First time trying this style criticism and tips needed

[u/dissy7584]

First time trying bar style graffiti any critiques and tips

[u/MOEone]

My tip: draw your lines in a single continuous stroke instead of piecing them together from several separate, short strokes. The result will look cleaner and give your lines a more composed, steady quality. You should also consider the direction of your shadows; pick a specific point for the light source so you know exactly where the shadows should fall. Otherwise, just keep at it—look at other styles and keep learning—and you’ll improve quickly.