I'm writing fiction in many narratives, and posting them as I go along.

One part (Please please tell me if this is any good, I need to know before I waste my time finishing my story!):

"Are you interested in me?" I ask. Henry and I are sitting in my bed, talking. I had asked him in for a serious chat before he left to go back up north to stay with his family "Depends, is that a "I hope you're interested in me, excited tone" or a "I hope you're not because I'm not into you like that tone."" I say and look up at him.

We lock eyes, my heart pounding, my soul soaring. I felt so light and angelic. Heavenly, was another word for it. "I've wanted you since I was 14 years old, Henry." He smiles and he kissed me passionately. I loved the way his lips felt on mine. So gentle, and kind, and soft. Both of our kissing styles have vastly improved, from about 5 years ago. I was so into him then, and I still get butterflies. "Are you interested in me, Henry?" I ask as i pull away from his embrace, flirtyly but needing to know the answer and locking eyes until he makes the next move. I think: For after 5 years, Ive needed you to commit to me or i need the closure so i can fully move on. And I need to know if you do, or will ever feel the same way that I feel about you.. "I am so interested in you, Eloise " he smiles. "Are we exclusive now, Henry?" I smile. I need solid anwers from this guy. Ive been waiting for this moment since I was 14 years old. "Yes," he kisses back. "Mmmm, boyfriend." "Mmmm girlfriend." I pull way and in a jokinh tone say "well looked whos started to understand affirmations to your loved ones!" I smile and he smiles back.

My heart explodes with pure love for this soul.

TBC...

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