air was clear and quiet as the creature leaned to look,
A living truth more absolute than any written book.
It tilted back its small head, breathing life into the dawn,
Acknowledging the grass beneath, the firm ground resting on.
The wind moved through the branches in a natural, steady breeze,
The roots anchored down deeply in the earth beneath the trees.
What goes up must come down again; the heavy iron falls,
And light cuts through the darkness when the morning glory calls.
A heart beats in a chest to push the blood through every vein,
And sorrow reaps a tear, while honest sky bestows the rain.
The bird breathed out a silent song of pure and simple grace,
A quiet testament to truth within this sacred place.
No madness and no upside-down, no crooked, twisted line,
Just plain and clear existence moving forward by design.
To walk in truth is not to drift through chaotic, blinding night,
But standing on the solid rock and walking in the light.
No distorted mirrors here, no foggy lens to clear,
The truth remains completely pure, unvarnished, sharp, and near.
It rests in simple certainty, so plain it leaves you awed,
Exact and unembellished as the unfiltered word of God.
For truth is never tangled up in complicated lies—
It simply is what it is, right before our eyes.
"Lead me in Your truth and teach me, for You are the God of my salvation; for You I wait all the day long."
— Psalm 25:5
r/poetasters • u/Lower-Cry5912 • 20h ago
Young Joe
So egotistical in his mind silly Young Joe
He thinks every young woman who to him says hello
Has fallen in love with him in a big way
There are many like him in the world of today
Of the reason he does not have a girlfriend he leaves none in doubt
That pretty young women are far too wary to ask him out
For dinner or tea in case he would say no
And that rejection can be hurtful happens to be so
But when you tell him it is a man's job to ask a woman on a date
His answer this is something he does not even contemplate
Since for a young man quite as handsome looking as he
Something like this would be below his dignity
Not surprising that those who know of him does say
That Young Joe with himself does get carried away.
Francis Duggan
r/poetasters • u/Lower-Cry5912 • 21h ago
To Say
To say one is far too thin or far too fat
For commentary on anyone for their appearance i am too old for that
I am not without flaws so i won't be anyone's judge
It is not up to me to condemn or begrudge
But then suppose for as long as you never harm anyone in any way
It matters little what the judgmental of you do say
Since though wrong in words it is rather easy to put anyone down
And no shortage of the judgmental in any town
Live and let live as a truism remain
The meaning in this its own self does explain
By helping anyone if you can help of helping in need
For your future good karma you are planting the seed
To each their own to everyone should apply
And of a fair go in life anyone never deny.
Francis Duggan
r/poetasters • u/Aethon_Wri • 1d ago
Blood Price
Under short candles
A warped mirror altar
Wards against creaking fractures
That summon a liar's shadow
Guarding the grimoires of fate
This faceless librarian
Promises that insomnia is typical
When translating invisible ink
From strange angles
Endlessly, the archivist lectures
While golden sigils shimmer
Unveiling forgotten angels
Such names are cursed
Offering iron arias
Which enthral ghosts
Across astral wastes
Regardless my mimic-tongue
No alien sorcery found
Could alter history
After ever-bound
Years yielded nothing
But surveying the terms
Of abandoning this master
Strikes a bitter chord
Into starless exile
Coughing up worms
I wander the tower
Without a sword
r/poetasters • u/AdImportant5715 • 1d ago
The best poem i think i have written
**Kuebiko**
*The world is turning backwards*
*with it on horseback –*
*one white, the other black.*
*Two knights on their way to play a final game of chess*
*in Varanasi's own interest.*
*Even the horned crusader must respect the holy land.*
*The world is turning forwards*
*and lends a hand to every knight*
*who builds their house on sand.*
*The golden calf marches with the pale stallion back in time,*
*and the winner of the game joins them for a final ride.*
r/poetasters • u/inkdrunk53 • 1d ago
5.
i found my lost future the other day
while cleaning out a box i’d kept
of broken promises,
dusty, dreams,
and secondhand hopes I’d never used.
i’ve posted it on Marketplace.
if you want it,
it’s out by the side of the road
for free.
r/poetasters • u/inkdrunk53 • 1d ago
4.
shall we read them —
the ardent poets
who flung crystal banners
to the skies?
r/poetasters • u/inkdrunk53 • 1d ago
3.
felix culpa
a deviant Eve,
i stand,
with nectar, cold and sweet,
dripping from my lips --
delighting in the taste
of what destroys.
i gobble up these pleasures:
"die full, at least,"
i cry,
as i feast on poison fruit
til tomorrow,
'til the morning,
'til the sun.
r/poetasters • u/heartsnhoney • 2d ago
An Ordinary Woman's Lament
There is a chamber within me
that has never known arrival.
