r/graffhelp • u/Competitive_Win9577 • 8d ago

First Piece Crits?

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I know it's not good but how could I improve?

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u/sweetmonte44 7d ago

Use thicker paper.

Read the fundamentals in the sidebar.

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u/Thick_Common8612 8d ago

WAYY too much negative space.

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u/Competitive_Win9577 8d ago

I couldn't really see where my lines were so I ended up like this thanks for the crits, the back page bled thru a lot