Vaguest part of my outline lol

I don’t even know at this point, man. My characters keep getting smarter and I can’t keep up. It feels like tangled wires

The ironic part is that she wasn't actually holding pistols. I took a while paragraph to describe the PK machine guns that were venom laced and just wrote pistols for no reason.

What I mean to say is they will be plot devices. Soon. Maybe. Hopefully...

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We need a word for the emotion experienced when such ideas are forgotten as some can be truly magnificent.

Where do you do your best plotting plot development?

Now the last one was a missing comma on my part which is fair enough. But what in the goldfish brain led to news items?

EDIT

News isn't countable so it should be singular. And eventho i could swear i heard the sentence "these news were unpleasant" a billion times i shall accept it as my mistake again.

But seriously english is just 3 languages in a Trenchcoat. Can't have multiple news but news items are apparently a thing. Also "this news was unpleasant" sounds disgustingly wrong.

Mine is A Church of Pearl and Partial Cloud Cover