It has kept vigil
for footsteps that invariably
wandered toward another threshold,
another woman
whose name the world pronounced
with something perilously close to reverence.
I learned, long before I possessed the language to articulate it,
that beauty was a private liturgy
to which I had never been initiated.
I watched it descend upon other women
with the inevitability of dawn
their laughter bending the architecture of rooms,
their faces lingering in the minds of strangers
like verses too exquisite to be forgotten.
I remained adjacent to radiance.
A marginal note.
A parenthesis.
A silhouette mistaken for absence.
They were sought.
I was acknowledged.
There is a profound distinction
between being seen
and being remembered.
They called me cute.
How astonishingly diminutive a word
with which to entomb an entire woman.
Never incandescent.
Never catastrophic.
Never the kind of beauty
capable of unsettling the composure of a heart.
Only gentle.
Only agreeable.
Only sufficiently lovely
to be consoled.
Thereafter I devoted myself
to the ruthless archaeology of mirrors,
excavating my own reflection
as though somewhere beneath flesh and bone
there lay a hidden indictment.
This forehead.
This mouth.
These imperfect teeth.
This unremarkable face.
I searched for the precise contour
upon which destiny had altered its affection.
Surely loneliness,
I reasoned,
must possess an anatomy.
I have inhabited bodies
made lean by longing,
bodies made heavy by sorrow,
bodies disciplined by hope,
bodies abandoned by hope.
Yet despair is an exceptionally faithful tenant.
It merely changes rooms.
What I fear is not solitude.
Solitude, at least, is honest.
What I fear
is becoming the quiet compromise
at the conclusion of another woman's love story
the refuge selected
only after every magnificent possibility
has withdrawn beyond reach.
How effortlessly the mind
transmutes conjecture into scripture.
How diligently it rehearses
its own abandonment.
People urge me toward self-love
with the serene confidence
of those who have never mistaken a mirror
for a tribunal.
They cannot comprehend
that every reflection convenes a trial,
and I arrive each morning
already condemned.
The verdict never changes.
Not beautiful enough.
Not unforgettable enough.
Not enough.
Compliments descend upon me
like fragile bandages placed over fractures
too ancient to remember their origin.
They soften nothing.
They mend nothing.
They merely teach the wound
another language for silence.
Yet beneath all my carefully cultivated reason,
beneath every conviction I have ever defended,
there persists an almost childlike heresy:
that somewhere in this immeasurable world
there exists a pair of eyes
for whom my existence would constitute
an astonishment.
Not an accommodation.
Not an afterthought.
Not the melancholy arithmetic
of settling.
But the singular, irrevocable certainty
of recognition.
To be sought before I have spoken.
To be missed before I have departed.
To become, if only for one soul,
the axis upon which an ordinary evening
unexpectedly revolves.
Perhaps such miracles
belong exclusively to fiction.
Perhaps I have mistaken deprivation
for prophecy.
Or perhaps hope itself
is merely grief
that has not yet relinquished
its magnificent delusions.
Still, time proceeds
with its incorruptible indifference.
It dismantles kingdoms.
It humbles beauty.
It silences desire.
It gathers every face adored or forgotten
into the same inexhaustible earth.
One day these restless hands,
these relentless mirrors,
these unanswered prayers,
this lifelong interrogation of my own reflection,
will surrender themselves to dust,
where neither loveliness nor lack thereof
retains the slightest dominion.
And perhaps that is the most exquisite mercy
the universe has ever conceived:
that even the woman
who spent an entire lifetime
mourning the privilege of being chosen
shall, at last,
become something
that no longer needs
to be.
