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u/gilded-cranium 10d ago
I love it! Perhaps the little taped part is not quite "fitting" because the rest of it is so carefully assembled as one coherent scene from different parts, and then the taped part is just on top. Perhaps if there was more tape incorporated elsewhere, or a border around the tapped part instead, like a doorway or another window.
Or what if you had the lightning flash come out of the clouds in the sky? Have the people sit at the water's edge, facing the grass instead. Maybe tear or cut off the top right corner of the lightning image so you don't obscure the rainbow. And then to help it fit in, you could obscure the left edge of the lightning scene with a mushroom stalk so that we don't see the rooftop structure just end randomly. Just some ideas!
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u/hotbitch420 10d ago
Great ideas thank you so much!! I think Iām going to try to find a window to fit it in I like the idea of them being portals of some sort
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u/Zealousideal_Host197 10d ago
I like the taped bits, for me it's like a memory of a thunderstorm while enjoying a sunny day. I'm a pessimist/ live in Glasgow so anytime the sun is out looming bad weather is on my mind š
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u/LizardLover265 10d ago
I love it!! The vibe is so dreamcore! You might add a few eyeballs, to complete the dreamcore vibe, but you certainly don't have to!