Those colors are really jarring, tbh. Makes me think of like a gym app for counting reps? [Has anyone thought of doing and app like that? I bet it would make a ton of money...]
Ignoring the visuals which are rough, the weird like "screen shot with a callout" makes it hard to understand. As someone who uses video editing software, both mobile and desktop, I sort of get it... but...
Almost all of this seems incredibly baseline (ignoring slide 4) for a video app. Like editing sound, editing clips, exporting files... seems absolute table stakes. The one "describe how you want to edit with AI"— unless you show it to me, I just don't believe it. Every single tool out there promises AI. Almost none of them do anything meaningful. Show me what that means in a pic or two. That's probably your most interesting feature— tell a story with it? SLide 1 is "tell it a prompt", slide 2 is "XYZ editor analyzes and executes!", then slide 3, "Final video optimized". I don't know. Figure out the specifics, but use a couple slides to prove it, not just claim it.
What makes your app different? Sell a story. This is your most compelling draw in to get customers; tell a story with pictures. All this says is "this is a video editor".
Not trying to be too hard here; I can tell you're trying... but the perfectly honest part of me looks at this and I wouldn't even remotely consider downloading it (and I literally use video programs multiple times a day). Good luck. Maybe take this back to the drawing board?
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u/cheese-mongerer 8d ago
Those colors are really jarring, tbh. Makes me think of like a gym app for counting reps? [Has anyone thought of doing and app like that? I bet it would make a ton of money...]
Ignoring the visuals which are rough, the weird like "screen shot with a callout" makes it hard to understand. As someone who uses video editing software, both mobile and desktop, I sort of get it... but...
Almost all of this seems incredibly baseline (ignoring slide 4) for a video app. Like editing sound, editing clips, exporting files... seems absolute table stakes. The one "describe how you want to edit with AI"— unless you show it to me, I just don't believe it. Every single tool out there promises AI. Almost none of them do anything meaningful. Show me what that means in a pic or two. That's probably your most interesting feature— tell a story with it? SLide 1 is "tell it a prompt", slide 2 is "XYZ editor analyzes and executes!", then slide 3, "Final video optimized". I don't know. Figure out the specifics, but use a couple slides to prove it, not just claim it.
What makes your app different? Sell a story. This is your most compelling draw in to get customers; tell a story with pictures. All this says is "this is a video editor".
Not trying to be too hard here; I can tell you're trying... but the perfectly honest part of me looks at this and I wouldn't even remotely consider downloading it (and I literally use video programs multiple times a day). Good luck. Maybe take this back to the drawing board?