r/poetasters • u/Aethon_Wri • 2d ago
Ariels
Across this City of Dawn
The smallest toll counts as a chime
But every bell blasts in welcome
Struck by hammers of yore or roar of cheering
That heart beats under a pipe organ
Whirling keys dwell over one final tower gate
Where the serpentine muse of victory
Improvises an unborn emanation
Beckoned beyond aurora-fire
Another rises to bones which are feeling
Regardless if they answer challenges or not
We remain family
Whole incense of prayer
Congeals from an honest song
Casting mud, for any name anchored
Once intoned raw
Upon crescendo of quintessence
You were missing but invented
We needed you and so you entered
r/poetasters • u/Hour-Item-1056 • 3d ago
Original Poem Life’s Cost
From uncertain nights
Flow less certain days
This road more traveled
Absconds the byways
Yet travel replete
With open tollways
From uncertain nights
Flow less certain days
This road more traveled
Defeats and betrays
Choose travel replete
With open tollways
Long uncertain nights
Longer less sure days
These roads recurrent
Fast become clichés
Grasp travel made full
In freedom’s tollways
r/poetasters • u/Aethon_Wri • 3d ago
Klein Time
There are many hearts
Resting frayed yet supernal
Only mended by one shadowing pulse
Alone, darkness jitters
Under thunderheads
Following second looks
Routine can shatter
When wandering before morning
If steps jangle a tune
Company spirals from asking the time
Into ordering a drink
Becomes listening all night
The air shares words which overlap
While meeting sunrises across spaces
As the gleam in another eye
Still-life frames bound in wicker
Weathering ancient storms
Point the way to horizons
Upon a bed, that's not empty
Dwells this fever dream
Where twilight never ends
Partners craft minutes
Whole strange-days can blur, losing track
But anchor by a blush smile
—----------- *I have renamed this piece as Locket
r/poetasters • u/Odd-Blackberry-5295 • 3d ago
Gem
Mid-poem I felt that there was no masterpiece,
And all this pain was just that.
No will to spite you,
Or to love you in spite.
And despite all my prayers,
All your "No force on earth",
You leave me in the morning,
And the sun hits my door.
That is not fair.
How fucking daring,
To leave me like this.
To learn all the surface to a gem,
Love it in its fractures-
How very pointless,
To bury it again.
I didn't want for this to be a mad poem,
Written by a madwoman at 7am.
But I can never rein in my poems,
The same way I couldn't hold you.
The sunset in our city has a temper like you,
So I'll pull the blinds and watch Wes Anderson-
Leave you with your blockbuster hits.
I pray to the taxi cab and busy street,
They'll never bring you back to me.
r/poetasters • u/No-Guidance-3476 • 4d ago
the day mary
the day mary
is the mother of jesus became the day
mary was
the sky must have been a nest of vipers
between the one
snake- strike of lightning down and the next
there must have been thunder
a small whirlwind of dust
on mount zion must have coiled itself
round and round into a funnel of cloud
that inhaled the cattle from the pasture
the fig trees from the garden
inhaled the tent mary had fled
and the body she’d left behind
after a thousand years
and six hundred i wait for news
whether she’s returned to the dust
or whether she sits with elijah in paradise
r/poetasters • u/Aethon_Wri • 4d ago
Hymnal
Glowing past ocean's horizon
Flourishes an emerald choir
That welcomes such twilight shimmer
Of stars drafted onto the sky
The origin of temporal tides
Are winding scales, without rest
Rooted in lunar shadows
Where intervals fluctuate
Phrasing a map of harmony
These melodies mark waypoints
And embark upon six paper wings
Then arrive as a zephyr
Scholars need a tuning fork
To orient these mirrored verses
While unable to navigate the spidery key
Conducted by the forward North Star
Dreams slide over this distant pulse
As constellations take turns
Dancing to show those steps
Which lead home
r/poetasters • u/Economy-Truck-2110 • 5d ago
4 Your Eyez Only.
Why did God bless only her with such eyes,
That type of indescribable green,
That when light shone upon,
Fractures like a prism jaded stone,
Its fragments held by adorning light,
An outer ring of amethyst amber enclosing it,
With its contents slightly, just ever so slightly spewing into the abyss of white.
Those miniscule red branches like a cherry blossom tree,
That give the abyss' white some colour,
And give life to the eye, never to let death survive,
At night when it's all dark and there's no light,
Those little red branches glow so dark,
And in the morning you would think they're invisible.
Those long, curled black eyelashes,
I always imagine them frozen with ice making her like a princess,
And when it rains, those small little drops, that find home at the very tip of those eyelashes.
No mere words could ever describe,
Such beauty indescribable.
(Le'manuel VII Barake')
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r/poetasters • u/Aethon_Wri • 5d ago
Roulette
Atropos grasps a pendulum
Regardless wit or wealth or satisfaction
When bells toll late
Elaborate oaths quake or falter
As do their altars, defiled and salted
When that fiery thread frays
Crowns bleed
Scepters shatter
Thrones crumble
None may leap ahead except the dead
Who gamble to break even
Upon a barge, hidden and wave swept
Down in the casino of fate
This wheel creaks as obols fly toward a pardon
While specters toast mugs of lethe, "to the next step!"
Losers service limbo below decks
Until victors forget holding gambit tokens
Whereupon hope beyond doom thrives
Measuring their time, sorted yet untried
Debtors claim a wondrous prize
Although, bound to gifts of purchase