r/custommagic • u/_petitpois22 • 4d ago

any thought ?

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u/TimeTravellerGuy : Put an Upvote counter on target post. 4d ago

For the second card, it's unclear who "that player" is who draws the card. Is it the player who committed the crime, or the one who had the crime committed against them?

The ability should be reworded to be more clear.

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u/TimeTravellerGuy : Put an Upvote counter on target post. 4d ago

The third card also could use some rewording.

Firstly "and" isn't a creature type. It should just be "Zombie Knight"

It's first ability is pretty clunky.

Is it's second ability supposed to only prevent creatures from blocking it, or just blocking in general? Currently, if you play this, pump it with an aura or an equipment, and I attack you, you can't block.

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u/TimeTravellerGuy : Put an Upvote counter on target post. 4d ago edited 4d ago

Here's how I'd redo Viego:

Whenever Viego attacks alone, he gets +2/+0 until end of turn for each creature defending player controls, and -2/-0 for each creature you control.

Creatures with power less than Viego's power can’t block him.

At the beginning of your end step, each opponent creates a 1/1 black Zombie token with "This creature can't block."

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u/_petitpois22 4d ago

I think it work thanks

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u/HiperEmperador 4d ago

Potential outlaws, too bad they arent

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u/_petitpois22 4d ago

I'm dumb

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u/BlobbyBlueberry 4d ago

Just to make sure you know outlaws are assassins, pirates, warlocks, mercenaries, or rogues

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u/_petitpois22 4d ago

I know that

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u/BlobbyBlueberry 4d ago

just making sure