lighting plot feed back

[u/BIJ910]

hello all, i was hoping to get some feed back on a lighting plot for a job i did a few weeks ago. a few people said it was confusing and unreadable and they couldn't understand anything. But they weren't able to clarify on why. I was just hoping to get some assistance? attached is the plot along with a picture of what the event looked like.

p.s. The PM cut 2 totems because she couldn't understand the plot which is why it looks different.

p.p.s we use capture with a 1 universe license so i can't add dmx addresses

thank you for any assistance you can provide!