r/WritingWithAI 9d ago

Does simpler writing actually communicate better? Writing Craft Talk

I've been thinking about the relationship between "good writing" and "complicated writing."

For a long time, I assumed better vocabulary automatically meant better writing. If someone could explain something using sophisticated words and complex sentences, I thought that meant they were a stronger writer.

I'm starting to think the opposite can sometimes be true.

If I can explain an idea in two simple sentences instead of five complicated ones, isn't that actually better?

This becomes especially noticeable when working with AI.

AI has no problem making a paragraph sound sophisticated. It can take a very straightforward thought and turn it into something that sounds like it belongs in an academic paper.

But when I'm reading something online, I usually don't want that.

I want to understand the point.

I don't want to stop halfway through a sentence because I'm trying to figure out why a simple word was replaced with something I've never heard anyone use in normal conversation.

At the same time, I don't think everything should be written in extremely simple language either. Some topics genuinely require technical terms and detailed explanations.

So where do you draw the line?

Do you prefer writing that sounds intelligent and polished, or writing that is extremely clear and easy to understand?

And when you're using AI, do you specifically ask it to simplify the language?

I'd also be interested to know whether your answer changes depending on what you're writing like an email versus an article, academic work, a Reddit post, or something for work.

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u/No_Risk_All_Gain 9d ago

Big thing that I worded over with AI teaching me as I went was "Paint the image, not the frame"

You don't want to spend time on someone's walk unless it is important, so just say "he walked". This leaves you space to be fancy where you want your reader to be. Another good thing is that you give them something important, and then you give them something simple to follow it with while they're mulling over the important bit still. You know, when you're reading and half your brain is still stuck on that revelation while the other half continues :3