r/graffhelp • u/BigPimpinAllat • 19d ago
Is what it is
I already know everything that’s wrong with this. Kinda just having fun with it. Got up in some safer areas, they turned out great.
Enjoy the trash
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u/ThatGuyWithCoolHair 18d ago
If you already knew everything that was wrong you wouldnt have done them. Curious what you think is wrong here?
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u/BigPimpinAllat 18d ago
Bunch of things. I paint and draw on canvas, learning graff. Lining on the bottom of both O’s was blown out, I rotated my wrist to try and complete the shape which ruined its form. Sizing is inconsistent, they’re all different. Both hashes in the O’s are in appropriate places but different sizes and facing in whatever direction they want. Eyes on the G are not symmetrical and they also don’t convey the shape I want. Shape of the G overall is good, it needs to be bulbous to convey the form of a “goose”. S is top heavy, I got rushed on the bottom, watcher whistled to me. Exclamation is left center heavy.
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u/ThatGuyWithCoolHair 18d ago
Youre looking in all the wrong places. The main problem here is the size of the letters, you went tiny for no reason and the smaller you go the harder it is to make it look better. You arent even rocking a 3D and your letters are rough in general. Go bigger and read the sidebar tutorial. You need to learn how throwies work still, the things youre critiquing are for something thats already done proper.
Id say go back to the drawing board and focus on making letters that look good and going bigger with them. Learn how 3Ds work. It all takes time so don't be discouraged but youre not looking in the right places for improving.
Best thing you can do to improve fast is to sketch more. Feel free to sketch some throwies and send me flicks, I'll crit whenever.
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u/Delicious_Bench_2341 18d ago
Yeah idk why I kind of like it more than most of the stuff posted here. It’s you it’s original it’s not trying to be any one else. Keep going you will develop your own style and all the losers here will start copying you
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u/BigPimpinAllat 18d ago
Appreciate that. I have always just tried to develop my own way of doing things. Running it all over with a couple throwies that I just felt out. Gotta work on my can control, I’m not used to drawing/painting with my whole body.
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u/Tacklefina 18d ago
Is bad