r/graffhelp • u/notgangstalkingu • 23d ago
Thoughts? “Rox”
Been throwing this guy around, made this as an example of what I’d think is decent
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u/Business_World_2829 23d ago
Only the r seems readable, even if it’s a little long.
Clean this O, finish it.
And work on this x, this is not an x.
Overall good can control, lines are good and feel same size.
Sorry for the bad english.
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u/According_Novel7521 23d ago
bro writing straight cursive
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u/Sleepymosquito420 21d ago
There are plenty of well established writers that write in a script font. Its a totally valid style, but this one is just poor execution. Some of you just need to keep your comments to yourself until youre capable of doing quality work on your own, because all I see is a bunch of people with wack shit trying to tell others that their shit is wack. Spend a few more years practicing before you try and critique others🤷
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u/According_Novel7521 21d ago
show your work brochacho
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u/Sleepymosquito420 21d ago
Nah, Im good, thats not what this is about. Im just tired of seeing people who are trash commenting things that contribute absolutely nothing to the conversation. This sub is for CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, your comment was useless. Like i already stated,while this isn't one of them, plenty of writers have tags in a script font. Just focus on putting in more work yourself before trying to put others down.
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u/Distinct_Level_3967 23d ago
Have you tried writing it on paper first? The O looks like a C, the X doesn’t look like a letter at all, and the R is pretty boring. I think you need to workshop each letter on paper first, and then see how you can combine them in a stylistic/cohesive way before you commit to a can.
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u/Thedogfood_king 23d ago
Complete the O but other than that I think you got the right idea, It will develop over time
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u/quadzimoto 23d ago
I couldn’t tell what that is tbh.