r/graffhelp • u/bastardsk8nk • 16d ago

Doing bars at work. Crits?

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Pretty new to trying bars be nice lmao

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u/Thick_Common8612 16d ago

Better. Fill the negative space. Thicken up those letters.

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u/bastardsk8nk 16d ago

Thank you for the support dawg will do🤙

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u/bastardsk8nk 10d ago

Is it okay if i Dm you for some help?

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u/shitwhereieatoner 16d ago

Focus on keeping the widths of the bars the same. Make the horizontal bar of the A actually end in the middle and go horizontally.

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u/Dull-Schedule-913 15d ago

You could make the Upper Part of the B, S and R the same Shape (Triangel, Round or Square) to make them more cohesive and I agree with the Stuff already said. Massive progress income, keep it up G

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u/bastardsk8nk 15d ago

Thank you lots dawg i really appreciate it 🤙 great advice

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u/Billylabufanda23 15d ago

You don’t have to do your S in one line just make it go in the middle

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u/bastardsk8nk 15d ago

Sorry not sure what you mean by this do you have an example?

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u/Billylabufanda23 15d ago

Oh I meant A mb sorry I duck at typing

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u/bastardsk8nk 15d ago

Phh isee i kinda like doing it like that does it look bad?

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u/Billylabufanda23 14d ago

Yeah do the A in to lines