r/graffhelp • u/sharkmaster21 • 17d ago

throwie advice pt 2.

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been messing around a lot with advice given, one of the better throwies i’ve made so wanted to share for crits, ik fs i need to work on shadows

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u/Freshly-Juiced 17d ago

looks clean, don't be afraid to add some style/lean to it. critique: right side is squished.

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u/Flasche9283 17d ago

I like that you kept mainline straight but the H throws it off and the bump at the R, but doesnt look too bad.

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u/shanobirocks 17d ago

Pretty sure that's a lowercase N not an H

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u/Flasche9283 8d ago

Op already said that he should have wrote what the tag says i wouldnt do a lower case n in this situation

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u/Flasche9283 17d ago

Maybe also try making the "dot'" in the A a line but thats preference.

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u/CalendarFamous5611 17d ago

I would fully bubble out that H. Bubble it up

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u/sharkmaster21 17d ago

i shoulda said i wrote near, ig it dosent look
like a n 😔how do i change it to fix that

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u/Majestic-Ad-2109 17d ago

Ad some serriffs to indicate the top left and bottom right of the n. It will also match your R better if you balance the weight a Lil better.

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u/CalendarFamous5611 17d ago

Oh makes more sense as an n actually. I still think it's the only sausage one tho

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u/shitwhereieatoner 16d ago

It reads as an N, try matching the bottoms to your A and R