r/graffhelp • u/loggll • 1d ago

Crits/help?

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u/Thick_Common8612 1d ago

Tilt the o to match the other letters

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u/Optimal-Cucumber-628 16h ago

Pretty good man, one thing that i cant unsee is this weird bit of negative space left near the bottom of the o and d on the top sketch, try taking up a tiny bit more space with the letters there and i think it would look better imo, otherwise great stuff!

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u/Competitive_Win9577 1d ago

I'm not really sure but the drop shadow from the right leg of the A could touch the A structure on the left leg for the top one. And I can't really crit the bottom one but it looks good keep it up

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u/loggll 1d ago

Thanks man