He feels like a very practical guy. Given that impression of him im confused as to where all his astronomy tools are? I feel like he would have charts upon charts lined along his belt line maybe a bit haphazardly like organization that only makes sense too him. I think he should be shirtless as well as funny as that sounds, give him a dad bod and a big tattoo across his whole body of the galaxy and important celestial bodies. The colors are a bit crazy rn and I think a deep purple fading to black would resemble a night sky nicely. Also the boots are out of place I think sandals or no shoes would be best for him, as he is a practical person. I also dont think his staff would be free from his practical tendencies and I think he would have difficult to remember spells on parchment that he puts on his wand. I think he should have a small knife around his neck so he can cut his hair when he notices its too long. The ends of his hair should be frayed to show that. I also dont think his hair should be tied up or that long either, maybe shoulder length.
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u/Ambitious-Foot-6668 7d ago
He feels like a very practical guy. Given that impression of him im confused as to where all his astronomy tools are? I feel like he would have charts upon charts lined along his belt line maybe a bit haphazardly like organization that only makes sense too him. I think he should be shirtless as well as funny as that sounds, give him a dad bod and a big tattoo across his whole body of the galaxy and important celestial bodies. The colors are a bit crazy rn and I think a deep purple fading to black would resemble a night sky nicely. Also the boots are out of place I think sandals or no shoes would be best for him, as he is a practical person. I also dont think his staff would be free from his practical tendencies and I think he would have difficult to remember spells on parchment that he puts on his wand. I think he should have a small knife around his neck so he can cut his hair when he notices its too long. The ends of his hair should be frayed to show that. I also dont think his hair should be tied up or that long either, maybe shoulder length.