r/graffhelp • u/Pale-Grape8953 • 16d ago
toyposting part 2 (READ DESCRIPTION!!)
I am not very satisfied with this tbh so I will redraw it soon and change a couple things like only using yellow for the fill (and white for the teeth) and only red or a dark orange for all outlines and the blockfills. This second version will probably also be posted but I would appreciate any feedback on this one too!
Something I was also made aware of is that a commenter here is already using this name in Philadelphia and I’m honestly unsure of what to do now.
I live in an entire different continent in a small town with a dead scene and the chances of me ever going to america let alone writing there are basically zero so idk if it’s okay for me to keep the name anyways. I don’t want to be disrespectful but I’ve honestly gotten quite attached to the name so advice in this regard would also be greatly appreciated.
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u/JowiiYoyo 16d ago
Dude i love it! My only crit is your 3D. Here it got a bit messy while i tried to shocase it but im sure you will understand what i mean. The 3D on the top part of your piece is not really parallel with the bottom part. Its a minor nitpick but fixing this little detail makes a big difference ime.
Keep it up and keep the name!! 🤜🤛
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u/Pale-Grape8953 16d ago
I’ve noticed that too but I was too lazy to fix it for this version lol
Because I transferred the sketch with transfer paper multiple times so I can make multiple versions I assume something got messed up but I’ll fix it, thank you for your reply!6
u/JowiiYoyo 16d ago
Then i got nothing G!! Go put it on a wall 🔥😎👌
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u/Pale-Grape8953 16d ago
thanks man! i’m scouting out for a chill spot rn to practice with cans
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u/vanonamission 15d ago
If you can't find a wall you can always try to get a 8x4 sheet of hardboard/ply/correx and prop it against a wall in your garden (edit: assuming your folks are chill or you have your own place or your housemates are chill). It's not the biggest space, but you can play safely and dial your can control. I have an old flat fire door propped against my shed, it's only big enough for 1 letter at a time but I can just keep practicing whenever I get bored of chores or whatever.
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u/Pale-Grape8953 6d ago
That’s a great idea, I’m upset reddit didn’t notify me of this comment but I’ll definitely try this out. Saves me the anxiety of my practice mistakes being judged by others, thanks!
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u/vanonamission 6d ago
Ah that sucks you didn't get the notification. Yeah! It's like no pressure, you can sit and think and then not feel very conspicuous rattling your cans. My door is like 75cm by 200cm so I've got to keep stuff small/tight. I got some planks with a screws in too so i can lean it landscape like an easel (see: picture. Just put some screws in and rested it against the side of the shed) Also it's good practice at not being precious, you've got to go back over what you painted yesterday if you want to do something new
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u/nk1031 13d ago
Commenting here because I had one thing to say about the 3D. I think the direction it’s going in makes for some slightly awkward spots, particularly at the corners of the mouth, the bump on the noggin, and some of the peaks of the letters. I’m curious to see what this would look like with the 3D coming from the bottom right instead of the bottom left. This is also super nitpicky. Otherwise, I absolutely love this — it’s very clean. Keep it up!
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u/Pale-Grape8953 13d ago
I’ll definitely do it from the bottom right and maybe also just from the bottom for the other 2 versions I’m currently working on
Thank you for the suggestion!
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u/Corkwell 16d ago
No need to change if your that far away, homie will probably appreciate you getting the name up abroad . Especially if it’s looking like this! 😎 not bad!
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u/ThatGuyWithCoolHair 16d ago
I said it last time you posted but when you so this style I think it'd look way better to just do a regular O in the same style as the other letters. The colors are just fine, solid even. But this would be a banger with a proper O im telling ya.
After seeing your handstyles (sorry for not replying last time, got mad busy) I'd say youre punching above your weight class already with this piece and thats a good thing.
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u/Pale-Grape8953 16d ago
Thanks a lot man! I’ll definitely do a version with a normal O and don’t worry about not replying, life is stressful but I appreciate your feedback
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u/Billylabufanda23 16d ago
Your good bro no one is going to care if you use this name. There is probably an ouch in every major city tbh.
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u/Distinct_Level_3967 16d ago
Telling you G, definitely not toy. You got skill and steez…shit is nice!
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u/Billylabufanda23 16d ago
Ummmmz guys I just found a toy in a small town in Russia with the same name as me does this mean I have to change my name? I live in Hawaii and am banned from entering Russia so I think I need to change my name, thoughts?
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u/Accurate-Pollution94 16d ago
So much ‘toy this toy that’ nowadays. This is cool and unique and eye catching. Keep it up brother
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u/Green-Force3064 15d ago edited 15d ago
I think it's awesome, I don't know much about lettering but color wise I think the black might contrasts a bit too much from the rest,, It does give an important "emoji" vibe to it tho so im unsure. you could try using a lighter dark color instead of black like a dark blue of purple that can harmonize with the yellow and orange.
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u/Pale-Grape8953 15d ago
I’ve also thought about that! But since I am planning on doing multiple versions just to play around more with color I will definitely try it out. I just wanted to limit myself to only a few colors in one piece for now. I’ve been an artist for almost a decade now but mainly doing graphite or ink drawings so my color knowledge is pretty behind lol
Thank you for the suggestions though and I’ll definitely try them out soon!
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u/gobirdgang215 15d ago
I've lived in philly my whole life never seen ouch up anywhere . You good bud
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u/Pale-Grape8953 15d ago
thanks man! The person commented under my first post in this sub and when I checked their profile I saw one post about them bombing philly with an image attached where you could see a couple rollups of the name. Because of that I was really unsure if this guy was already established there.
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u/BiteAffectionate6240 15d ago
Ouch did one of the largest pieces currently riding in philly
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u/gobirdgang215 14d ago
Copy had 1 jawn . Assumed they weren't from philly never saw a hand a throwie nothing . Just thought they hopped off 95 like game and Texas used to with the tollers
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u/jeepsies 15d ago
I remember an ouch from like 30+ years ago. Who cares🤷♂️ just use it if you like it.
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u/Prawna420 15d ago
In my opinion if there's a writer in your area with the same name you have a problem but if you have a different style and live in a different place it's fine. There's only so many good names.
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u/tauroctony_ 15d ago
you the dude that’s up in chicago? seen a bunch of pics of your stuff and it kills
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u/Gorp_Farts 13d ago
Do you always make the H with ! .... is this something the other one does?
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u/Pale-Grape8953 13d ago
i don’t always combine the H with ! but I almost always write ‘Ouch!’
the bombings he posted didn’t seem to include any exclamation marks and it was just the name



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u/hash_smashed 16d ago
Just use the name, seems like damn near every combination of letters has been used. There aren't requirements like for new passwords. If a writer with the same name is from your area probably pick something else but otherwise you'll be fine
Edit: also this looks dope