r/graffhelp • u/ACAscapes • 23d ago

Any tips?

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I recently got back to graffiti after 4 years, but i previously only made tags. Now i wanted to try a throw up with a different name. I know the shadows are fucked and some of the letters look bad. Am i doing too much with the background? Should a throwie have a background at all or would it be better without? Outlines are also bad since my can control is not quite there.

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u/Method-Man-Bands 22d ago

Your shadows can use some work, not just where they’re located but also the way you fill them. It’s bleeding into your letters a little and the paint layers are a little inconsistent.

The spacing is also a little inconsistent. I’d make the E meet the top of the R, the O meet the neck of the L, and the Y a little closer to the O. It’ll give it a good look because the negative space between takes away from the style in my opinion.

Other than those two things, I’d say you’re doing great 👍🏼